Friday, 8 May 2015

216. An Unexpected Visitor (Part 24)




Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You


“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.

 “How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”

He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.

Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.


http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you



Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi

http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi

"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."

Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.

A blog for my VMs:

http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/





Part 24



Khushi stared at the gathering in her living room, her eyes wide in astonishment. Every inch of the room was taken. Ladies were spilling out of Buaji’s house and there was a lot of good-natured jostling going on, interspersed with laughter and loud calls of greeting. Ladies were passing trays of cold drinks and snacks among themselves. Her whole neighbourhood had turned out in full strength to celebrate her mehendi.

 She stared at them slack-jawed. She knew so many people?

They were congratulating Buaji on Khushi’s marriage.

Were they so relieved to see her off from Laxmi Nagar?

She saw Naniji, Mamiji and Anjaliji sitting with Buaji, laughing at something Kamla chachi had said.

Mami lifted her head to dry her eyes and saw Khushi.
“Lo aa gayi our bridewaa, Hello Hi Bye Bye!” she called out.

All turned to look at her, all faces lit by delight and anticipation.

Khushi smiled uncertainly. They looked as though they were waiting for her to conjure up a rabbit from her magician’s hat.

“She looks beautiful,” Vimla maasi said loudly with a sense of accomplishment as though she had fashioned the bride from raw clay with her own bare hands.

All nodded.

Khushi clutched the folds of her green and red suit with nervous fingers.

“You are lucky, Khussi,” Preetho’s naani shouted. “A handsome groom and a good family.” She looked almost as if she couldn’t believe how clumsy Khushi had gotten so lucky.

The Raizadas smiled in delight.

“Khushiji, come and sit here,” Anjali invited.

Khushi clutched her phone as she made her way to the designated spot. She texted, “Arnavji, where are you? At office?”

He replied immediately, “At home. Working.”

“Where at home?” she asked.

Another groom might have wondered if his bride had bolstered her spirits with a glass or two of spirits, but Arnav knew his girl. He smiled. He knew she wanted to picture him, see him in her mind as she texted.

“In the garden. By the pool. Under the big tree. By the flowerbeds,” he texted.

“The pool is to your left?” she asked.

“Yes,” he replied. “What are you wearing?” he asked.

Khushi smiled. “Green and red salwar suit,” she typed.



“You must look beautiful,” he messaged. “I wish I could see you.”

“I wish you were here, Arnavji,” she typed.

“Just a week more, Khushi. Then no one can separate us,” he comforted her.

“Why is our marriage taking so long? What is the use of all these rasams?” an impatient Khushi asked.

He shook with laughter, unable to type.

“I know you are laughing,” she typed, adding an angry face. “We could have gotten married a month back without all these bekaar functions.”

“Our families expect us to enjoy them, Khushi,” he typed ruefully. He had been trying to ease her into the concept of marriage by dragging out the marriage. Apparently his plan had backfired.

“You are the angry hero of your family. You could have terrorised both families into agreeing to a quick marriage,” she accused him of being a slowpoke.

Arnav smiled.

“What is the use of your ghussa if it can’t do something for us?” she asked.

He sat back looking at the placid water of the pond, his eyes dancing with merriment.

“Arnavji, bhaagke shaadi karein?" she suggested. She looked around. Then she typed,  "The house is full of ladies. Looks like I will have to sit on the road to do my mehendi,” she messaged him.

He smiled. “Enjoy the function,” he typed.

There was a commotion at the door to add to the noise inside. All looked towards the door. Hemaji and her troupe had come with the designs and their mehendi cones. A glad cry rose from the excited ladies.

“Hemaji has come,” she messaged.

“The mehendi lady?” he asked.

“Yes,” she typed. She quickly began to take photos and sent them to him.

He saw the happy crowd, the jolly faces of his Nani, Mami and Di, a laughing Buaji, the mehendi cones and designs laid out for the crowd, the food and drinks served...

“I want your photo,” Khushi typed.




He quickly sent her a snap. He was in semi-formal dress.

Khushi felt her heart throb with the desire to see him. But how could she make him abandon his scruples and join her here?

She took a selfie and sent it to him. This would bring him running to Laxmi Nagar, she thought with glee.

He stared at her pic with disturbed eyes. She looked downright scared.

He stood up and paced among the flower pots anxiously.

Had the ladies teased her? He wanted to see her, but how could he go there?




He sat hunched over, his elbows on his knees, feeling helpless and desperate. She looked upset. What could he do to make her feel better?





He got the next set of photos. They were of mehendi designs.

“Which one do you like the most?” she asked.

Arnav stared at them, feeling lost. What did he know of mehendi designs? He frowned. They looked more complicated than the building plans of his multi-storey guest house.

“Pick one,” she urged.

Arnav stared at the display in utter confusion.

“Do you like the mango design or the flowers or the triangles?” she typed.

“The flowers,” he said. He could identify little else.



“I will have this design,” she told Hemaji.

“Are you sure?” the lady asked with a smile. She was used to the changing whims and fancies of brides.

“Yes,” Khushi smiled. “My Arnavji is a gardener at heart. He loves flowers.”

Hema smiled and set out to work on Khushi.

 Khushi sat watching as the lady began to decorate her hands and feet with intricate designs using the greenish brown mixture.

All looked at the entrance of the house when a voice asked, “Is Khushi Kumari Gupta here?” A boy in a blue and white uniform stood there, a notepad in hand.

After a moment of silence, Khushi said, “Yes. I am Khushi.”

“Just a minute, madam,” the boy smiled, turned and walked away.

“Oo kaun he, Nandkisore?” Buaji asked. The ladies began to whisper among themselves.

“Pata nahi, Buaji,” Khushi replied.



The boy returned with a huge bouquet of red roses. He made his way through the gaggle of ladies and handed over the fragrant gift to Khushi.

The ladies gasped.

She quickly pulled out the card with her free hand.

“To the most beautiful girl in the world, my Khushi,” the card read. It was signed, “Your Arnavji.”

She blinked to clear her eyes.

“Sign here, madam,” the boy held out the pad and a pen.
Khushi scrawled her name on the designated place. The boy left.

She quickly took her phone and took a selfie of her beaming, holding the bouquet to her chest. She sent it to Arnav.

“Who sent the phlowers, Khussi?” Mami asked in a whisper. She had to make sure it was Arnav before she could comment on it.

“Arnavji,” Khushi smiled away.

The Raizada ladies relaxed.

“Hamre bhateeja, he ijj soooo romantic,” Mami claimed.

“Yes, yes, our Chotey loves Khussi bitiya very much,” Nani said, all smiles.

Khushi’s mouth fell open. Arnavji loved her? Her? Loved her? But why had he never told her? Acute happiness filled her. He loved her as she loved him? Was it true?

“Our Chotey thinks the world of Khushiji,” Anjali cooed. “We are so lucky to get Khushiji as Chotey’s bride.”

‘Arnavji loves me?’ she thought. ‘The rose carpet, the dance, the kisses...’ she blushed. ‘...the hundred ways in which he has been considerate to me....yes, he likes me. Maybe he even loves me. Lekin why didn’t he ever tell me, the sadu?’

“He is the best damadji I could hope for, Nandkisore,” Buaji smiled. “So considerate, so loving. He is Nandkisore’s gift to us,” Buaji said in a heart-felt tone.



‘How can I make him confess his love to me...if he feels love?’ the hunter plotted. ‘How can I drag that secret out in the open? How can I find out what is going through his head and heart?’



Her victim, sitting in Shantivan, looked at her photo with her beaming face and the roses and felt on top of the world. His long lashes fell to shade his eyes as he lay back in his black recliner. A week. Then she would be with him here. Then he could show her how much he loved her.



“Khushiji, shall we start on the right hand?” Hemaji asked.

“Just a minute,” Khushi begged. This was her last chance. If she wanted to do something, she had to do it now. Once her right hand too went under the cone, she would be helpless for something like the next twenty-four hours.


She quickly messaged him. “I love you, Arnavji.” She sat back waiting for the fireworks.

Tuesday, 5 May 2015

215. OS 10. An Unexpected Visitor (Part 23)





Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You


“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.

 “How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”

He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.

Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.


http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you



Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi

http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi

"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."

Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.

A blog for my VMs:

http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/






Part 23




“Buaji, Arnavji suggested that you come and stay in Shantivan with us after the marriage,” Khushi said bluntly.

“Hein?” Buaji asked, her brows raised in astonishment.

“You will be alone here after our marriage,” Khushi reminded her.

Buaji blinked. Then she said slowly, “Arnav babua said so?”

“Ji, Buaji,” Khushi affirmed.

The middle-aged lady’s eyes filled with tears. “How kind he is to think of this old lady!” she exclaimed. “He is so sanskaari, so well-brought up. Devyaniji must be so proud of him.”

Khushi nodded. Buaji seemed more emotional about Arnavji’s offer than about her own niece leaving her! This world was definitely ajeeb! She was ajeeb. Thank God she had an equally ajeeb man in Arnavji!

Buaji dried her eyes with a heart-felt sigh. “I am blessed to have so good a damadji, Nandkisore,” she said.

“So you will join us, Buaji?” Khushi asked.

“No, Titliya,” Buaji said with a smile. “I will stay here with my Nandkisore. You go and stay with Arnav babua.”

“Buaji,” Khushi protested.

“No, Titliya. Your place is among the Raizadas. I will visit you, Nandkisore,” Buaji smiled.

Khushi parted her lips to protest, but Buaji said, “I am happy here, Khussi, where I lived with your Phoophaji. Look, that’s the belan I used to scare him with, Nandkisore.”

Khushi looked at the historic belan that had seen many battles.

“That’s is his old-fashioned umbrella in the corner, standing where he left it,” Buaji sighed. “I told him to take it to work, but would he ever listen to me? That stubborn old man! He got wet in the rain and died coughing,” Buaji complained.

Khushi nodded, trying not to smile at Buaji’s disgruntled face.

“Khussi, I am going to make arrangements for your mehendi. Let me see if I can get Hemaji to apply mehendi on your hands, Nandkisore,” Buaji said.

“Are we having it here, Buaji?” Khushi asked. “Will Arnavji and his family come here?” she asked in excitement.

“Hein? Arnav babua come here?” Buaji asked. “Why should he? Are you mad? Why should the boy come here for your mehendi? This function is just for the ladies of the two families and the neighbourhood.”

Khushi pouted.

“You show your nakhre to your Arnavji,” Buaji laughed at Khushi. “Not to me. I know you too well, Sanka Devi.”

Khushi sat watching Buaji waddle away chuckling. Then she quickly phoned Arnav.

“Arnavji, Buaji is going to arrange our mehendi here,” she informed him.

“Acha?” he asked, his heart leaping in joy at the thought that he could spend the day with her.

“But you can’t join us. It is for ladies,” she complained.

His mouth fell open.

“How unfair!” Khushi grumbled. “Why can’t grooms watch their brides apply mehendi? Who made this stupid rule?”

Arnav had to smile in the midst of his shock and disappointment.

“Waise, I think you should have been born as Buaji’s nephew. I am wasted as her niece,” Khushi grumbled.

“What?” Arnav asked, his face reflecting his confusion.

“She loves you more than she loves me. She said she is blessed to have so good a damadji as you. Aap ko pata he, in all the years I lived with her, she never said that she is blessed to have me as her niece. All she has said is Hai Re Nandkisore, what sin did I commit in my last birth that you have punished me with such an aafat ki pudiya as my niece?” Khushi grumbled with feeling.

Arnav doubled over laughing.

“Anyway she doesn’t want to join us at Shantivan, Arnavji,” Khushi explained. “I think she is planning to enjoy her life after she gets rid of me.”



Arnav tried to swallow his chuckles.

“Aap khulke hasiye, kheee kheee kheee. I know you are laughing,” Khushi informed him.

Arnav burst out laughing.

A small smile appeared on Khushi’s face as she heard his laughter.

“You enjoy your amusement. I am going,” she said.

“Khushi...Khushi..” Arnav  called urgently, blinking his eyes to clear his eyes of tears of hilarity.

“Ji?” she asked, resigned.

“I will talk to Nani and get her to let me join you for mehendi,” he promised.

“You will?” she asked, her eyes bright with excitement.

“Yes,” he vowed. “All of them will be with you that day. Why can’t Akash, Mamaji and I join you?”

“Do you think Naniji will let you come here?” Khushi asked doubtfully.

“She will,” he asserted, sure of his persuasive skills.






But he was to be disappointed.

“No, Chotey,” Nani stated firmly. “There is no way you can sit among the girls applying mehendi in Madhumatiji’s house.”

“Boys are banned from mehendi, Arnav bitwaa,” Mami explained.

“What will Buaji think of you if you join us, Chotey?” Anjali asked, trying to reason with him.

“Buaji loves me,” Arnav stated.

“I don’t know why she does,” Nani said in exasperation. “Boys are not permitted at mehendi. You are not joining us and that’s final.”

“Dadi,” Akash got a word in. “It is just the three of us. Can't you take us along too?”

“No,” Nani said.

“Then take at least Bhai with you. Please,” he begged.

Nani sighed, “No.”

Akash looked at Arnav, helpless.

Arnav nodded thanks for his efforts.





Arnav called Khushi.

“Khushi, I am sorry. Nani put her foot down. She said there is no way I can be at your mehendi. It seems men are banned from the function,” he apologised.

“Oh,” Khushi muttered in disappointment.



“Di said Buaji would feel bad if I walked in,” he explained.

“Anjaliji doesn’t know Buaji. She will do your aarti if you come home,” Khushi grimaced. “But it is alright, Arnavji. You stay home. I will send you photos. There is no ban on photos, is there?” she asked anxiously.

“I don’t think so,” he smiled.

“Then I will send you as many pictures as I can. You will feel as if you are here with me,” she promised.

“Yes,” he said softly.

“Send me your photo too, Arnavji. Then I may not miss you,” she said honestly.

“I will, Khushi,” he promised earnestly.















Sunday, 26 April 2015

214. OS 10. An Unexpected Visitor (Part 22)



Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You


“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.

 “How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”

He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.

Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.


http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you



Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi

http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi

"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."

Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.

A blog for my VMs:

http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/









Part 22





Khushi looked at a sleeping Buaji’s face with sad eyes. ‘Poor Buaji! How will she live without me? How can she bear to part with me?’ she wondered.

Buaji turned her head more comfortably against the headrest of the sofa in her living room and sighed in her sleep.

‘It is the fate of all parents and Buajis, Khussi,’ Khushi told herself, ‘to marry off their ladli girls and then live in gham. Kabhi khushi, kabhi gham. First shaadi’s khushi, then bidai’s gham.’

“Why are you crying, Nandkisore?” Buaji asked, yawning mightily. “Did you commit some folly at your sangeet, Sanka Devi?”

“Buaji,” Khushi’s voice quivered.

“Kya he, Nandkisore?” Madhumati asked, irked.

“Buaji, I have to marry Arnavji,” Khushi began.

“I know, Nandkisore,” Buaji frowned. “That is why we had your shagun, sagai and sangeet.”

Khushi drew in a tear-laden breath. “The shop,” she began to ease into the hurtful issue.

Buaji frowned. “What is wrong with the shop?” she asked.

“After marriage,  I won’t be able to look after the shop as I have been doing for years,” Khushi tried to dry her eyes.

“Acha he, Nandkisore,” Buaji replied. “Why did you extend credit to Mrs. Motelal?”

Khushi was distracted. “The poor woman, Buaji. She needed the fabric and sarees for her daughter’s wedding but couldn’t afford to pay for all of them.”

“You idiot!” Buaji castigated her. “That female owns five cars, can afford five drivers, lives in a mansion, owns properties across Delhi, can afford to hold lavish parties for seven days for her daughter’s wedding but can’t afford to pay our bills?” she asked.

Khushi gaped. “Really, Buaji?” she asked in dismay.

“Hai Re Nandkisore! What will I do with her? Thank God she is getting married soon. Nahi to I will become kangaal in her generosity to the undeserving,” Buaji buried her head in her hands.

Khushi’s mouth fell open. Buaji was happy that she was getting married and going away? She tried again. “Buaji, when I go away with Arnavji...won’t you be sad?” she asked.

Buaji stared at her in confusion. “Why should I be sad, Nandkisore?” she asked.

“I won’t be here with you. I will be in Shantivan. You will be all alone,” Khushi tried earnestly to drive the point home.

Buaji folded her hands and looked heavenwards. “I have been waiting for that day for years, Nandkisore knows,” she said. “You will become Arnav babua’s headache and I can breathe easily.”

Khushi’s mouth fell open.

“I don’t have to worry about you, run after you, Nandkisore! If only her wedding day comes faster,” Buaji prayed to Nandkisore fervently.

Khushi stared at Buaji, astounded and hurt. Then she marched to her room in a huff, throwing herself down on her bed to have a good cry.

Her phone rang.

Drying her cheeks and eyes, she looked at the display. 

Arnavji.

She answered the call.

“Hello,” she quavered.

“Khushi, kya hua?” he asked, his voice anxious. Was she upset about their wedding and having to leave Buaji? Had Buaji refused to move to Shantivan?

“Arnavji,” she wailed.

“Khushi?” he asked, feeling terribly helpless. Had he done a cruelty to Khushi by wanting to marry her?

“Buaji...” she wept.

“Buaji?” he asked.

“Buaji is happy...” she sniffed.

“To join us at Shantivan?” he asked hopefully.

“No...” she wept.

“To remain alone?” he was upset.

“That I am going away,” she confessed.

He stared at the wall slack-jawed.

“She said that she has been waiting for this day for years,” Khushi wailed.



Arnav’s lips quirked in a smile.

“She said...she said she can breathe freely when I become your headache,” she choked.

Arnav’s shoulders shook.

“She wants our wedding day to come sooner,” Khushi wept.

Arnav had to fight to keep his amusement down.

“How could she?” Khushi cried.

“It is alright, Khushi,” he comforted her. “She is just happy that you found  someone you like.”

“Acha?” she asked after a long moment.

“Yes, really,” he soothed her. “She likes me, doesn’t she?”

“She thinks you can walk on water,” Khushi admitted.

“She knows I will take good care of you. That’s why she is happy you are marrying me, Khushi,” he said reasonably.

“It is not because she doesn’t like me?” Khushi asked, doubt in her voice.

He swallowed hard. “How can any one dislike you, Khushi?” he asked.

“You like me, Arnavji?” she asked in full seriousness.

He swallowed the words of love that clamoured to leave his tongue. What if he said, “I love you, Khushi,” and it spooked her?

“Very much,” he said.

“Really?” she asked, a small smile blooming on her lips.

“Really,” he affirmed.

“What do you like most about me?” she asked.

“Everything,” he muttered.

“Arnavji!” she complained.

“I like your sense of humour,” he muttered.

“Acha?” she asked, feeling she had been let into some kind of heaven.

“Your kind heart. You are very understanding, Khushi,” he continued. “Beautiful in and out.”

“I am clumsy too,” she qualified his praise.

He smiled. “I will take care that you never fall,” he promised.

“It is a full-time job,” she warned.

“I am ready,” he stated.

“Arnavji, you are so nice. A real-life hero,” she said.



Arnav smiled.

There was silence.

Arnav waited. And waited.

Then she said softly, “Pata nahi how I got so lucky, Arnavji, to meet you. This is why I believe Devi Maiyya exists.”

Arnav’s hold on his phone tightened. He was too choked up to reply.

Khushi yawned. “I am very sleepy, Arnavji,” she mumbled.

“So jao, Khushi,” he said softly.



“Your voice—when you speak to me, I feel you are hugging me close to you,” she breathed, curling up under the blanket.

“Good night, Khushi,” he whispered.

“I will have sweet dreams about you,” she mumbled before falling asleep. Her phone slipped from her hand and fell by her pillow.




Arnav stood staring at the lights in his garden, smiling softly.