The car
spluttered to a stop.
“Damn!” ASR
cursed and hit the steering wheel with furious hands.
It was
raining heavily and the dark evening was lit only by street lights. The heavy
rain and lack of visibility had discouraged people from travelling and the road
was bare of traffic. His meeting had run late and he was now stuck on the road in the rain with a car that was immobile.
He tried
starting the car but the vehicle refused to cooperate. He pitted his will
against the car again and again but the car was ASR’s. It refused to budge an
inch and remained stolidly silent.
ASR let out
a sharp breath of exasperation. He would have to call Mohan to bring another
car from Shantivan to get him. Or get hold of Aman and ask him to arrange a car
& driver for hire.
He pulled his phone from his pocket and began to call
Aman.
He stared
at the phone in horror. “What the!” slipped from his mouth.
‘Kindly
plug your device to a charger at the earliest. Battery dangerously low,’ the
display read.
“I don’t
believe this,” ASR muttered in disbelief.
He waded
through the waterlogged road, feeling cold rainwater drench him to the bones
within seconds of exiting the car.
“Chotey,
take an umbrella,” Di had said that morning as he had left the house. “It may
rain today. The weather forecast is bad.”
“Lightning
and thunder hoga, Arnav bitwaa. Jhagda in the isssky, Hello Hi Bye Bye!” Mami
had seconded her.
He had
turned his head away from them to talk to Aman on the phone about a meeting
scheduled for that day.
He sighed.
He should have listened to them. He combed his hair back with his fingers,
trying to clear his vision. It was dark, very dark. The evening was rivalling
night and the cold wind did nothing to better his plight.
A soft body
crashed into his.
His arms
went around it automatically.
Female...
The thought ran through his mind.
Her arms
rose to fall around his strong, muscled shoulders.
Soft,
cuddly, warm, fitting perfectly in his arms. He tightened his hold.
Her heart
fluttered against his, beating fast like a bird trying to free itself from the
confines of a cage.
He clenched his jaw.
He was ASR, the ASR who was no slave to any
girl, the man who needed no one to complete his life, the pragmatist who
scoffed at love and marriage, the realist who laughed at romance and
dreams...He should let her go, lower his arms and free her...But his arms
remained stubbornly around her as they stood by the road, cold rain pouring
down them, water eddying around their feet.
She wished
she could stay there forever, held safe in his arms. The rain did not matter.
The cold did not matter. Even the darkness that could on other days send her
screaming, did not hold the power to terrify her. She drew in a deep breath of
contentment, a stolen moment of peace. The fragrance of sandalwood rushed in to
her nostrils from his body and clothes.
A vehicle
making its slow way through the water sounded its horn in the hope that all
citizens who were crazy enough to leave the comfort of their homes on such a
wet evening would scamper to the sidewalks for their lives and not walk in the
middle of the road.
She
stiffened at the sound. ‘What are you thinking of?’ she asked herself. ‘You are standing on
the road in the arms of a stranger, in full public view!’
‘Let him
go,’ she chanted in her mind. ‘Don’t cling to him. Thoda to sharm karo.’
She
lifted her head slowly from the crook of his neck, lowering her arms, blinking
to clear her eyes and peering through the sheet of rain to see who had broken
her mad rush, whose arms had offered her refuge.
She stared
at the most handsome face she had ever seen, a face with strong lines looking
as though it were carved in stone.
As she watched, he clenched his jaw.
She
stared at his jaw, his beautifully-formed lips, his jutting nose, his hard,
cold eyes... Was he angry that she had rammed in to him? No, no, he didn’t look
angry. She stared at his expressionless, inscrutable face. Who was he? How had
he appeared at the opportune moment to stop her fall? Was he a guardian spirit?
A dark angel from the heavens sent by Devi Maiyya to take care of her?
ASR looked
down at the enchanting face lifted to his, the water not taking away anything
from her beauty. Her soft skin gleamed, her long lashes were clumped together
and her hazel eyes looked at him with wonder.
She was
beautiful. No, not just beautiful. He was used, very used to beautiful. Beauty held
no secrets for him in his profession. It was cheap, a dime a dozen especially
when it was effected with artificial aids. This girl glowed with some inner
fire, something pure, innocent, something almost untouchable...
‘What are
you doing, ASR?’ he asked himself. ‘Let her go, dammit!’
He slowly
withdrew his arms from her. He grit his teeth. There was no excuse for keeping
this exquisite, delicate fairy in his hold. He looked in to her alluring eyes, saving
all the images in his brain for further perusal at leisure.
A few drops
of rainwater ran down the patrician plane of his nose to fall on her nose.
She shivered.
Water from his chin dripped to fall into the
neckline of her suit.
She shook at the sensation.
He took
hold of her shoulders to steady her.
She shivered again.
“Maa..aaf
kee..eejiye,” she stammered more from his nearness than from the cold.
He
swallowed. His fingers tightened on her shoulders. The thin red fabric that
made her suit was no cover in the rain. It hugged her like a second skin,
highlighting all the charms of her lush figure. Her dupatta was useless, a
slash of thin red across her creamy neck.
“I thought
I s...saw a r...rickshaw,” she said, her voice shaking. “I was trying to wave
to c...catch the d...driver’s attention.”
Sweet, soft
voice. Warm. He swallowed hard. His fingers tightened on her shoulders.
He should
give her his coat, he thought. Any gentleman would do it. How could anyone let
her run after rickshaws in Delhi on a rainy night, drenched to her bones? He lifted
his hands from her shoulders and slowly removed his coat, the wet fabric
reluctant to leave his body. He dragged it off himself and held it out to the
girl.
“No, aa..ap
rakhiye. You w..will feel cold,” she said, her teeth chattering with cold.
ASR drew in
a deep breath. If he weren't so shaken, he would laugh out loud. Both of them were wet to their skins, so wet that they couldn’t
get any wetter. And she was worried about him feeling cold?
He stepped
forward with the offer of his coat.
Lightning
blazed across the sky, followed closely by thunder.
The girl leaped into his
arms, huddling close to him for protection. Her fingers clawed at his back and
she pressed herself to his hard form as close as she could.
The coat
fell from his numb fingers to languish in the water on the road.
“I..I am
scared of lightning and thunder,” she whispered her confession against his neck.
“Sshhh,” he
whispered. His arms lifted to gather her closer still. He ran his right hand
down the length of her back, ostensibly to comfort her.
“I am scared
of d..darkness too,” she breathed.
She curled further into him, burying her nose
in the V of his shirt’s neckline.
He clenched his jaw, praying for self-control.
His left
hand held her head against his shoulder, his fingers rubbing her scalp to calm
her down.
His fingers
trailed over the curve of her waist. She shook convulsively.
His hand
lingered on her hip. She clutched his jacket-covered back with trembling
fingers.
“Humein
ghar jaana he,” she whispered like a child.
She relaxed
against him, feeling as though he had freed her from all her troubles.
Over her
head, Arnav saw a rickshaw making its slow way along the road.
“Rickshaw,”
he told the girl.
She lifted her
head to look at the welcome sight through the pouring rain.
Arnav grabbed
his coat and flagged down the rickshaw.
He looked down helplessly at the girl. He had no
idea where the girl lived.
“Bhaiyya,
will you take us to Laxmi Nagar?” the damsel asked.
“I will pay
you double the going rate,” ASR offered.
The man
nodded. “I will take you as far as I can. If there are fallen trees on the
road, you will have to make your own way home.”
“We will
manage,” Arnav said. He stood back for the girl to clamber into the rickshaw
and then followed her in.
“Both of
you Mian-biwi sit together in the middle,” the driver advised. “Or you will get
wet in the cold water from the road as I drive.”
Arnav looked
at the girl with startled eyes. Mian-biwi? She stared at him with wide ones.
He slowly moved
closer to the girl. She moved as close to him as possible. They sat together,
their thighs aligned, their arms rubbing as the rickshaw lurched and made its
laborious way to Laxmi Nagar.
“I was
going home,” the driver said. “But then I saw you, standing on the road like
Raj Kapoor and Nargis. If only you had an umbrella!” he sighed.
Arnav and the girl stared at each other, astonished.
“Pyaar hua,
ikrar hua he
Pyaar se
phir kyon darta he dil,” he sang.
Arnav
looked at the girl, his eyes still shocked. As he watched, her eyes began to twinkle.
“Kehta he
dil, rasta mushkil
Maloom nahi
he kahan manzil,” she sang.
Arnav
lowered his head to hide his amusement. She was a match for their driver!
All the way
to the girl’s house, Arnav sat listening to Bollywood duets sung by the
rickshawwala and the girl over the sound of the falling rain. They competed
with each other in singing loudly and enthusiastically, making up words when
they couldn’t remember the original ones.
He stared
at the girl, mirth in his eyes. She turned her head to see the laughter in
his eyes and winked at him.
He almost
choked.
Arnav
looked out at the dark sky and the rain. He was ASR? Yes, he was ASR. But what
was he doing here? It was like a scene out of his nightmares. Wet, cold,
sitting in a rickshaw with an equally wet girl who could wink deliciously at
him, listening to Bollywood numbers being massacred while his laptop was
abandoned in his luxury sedan...
He smiled.
“Take the
right turn here, bhaiyya,” the girl instructed.
The flimsy
vehicle swerved right. Arnav looked out, shaken from his ruminations.
“The third
house on the right,” she said cheerfully.
The
rickshawwala brought the vehicle to a shuddering stop before the house.
“Won’t you
come in?” she asked Arnav. “Buaji and Jiji will be very happy to meet you. Aap
bhi,” she invited the driver too. “We can have adrak chai and hot pakore.”
The driver’s
eyes dimmed in disappointment. “You are not Mian-Biwi?” he asked.
“I..I have
to get home,” Arnav said, wishing desperately for a moment that he could go
into her house with her and stay with her. For always.
He left the vehicle. She got out
after him.
“Shukriya,”
she began.
“”Go in and
take something hot,” he said. “Fast,” he added.
“But I want
to thank you,” she began.
“Go in,” he
pushed lightly at one wet shoulder.
The girl
walked away, turning back to look at the men with disturbed eyes.
Arnav got
into the rickshaw when she reached the safety of her open door. She stood
waving at them, the light behind her limning her figure.
The
rickshawwala waved enthusiastically. Arnav just nodded.
“Shantivan,”
he said.
The vehicle
moved forward, taking him away from the girl he had spent the evening with.
Arnav
sneezed.
His Nani
held out a glass with yellow liquid in it. “Take this milk with haldi, Chotey.
It will take care of your cold.”
He took it
and sipped. The soothing fluid made its way down his throat.
“Did you
call Amanji?” Anjali asked.
“Yes. He
will arrange for the car to be moved,” Arnav said.
“How are
you, Arnav bitwaa?” Mami asked.
“Mami, is
there a movie in which Raj Kapoor and,” he paused. What was the heroine’s name?
Nagma? Nagin? Nargis? Yes, Nargis. “...and Nargis dance in the rain with an
umbrella?”
Nani sat
down quickly.
Mami stared
at him in surprise for a moment. Then she said, “Shree 420.”
“What the!”
Arrnav exclaimed.
“Not bhat
the, Arnav bitwaa. That ijj the name of the phillum in which you have the song,
Pyaar hua, ikrar hua,” Mami laughed. “The hero of the songwaa was Raj Kapoor,
heroine was Nargis and the choti heroine was the umbrella.”
“I see,”
Arnav looked down at the glass in his hand.
“No, I don’t
see,” Anjali said, confused. “Chotey, what made you think of this?”
“Something the rickshawwala said,” Arnav brushed aside the question, looking away to hide his flushed face.
Mami sang, "Lub hua, ikrar hua he
Lub se phir kyon darta he dil?"
Wah, kya bat hai!!!!!! What a lovely start to yet another captivating story. Smita you are the best and I always keep wondering where you get these refreshing ideas from. Hugs to you, Muah.
ReplyDeleteWith friends like you around me, there will be no shortage of ideas, ever..ha..ha..
DeleteAfter the last story got over I was wondering what would be the concept of your next story and you continue to amaze me with a different aspect each time. Love your imagination and writing skills that brings a lot of joy to all your fans
Deletewow!!! such a interesting start!! full romance huh?
ReplyDeleteBrilliant i would say the rain introduction for the hero and the heroin!! hehehehe!
Waiting for the next one already!! i am more excited!! cho chweet of you!! loved the songs!! jolly jolly! new story to read!
Seems very interesting. So far love the title and the photos. Will read it it and will come back to leave a comment :-)
ReplyDeleteloved it
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wow rainy meeting
ReplyDeletejust what was missing from your stories
story starting with rain
and that brings our arhi together
so true the song was
hmmm he sure gave his family right heart attack
just loved it
hope such ideas keep coming to you over and over
and they never finish
wow what a meet
she just dashed into him
and he let her
he soothed her when she was frightened
even promised to take her home
when his car wasnt working
shame no umbrella
that would have been perfect like the autowalla said
what a meet
hmmm but he doesnt know her name
and neither does she
this should be fun
Oh Smitha. ...ur 2 good for not making us wait for the next tale.....another arhi jodi jinse..pyar hua ...
ReplyDelete"The car was ASR’s. It refused to budge an inch and remained stolidly silent.". :) ASR aura is quite infectious, haina? No one has the power to escape its potency. Not even his hot(just like him) set of wheels. Just as stubborn and unyielding as him. LOL
ReplyDeleteBut then he owes his car big time. Imagine how boring and insipid his life would be without a certain KKG crashing in to him on a cold and rainy night!!
" Ek ladki bhigi bhagi si
Soti raaton mein jaagi si
Mili ik ajnabi se
Koyi aage na peechhe ;-)
OMG kitna yeh hot hai....hmmm "
"Water from his chin dripped to fall into the neckline of her suit.She shook at the sensation." Hawtttt.... Talk about setting fire to rain.
Waise abt 'lub hua,acknowledgement hua..' , I admit it is a classic with soulful lyrics, a captivating playback and all. The song is supposed to epitomise longing, pull, desire... etc etc. What with the leads huddled under a sole umbrella on a stormy night, bodies desperate for self-control, lips shivering in trepidation... etc etc, but seriously Smi, what is with the weird expressions of the female lead??? Especially at the start of the song. Is she constipated, or is it because he has halitosis, does she really want to sneeze, I mean what is it? :P
The Arshi version of this song is so much better. Now every time I hear this number, I would imagine the hot and drenched Laad Governer with his arms around his own personal innocent fairy.... Blissssss....!!!
A tantalizing start. I was about to pester you re. your new story when I saw this. A dark stormy night, heavy rain and our favourite hero and heroine - I couldn't ask for anything better after a hectic day teaching 15 year olds who didn't want to have anything to do with academics. Love the beginning already. Is there a Shyam in this and if so is he nice or not? Please give us a hint. When will you be updating next? BTW, read 'The Other Woman' from the beginning without interruptions and I thoroughly enjoyed it all over again.
ReplyDeleteAre you a teacher too? It is amazing. What do you teach Kaaycee?
DeleteMe too , I love reading the story when it is complete without waiting for the next chapters on the way :-)
Terrific start to new OS. Looking forward to more Rainy meetings of our beloved ARHI
ReplyDeleteSorry Smita dear for not commenting much on The Other Woman due to hectic AD. Life is quite not so hectic now and I hope that it will continue in this pace only. Love the update. Looking forward to next part
ReplyDeleteWow smita , a new one full of romance. A lovely start, and the pictures are beautiful. Waiting for the next part
ReplyDeleteI wrote a very long message yesterday while being wrapped in a warm duvet and enjoying a lazy Sunday afternoon. But then, I did something stupid and I lost my comment full of emotions about some old good days :-(
ReplyDeleteI was so excited when you mentioned Raj kapoor and Nargis and " Mr. 420" because when I started reading your new story with our beloved couple under the rain, my mind traveled far far away and took me to that movie, I mean " Mr 420" Just imagine how I felt when I reached to that part :-) my mother was a huge fan of Nargis and we all knew and loved Raj Kapoor. The time I was watching that black and white movie, he was dead and in my childish world I could'nt understand how a handsome man could even die. I didn't enen know what was death and its nature.
Anyway, to make my long story short, I never found Nargis beautiful in those days because BEAUTY in my eyes was only and exculusely defined in Basanti (In Shole). She was the embodiment of beauty in my world :-) it was later then I changed my mind. I was in France and bored in a dark rainy Sunday. I decided to watch a movie. My fingers typed Raj Kapoor and then plenty movies appeared on the screen of my computer. I saw them again, both together and I was stunned by this fine lady's beauty. I needed to be an adult to understand my Mom's taste :-)
Dearest Smita! MERCI again for this story and for all those nice memories that you have revived by your nice update. Keep on writing and posting a new update as soon as you can :-)
I meant " exclusively"
DeleteSmita, once again, a beutiful twist to a beutiful memory!!! You make us remember the passion, the chemistry of the rainy moment , but with a positive mindset! Its my personal opinion that u have made the characters even more beautiful and complete than the actual writers of the serial ! Hats off!
ReplyDeleteReally interesting start. Love the concept of arnav and khushi meeting as strangers on a rainy night !!
ReplyDeletegreat start dear
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