Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
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Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi
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"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
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Part 25
Khushi
looked at the door, biting her lower lip in tension. How would Arnavji react to
the bomb she had sent via the phone? Would he be happy? Sad? Shocked? Alarmed?
She really, really hoped that he swooned from happiness. Not that she wanted
him to faint, but it would be nice if he was thrilled.
Would he
come to Laxmi Nagar? She leaned forward to look at the door.
“Whom are
you looking for, Titliya?” Buaji asked her, a teasing smile on her face. “Arnav
bitwaa can’t come here today, Nandkisore!”
Hemaji and
the Raizadas smiled at the disgruntled look on Khushi’s face.
“When will
the mehendi end, Buaji?” Khushi asked. Maybe he could reach here after the
function.
“It is done
now,” Hema said, smiling, setting aside an empty cone. “Take care not to smudge
the design, Khushiji.”
Khushi
looked down at her hands and legs. How would she hug Arnavji when he came to
see her? That is, if he came to see her? His clothes would be spoiled by the
greenish-brown goo on her body. Khushi sighed. If only they had run away and
gotten married!
Arnav
stared at the screen, blank, unable to believe his eyes. His head spun; he saw
stars.
“I love you,
Arnavji.”
He looked
at the words till the letters blurred. Was he going mad? Had he imagined the
words his eyes had desperately wanted to see?
He stood up
on trembling legs. He needed to see Khushi immediately. He pushed the phone
into his pocket and walked into his bedroom to grab his car keys.
“Bhai,
where are you going?” Akash asked, blinking behind his specs.
“To see
Khushi,” Arnav muttered, striding towards the front door.
“Bhai!”
Akash squealed scandalised. “You can’t.”
“I can,”
Arnav muttered as he opened his car door.
“Bhai, what
will Buaji say?” Akash asked.
“I don’t
care,” Arnav got in and slammed the door shut.
Akash
quickly opened the passenger door and slipped into the car.
Arnav drove
off with a roar.
Akahs tried
to reason with his head-strong brother. “Bhai, we are not supposed to attend
the mehendi.”
Arnav said,
“We are attending it.”
“Nani will
be angry, bhai,” Akash reminded him.
“That’s
alright,” he replied, steering the car expertly through narrow gullies.
“Buaji will
scold you,” Akash tried.
“She won’t.
I am her favourite damadji,” Arnav said with certainty.
“You are
her only damadji,” Akash said, his eyes rolling.
Arnav
parked the car before Buaji’s house.
“Stay in
the car if you are afraid,” Arnav said. “I am going in.”
Akash
jumped out. How could he let his brother face the ridicule of the guests and
the anger of the two families alone?
Arnav
marched into the house, Akash following him closely.
Buaji and the
Raizadas stared at a resolute Arnav and a sheepish Akash in pure shock.
“Arnavji!”
Khushi yelled in joy.
The guests
began to titter.
“I am
sorry, Buaji,” Arnav said, “but I want to see Khushi.” He was polite, sorry for
embarrassing Buaji even, but determined
to plow down all obstacles in his path to Khushi.
“Nani,”
Anjali whispered, clutching Nani’s hand in fear.
The
Raizadas looked at Arnav and then at Buaji, scared of the outcome. Would Buaji
cancel the wedding saying that she didn’t want to give her niece to such an uncultured boy?
Bujai looked
into his eyes and her astonishment melted into love. “Kauno baat nahi,
Nandkisore. The function is over anyway. Come in, come in,” she invited.
The
Raizadas sagged in relief. Akash couldn’t believe his ears.
“The boy
couldn’t sit at his house without seeing his girl,” a lady laughed.
“So eager,”
another joined in.
“What jaadu
has Khushi done on him?” another asked.
“Our
damadji is a heera,” Buaji stilled the wagging tongues. “Here he has the
freedom to come and go as he wishes. This is his own home, Nandkisore.”
The ladies
nodded obediently but could not stop their smiles from breaking out.
Buaji
whispered in Arnav’s ear, “Did Khussi ask you to come here? Kaa batiyaa rahe
phoon ma?”
“No, Buaji.
We didn’t talk,” he replied honestly.
Buaji
chuckled, “I thought it must be her doing, Nandkisore!”
Arnav
looked away smiling.
“Bahut
parem karat ho na, bitwaa? You love my pagaliya, don’t you?” Buaji asked.
Arnav
nodded, flushing.
Buaji
lifted her hands over his head and warded off evil eyes. “My good bitwaa! May
Devi Maiyya protect you from all harm, especially from Sanka Devi,” she blessed.
Arnav
chuckled.
“Arnavji,”
Khushi called, almost jumping up and down in excitement.
“Go,
bitwaa, before she runs over and covers you in all the mehendi on her body,”
Buaji warned him.
Arnav
nodded with a smile and moved towards Khushi, a tender light in his molten
eyes.
Pinky
caught her amma’s pallu, forgetting that she had mehendi all over her hand. “I
want a boy just like Khushi didi got, amma,” she demanded. “He is so handsome.
Look at his eyes, that smile,” she sighed.
Pinky’s
mother pulled the pallu of her sari away from her daughter’s hand. “You never
fast on Teej, you can’t fast on Mahashivratri! And you want a boy like Khussi’s?”
she fumed.
Unaware of
the envy they were arousing in many tender hearts, Arnav came to stand before
Khushi. His throat felt dry, his heart was too full for him to speak.
“Arnav
bitwaa,” Buaji called. “Why don’t you take Khussi to her room? Or she will spoil the mehendi design and the
flowers on her hand will look like a bhootni, Nandkisore!”
Arnav
agreed with alacrity. Arnav & Khushi walked into their room.
“Sasumma,”
Mami discovered. “We were all shocked when Arnav bitwaa came in, but Khussi was
not shocked. Bhy? That ijj bhat I am asking. Bhy?”
“I don’t
know, Manorama,” Nani sighed. “Today he escaped by the skin of his teeth from
being thrown out. What is wrong with our Chotey?”
“Had Buaji
taken affront to Chotey’s arrival, Nani...” Anjali’s voice trailed away.
“Buaji ijj
used to Khussi,” Mami explained. “She must be unshockable by now, Saasumma.”
Nani and
Anjali looked at her.
“Manorama
Baand thinks that Khussi called hamre Arnav bitwaa here,” Mami said
thoughfully.
“But she
didn’t phone anyone,” Anjali said.
“I bill
steal Arnav bitwaa’s phone and check bhat Khussi did,” Mami decided.
“Manorama!”
Nani exclaimed. “Thoda to sharm karo. You are the mother of a grown-up son,”
she hissed.
“Bhat has
that got to do with looking into Arnav bitwaa’s phone, Hello Hi Bye Bye?” Mami
asked, confused. “How did Arnav bitwaa get here? Inbestigation karega padi.”
“No,” Nani
ruled. “You won’t do anything of that sort.” She looked around and saw Buaji.
She said, “We must leave now, Madhumatiji.”
“You must,
Nandkisore?” Buaji’s face fell.
“Yes,” Nani
smiled, holding on tightly to Mami’s hand lest she go in search of Arnav’s
phone.
“Buaji,”
Anjali quavered. “You are not angry that Chotey came here, are you?”
Buaji
smiled. “Naahi, Anjali bitiya,” she pinched the girl’s cheek. “My Khussi must
have called him here. Otherwise Arnav bitwaa would never do something like
this.”
All smiled.
“Arnavji,
you came,” Khushi beamed at him, cursing the henna on her hands and legs that
stopped her from throwing herself at him.
He quickly cupped
her face. “Khushi...what you wrote...I mean, texted...you mean it, don’t you?”
he asked. His eyes were anxious.
“I do,”
Khushi asserted. Never let it be said that Khushi was scared of owning up to
her atrocious behaviour.
Tension
left his body. His hands trembled. He whispered, “Khushi, I love you.”
Khushi
pretended to be hard of hearing. She frowned and said, “Kya kaha aapne? Theek
se sunai nahi diya.”
“Khushi, I
love you,” his voice was stronger now, his eyes light with joy.
“Acha? You
fell in love with me now, when you saw me dunked in mehendi?” she asked, one
brow raised in query.
He
chuckled. “No, I think I fell in love when I saw you sitting in my wardrobe clutching
the sleeve of my coat,” he confessed.
Her mouth
fell open. And then her lips pursed. “This nuisance mehendi! I can’t even hug
you,” she complained. “Why couldn’t you have told me this on our sangeet night
as we danced in your garden, Arnavji?” she asked.
“I..I wasn’t
sure you liked me,” he mumbled.
She gasped.
“Do you think I kiss men I dislike?” she asked to tease him.
“No, no,”
he scrambled for words.
“That I sit
on their bed and drink their tea? Woh bhi bina shakkar wala chai. That I watch
my serial with them?” she asked, looking like a wounded doe.
“No.
Khushi, please don’t be upset,” he begged, feeling terrible.
Khushi
threw her arms around him and almost knocked him down in her enthusiasm. “I
love you, Arnavji.”
“I love you
too, Khushi,” he whispered in her hair, feeling as though he held his world in
his arms.
“Your
jacket will be stained with mehendi,” she informed him after the event.
“Hone do,”
he muttered.
“Buaji may
see us,” she teased.
“Dekhne do,”
he breathed, dropping a kiss on her forehead.
“Do we
really have to sit through haldi too?” she whined. “Can’t we get married now?”
she asked.
“Khushi,”
he smiled.
“I am
serious,” she insisted. “Then I can come with you as you leave.”
He smiled,
rubbing a loving finger down her cheek.
“I am
already covered in mehendi. Ask them to throw some haldi too on us, Arnavji.
Then shaadi and then bidaii. We can get to your house by night,” she tempted him
beyond measure.
“One week,
Khushi. Just one more week,” he whispered, lowering his lips to hers.
Haayla Sankadevi...paglai gai he Arnavji ke pyasr mein
ReplyDeleteLovely story Smitaji,
Very beautifully written as usual.
Abhi question yeh he ki Sankadevi ek hafta kaise bitayegi????
She is quite the temptress and he is so in love with her. She seems to possess a remote and knows how to turn him on:-)
ReplyDeleteUffff... Sanki hai dono!
ReplyDeleteThat was beyond cute and lovable.. a very eager bride and a determined groom..
ReplyDeleteSita
that was so adorable
ReplyDeleteYour Khushi is more sanki than Buaji's Sankadevi from IPKKND :)
ReplyDeleteShe is tempting Arnav to no limits...
Bechara Arnav..lolz
I love this Arnav, such a romantic. Smart Buaji! She figured out that it had to be her Sanka Devi who lured Arnav to their home.
ReplyDeleteHayeee lovely update
ReplyDeleteBrilliant update
ReplyDeleteLoved it
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ReplyDeleteI envy Khushi. I really do :P
ReplyDeleteBeautiful update Smita! Khushi is very eager to get married asap. ^_^
Here the bride is more eager than the groom!! :)
ReplyDeleteHeyyyyy bgwan.....she is really puri pagletwa.....hahahaha
ReplyDeleteAmazingly written and khushi is so desperate to go to her Arnavji house.
ReplyDeleteShe really want to get married and get it over with :)
Spoonai (IF)
Yahan khushi is more eager to run with arnav
ReplyDeleteAnd arnav being the good boy by asking her to wait
Another week
How will she cope
She can't man
Too much waiting time
Lord that was funny
And so adorable
He came
Of course he did
She said I love you
He wanted to make sure she meant it
Duh why wouldn't she
Her reasons were very good you know
Buaji wouldn't mind him coming
Technically khushi didn't call him
Just gave him incentive to come
And he did
Aki tried to stop him
But our hero wasn't gonna stop
Haiyye yeh dulha kya baat hai chaa gaye
Not long for their wedding to happen
wow beautiful update loved it thank you..............ameena671
ReplyDeletecmon arnav bitwa, how come u didnt know she loved u... she let u massage her back when her dori is so tight on the first meet itself:-))
ReplyDeletenow a days khushi is more desperate to get married than arnav...
Liked it very much Smita. Arnav could not resist coming to buaji's house :-). Khushi is so eager to marry and go with arnav :-)
ReplyDeletekhushi is very eager to go to sasural and be with Arnav........she can't wait for the rasams to complete............
ReplyDeleteKhushi just can't wait! Loved this chapter!
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ReplyDeleteMy good bitwaa! May Devi Maiyya protect you from all harm, especially from Sanka Devi,”
ReplyDelete🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣