Sunday 23 November 2014

177. OS 8. One Rainy Night (Part 3)









Part 3




“Tanik thehro, Nandkisore,” Madhumati Gupta called as she waddled to the door to open it. “Who is leaning on the bell so early in the morning?” she mumbled.

She pulled the panels open and stared at the handsome man standing on her doorstep. He was tall, his features fine, his eyes exceptionally attractive. Dressed in an expensive suit, he looked totally out of place on her doorstep.




She stared at him, waiting for him to speak.

Arnav parted his lips, but found himself at a loss for words. How could he ask this lady if she had a niece when he didn’t know her name?

“Kaun ho, bitwaa?” Buaji asked. “Have you lost the way?”

The boy parted his lips again but said nothing. He seemed to be struggling with himself.

She frowned. Maybe he didn’t know Hindi, Buaji thought. But her own English was non-existent.

“Kaa bua, babua?” Buaji asked again. “What do you want?”

‘I want to know if you have a niece who looks like a fairy, a niece who may or may not exist, a niece I may have dropped at your doorstep last night or not, a niece whose name I have no idea of, having forgotten to ask her even after maybe spending hours with her,’ he said in his mind. He looked away from the curious face of the middle-aged lady to gather his thoughts.





Buaji followed his eyes. He was looking at the temple.

“Bitwaa, you want to go to the temple?” Buaji asked helpfully.

Arnav shook his head. He looked helplessly at the lady.

“Are you dumb?” Buaji asked, her heart melting in sympathy.

Arnav’s mouth fell open. “I..I..” he began.




Buaji sighed. So handsome and so hatta katta, but dumb! “Kauno baat naahi, bitwaa. Nandkisore does not give everything to everyone,” Buaji consoled him.

He stared at her, speechless.

“Bitwaa, do you want water?” Buaji asked, seeing signs of strain on his face.

He shook his head, turned away and walked off, feeling disgusted with himself. Why, oh why had he become tongue-tied in the presence of Buaji? He who could utter cutting remarks that could give heart attacks to his employees had lost it in Buaji’s presence! How would he look for the girl now?
He got into his car and shut the door with a slam. He was useless. He hit his hand against the steering wheel. ASR was hopeless. All his wealth and power could not get him to speak a word to Buaji to find out what he wanted to know.




Maybe he could contact Aman and ask him to find out more about Buaji  and the girl? He pulled his phone out and paused. What if Aman sent someone sniffing around and Buaji found out? Maybe he could sit in the car and watch the house? The girl, if she lived there, would come out at some point. If she was out, she would have to return home before night. He heaved a sigh of relief. Yes, that was the way to do it.

He leaned back in his seat only to jump up.

A long line of vehicles had formed behind his parked car. They were sounding their horns behind him.

The road was narrow and his vehicle big. He was causing a traffic jam right outside her house! What if Buaji came out to find out what the ruckus was all about?

He quickly started his car and drove ahead, looking for some space to park his car but failed to find a spot. Gnawing his teeth in frustration, he drove to his office.





“Khushi, do you want ber?” Payal asked, stopping before a cart in the market and turning to look at her listless sister.

“No, Jiji,” Khushi mumbled.

Payal frowned in distress. What had happened to Khushi? She was normally very cheerful and would let no ber pass by without tasting it.

“Dekho, Khushi. Chudi. Why don’t we buy chudi?” Payal asked.

Khushi looked at the colourful glass bangles in the shop with blank eyes.

Payal sighed. “Khushi, what is wrong with you?” she asked.

“Jiji, do you think I will meet him again?” Khushi asked, her eyes troubled.

“The chudiwala?” Payal asked in wonder.

Khuhsi frowned. “No, not the chudiwala. The rajkumar who saved me last night.”

Payal sighed. “Khushi, does he really exist or is he a character in one of your many daydreams?”

Khushi clutched her heart in hurt affront. “Jiji, you think I imagined him?”

“Well,” Payal paused tactfully.

“I didn’t, I didn’t,” Khushi protested. “Devi Maiyya ki kasam,” she promised. How could she have imagined him? No man had ever hugged her before him. How could she have imagined the warmth of his body, the gentle caress of his fingers, the concern in his intent eyes? How could she have dreamed of hugging a man like that? Imagined the feel of his muscles under her fingers, the care in his husky voice, the protectiveness in his hold, the fragrance of his skin, the touch of his stubble against her cheek, the feel of his hard chest against her soft bosom?

Tears filled her eyes. Would she ever meet him again? Or was he lost to her forever?







Arnav settled down in his seat and lifted his head to give instructions to Aman to locate the girl. It didn’t matter if he looked foolish. He had to find the girl, his pari in red...

Aman quickly slid three files on ASR’s table.

“Sir, these need to be signed immediately,” Aman explained.
ASR did the needful, his head filled with thoughts of the girl.

His phone rang. Di.

“Yes?” he muttered.

“Chotey, remember what I told you today morning?” she trilled.

Arnav drew in a deep breath, praying for patience.

Aman quickly left the room. He wanted no part of ASR’s fury after his sister had her way with him, forcing him into everything he didn’t wish to do!

“The pooja, Chotey,” Anjali reminded him.

“When?” he asked, leaning back and shutting his eyes. Where was the girl? Maybe he could drive over to Laxmi Nagar during his lunch break?




“Today evening,” Anjali pouted. “I explained at breakfast, Chotey.”

“Fine,” he said. Would Buaji notice him if he parked his vehicle elsewhere and strolled along the road before her house?

“So you will get me the things I need for the pooja, Chotey?” Anjali asked. “I will send the list with Mohanji.”

“Di, why don’t you send the list and HP to the market?” he asked, hoping against hope. “You will get the stuff you need and I can get some work done.”

“Chotey,” Anjali pouted, her voice lowering dramatically. “But you always get me the pooja material,” she whined.

“Yes, yes, I will get them. Send the list. Is there anything else?” he asked impatiently.

“Nothing, Chotey,” Anjali smiled, happy now that she had gotten her way. “I know you will return home early today. You won’t disappoint your Di, will you?” she asked.

Arnav grit his teeth.

“I will set aside a kurta pyjama for you, Chotey. Will you wear it?’ she asked.

“No,” he growled, puting his foot down.

“Alright,” Anjali gave in, knowing when to stop pushing.







Khushi prayed to Devi Maiyya, the evening breeze playing with her dupatta as she stood near the sanctum sanctorum, her hands folded.

“Devi Maiyya, I was not dreaming, was I? I really met him, didn’t I? You wouldn’t tease me with a glimpse of my rajkumar and then take him away from me, would you?” she whispered.

Devi Maiyya looked benignly at her.

“How can I make Jiji believe me? How can I see him again? Devi Maiyya, I will be able to see him again, won’t I?” Worried eyes looked at Devi Maiyya’s smiling visage. “What if Buaji finds a lion tamer or ringmaster for me? How can I tell her that I don’t want to marry him? That I want only my rajkumar?”

Someone pushed her from behind. Khushi turned around to see Vimla chachi.

“I haven’t finished, Vimla chachi. I have lots of things to tell Devi Maiyya,” Khushi protested.

“I know, Khussi. I know. It is a miracle that Devi Maiyya is still sitting here after hearing your Ramayan every evening. Sun, beta. Go home. Let us pray too. Nahi to they will shut the temple doors and we will still be waiting for you to finish your long veerkatha and mahakavya,” Vimla chachi begged.

Khushi looked at Devi Maiyya and then at Vimla chachi, her lips trembling. Even Devi Maiyya was abandoning her. She walked out of the temple on leaden feet. Where could she go now for help?

She walked along the street towards her house.

The radio at the tea shop on the way sang, “Tanhai, tanhai
Dil ke raaste mein kaisi thokar meine khayi
Toote khwaab saree, ek maayusi he chayi....
Har Khushi so gayi, zindagi kho gayi...




Khushi drew in a deep breath, trying hard not to sob. Even the radio felt pity for her, she thought. Only hard-hearted people like Vimla chachi could be blind to her plight. A vehicle sounded its horn. Even that sound sounded mournful. Khushi sighed in empathy.

Suddenly it started raining.

Khushi stood still, shocked. Nature too was crying with her? She looked around. It was darker than was normal for this time of the evening. People were running for cover or unfurling their umbrellas. She stood in the rain, feeling the cold water wet her clothes, right up to her skin. She shut her eyes and turned her face to the sky. She could feel him close to her, all around her, his arms holding her against him.

She dragged air in to her lungs on a sob.

She was willing to stand here all night in the rain if she could feel him by her.





“How many kilos of kaju do you want, bhaiyya?” the vendor asked.

Arnav looked around the market. Maybe the girl was around, shopping in the market. He had picked the market closest to Laxmi Nagar hoping to see her.

“Is it two or three, bhaiyya? I can’t make it out from the list,” the vendor frowned at Anjali’s writing.

“Three,” Arnav muttered absently, his eyes seeking his lal pari.



A few minutes later, he lugged baskets overflowing with pooja accessories to his car and placed them carefully within. He looked around the market one last time and then got in and drove away slowly.

His fingers moved to the console. Soon a song made its presence felt in the car.

Lag jaa gale ki phir ye haseen raat ho na ho
Shayad phir is janam mein mulaqaat ho na ho...

Arnav slammed on the brakes, feeling his heart clench. What if he never met her again?
It began to rain,

Hum ko mili he aaj ye ghadiyaan naseeb se
Ji bhar ke dekh leejiye hum ko kareeb se...


Arnav pushed open the door and stepped out in to the wet evening. Rain drenched him in seconds.




Phir aap ke naseeb mein ye baat ho na ho
Phir is janam mein mulaqaat ho na ho...


Where was she? Was she just a figment of his imagination? No, no, it couldn’t be. Fate couldn’t be so cruel to give him hope and then take it away from him. Khushi, happiness had finally stepped into his drab life. How could it abandon him so soon? He would go to Buaji tonight and sit in her living room till the girl returned.






15 comments:

  1. Anakon se phir Yeh pyaar ke Barsaat ho na ho...shayad is janam main mulaqat ho na ho...
    .wow donom taraf mein aag barabar lagi hai

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  2. A tongue-tied ASR. Too cute. It's really sweet the way they are searching for one another. Their hearts already recognized each other. Lovely, the way the story is shaping up. I wish to reiterate - if ever they decide to bring back IPKKND with the original cast , I'm going to start a campaign to have you write for the show. Thanks for the beautiful update.

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    1. Totally agree, who's better than our sweet smita?

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  3. Aankhon se tune yeh kya keh diya
    dil yeh diwana dhadakne laga.
    Tanhai me hum mile iss tarah,
    baarish me shola bhadakne laga.

    It rains whenever they meet. Aww....

    Always a man of few words under normal circumstances (I mean as normal as the scenarios around ASR can get!!), his vividly passionate dream has left him all the more dumbstruck. One chanced encounter in the rain with a fairy and he is dazed and disoriented. LOL. He is so into her. But I have to admit, for someonce who is usually succinct, that was quite a detailed description to buaji about the drenched girl in his arms who had made him restless and touchy. Cute!!
    Khushi praying to DM for another meeting with her Rajkumar, that was cute too. And the said Rajkumar is a lion-Hitler-Ringmaster for rest of the world but a love-sick puppy for his pari. Adorable.

    For once I don't mind Poojali with her pooja thali filled with pooja paraphernalia. Cos while shopping for her pooja stuff Prince Charming is gonna bump into his Pari, again in the rain. ;-)

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  5. Smita ! Dearest ! How could you abandon us at this crucial moment? Have mercy on our heart! Please update asap. No pressure of course :-) ASR sitting in Buaji's living room would be so tantalizing and a feast for the eyes hahahaha

    Beside, the ASR, speechless at the door was soooooo cute and unbelievable. Who could have ever imagined him speechless?

    Looking forward to reading the next update....please...

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  6. Awesome.
    I so love this arnav searching his lal pari and kushi searching for his rajkumar.
    I was dumbfounded when I saw arnav being speechless., Asr was speechless.
    looking forward to next update

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  7. Wow! You really like to portray your Arnav's as Majnu singh Raizada!! So different from the usual Arnav but soooo sweet!! Loved the part when Buaji thought he was mute!! Too funny.Can't wait to see how they meet again. Since both are already into each other I wonder how the story will progress - I guess ring master/lion tamer will need to enter the picture to spice things up!!

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  8. Amazing awesome fabulous update and character portrayal ..... Refreshingly lovable !!! I have started talking in adjectives .. May be the influence of Smitajis last story ....

    Looking forward to the next update ... Very eagerly !!!! Love this story ... Reminds me of the lot and sweetness of marrying khushi and his smiling girl

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  9. Btw these are two of my favorite stories

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  10. Fantabulous update. Loved the portrayal of the Deewana Singh Raizada who has now become Lost Singh Raizada, searching for his Pari

    Looking forward for next part.

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  11. Waitttttttttttttttttttinggggggggggggg!!!!

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  12. funny he should call her khushi as in happiness
    and thats what her name is
    awww [poor arnav
    wasnt able to talk to buaji about her
    and now he doesnt know her name
    and neither does she
    how to find the other
    both are so lost
    i feel so bad for them
    crying and despairing

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  13. Awesome update. Felt frustrated with arnav that why was he so tongue tied in front of the buaji !! Hope he finally gets the courage to correct the misunderstanding that buaji has of him that he is dumb !! Looking forward to the next update.

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  14. oh they want each other so bad

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