Monday 9 February 2015

195. OS 10 An Unexpected Visitor (Part 3)



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Part 3





The Raizadas looked at Arnav’s gobsmacked face and at Khushi’s frown. She was busy adjusting the pallu to please herself. Her hair was unbound, the silky fall cascading down her shoulders.





“Pin the pallu to your shoulder, Titliyya,” Buaji advised Khushi, unaware of Arnav’s condition.

Anjali cleared her throat. “Chotey, are you joining us for pooja?”

“Of course,” he croaked.

Mami gasped. “Saasumma, bhat ijj happenings here?” she whispered loudly, batting her eyelashes.

Nani tugged Mami’s arm. “Let’s all go down. Aaiye, Madhumatiji,” she invited.

Buaji nodded.

“Chotey, escort Khussi bitiya downstairs,” Nani helped him. “Take care she does not fall down the stairs. She may not be used to wearing a sari.”

Buaji nodded. “And the heels. She runs around wearing salwar suits and jootis all day, Nandkisore. I have to force her to wear a sari, Devyaniji.”

The ladies moved towards the door.

Anjali twisted her neck to see Arnav walk up to Khushi saying, “Khushi, shall we go down?” His voice was soft, tender, husky.

A glad smile twisted Anjali’s lips.

“I hope I don’t trip on the pleats,” Khushi muttered, still looking at her feet in silver sandals.

“Nothing will happen to you, Khushi. Main hoon na?” Arnav offered himself as security.

Khushi looked up to smile into his intent eyes. “I know. But today has been so accident-filled a day that I don’t trust myself. I may very well land on my face before all the old ladies and lose my front row of teeth.”

Arnav smiled. “Come, let’s go down,” he held out his hand.

Khushi happily put her hand in his and they walked out, Khushi teetering on her high heels and Arnav providing her support.

“Do you think I will look ugly without my teeth?” she asked Arnav seriously.

He chuckled under his breath.

“Boliye na?” she pressed.

“You couldn’t look ugly if you tried,” he murmured.

Khushi laughed. “You are saying this because you haven’t seen me with morning hair.”

Arnav chuckled.

“Or after I have been playing cricket with Chotu and Munna,” she smiled.

He looked at her, his eyes dancing with amusement.

“Buaji says we have the entire dust of the street on us. She asks me if I have been rolling in mud like an elephant,” Khushi grimaced.

“You drive her wild, don’t you?” he asked.

“Yes, I do. And that too without even trying. Pata nahi why it happens, but I always make her go Hai Re Nandkisore, Hai Re Nandkisore,” Khushi sighed.

Arnav looked down to hide his enjoyment of her experiences.

“Shall we sit down here?” he asked, pointing to the last row.

Khushi nodded.

They sat down together, Arnav ignoring the astounded eyes of the guests and Khushi sublimely unaware of the attention they were garnering.

“Why don’t you wear sari more frequently?” he whispered. “You look beautiful.”

The compliment went right over her head.

“How can I wear sari and play cricket?” she asked directly.

He looked at her face and down her delicious body with possessive eyes.

As he watched, she pressed her heart with one hand and breathed deep.

“Kya hua, Khushi?” he asked.

“This choli is too tight,” she admitted.

His mouth fell open as he looked at her choli and the curves straining the line of stitches.

“It suits Anjaliji’s smaller size,” she sighed. “I am too big. It is killing me.”

He swallowed hard as he studied her closely. “You are..perfect,” he choked.

Khushi squirmed, the blouse hurting her.

“Arnavji, what is that room?” she pointed.

“The kitchen,” he informed her.

“I am going to slip in there for a moment. I need to loosen the dori. Otherwise I will choke to death,” she scared him.

“I will help you,” he offered, his eyes on the doris.

“You will?” Her eyes were wide in shock.

“How can you tie them on your own?” he asked reasonably.

“I did. That’s why they are such a mess,” she pouted. “You are so sweet,” Khushi smiled at him.

He cleared his throat. Only he knew how hot he felt.

“Shall we go?” she asked.

“Of course,” he replied. They got up and went to the kitchen, unnoticed by Buaji who had her eyes shut.

Anjali, who saw the couple leave the room, nudged Mami who nudged Nani in turn.

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There was no one on the kitchen as Khushi and Arnav entered it.

“Arnavji, jaldi,” Khushi urged him on. She flipped her unbound hair over her left shoulder and turned her back to him.





He gulped. Two thin doris held the rich red silk against her. His eyes ran over the golden skin of her back, mesmerised.


Mami slowly sidled to the kitchen and stood at the door, her ear cocked to hear the secret conversation between her Arnav bitwaa and Khussi.

“Arnavji, I am dying here,” Khushi egged him on in an urgent whisper. “Jaldi, please.”

“Yes, yes,” he murmured. He lifted a trembling hand to the top dori, caught one end and tugged gently.

The dori fell open.

Khushi moaned in relief.



Mami gasped soundlesly. What was Arnav bitwaa doing to that girl for her to make Suhaag Raatwala sounds?



“Arnavji,” Khushi urged him, her hand on her chest, holding the piece of red silk to her.

Should he tie the first one before untying the second one? he wondered.

She solved his confusion.

“Untie it, Arnavji,” she pleaded.



Mami clutched her heart. Was Khussi asking her Arnav bitwaa to remove her sari?



He obediently tugged the second dori loose.

Khushi sagged in relief. “That feels so good,” she groaned in pleasure.

Arnav swallowed hard at the sight of the unfettered curve of her back. His eyes narrowed. The doris had left red marks on her back. Almost without his volition, his hands went up. His left hand held her shoulder firm and his right hand massaged the firm, supple skin of her back.

“Arnavji?” it was an uncertain question.

“Let me make you feel better,” he whispered against her ear.

She nodded obediently. His gentle fingers trailed over her over-sensitive skin.

Khushi squealed in pleasure.



Mami jumped. What was happening in the kitchen? She turned her head to look at Madhumatiji who was praying earnestly, her eyes still shut. Nani and Anjali had questions in their eyes. Mami grimaced. How could she tell Saasumma that her first great grandchild was on the way to being born? That Arnav bitwaa was having his suhaag raat with Khussi in their kitchen, woh bhi without shaadi?



Arnav’s warm, hard hand massaged and manipulated Khushi’s sore muscles.

She trembled.

Minutes passed by as he played with the skin of her back. She twisted, shuddered and shivered as his fingers ran all over her back.

Khushi forgot Buaji and the pooja.



Mami leaned forward to see what Arnav bitwaa was doing to Khussi. Her hand hit the lock of the door and made a slight sound.


Arnav stilled.

“More,” Khushi demanded in a throaty purr.

“Someone will come here,” he warned her softly.

“Let them,” Khushi said.

Arnav smiled. “What if Buaji sees us like this? You with the blouse untied and me behind you?” he whispered in her ear.



“She will blame me,” Khushi replied, sure of her answer.

Arnav smiled as he slowly fastened the doris, taking care to make her comfortable.

“OK now?” he asked.

Khushi nodded. “Shukriya,” she said softly.

Arnav smiled.


They left the kitchen together, missing Mami who had plastered herself to the wall to avoid being seen.

                                            ***



After the pooja, Arnav and Khushi had their dinner together, Khushi giving him every vegetable and fruit she didn’t like.

“I don’t like karela,” she murmured.

“I love it,” he smiled.

“Yeh leejiye,” she said as she transferred the karela on her plate to his.

She frowned at the fruit salad. “Santra?” she winced.

“I love oranges,” he offered.

“Very good,” she complimented him as she gave him all the orange pieces in her bowl.

“Arnavji, can you have this kheer?” she asked.

“No,” he replied.

“Then I won’t have it too,” she stated.

“Khushi, you don’t have to give up kheer just because I am with you,” he smiled.

Tears filled her big eyes. “I would feel bad if I couldn’t have kheer and my friend had it, right before me.”

“Khushi,” he laughed. “Tum bilkul sanki ho.”

“You are a better man than I am,” she realised.

“I most definitely am. You are a ladki,” he laughed.



Khushi laughed along with him.

“Arnavji, will you visit me at Laxmi Nagar? We can watch the serial together,” Khushi offered him the treat.

He took it with alacrity. “I will.”

Khushi smiled.

“Khushi, give me your phone number,” he asked.

She recited it like an obedient girl.

“Titliyya, it is time to leave,” Buaji called.

Khushi grimaced. “I have to go now.”

Arnav nodded. “I will see you soon,” he promised.

“We will have fun watching the serial together,” she declared.

“Yes, we will definiely have fun,” Arnav whispered, watching Khushi leave with Buaji.

                                          ***


“What made you join us for the pooja today, Chotey?” Anjali asked, laughter in her eyes.

Arnav looked at his laptop, his face slightly flushed.

“I invite you every time and you make it a point to be far away from home on those evenings. Aaj kya hua?” Nani teased.

Arnav pretended to be deaf and dumb.

Mami cleared her throat meaningfully. “Arnav bitwaa, bill you be habing ‘fun’ with Khussi bitiya any time soon?” she asked deliberately.

Arnav’s eyes flew to hers.

“Woh kaa he, Saasumma, I think it ijj better to have marrijj before fun,” Mami spoke to Nani but looked at Arnav. “Naahi to chotey packetwaa aa jayenge before marrijj.”

“What are you talking about, Manorama?” Nani frowned.

“Kucho naahi, Saasumma. I was just telling Arnav bitwaa that Khussi seems a good girl,” Mami said.

Nani & Anjali nodded.

“And her Buaji seems strict,” she added.

“Yes, she is,” Anjali agreed.

“So it might be good to take Arnav bitwaa’s marrijj proposal to Madhumatiji before something happens,” Mami looked at Arnav.

“What can happen?” Nani frowned, confused.

“Shall we ask for Khushiji’s hand?” Anjali asked Arnav eagerly.




Arnav blushed. “I will let you know when,” he replied.

Nani and Anjali smiled at him, thrilled.

Mami frowned. “Phone numbers exchange hui gawa, next datewaa phixed hui gawa. Bhat are you waiting for now, Arnav bitwaa?”


“To see her serial with Khushi,” he murmured before walking away, a small smile on his lips.

"Bhere are you goings?" Mami called after him.

"To give Laxmi a treat," he smiled.







49 comments:

  1. Ahahahaha..... Mami And her brain.....

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  2. Outstanding! I read it twice Smita. Love this Arnav and clueless Khushi.
    Hydsri

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  3. Hey Smitha, What is with Khushi in the last story and this one...she is childish, naive and innocent...but i am sure she is not ignorant about what she could allow a man to do and not do to her physically... sorry...not able to relate...:(

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    1. Patience, my dear, patience. So glad to see you here.

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  4. Hahahaha Mami's mind works in overdrive mode! Lol!
    Khushi is so naive! She was wreaking havoc in Arnav, and there she was, enjoying herself at the new sensations she was experiencing! :P
    Loved it Looking forward to the next update! :) x

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  5. Maami should have said the truth.. would have been awesome.. and Khushi, why will Arnav watch serial with you.?? too naive..

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  6. Wow naive or what
    Not helping him
    And Mami taking it so wrong
    They weren't doing much
    Well not really
    He was just untying her dori
    And messaging her back
    Nothing scandalous
    Yeah right
    Good no one saw them
    How to seduce a man without knowing you are doing it go to miss khushi kumari Gupta
    She will tell you
    But then she doesn't know
    She told him how and why her blouse was tight
    Girl his control will slip
    If it hadn't already
    She is dangerous for him
    He didn't faint luckily
    But boy was that a treat for him or what
    Shaadi karwa do
    Before great grand child comes
    Bless Mami
    Eavesdropping like that
    Gutter mind she has
    But can you blame her
    So arnav found this visitor all than to laxmi
    He is gonna love that goat for that
    This was cute and funny
    So arhi wedding it is huh
    But let them finish their serial date first

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  7. Smita this was mind blowing. i was laughing so loudly my family was like what happened. God superb one.. painted & sainted was best descriptions of mami & anjali ever heard.. khushi is sanki number one and arnav have fallen for her so hard.. looking forward to serial watching session.. love you and loved your new story a lot.. :)

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  8. Oh my god. Khushi is so naive about her actions. Arnav seems to be having a nlast of course. And Mami's mind is imagining things.

    So he will be watching serial with Khushi. This is going to be fun.

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  9. LOL Mami is imagining more than required hehehe Nice update

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  10. Omggggggg haayeee Romance
    Mami n her imaginations

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  11. LOL!!!!! awesome...update... hahahaaaa

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  12. Hahah loved it Mami back to spying!

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  13. Lovely update Smita. That sari was so beautiful and the dori... OMG :-). Mami is so cute. She is always ready to investigate what is happening between arnav and khushi :-). Arnav is going to laxmi nagar to watch serial with khushi :-)). Very nicely written. BTW, I am reading Finding Khushi again. I don't remmeber how many times I have read it already :-).

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  14. wow superb update loved it can't wait for next part...............ameena671

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  15. You killing us with red sari and it's untying dories... Awesome

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  16. Awesome!!!!
    Lol....Arnav and Khushi are going to watch serial together. And Maami she is altogether another piece in every story of yours.
    Lovely!!!!
    Waiting for next part already.


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  17. umm ,, who planned this match fixing??? khushi seems a mystery

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  18. wow what a chapter
    loved it very much
    Khushi is so innocent, naive and cute.Looks like Arnav has fallen in love with her already.
    About mami what can I say? her's mind is imagining things and working in overtime.
    Now Arnav will be watching serial with Khushi, can't wait to see what happen next.

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  19. Lovely update...
    Red saree and dori... kya baat hai... ab toh Arnav totally smitten hoyegaye ;)

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  20. It was you behind Mami's wild imagination.. It was you behind Khushi's naivity...
    It was you behind Arnav's uncontrolled actions..
    Smita...
    I m really scared of ur capabilities...
    What'll become of us when there will be playing double tune of Rabba Ve at Laxminagar ...

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  21. Oh my how come Laxmi got such an awesome treat.

    And omg what was that Khushi so naive and Arnav so dazed and out of control and that massage.

    Oh my Mami is no less first investigation than indirect confrontation and finally the lasting with marijj proposal.

    Awesome.

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  22. Amazing OS..............they exchanged numbers.......they planned their next date in laxmi nagar to watch the serial together.............

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  23. Arnav is going to give Laxmi a treat.Yes he definitely knows whom to thank for the unexpected beautiful hugs he got. Khushi is so clueless that she is telling her choli is tight and asking him to untie her blouse Hai re NandaKishore!!! Arnav has so much control .Now he is going to test his control by seeing serial with Khushi.Very nice .How will be their Suhag Raat 😁 with the special suhaag raat sounds...
    Love you for the beautiful updates

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  24. Hi Smita, I read all your updates in one go. I have been so busy that I didn't have time to breathe. I sat up late last night determined to read the updates even if I had to lose sleep. (Am a zombie this morning, but a happy one) I was laughing so hard after reading the latest update that I woke my husband up. ( Needless to say, my ASR was not amused) While Khushi tied up Arnav with her artless seduction, mamiji stole the show esp. her imagination re. suhaagraatwala sounds!! A very novel story line Smita. Looking forward to the next update. Will there be an epilogue? Now I have to watch at least one scene from the show- perhaps the new year one.

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  25. Khushi is innocence personified......;)

    Loving it............:)

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  26. Hi Smita Di.. I just read ur new OS.. its awesome.. Khushi is talking abut "Our" fav serial..loved it even more.!!
    Loved the 1st part the most..very unexpected visitor visiting Arnav in his room..thre convo was wonderful.
    Loved Mami ji's reactions seeing Arshi together in the roon & thn the kitchen as well..lolsss
    Khushi is tooooo innocent..driving Arnav crazy ;)
    Now they hv exchanged thre nos. me expecting more fun ;) Continue soon di..

    Sorry for not coming here before/early.

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  27. Awww...khushi is just adorable...
    loved the update...
    n
    conggrrrtttttssss dear on publication ov ur first novel....
    u really deserve this n many more....

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  28. Lo ji.. in pic Laxmi is giving treat to Arnav.. not as stated by Arnav bitwa

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  29. Aww that was such a sweet update!! Last pic was too funny!!!!

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  30. It feels good to be here again in this warm and pleasant " Arshian" ambiance!

    Once I read all the updates, I will be back!

    Missed you a lot! You, your stories, and the comments and some new friends that I have known since I found this blog :-)

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  31. checking Smita....
    Gtting complaints as to unable to comment via WP and also gmail!
    Good story going on here...

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  32. loved it. couldn't stop myself from laughing aloud in the end.
    Just imagining Arnav giving head massage to Buaji itself is very hilarious and out of this world.

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  33. I love it. My belly hurts because I couldn't stop laughing :-)

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  34. i was laughing so hard my hubby thought i was nut this is so cute and he really does have to treat laxmi loving the update .

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  35. hehehe ay it's so funny😂😂😂

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