Tuesday 14 July 2015

227. OS 11: An Uncomplicated Wife (Parts 15-16)



Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You


“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.

 “How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”

He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.

Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.


http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you



Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi

http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi

"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."

Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.

A blog for my VMs:

http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/








Part 15 







“Arnavji, I am going to Preetho’s sangeet,” Khushi announced over the phone.




“Really?” came the reply. “What are you wearing?”



She frowned. Why was he asking about her clothes? “A peach lehenga and golden blouse,” she explained. “The dupatta is peach with golden peacock design.”


“Is the choli long or short?” he asked.


“The choli?” she asked in confusion. “Short. Why?”


“How short? Can I see your waist through the dupatta?” he asked, his voice husky.


Khushi blushed. “You are besharam, behaya!” she exclaimed.


“Haq he mera,” he claimed. “Pati jo hun tumhara.”


“Arnavji, you...” she was lost for words.


“Khushi, don’t forget to wear sindoor,” he reminded her. “And don’t let the dupatta hide your mangalsutra. I want everyone there to know that you are married to me.”


Khushi burst out laughing. “Shall I write your name on my forehead?” she asked.


“Yes,” he agreed with alacrity.


“Aap bhi na!” she teased. “The hall will be filled with uncles and aunts and kids I have known all my life. I am sure all of them were present at our wedding,” she laughed.



“Good,” he heaved a sigh of relief.



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“How was the sangeet?” he asked.


Khushi yawned. “Fun,” she replied. “We danced to London Thumakda, Chunari Chunari...” she yawned again.


Arnav smiled.


“When you come to Shantivan, Khushi, I am going to make you dance. Just for me. In your peach lehenga and choli, but without the dupatta,” he murmured.


“Awww,” she covered her open mouth with her hand. “You are so shameless, Arnavji!” she exclaimed in astonishment.


“Abhi pata chala? After we have been married for two months?” he asked, a smile in his voice. “That is soooooo bad, Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada!”


Khushi pouted. “How could I know what you really were? You were so distant!”


“Distant? Me?” Arnav asked outraged. “Who was it who wanted to sleep with Di every night? Who ran away to Lucknow?”


“Me,” she admitted in a low voice, penitent.


Arnav melted. “It is alright, Khushi. We have a full lifetime to know each other,” he comforted her.


“Ji,” she smiled, the smile distorted by a yawn.




Arnav smiled. “Go to sleep, my dancing queen,” he said softly.


Khushi slipped into bed, holding the phone to her ear.
“Arnavji, phone mat rakhiye,” she requested.


“No, I won’t,” he promised, a smile on his lips as he settled his head comfortably on her pillow.


“Are you in bed?” she asked.


“Yes,” he replied. “I am using your pillow,” he said in a low voice. “It makes me feel you are here with me.”


Khushi sighed. “I thought you wanted a wife who wouldn’t nag you, disturb you. That’s why I stayed away from you,” she confessed.


“I had no idea what marriage entailed, Khushi, when I nodded my agreement to marry you. That was stupid, Khushi, dangerously so. Even more awful was describing my expectations from marriage to you. You must have been shocked?” he asked, anxious.


“Disappointed,” Khushi admitted. “I thought—I thought maybe...”


“Maybe?” he asked, feeling like he had inadvertently hurt a puppy.


“Maybe I would—no, it doesn’t matter. It is ingratitude to want more,” she concluded.




“Ingratitude?” he frowned. “Khushi, talk to me.”


“It is nothing, Arnavji,” she shrugged. “Just a thought that passed through my head. That’s all.”


“Khushi, what did I tell you about our marriage? You can tell me anything. I can tell you anything,” he said softly, shutting his eyes in self-disgust.




“It is not important,” Khushi said slowly. “Just that—I hoped that when I married, I would find someone who would want to—want to be a family with me. Matlab, my husband would be really related to me, bound to me. It wouldn’t be charity or kindness. It would be a real bond...bas yahi tha. It is nothing.”


Arnav couldn’t find a reply to her simple words.


“Today was nice, Arnavji,” she moved on without waiting for a reply. “All were happy at the sangeet. Vikas and his parents came to join Preetho and her family. They look very nice together, Arnavji, very happy. They were talking and laughing. The ladies were teasing her saying that she looked eager to be leaving us and going to Vikas’ house,” she said smiling, her eyes shut.


Arnav swallowed. How had Khushi felt on their wedding day, marrying an unseen stranger for her sister and moving away to Delhi?


“I felt sad for a moment, thinking of Preetho leaving us. Then Buaji reminded me that I will be in Delhi anyway. So what is the use of keeping Preetho here?” Khushi chuckled.


Arnav smiled slightly.


“We are lucky, Arnavji,” she said softly, her words slurred due to sleep. “Lucky to be alive, lucky to be together. I am lucky it was you. Had it been another man, maybe I...” her voice trailed away.




He had to blink to clear his eyes.


“Go to sleep, Khushi,” he said hoarsely. “Tomorrow is mehendi, right.”







“Ji,” she replied, half-asleep. “Shubh ratri.”


“Good night,” he wished.









Part 16





“How was mehendi, Khushi?” he asked with a smile.


HP stole a look at Arnav’s smiling face as he placed dinner on the low table.


“Nice, Arnavji. My hands, arms and legs are covered with the design. The ladies sang and teased Preetho,” Khushi said smiling. “By the time she gets to Vikas’ house, if the ladies have their way, she will resemble a tomato. A very ripe one. Her cheeks were so red,” she chuckled, remembering her friend’s fate.


Arnav lay back on his recliner, his face relaxed, an amused smile stretching his lips.


HP smiled secretly as he left the room. Arnav bhaiyya would eat dinner tonight, he thought.



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“Arnav bhaiyya,” Mohan spoke as he parked Arnav’s car before his office.


Arnav looked at him in enquiry.


“When should I go to Lucknow to bring back Khushi bhabhi?” he asked timidly.


Arnav opened his mouth to reply that he had to go on Sunday, but thought better of it. A long moment later he said, “I will let you know.”


“Ji,” Mohan replied.



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Khushi combed her hair, lost in dreams.


What would he do if Arnavji were in the room with her? Would he take the brush from her hand and comb her hair for her? Would he drop a kiss on her ear, sending her earring moving?

She blushed.


She had lived with him in one room for two months. But she had learned more about the man her husband was after leaving him in Delhi and coming to Lucknow.


He was no staid businessman. Yes, he was staid at times and a businessman always, she corrected herself. Lekin he was more than that. She blushed again.


He was naughty, devilishly so.


But you are no less, Khushi, she taunted herself. You like it when he tells you wicked things, threatens to hug and kiss you...


“Khushi, kya hua?” Payal asked. “Your face is pink. Did you go out in the sun?”


“No, Jiji,” Khushi mumbled. “I am fine.”


“Do you want my kadda, Titliya?” Buaji asked. “It will take care of all your illnesses, Nandkisore.”


“No, buaji,” Khushi replied sedately.


There was no kadda that could obliterate the effect of Arnavji and his roguish tongue from her heart, she thought.



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“Chotey, when will Payaliya and Khussi bitiya return?” Nani asked impatiently, pushing away her plate. “The house seems empty without them.”


Mami chuckled. “Both of them are gaay, cowzzz. Both silent, doing work chupke chupke. But when they are not here, it feels ajeeb ajeeb,” she agreed.


“Poor Amma, babuji and buaji,” Anjali pouted. “How sad they must have felt when they married off both daughters at the same time.”


Arnav bit back a smile. It was time to scare Nani. “But I thought you said that the Guptas insisted on getting both Payal and Khushi married off at the same time?” he asked, painting a frown on his face to agitate his family.


Nani gasped. Mami jumped. Anjali stared at him, all flustered.


“Chotey,” Anjali stammered, recovering first from the blow.


Arnav looked at her, appearing mildly confused. Akash looked at the two parties with mild curiosity.


“Yes, yes, they did,” Nani mumbled.


“They wanted to marry off the two girlswaa, Arnav bitwaa,” Mami tried to save the situation. “But parents he to bura to lagega, kyon Saasuma?”


“Yes,” Nani tried her hand at firefighting. “Any parent with two girls to marry off will be eager to conduct the ceremonies together, want them to marry into the same house, Chotey and be happy together. Isme kono aashcharya ki baat nahi he.”


Arnav looked at them as though he were not fully convinced.


The Raizada ladies held their breath, looking anxious and terrified.


He decided to put them out of misery. He shrugged and said, “Alright.”


The ladies heaved a collective sigh of relief  that sent the petals of the flowers in the vase on the table fluttering.


Arnav bent his head to hide his enjoyment of the situation. If only Khushi were here with him, he thought with a pang as he usually did a thousand times every day. She would enjoy the humour of the incident.


“When will Mohanji go to get Payalji and Khushiji?” Anjali asked Arnav.


“Sunday,” Arnav replied.


“Will you inform him or should I, bhai?” Akash asked.


“I will,” Arnav replied.






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On Saturday night, Khushi and Payal returned from the party at Preetho’s house. Payal shut the door, sighing wearily.


“How was the function?” Amma asked with a smile.


“Nice, amma,” Payal replied. “But the house was too crowded. There was no place to stand.”


“But Preetho was happy to see all of us,” Khushi said. “She began crying and saying her goodbyes. She stopped only when her mother reminded her that her bidai was yet to happen,” she chuckled.


All laughed.


Buaji asked, “Titliya, when will Arnav bitwaa send the car for you and Payaliya?”


“Tomorrow, buaji,” Khushi smiled.


“Look at the happy smile on her face!” Buaji laughed. “She is eager to leave us and go to her preetam.”


Amma and babuji smiled.


Khushi flushed, realising the truth of buaji’s words.


“I will pack the sweets and pickles I made for you and the Raizadas,” Garima said, moving to the kitchen.

“Don’t forget the sarees and suits we bought for Devyaniji and the others, Nandkisore,” Buaji reminded her.


“Haan, Jiji,” Garima muttered.


“I will go and change, amma,” Khushi said as she walked up the steps, her hands holding up the hem of her yellow lehenga.


“Why is Akashji not picking up his phone?” Payal frowned as she sat in the living room and tried his number.





There was a knock on the door.


“Kaun he, Nandkisore?” Buaji asked from the kitchen. “Payaliya, see who it is.”


Frowning at the phone, Payal went to open the door only to stand shell-shocked to see Akash and her jetji standing at the entrance. Their car was parked in the courtyard.


“Akashhhhji?” Payal stuttered. “Arnavji?” Joy warred with shock on her face.


“Kaun he, Payaliya? Is it Preetho’s mother?” Amma asked.


“Amma, buaji,” Payal called unsteadily. “Arnavji and Akashji have come.” She stood back to let the men enter the house.


Akash quickly put his arm around her shoulders and hugged her to him. Payal wanted to hug him tight and weep, but she desisted exerting great willpower.


Amma, babuji and buaji came rushing to greet their damadjis.


“Arnav babua, Akash bitwaa, kaisen ho?” Babuji asked.


The boys touched his feet. Arnav said, “We are fine. We—we thought it might be safer to take Payal and Khushi with us rather than make them travel alone with Mohan.”

Only a slight flush betrayed his discomfiture.


Akash’s eyes glittered with gratitude to his bhai who had refused to let an eager Mohan take up this pleasurable duty and had insisted that he and Akash do the honours.


Babuji opened his mouth to ask how Payal, Khushi and Mohan travelling together in Arnav’s car could be considered travelling ‘alone’, but was nudged into silence by buaji.


“Yes, Nandkisore,” Buaji replied. “Our damadjis are perfectly right. Zamana kharab he. It is better that the girls return with you.”


“Shall I serve dinner, bitwa?” Amma asked.


“No, Amma,” Akash replied. “We had dinner on the way.”


“You must be tired, Nandkisore,” Buaji said. “Payaliya, take Akash bitwaa to your late dadi’s bedroom on the ground floor. I will bring the pillows and blankets in a moment.”


“Yes, buaji,” Payal murmured as she led Akash away.


“Arnav bitwaa, Khussi is in her room upstairs. Just go up the steps, Nandkisore. It is the third door on the right,” Buaji said.


Arnav nodded and he climbed the stairs to her room, his bag in hand, his heart eager for a glimpse of his wife.







Arnav found the room with little difficulty. The door was open and Khushi was seated before the mirror removing her jewellery.


Sensing movement near the door, Khushi called, “Jiji?” as she unpinned the dupatta.


Arnav entered the room, placed his bag on the floor and shut and locked the door.


Khushi turned her head to look at him and gasped. The dupatta fell from her hands. She stood up on trembling legs, an ethereal fairy in a yellow chiffon lehenga and choli with a gold and silver border.










“Khushi,” Arnav whispered, his eyes running gladly over her delicious form and beautiful face, his heart galloping in his chest at finally breathing the same air as his wife.


Slowly Khushi put one foot before the other and moved towards him, as though not sure he was not a figment of her imagination.


He held out a hand.


She ran towards him, crashing into him, throwing her arms around his shoulders and neck, weeping and wailing. “Arnavji, you came—I was waiting—why didn’t you tell me?”


“Khushi, I was going crazy without you,” he confessed.


“Me too,” she whispered, her lips moving against the taut lines of his neck.








“I love you, Khushi,” he admitted easily as though he had been saying it since birth.


Khushi sobbed uncontrollably for a moment, her body moving convulsively against his. Her arms tightened around him and she breathed, “I love you too, Arnavji. I don’t want to stay away from you ever again.”


“I won’t let you, Khushi.” It was a promise. His arms locked her to him, his fingers touching the bare skin of her back revealed by the low neck of her choli and the dori.


She moved closer, her leg between his, her fingers clutching his back to pull him closer into her.


Arnav lowered his head to place a kiss on her forehead.


She reciprocated, lifting herself on her toes to press her lips to his forehead.


He kissed her left cheek. She responded by caressing his lean cheek with her lips.


“You have lost weight,” she complained.


“I have become a devdas in your love,” he muttered against her right cheek.


Khushi chuckled against his right cheek even as fresh tears coursed down her cheeks.


He kissed away her tears and slowly moved to her lips.

She threw all caution to the winds and set out to learn how to kiss. She mimicked him, sucking and licking his lips as he did hers.


Both of them shuddered with desire.

Her fingers in his hair pulled his head down for more kisses.

His hands clutched her bare waist and ran up her back to play with her dori and the hook of her choli.


“Arnavji,” she invited him to ravish her, her body squirming against him for closer contact, her desperate fingers clutching his back.


His trembling fingers obediently pulled her dori.


She shuddered in relief.


The dori fell open, letting the neck of her choli gape.


Khushi fumbled with the buttons of his jacket. His fingers joined hers to undo them. He shrugged out of the offending article of clothing.


Her fingers then attacked his thin white cotton shirt. The buttons popped and fell somewhere on the floor. Her fingers stole into his shirt and touched his bare, hot, silky skin, running all over his chest eagerly.


“Khushi,” he gasped.


Khushi’s only reply was to press a hard kiss on his heart.


His lips kissed her neck and he bit gently.


She moaned, “Arnavji...”


His name had never sounded sweeter, hotter...


His tongue laved the slight bite. She shivered and her nails bit into his skin through his white shirt.


His lips moved down from her neck to pastures new as Khushi gasped and panted his name again and again.




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Arnav opened bleary eyes to see the sun shining brightly through the window.


Where was he?


He looked around. Khushi...she was asleep, her sweet face on his pillow, her lush hair covering her bare shoulders. The rest of her was under the blanket.








He smiled, his eyes tender and aglow with love.


A knock sounded on the door.


He sat up and looked around for his clothes. He grabbed his trousers and picked up his shirt. It was missing three buttons. He smiled wickedly.


“Arnav bitwaa?” Buaji called. “Khussi?”


“Just a minute, buaji,” Arnav replied before unzipping his bag and shrugging into a white t-shirt and his pants.
He opened the door, careful to hide Khushi from buaji’s eyes.


“Bitwaa, here is your chai,” buaji said smiling.


“Thank you, buaji,” Arnav took the tray from her hands.


“Hasn’t Titliya woken up yet, Nandkisore?” buaji asked.


“Err—no, she is still asleep,” he replied, trying to look as innocent as possible as though he hadn’t kept her up all night.


Buaji hit her forehead with her hand. “Hai Re Nandkisore!” she exclaimed. “Still asleep? It is eight already. Doesn’t she want to attend Preetho’s shaadi at ten?”


“I will wake her up, buaji,” he promised earnestly.


“Haan, bitwaa,” buaji smiled at him. “Come down when you are ready for breakfast. We have made halwa poori.”


“Yes, buaji,” he replied obediently.


He waited till buaji walked away before shutting the door.


He then placed the tray on a small table by the bed and sat down by a dozing Khushi.









He smiled.


She was so beautiful. Gorgeous when dressed and even more gorgeous when undressed. His eyes twinkled. A tigress who had demanded his lovemaking as though she could not get enough of him. But that was in the darkness of the night and under the influence of the terrible week-long separation. How would she react when she woke up?


He wanted to know.

He had to look into her eyes as the realisation of everything that had gone on all night dawned on her. Would she be shy? Or would she take it in her stride?

He ran a gentle finger down her cheek.


“Arnavji,” she mumbled as she settled more comfortably in bed, rubbing her face against the pillow.


“Khushi,” he called softly.


Her lashes fluttered and she opened her eyes to see him looking down at her, his eyes soft, loving.


She smiled at him. “You are really here,” she sighed in happiness, still half-asleep.


He smiled, waiting.


She stretched her arms, only to still as the soft fabric rubbed against her naked body.


Her wide eyes looked at him, as if asking him if everything she remembered of last night had really happened. A pink colour spread across her face and neck.


“Yes,” he said softly, his lips quirking.


“Good,” she smiled, heaving a sigh of relief even though the flush on her cheeks had no intention of dying down. She would have been very disappointed if it had all been a dream!


Arnav looked away to hide his amusement.


Her eyes fell on the tray.


“Tea,” she cried. She sat up, clutching the covers to her chest. “Arnavji, will you turn your head away? I will get out of bed,” she explained.


Arnav asked, a wicked twinkle in his eyes, “Why? Don’t tell me you are shy, Khushi. I won’t believe you after the way you ripped the shirt from my body last night.”


Khushi blushed. “I didn’t exactly rip it, Arnavji. I just...” her excuse died away.


“You did too. Three of my buttons are missing,” he claimed, his eyes dancing.


Her blush intensified. “Woh..will you turn your head away?” she begged.


“Alright,” Arnav turned his head away.


Khushi waddled modestly to the bathroom, dragging the heavy covers along with her. Then she put her head out. “Arnavji, don’t peep,” she pleaded.


“I won’t,” he promised, shutting his eyes.


Khushi came out in a towel and gathered fresh clothes. She darted back into the bathroom, shut the door and then yelled, “Now you can look, Arnavji.”


Arnav bit back his smile as he saw the covers heaped outside the bathroom. He carried them back to bed and straightened the room and their bed.











Khushi emerged in a pink Paithani saree with a peacock design on the pallu, her wet hair wrapped in a towel.


His breath stopped somewhere in his chest.


“You are beautiful, Khushi,” he whispered.


Her face became as pink as her saree.


He tweaked her nose before walking into the bathroom with his toiletries.


The bathroom was fragrant, filled with Khushi’s special scent. The satisfied smile remained on his face as he showered.


He emerged from the bathroom with just a towel around his waist.




Khushi felt her heart pounding as he crossed the room to pull out a cream kurta pyjama and underclothes from his bag.



‘What will he do if I tug at his towel?’ Khushi’s naughty mind wondered. She stared at his image in the mirror. ‘Will he remove the towel now?’ she wondered hopefully.






147 comments:

  1. Awwwww..... That was a very reasonable conversation..... Now let us see what Arnav does....

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    1. Yes, the ball is in ASR's court.

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  2. Very beautiful update...
    Thank you.
    And yeh he is very Besharam...

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    1. The naughty twinkle in his eyes...haiyye!

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  3. Loved it. Dreaming about them.

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    1. Must be a very interesting night..ha..ha..

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  4. Loved it. Dreaming about them.

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  5. Can't tell how much i am loving Uncomplicated wife.. awesome parts.. Arnav's desperation to be with his wife and also his wife's need to have him as hers.. loving this sweet talking of a real husband and uncomplicated wife.. looking forward to their meet on sunday once when Khushi returns from Lucknow.. Arnav kissing her hard and her dance for him.. But feels Arnav is gonna land up at Lucknow to bring Khushi home himself.. wonderful story..

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    1. They are slowly getting to know each other. Dekhte hein!

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  6. Brilliant update...........the easy banter between them feels so good........they have come a long way............it is touchy when khushi said what she wanted from her husband.........hope Arnav tries to be one for her............she missed so many things but I believe Arnav will give all she missed and much more...............can't wait for more..........

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    1. Yes, life hasn't been easy for both of them. Let's see where this goes.

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  7. Brilliant update. Loved the conversation between them as it cleared a lot of air. This judai is definitely opening them up and bringing them closer/

    Am looking forward eagerly for next update...

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    1. Yes, bridging the gulf. Thank God for mobile phones..ha.ha..Imagine Arnav using the landline in Shantivan with Mami breathing down his neck & Khushi talking to him in the presence of Buaji..ha..ha..

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    2. OMG that would have been one classic conversation :))

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    3. My goodness I just imagined that but all I could think of is Hello HI bye bye and Hai re nandkishore with each line that arnav and khushi speak... he he he

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  8. Dheere Dheere.. Aa Re!
    Dheere Dheere.. Aa Re!
    Badal Dheere Ddheere Jaa!
    Mera Bulbul so Raha Hai!
    Shor o Gul na Macha!
    Dheere Dheere.. Aa Re! ....

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    1. Dheere aayein, lekin aaye jaroor kyonki ...

      o sajana, barakha bahaar aayee
      ras ki phuhaar laayi, aakhiyon men pyaar laayi
      tum ko pukaare mere, man kaa papeehara
      mithhi-mithhi agani me, jale mora jiyara
      o sajana.....................
      aise rim-jhim me, o sajan pyaase pyaase mere nayan,
      tere hi khwaabon men kho gaye
      o sajana.....................
      saawali saloni ghata, jab jab chhaayi
      aakhiyon men raina gayi, nindiya na aayi
      o sajana...................

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    2. Kola Lakka Vellari..... Welcome, welcome, welcome.... Ruchi... Glad to see you here....

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    3. WAH! WAH! Dil garden garden ho gaya!

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  9. Finally Khushi is opening up to him. Poor girl. Such a simple expectation.
    Smita your stories and writing is just amazing. I have reread your stories so many times. Each one is good. But now over the last few I find that the stories are getting better and better and with a lot of depth too.
    Hydsri

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    1. Thank u, my dear. My craze seems to be increasing instead of decreasing!

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    2. Well I am all for it and ever ready to read all that you write.

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  12. Amazing update
    I am loving this story so much

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    1. Part 16 was fab... Arshi's love story has finally begun... ;)

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  13. What she said made sense
    She is opening up to him
    That's good
    And arnav is flirting with her
    Going good
    Hope she doesn't run when she comes back to him
    Arrey waah arnav aap toh lover boy bann gaye
    Possessive aint he
    Not that I blame him
    Now he knows how she felt in her marriage
    No excitement no teasing
    She didn't even know him properly
    Can he remedy that
    Hope so man
    They need to move forward now

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    1. They definitely need to move on. This is a new chance for them to leave their past behind.

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  14. wow beautiful update loved it can't wait for next part thank you.................ameena671

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    1. Soon. Promise. Maybe even tomorrow. Depends on how many songs I get as bribe..ha..ha..

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    2. Aww that was such a cute update and possessive Arnav, cannot watch for the next update Smitha!!!!!

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  15. "Wear your sindoor and mangalsutra. Let the world know you are taken and you belong to me." Being extremely territorial, are we?
    Here's a toast to Arnav's possessiveness.

    Tumhe Koi Aur Dekhe To Jalta Hai dil
    Badi Mushkilon Se Phir Sambhalta Hai dil
    Kya Kya Jatan Karte Hain Tumhe Kya Pataa
    Yeh Dil Beqaraar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahi Jaante
    Magar Jee Nahi Sakte Tumhare Bina
    Hume Tumse Pyaar Kitna ..

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    1. Fitting, Sups! What a change from an ASR who was not even interested in seeing his wife's face to the Arnav who wants to keep her away from all eyes!

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  16. She is going to show him and teach him what belonging to each other means.

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  17. Awwww...... That was nice
    Loved it

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  18. that was really lovely...awesome...they are getting closer day by day...very nice update..i m liking khushi is opening to arnav..instead of just saying ji...ji...she is telling him what she wants..very gud update..gud luck to u smita ji

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  19. lovely update.. ASR is becoming Arnav with all his flirting..waiting for them to meet..

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  20. Beautiful part.
    Arnav cannot wait to have khushi back in his arms and his house. He feels jealous of everyone who can see his wife all dressed up.
    Khushi is shocked to hear arnav flirt so openly with her. She has never see this possessive side of his before
    It's good that all the misunderstandings between them is cleared.
    Continue soon

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  21. Loved Arnav flirting with Khushi over the phone and so cute how he was teasing her awesome update loved t wicked cute.

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    1. Glad to see u, Dumas. The poolside kiss on Payal's mehendi is etched in my head..what a flirt!

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  22. This was so beautiful, love how they were talking to each other
    Arnav is behaving like his dil has gone "batmeez Batameez Dil" hehe
    Seems like khushis wish will be coming true of Arnav being only hers and becoming true family forever

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    1. Yes, both are going to get what they want.

      Arnav: Mere man ki ganga aur tere man ki jamuna ka,
      Bol Khushi bol sangam hoga ki nahin

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  23. Sindoor and mangalsutra... They will shout on behalf of arnav.... "Tum mere hooo... BA's mere hi mere hoooo.....!!" :)

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    1. Dekhe tujhe jab koi jalta mera dil,
      Tu hai meri bas meri meri manzil,
      Ab roke chahe sara zamana,
      Tay kar liya tujhko hai paana,
      Tune vadaa jo kiya hai woh nibhana, bairiya ve,

      Tujhpe hai sirf mera haqq.
      I love you o sayyoni, Koi shaq?

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  24. Lovely update. Khushi and Arnav are bonding nicely

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    1. Tere liye dil mera aisa lutiya ve
      Tere bina jiya mera naiyo lag da ve

      Meri gali aaja ve mahiya
      Bas ek vari Aaja ve

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  25. So super update!!
    Just read it!! loved their bonding!! Flirty arnav!! wah wah wah!!
    Cool update waiting for the next one already!

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    1. Arnav: Aashiq banaya , aashiq banaaya, aashiq banaya aapne,
      Tere bin suni suni hain baahein,
      Teri bin pyaasi pyaasi nigaahein,
      Tere bin bin asar meri aahein

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  26. ye arnav itna besharam kaise ho gaya..? Pata hi nehi chalta ki yeh wahi ASR hai...
    lekin kya karein pyaar ache achon ko badla deta hai to arnav babua kya cheese hai... :)

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    1. Arnav bitwaa singing: Aapki kashish sarfarosh hain,
      Aapka nasha yu madhosh hain,
      Kya kahe tumse janeja, gum huwa hosh hain...

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    2. Arnav to shayar bhi ban gaya yaar...
      pyaar logon se kya kya karwata hai...

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  27. Hi Smita.....u r amazing and ur arnav is absolutely amazing. I still read ur old creations.i feel good n smhw few of my stress goes dwn....plz continue.

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  28. Awwww- what a sweet update! Love their slow but steady bonding! Loved it when Arnav said abh pata chalra k mai besharam hoon, after 2 months?! :D

    In a way I think this separation was a good thing for these 2... Coz they're learning A LOT about each other - probably more than either one of them expected and it's changed them in a good way.

    STILL looking forward to that kiss though-- I know there's gonna be fireworks!!

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  29. Hey Smita, when is the next update?

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  30. Arnav is missing Khushi like anything. Nicely written.

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  31. Loving Arshi ke phone conversations..
    Arnav is getting very bold with his talks.. :p Saamne aayenge tab kya karenge.. ;))
    Khushi is lucky to get married to him... Jo bhi hota hai it happens for good.!

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  32. Arnav's POV
    Then : Marriage ! dammit!!! I just agreed for Di's sake. I want an uncomplicated wife.
    Now : What the .... Why can't she be more involved in my life. I want the complications.
    Then : I don't want to see her, talk to her or have any sort of interaction.
    Now : What is she doing in Lucknow? How long is she going to be there? I should ask Aman to get the chopper ready so that I can get her back. A wife's place is with her husband, isn't it? Should I ask Di??????
    Then : She can do what she wants as long as she leaves me alone.
    Now : She had better wear her sindoor prominently. I want everyone to know she is off limits. She should wear only her mangalsutra, after all she is so beautiful that she doesn't need any other jewellery. I will ask her what she is wearing.
    Arnav's mind : STOP! Since when are you a love sick puppy.
    Arnav : Keep quiet . It is my haq after all.
    A's mind : Stick to the plan man! You are thirtyand you wanted an uncomplicated wife remember.
    Arnav : Is there any way I can shut you up? I didn't know what I wanted. If you can give me constructive suggestions that would be good, other wise......

    No wonder poor Khushi is confused. That was a superbly written update. Arnav
    s 180 degree turn - too good.
    I have a request Smita. I came across a lovely song by a group called Creative Beggars " Pehli Pehli baar hua hai". The lyrics remind me so much of our favourite jodi. Is it possible for you to make a VM? Eagerly waiting for your next update.

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    1. My VM software is driving me crazy. Really, Kaaycee. I can't use it to even edit stuff properly.
      I love your comment. That's exactly what is going through bitwaa's conphused mind. Will post next part in 2 hours.

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    2. Lolzzzz, Kaaycee! So, when are you writing your own Arshi fiction? Going by the dialogue you have treated us to, your work promises to be one heck of a ride!! So can we expect a 'Kaaycee's crazy' blog? ;-)

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  33. Thank you! Thank you! I really appreciate the compliments from you both. Of course I'm Smita's die hard fan and I really love your lengthy comments Priya. I read KK once again after you comment re: the ideal Arnav. Definitely inspired me. I wanted to continue the dialogue but I thought the comment might become really long. If you don't have any objections I'll write it out.

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  34. Brilliant update! Finally even she is opening up to him about her thoughts on this marriage !! Like how Arnav is getting possessive of khushi! :)

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  35. Mind blowing update. Loved that both brothers decided to show up at Lucknow. I like Khushi's naughty mind:-)

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  36. I was waiting for them to come to Lucknow.. loved the update.. Khushi is equally naughty..

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  37. wow this is amazing .... i was waiting for ur update so curiously ..... ahhhh this is so good dear ... that they have came to lucknow by themselves ........ arnav is so impatient ...........

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    1. Can we blame him? Two months hui gawa and he has been running after her. Lekin woh bilkul time nahi de rahi thi..ha..ha.

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  38. Aahhh... Finally they meet.. And how..!! ;)
    Arnav as Devdas in khushi's love.. Awww...

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  39. That was awesome. Naughty Khushi

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  40. That was awesome. Naughty Khushi

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  41. Super awesome.
    If arnav has surprised khushi by coming to her house to take her back with him then khushi has surprised arnav by her boldness in showing her love for him.
    Continue soon

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  42. Awesome update!! Loved it!!'

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  43. Back after a long break..Enne orma undo?..
    Catching up with all the stories that I missed..

    Arnav needed an uncomplicated wife and life...But after meeting Khushi Gupta and falling heads over heels in love with her,he realized that he needs the real naughty,bubbly,chirpy,innocent n not-uncomplicated Khushi beside him,always and forever.
    The prince now came to take his princess..He confessed his love and they both *blush blush*..
    Khushi has become even more naughty and mischevious ;)
    Will be waiting to read the next part.

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    1. People must have wondered how will a naive girl like K manage a khadoos ASR. Now the real question is how will ASR manage a naughty K..ha..ha.. Yes, orma undu ee mukham. Maveli ithra naal evide aayirunnu?

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  44. Hahahha...it clearly showed how a week separation make them bare there feelings...its lovely to see arnav coming with akash to Lucknow and more interesting to see khushi's reactions and her demands of love from her husband.. Very cute update..distance really makes one realise there love and feelings..and I think arnav is going to see a naughty khushi now since he has removed his demands of uncomplicated wife from her..khushi is naughty..hahaha..lovely update...let's see what happens next.. Thanks for the update smita Ji and gud luck

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  45. The change in the complicated man who wanted an uncomplicated wife...

    From...
    Hello,hindustan ka Lucknow... hello,main Dilli se bol raha hoon main apni biwi Khushi se baat karna chahata hun haan haan

    Mere piya, ho mere piya he Dilli mein kiya hai wahaan se teliphoon tumhari yaad sataati hai, jiya men aag lagaati hai

    To....

    Khushi, Khushi...


    Aaja re, o dilbar jaaniya
    Aaja re, aaja re o mere dilbar aaja
    Dil ki pyaas bujha jaa re....

    Kya baat he Smita... Literally its a metamorphosis of ASR into Arnav for Khushi...
    Loved it...

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    1. So happy! Yes, ASR has become an Arnav that even Khushi can't recognise! Aur sab se ajeeb baat, Khushi didn't even try to change him!

      Awesome poetry! Mere Piya Gaye Rangoon is one of my fav songs.

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  46. Lovely part. Liked it very much. Khudhi is so naughty and I love that. Continue soon,

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  47. Smitaji... Wonderful update,
    Loved their sweet moment of togetherness,
    And the morning... Uff Buaji ....
    now me waiting for the next update....

    Uss pyar bhari raat ke naam two songs....
    Ibtada-e- ishq mein hum sari raat jaage.allaah jaane kya hoga aage.....

    Dhoondho dhoondho re baalma..dhoondho re saanjna more kaam ka baala...

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  48. Smitaji Khushi ke bahane se we all wish Arnav would drop his towel 😄
    Raat ka nasha aankh se gaya nahi ..Tera gathela badan ...
    Aage nahi aata

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    1. To fall or not to fall, that's the question...ahem...

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  49. Awesome. ASR could not take the judai from his uncomplicated wife anymore. Poor ASR. :)))

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  50. wowb superb update loved it thank you.............ameena671

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  51. Beautiful ,looking fwd to more

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  52. Amazing! i knew Arnav will be there to take his Khushi home but had no idea that he will have their first night in lucknow.. it was beautiful union of two longing hearts.. loved the update :)

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  53. Arnav's POV contd.
    A : If you can give me constructive suggestions go ahead, otherwise... Wait a minute. Since you're being such a busy body perhaps you can do something about this RABBE VEY that I keep hearing.
    A's mind : WHAT THE !!! rub away???? Rub away what??
    A: Not rub away you i***t! RABBA VEY.
    A's mind(gingerly) Errrr! What is a RABBA VEY?
    A: It's a song that only I seem to be able to hear.
    A's mind (slighlty worried and flipping frantically thro' the Swayam Rakhrakhav pustak herein referred to as SRP) Only he can hear this song? What is going on? Note to self # 1 (a) Call Aman (b) Give Akash more responsibilities so the company doesn't go belly up. (c) Make appointment with psychiatrist. Now what does SRP say. Hmmm. Keep subject calm. Lull subject into a sense of security while collecting info. Okay. Here goes. Ahemm! Ahem! Asr? ASR??
    A : What? and don't call me ASR. I'm Arnavji. My name has never sounded sweeter.
    A's mind (in a full blown panic) What the h**k? Arnavji? (gagging) Note to self #2.Call Aman asap. Probability of stay in a padded cell - imminent. Possibility of psychiatrist helping - slim. Remember- keep subject calm. Errr! AS.. sorry Arnavji, Since when did you start hearing this RABBA VEY?
    A: The first time was when we were on the run after that nasty shooting. We took shelter and I saw her for the first time. Oh man! When our eyes met I could hear this song and I thought nothing of it at that time. Then I kept hearing it in the hotel when we slept and then every time I saw her or thought about her. I thought it might have something to do with the Gupta sisters but Akash doesn't seem to hear it.What is she doing now? I can't wait to see her. Who does this Mohan think he is? Always asking if he can go to Lucknow to pick up Khushi? Is Khushi his wife or mine? Wait till I see him tomorrow. I will ...
    A's mind: Oh for the love of... FOCUS! DAMMIT!!!
    A : sheesh! what a grouch!!! Okay, sometimes the music is sad like when she thought I wanted to separate and sometimes it's really loud like when I saw her in that pink outfit on Teej!(Breathing heavily) She looked like a princess. no a queen no an angel ....
    A;s mind : This SRP doesn't say anything about breathing difficulties in conjunction with lost marbles. Now what do I do? Okay Okay She looked like a goddess. I get it. then what?
    A: Then when we were about to go down, I caught her by the arm ..
    A's mind : and ???
    A : I pulled her close
    A's mind : and ????
    A : we shared the most amazing ......
    A's mind : What ? What did you share? ASR? Sorry, ARNAVJi? ?? Arnav ??? Yo bro Raizada?? Chotey ??? Anyone ???? WHAT THE!!!!!!
    BGM : Rabba Veeeeyyyyyyy O Rabbaaaaaa Veeeeeyyyy!!

    Lovely update Smita! The yellow outfit was really stunning. Can't wait to see how ASR handles this naughty Khushi. As usual waiting for the next instalment.

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    1. Awesome, man. I am laughing here. You should definitely write stories, Kaaycee. Your sense of humour and your way with words will make them an instant hit! Come on, girl!

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    2. Hahahahaha..... Kaaycee. ROFL!!
      I have had a hectic past week. It's as if I opened my eyes to a brisk Monday morning, just blinked a couple of times and suddenly it is Thursday noon! But Arnav's POV took care of any lingering fatigue. I loved it. Absolutely Hilllariiious!!
      Give heed to Smi's words. Your words rock. Rabba Vey, Girl!!

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  54. Smita, I know that I've written a lot but I couldn't help it. Your stories fascinate me esp. the way to handle the change from ASR to Arnav and I wanted to pen down what could possibly be going on in ASR's mind. Your stories are sapnon ki duniya which we need to put up with the asli duniya. Asli duniya caught up with me when I lost my co-sister( husband's brother's wife) in the MH 370 disaster last year. I used to read and re-read all your stories till the wee hours during the interminable wait - for news that never came. I have read every single story of yours and they never failed to lift my mood even at that juncture and I'm grateful. We all cope in different ways and this was mine. So this POV of Arnav that I've written is just my way of saying thank you. God bless and please continue writing.

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    1. I am so glad my stories could lift your mood, Kaaycee. I write to kill my stress as Rash and Sups know very well. Yes, asli duniya can be something of a bitch at times. Sigh!

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  55. really u r superb writer,
    do continue,

    thangam100(if)

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  56. Mind blowing update! Arnav and alash turned up at Lucknow! Desperate:p khushi the tigress!! Loved the update:)

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  57. Gotcha! So two can play the game! Wicked....

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  58. khushi is beautiful and bold

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  59. Awesome part... arnav has no idea how naughty his khushi is...

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  60. Awesome part... arnav has no idea how naughty his khushi is...

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  61. When are you planning to update next part dear?

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  62. Wowie, the detached, emotionless workaholic has finally been domesticated or what?!? An erstwhile doubter in the institution of marriage, is he really chatting about mundane things like mehendi and shaadi ki rasams!!

    “Khushi, kya hua?” Payal asked. “Your face is pink. Did you go out in the sun?”
    No amount of sun block is gonna help with the pink on Khushi's cheeks!! With ASR not getting enough of his wife, that hue is here to stay. ;-)

    Akash having no qualms about displaying PDA right on Payal's doorstep; Arnav taking the stairs directly to his wife's room and then the dreamy confession and the toe-curling kiss and the amorous activities followed by tender love-making. haiyee.... Raizada men are MEN!! High five, Guys!!

    And Smi, why does Khushi's wardrobe always have to be drop dead gorgeous? It makes me wanna go on a spree, invading the malls in my neighbourhood. I have already exceeded the quota of apparel shopping for 2015. I invest in one more outfit and my own Arnavji is going to have a temper-tantrum!! Waise, already got one in green but I could do with another paithani in pink and peacock design. :P I am incorrigible and I know it!!!

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    1. Priya.... The pink Paithani looks good in pics... but in reality Green is gorgeous. Black is a stunner.. :)

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    2. Green is the best. And the next in line would be black, Rash. I couldn't make Khushi wear black to the wedding. nahi to, she would have been draped in this.
      http://www.navlaeepaithani.com/ProductImages/pbb.jpg

      or

      http://img7.utsavfashion.com/sha/sha179/sha179-enlarge.jpg

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    4. Words from experience. Do you own a stunning black paithani yourself? :) Black sounds gorgeous and Swarowski crystals on it would make it irresistible.
      You inspire me, Rulama, to completely brush off my annual apparel budget and just go for it. :P

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    5. Priya.... I have the green traditional one... By the time I realized about black.... two~three years later I didn't want to buy one more... So I selected it for my friend and it was a hit when worn...

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  63. Didn't get a chance to read it till now because I was traveling back to my maika, but... OH MY GOODNESS!!! I LOVED chapter 16!! Arnav teasing his family was cute. But obviously the best was Arnav and Khushi's reunion!! :D hayyyyeeee, mai kya bolu... That was so romantic, sweet, hot ;-) - it was everything thing! One of my fave updates by far!! Liked it so much that I've lost track of how many times I've read it. But the ending of Arnav in only a towel has Khushi excited it seems and she's not the only one. Lol! I know I'm chichori but I can't help it.

    Eagerly looking forward to the next update today!

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    1. Soon....Towel girga ya nahi? That's the question!

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    2. Million dollar question, Smi!! Waise I was thinking what if our respective Arnavjis decide to take a tour of the comment section. Reading our 'chichore' (courtesy of Juhi!) thoughts might drive them to excessive nervousness or worse....paranoia!!

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    3. Hehehe! Our respective Arnavji's would likely run screaming in the opposite direction! :-)

      Waise, I think that Arnav and Khushi have passed the point of being shy in front of each other! :-)

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    4. All our Arnavjis are suffering from inferiority complex as it is for we keep on chanting Arnavji, Arnavji....If they read the comment section, they will freak out!

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  64. Let the towel fall,pleaseeeeee:-)

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  65. When are you updating new Arshi stories?

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  66. Where are you Smita. I loved all your stories in this blog. I want to read your stories in future. Please comeback in this blog. Please. Please.

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