Sunday, 11 January 2015

187. OS 9: The Diabetic and the Halwai (Parts 6-7)



Darlings,

I finally published my romantic novel, A HOME FOR MEENAKSHI on a self-publishing site. It is an e-book. You can purchase it and read it at your leisure. Here's the link. Enjoy!






Part 6




Arnav came down for dinner, dressed in a white shirt and a pair of dark slacks. All were in the dining room and the kitchen, chatting and laughing.

Khushi was conspicuous by her absence. 

Anjali was regaling both families with her experiences at the temple and Mami was showing them the trinkets she had bought from shops and wayside vendors.

"Amma, Manno has not left any stock in any shop in Lucknow," Mamaji teased his wife.

"Aap to shutappiya hi karlo ji," Mami retorted.

When the laughter died down, Arnav asked, “Buaji, where is Khushi?”

The jhumka in Mami’s hand fell to the ground. Mama stared at Arnav.

Nani who had been sipping a glass of water, choked.

Anjali stared at her Chotey with an open mouth. Had low sugar brought about a personality change in Arnav?

Akash looked at his brother. Why was bhai asking for Khushiji? Did he want one more pizza?

Buaji looked at poor sick bitwaa for a moment in silence. Why was he asking for Khussi? “Woh...bitwaa, she went to her shop,” Buaji explained. “There is a lot of last-minute cleaning and packing every night, Nandkisore.”

Payal placed a huge dish with potato curry on the table. Steam rose from it, filling the room with the fragrance of spices.

“Titliyya will come now,” Buaji chuckled. “She will fly here for her Jiji’s aloo sabji.”

As if she had been called, Khushi walked in. “Jiji, you made aloo...” Her exclamation remained incomplete as she spied the devil in white looking at her and smirking.
He was still alive? And smirking? Khushi grit her teeth. She should have added some dishwashing liquid too to his tea!



All smiled at Khushi’s entrance. The Raizadas looked at Arnav and Khushi with great interest.

“The boys have gone to their shed to rest, Khussi?” Amma asked.

“Yes,” she replied, glaring at Arnav. Had he drunk the tea? No, he couldn’t have. He wouldn’t be alive now if he had. So he must have thrown it out. But how could she be sure? She couldn’t very well ask him!

Arnav lifted a brow to irritate her further.





All sat down for their meal.

Arnav continued to stare at Khushi, challenging her to ask him about the tea. Khushi bit on her tongue to stop herself.



“Khushi, would you like a cup of tea?” Arnav asked, a smile twisting his lips.

All stared at Arnav with wide eyes.

“Tea? Now?” Amma asked in wonder.

“She drinks tea only in the morning and evening, babua,” Buaji informed him.

Khushi grit her teeth.




Anjali looked at Nani and Mami. All three studied Arnav’s marked attentions to Khushi.

“Err...Madhumatiji,” Nani began. “Are you looking for boys for Payal and Khussi?”

Madhumati, Garima and Sasi sighed.

“What is the use of looking for boys, Nandkisore?” Buaji asked. “Payaliyya won’t leave Khussi.”

“And Khussi won’t leave Satwik Mishtaan Bhandar,” Amma concluded.

“I am thinking of packing Satwik Mishtaan Bhandar in a box and giving it to the girls as dowry,” Sasi teased his daughters. “Then they may agree to marry.”

Payal blushed at her father’s teasing.

Khushi grimaced at the jibe.

“Bhy don’t you marry brothers, Hello Hi Bye Bye?” Mami suggested, her round eyes resting on an intent Arnav and an oblivious Akash who was relishing the paneer pieces in a sabzi.

“And you can start a branch of your shop in Delhi...or any other city you move to after marriage,” Anjali suggested.

All looked at the two girls.

Payal flushed and looked at the poori on her plate.

Khushi was too busy battling Arnav with her eyes to worry about her future.

“Only God knows what is in store for them,” Sasi said.

“Let’s see, Sasiji, if we can find boys for them,” Nani said, looking hopefully at Arnav and Akash.

Khushi thought furiously. How could she take revenge for the veg pijja? This Delhiwalla Diabetic had to be taught a lesson!

Talk of marriage went right over her head.




Part 7





It was midnight.

Arnav sat reading in his comfortable room, the table lamp giving him ample light. He looked at the printed page and saw Khushi’s furious face on it.

He smiled softly.

He heard a footfall outside his door. He quickly extinguished the light, dumped the book and lay back on the recliner, his eyes mere slits.

The door opened slightly. Through it slipped a dark, cloaked figure.

His lips twitched in amusement. Khushi was up to something, he thought.

As he watched, the figure came closer to him. It was Khushi with a dark blanket over her head. Only her face was visible. One hand held a torch.

He tried to hide his smile.

Khushi looked at her sleeping adversary with a strong sense of ill-use. “Hey Devi Maiyya! He is in deep sleep at night too? Who is he, Kumbhkarna’s brother?”

Arnav had to struggle not to laugh.

“Now how can I scare him without waking him up? And how can I wake him up without bursting a bomb under his chair?” Khushi asked herself. “Look at him sleeping. Did he come all the way to Lucknow from Delhi to sleep?”

She bent, placed her hand on his shoulder and shook him lightly.

He remained still.

“Khushi Kumari Gupta, you can’t give up at this last minute. Uthao isse,” she told herself. She bent, caught hold of his shoulder and shook him with all her might.

The comatose-appearing Raizada moved with the speed of a striking serpent. Her torch fell to the floor with a clatter; her blanket dropped to the floor.



She lay on his recliner under him, staring at his eyes that were dancing with unholy glee.

She parted her lips to protest but her words remained unsaid as he moved closer still, crowding her, his arms surrounding her, his hard warmth pressing down on her.


“Hey Devi Maiyya!” Khushi whispered.




Part 8



18 comments:

  1. Congratulations on your Book.

    It was such an amazing story line!!. Could not put it down. It was very touching and at times your words were so heartfelt, unknown tears were flowing & unstoppable.

    A beautifully rendered story. Hope like your story on the blog you keep your publications coming.

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    1. Thank you, my dear. I can't tell you how much your comment means to me. Can you please write a review on the page on which you purchased the book and rate the novel? It will help other readers decide whether they want to pick this novel or not.

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    2. Will Definitely post a review & rate it at the said page.

      IF: Inamajar

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  2. Loved parts 5 and 6. Looking forward to next part.

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  3. ASR inquiring about the whereabouts of a girl has the entire Raizada clan in a state of shock.. LOL.
    Waise Smi, isn't the flirtatious Mr Raizada being a tad too brave and audacious? I mean trying to instigate her by asking her about tea, pinning her against his recliner... like seriously??? He might be the incorrigible serpent but isn't he underestimating the dauntless lioness?

    The Raizada ladies.... the eternal match-makers. And Khushi is.... well Khushi. Completely oblivious and indifferent to the hints thrown by the Raizada ladies about an alliance between her and Arnav bitwa. Totally focussed on planning the next encounter with the diabetic Kumbhakarna ....he...he..he...

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    1. Can't blame the guy for trying. Khushi in his bedroom at midnight! Come on, Sups! he aint no saint! LOL! And he has only one more day left.

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  4. Hi Smita

    First congrats on your novel...got it and read it in one go...it was Smitastic and Smitabulous...:) The only problem was that I am so used to readying about Arnav and Khushi from you that Adi and Meenu seem a little alien....:)....

    May you be very successful as a writer and become so famous and get to direct all your Arnav-Khushi stories with Barun and Sanaya as films and we get to see them in the theater....:)

    Keep on !
    (Meeyaa of IF)

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    1. Meeya, how did you find out? I was wondering how to get in touch with you! So so glad the novel was paisa wasool for you. I wrote it last March-April and published it only because Supriya, my friend wanted to see it published.

      Can you post a review and rate the novel on the page you bought it from? The link is on the top of this page.

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    2. Of course I wanted to see it published, my friend. After all the efforts it took to do the research, give the story a form, give life to the characters, your work deserved to see the light of day. How could you have denied your readers an access to one of your good works? And just like Meeyaa said, the story has 'Smita' written all over it. :)

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    3. I am blessed to have friends like you!

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  5. Awesome updates !!! feisty khushi....i like :-D

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  6. wow this girl
    she is good right
    what does she keep coming up with
    no wonder arnav is enjoying this
    he hasnt had the chance to do so
    and am sure other girls dont let him enjoy like she is
    she is one of a kind
    she didnt hear about marriage talk
    shame man
    ahhh but the raizadas could sense something
    and they are right and also wrong
    man she really wants to get back at him
    not working out though
    but she is resourceful for sure
    and dont you just love her for that
    i dont think DM can help dear
    she really loves her shop doesnt she
    hmmm what now

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  7. So nani, mami and di have an idea of their bitwas interest.
    Wonder if Arnav heard the talk on marriage or was he to busy getting lost in Khushi's eye. Ops sorry, getting lost in their partners eye is Akash and Payal's job.

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  8. Great chapter, the wedding convo was funny!

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  9. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚really khushi dishwashing liquid

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