Thursday, 29 January 2015

192. OS 9: The Diabetic and the Halwai (Epilogue)




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Epilogue


Khushi stretched in bed, her fist hitting a sleeping Arnav’s chin.

“Khushi, so jao,” he murmured in his sleep, knowing his attacker.

“Khushi, so jao,” Khushi mimicked her husband of two months. “How easy it is to say, Khushi, so jao in the morning after keeping this Khushi awake all night,” she whined.

Arnav smiled, his eyes still shut. He grabbed her warm body wrapped in their blanket and pulled her into his arms.






Chodiye hamein,” she squirmed.

“No, never in this lifetime,” he whispered in the crook of her neck.

“Don’t touch me, Arnavji. You know how I get when you touch me. I throw hosh and sud-bud to the wind...”






“Clothes too,” he murmured helpfully.

“... and before I know it half the day is gone,” she complained, trying to push him away. "It is all your fault."

He chuckled, his chest rising and falling against hers, his tummy tickling hers.

“It is Sunday,” he managed to say between guffaws. "Let's sleep in."

“Acha? Today is Sunday? Every day is Sunday for you,” she tried to tickle him to get him off her. “Today is Saturday, Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada. Are you going to the office or working from home today?” she asked.

“Home,” he murmured against her neck. “I need to go to office for a couple of hours at noon. That’s all.”

“You will be at home? Then I will make lunch special today,” she smiled, her mind busy with the menu.

“Lunch is at noon. Let’s make the morning special,” he murmured, his eye twinkling and his fingers moving up the curve of her waist.

“Arnavji,” Khushi tried to stop him by clamping her hands over his. “I have to go to my shop.”

“Your balushahi is waiting for you?” he teased, his eyes gazing directly into hers.

“Yes,” she laughed.

“I will take you,” he offered.

“No, you stay at home and rest. You work too hard, Arnavji. I will go with Mohanji,” she replied.

“No, I will take you,” he insisted. “I am your husband, not Mohan.”

Khushi chuckled. She threw her arms around him. “You are so funny, my sweet bhalu,” she complimented him, dropping a warm, loud kiss on his cheek.

“I am your teddy bear, right?” he asked, showering her with kisses.

“Yes, yes,” she laughed.

He rewarded her with hot kisses and soon her laughter turned into moans and pleas.



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Arnav started the car and drove towards her shop in a trendy mall in the centre of the city.

“How will I look Jiji in the face again?” Khushi fretted.

“Why? What is wrong with Payal’s face? Akash didn’t tell me that anything was wrong when he married her,” Arnav teased her.

Khushi snorted. “Nothing is wrong with Jiji’s face. The problem is with your neeyat, Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada. I was late for breakfast today too. Jiji and Di had already helped Hari Prakashji to make all the dishes when I finally strolled downstairs,” she complained.

He chuckled.

“The problem is not with my neeyat, Mrs. Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada. It is with your beauty,” he said.

“Hein? The fault is mine?” she asked.

“Yes, bilkul yours. When you look at me with those big eyes,” Arnav confessed.

“What happens?” Khushi asked.

Kuch kuch hota he,” he smiled.

Khushi blushed.

“And when you wear a saree and I see your kamar...” he continued.

She blushed. “Enough,” she pleaded.

“And your choli has two doris that tempt me to...” he continued, his eyes lingering on her rosy cheeks.

“Arnavji,” she protested.

“And your plump lips beckon me to bite into them...” he stoked the fire.

Bas bhi keejiye,” Khushi begged. “Please.”

“OK,” he agreed. His naughty eyes looked at her red face. “Khushi, you are beautiful. Your face is,” he paused.

“”My face is?” Khushi asked curiously.

“Your face is,” he stopped again.

“My face is?” she asked eagerly.

“Red like a beetroot,” he teased.

“Awwww,” Khushi exclaimed. “Arnavji, see if I don’t take revenge for this! Grrrr,” she threatened, her clenched fists in the air.

“What is wrong, Khushi?” Arnav was on a roll. “I compared your face to a beetroot, that’s all. After all, we are shakhahari people, aren’t we?” he laughed.

Khushi pretended to punch him in the stomach.





“What is for lunch?” he asked, driving into the parking lot of her shop.

 “Veg pijja and hot pepper tea,” she teased him.

“Hey Devi Maiyya!” Arnav Singh Raizada exclaimed.

Khushi winked at him and left the car.  

As she walked to her shop with Arnav following her, she sang,



Smile malai he teri, style he gajak
Narmi bhi garmi bhi, tu badi gazab
Nain namakpaare, hont kalakandi
Chakh loon thoda sa, de ja razaamandi

Marzi teri to arzi meri, bana le na mujhe lover...

He chuckled.













The End

Next story on Monday.

70 comments:

  1. Smita,
    Loved this Teddy Bear Singh Raizada and his disarming Halwaii Khushi...
    One of the best couples of your stories...

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  3. Smita loved it. Kya song hai anth mein!!!! Wahwah!!! Beautiful story.

    Thoroughly enjoyed reading home for meenakshi, waiting for next book...:)

    Viji

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    1. Next one is a short story. Writing the last part.

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  4. loved the story . was very good. waiting for the next story

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    1. If all teddy bears were like ASR...ha.ha..

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  6. wow superb updates loved them and thank you for the link can't wait to read the next story thank you again for pm.

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  7. Wah wah loved this jugalbandi

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  8. Where does one find such teddy bear
    Who is sweeter than balushaai
    Cuddlier than a teddy bear
    And naughty like a little child
    Though nothing little about him
    They will be in their honeymoon period forever
    Aww he can't seem to let go of her
    Neither does she
    Kya baat hai
    They are so perfect for one another
    Yin to yang
    Every day in sunday huh
    Awww bless
    He hates to be away from her
    And so does she
    Seems he did sacrifice aki in the end
    What beautiful ending just bliss

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  9. Absolutely amazing story
    Loved it

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  10. Lovely...waiting for the next.

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  11. Lovely epilogue. Loved the picture at the End.
    Can't wait for Monday. Any chance of getting a teaser.

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  12. Aww such a cute Epilogue Loved it

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  13. Wow over so soon. I wanted more of this banter between Arnav and Khushi. Lovely epilogue.
    Waiting for the next story. You are an awesome writer.
    Hydsri

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  14. I loved the nok jokes between them ,looking fwd to your nxt one

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  15. I loved the nok jokes between them nice story

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  16. Finally the halwai and diabetic got married..............aakash and payal too were married............beautiful ending...............

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  17. Very lovely and cute ending. I'm eagerly awaiting the next story.

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  18. Such a cute story!!!

    ..Anita..

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  19. Loved this teddy bear Singh Raizada. He is the true lover of his beatroot red beauty. Finally her complained to DM actually came true.

    And I loved the photo editing of arshi on rekha and amitabh.

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  20. I would like a teddy bear Arnav too - are you taking orders yet? He was very special this Arnav and truly unique. Love it.

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  21. awesum ending....loved it....loved the epi tooo....loved hr lunch menu fr him....loved hr song....loved it a lot

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  22. Fantastic ending . Loving it

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  23. Thanks. That was a very sweet story. I look forward to your next story. You are very talented, all your stories have been excellent.

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  24. Awesome, Teddy Raizada is besharam like always.

    Pinky.

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  25. The story of Teddy Bear Singh Raizada and Halwai Khushi ended.. so soon.. but loved the last two chapters.. awesome.. main tere pyaar mein kya kya na bana dilbar kabhi halwai to kabhi marriage broker.. just to hear yes from khushi he seduced her with his bare chest, his kisses, her balusahi, her shop and when she got ready but again changed the plan for her jiji he is ready to take entire gupta family with him to delhi and get a rishta for payal too.. wonderful story.. loved it a lot..

    thanks for mail :)

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  26. Awesome!! Loved it. Can't wait to find out what your khatarnaak dimaag is now cooking up!!

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  27. Arnav Singh Raizada and eddy bear.. what a comparison.. LOL.. lovely ending..

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  28. Loved it. You have an amazing writing talent - that's puts a smile or two on your reader's face. Thanks for writing such lovely stories.

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  29. Weird halwaii n weird song...
    Awwww.....
    Khushi,
    U r irresistible...
    U r addiction...


    Arnav Singh Raizada...
    No no..
    Teddy Bear Raizada learnt to say..
    Hey Devi maiya..
    :) :D

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  30. Aww that was such update
    Arnav is romantic all the time.
    Khushi turned the bitter Arnav into a sweet one.

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  31. Superb story
    Waiting for another dhamakedar story

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  32. I am glad you gave an epilogue to the story. The tale of this diabetic Teddy Bear and his extra sweet Angoor Rabadi deserved a hawt and naughty conclusion. ;-)
    The Teddy Bear indeed doesn't let her sleep through the night!!


    I loved this couple, Smi. She added flavours to his insipid existence and he stoked the fire of passion in her. ASR saying 'kuch kuch hota hai' in total filmy style totally cracked me up!!

    Waiting for the next one, my friend.

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  33. Teddy Bear wala ASR...was adorable. ...

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  34. Aww such a beautiful ending of such a beautiful story

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  35. Love your story..waiting for next one:)

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  36. Absolutely loved the story. Looking forward to next story.

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  37. Bhaalu? Bhaalu singh Raizada.. hey bhagwan!! Lovely story smita ji.. will wait till monday

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  38. I really need to visit your world more often di, and I will try to catch up on the other trysts soon. But first what a beautiful tale of the besharam diabetic and the crazy halwai. Your story has had me giggling helplessly like a schoolgirl and blushing wildly at various intervals Di

    Your writing was the exact antidote I needed tonight Di, thank you :) xx

    P.S congrats on your first ever book! Here's hoping it is the first of many,many more

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  39. What a wonderful epilogue. Icing on an already delicious cake ( or should I compare it to balushahi?) I read the last 3 updates in one go so that I wouldn't have to wait. This epilogue was just what I needed right now. Preparing students for their grade 10 exam is certainly no picnic and am really up to my ears in essays and what not. Diabetic Raizada and his jelabi is just what I needed to perk my spirits up. May I ask you to include an epilogue for all your stories - 'cos there is a feel good aspect to it that can't be compared. Felt all warm and fuzzy. I have taken a day off to rest and I think I will read your story again. Looking forward to your new OS. Can you give us a hint?

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  40. Beautiful waiting for the next story

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  41. Beautiful waiting for the next story

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  42. Too much sweetness Smita, I must be having diabetes by now. Eagerly waiting for the next jewel. I already its going to be awesome. *Munches on Veg Pijja happily*

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  43. Beautiful ending Smita. Liked it very much. Will wait for the new story on Monday. The picture of ArShi in the end is superb.

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  44. In last part I loved Arnav's thought on Akash to make as bali ka bakra.....Beautiful Epilogue.

    Haye your Arnav and Khushi always transports me to Fairy tale Prince and Princess.

    Loved this Short a lot.

    Waiting for tomorrow to come and more of your stories.


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  45. Beautiful Epilogue... Arnav is so naughty... loved the chemistry between Arnav and Khushi... Can't wait for your next story :)

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  46. A very cute and lovely ending

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  47. Just caught up with the remaining chapters! :))

    Arnav was ready to 'sacrifice' Akash just to get married to Khushi! Lol! But he didn't know that Akash had already chosen Payal, much before ;)

    Khushi is so brazen! She announced infront of her family and the Raizadas that she's getting married to Arnavji! I was half-afraid that she would even reveal their midnight escapade ! :P

    Beautiful epilogue! And an even more beautiful and sweet story, sweeter than balushahi ;) loved reading it!
    Thank you for this OS! :D
    Now *running* off to read your next! :) x

    (DivyaS. - IF)

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  48. I wanted more of this story.Your all stories are excellent.The great ASR competing with Balushahi for Khushi....Lol....Only you can imagine like this.Very beautiful story...
    Loved it. Arnav wants now only to stay at home.Naughty and cuddling Teddy Bear Raizada is so cute.

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  49. This was such a amazing read....was laughing throughout...your comic timing and writing is simply fabulous! Hats off ..and kudos to you:)))

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  50. Awww!!! That was such a cute and light hearted story, thanks for writing it!!!

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  51. This is such an amazing, cute and hilarious story, I absolutely loved reading it !! You are simply marvelous, so versatile that I am just left saying WOW !! No matter what I read of your writing, I can never get enough of your work !! Brilliant writing !! :)

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    1. Thanx a million, Shipper. I love the couple. Has it really been years since the serial ended? I am still stuck where I was then.

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  52. Lol ..when arnav said hey devi maiya.....love my balushahi epilogue...gonna miss this story

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  53. Wah wah wah!...totally clean bowled!!!

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  54. Lovely. Thank you for the story.

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