Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you
Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi
"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
A blog for my VMs:
http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/
Part 15
Arnav
stared at her, speechless, his mind whirling.
Khushi turned
to place the bouquet on the table by her chair. She then looked at Arnav
trustingly for the answer to her question.
He
swallowed hard.
“Err...Khushi,”
he stammered.
“Ji?” she
asked.
“Khushi,
woh...” he paused.
“Don’t you
know what live-in is, Arnavji?” she asked kindly. “It is alright if you don’t.
I will ask someone else,” she smiled at him.
His eyes
widened in horror. A picture of Khushi asking her Buaji or his Nani flashed
through his mind.
“No,” he
exclaimed. “I know,” he claimed.
“Acha?” she
smiled, unaware of his uneasiness. “Then what is this live-in?”
“It is—it
is like marriage,” he sweated.
“Acha?” she
frowned. “Then why is it called live-in and not marriage?”
“I—I mean
it is like marriage, but not marriage,” he drew in a deep breath, praying for
ideas and the vocabulary to ease her into the workings of the modern world.
Khushi
frowned. She parted her lips to ask more, but Arnav rushed in.
“Everything
is like shaadi...the boy, the girl....in a house...but without a shaadi,” he
explained.
“Oh,”
Khushi said slowly. “So they have shagun, sagai, sangeet, mehendi and haldi,
but don’t have shaadi?” she asked. “Such a couple is called a live-in? And
after shaadi they are husband and wife?”
He stared
at her slack-jawed.
“But
Arnavji, how can that be? The hero only lets that girl adjust his tie. They
didn’t have shagun like we did. Nor did they have any of the other rasms. Then
how can he call it a live-in?” Khushi asked, worried.
Arnav looked
heavenwards for inspiration and help, desperate.
“Khushi,”
he gasped.
“Arnavji?”
she asked.
“Khushi, it
doesn’t work that way,” he tried.
She
frowned. “Then how does it work?” she asked.
“I mean,”
he said, his heart sinking at the thought of shattering her illusions, “I mean,
the boy and girl live together like husband and wife,” he said.
“Tho?”
Khushi asked, confused. “All married couples live together as husband and wife.
We too will be living in your house once we get married. Isme itni badi baat
kya he?”
“Yes,” he
swallowed. “But they live together without marriage.”
Khushi
stared at him open-mouthed.
Arnav
braced himself for tears, shock and the trauma of her awakening to the ways of
the world.
Khushi
surprised him.
“They live
together in one house?” she asked.
He nodded
warily.
“Like
husband and wife?” she confirmed.
“Yes,” he
admitted.
“But
without getting married?” she asked.
“Yes,” he
sighed.
“How
stupid,” Khushi scoffed.
He looked
at her.
“If the
hero and that girl want to live like husband and wife, why can’t they just get
married?” Khushi asked. “Why pretend as though they are husband and wife when
they are not?”
Arnav
floundered.
“Either
this world is ajeeb or I am ajeeb, Arnavji,” Khushi sighed. “Buaji will tell
you that without doubt it is me who is ajeeb. I really can’t understand why two
people would want to stay in a house and fight like a cat and a dog if they
don’t really want to get married to each other.”
Arnav felt
a smile relax his lips.
Khushi’s
brain jumped to the next problem with all the agility of a monkey on steroids.
“Arnavji,
the girl whom the hero invited into his house is not the heroine of the serial.
The heroine is the pretty girl we saw the other day,” she reminded him.
“So?” Arnav
asked, glad that the discussion had moved to the serial.
“In a
serial, the heroine has to get the hero at the end. That is fixed,
non-negotiable. The live-in boy will have to marry the heroine. Otherwise we
will throw rotten eggs at the TV screen. But what will happen to the poor girl
who packed her bags and came to live in with the hero?” Khushi fretted.
Arnav
looked around for a solution to this three-ring circus that was the hero’s
life. Finally he said, “I don’t know, Khushi.”
“Poor girl.
She will have to carry everything back to her house and unpack them,” Khushi
lamented.
Arnav
smiled slightly.
Khushi
looked at Arnav with perturbed eyes.
He looked
at her, on guard, wondering what was going on in her head.
“Arnavji, the
life shown in my serial is real. So are there really people who live in a house
like couples without shaadi?” she asked, her eyes watchful.
He nodded.
Khushi
hesitated.
Knowing
Khushi, he expected the worst. And got it.
“Arnavji,
have you ever lived-in with a girl?” she asked directly.
Waiting for Arnav's answer
ReplyDeleteWaiting for Arnav's answer
ReplyDeleteOh oh. I am waiting too hahahaha. Superb update.
ReplyDeletekhushi is innocent but not stupid...phas gaya asr in his own web
ReplyDeleteAwesome update!!! Last question lol, waiting to see how Mr.Raizada will tackle this question.
ReplyDeleteOoh this should be good!!!
ReplyDeletei cant wait to see the answer of arnav....i love it....it was great
ReplyDeleteWaiting for the million dollar answer!
ReplyDeleteAwesome update! amazing how Khushi gets Arnav in hot waters. can't wait to read Arnav's reply.
ReplyDeleteWat will arnav answer?? Waiting eagerly
ReplyDeletewow superb update loved it thank you..............ameena671
ReplyDeleteloved it
ReplyDeleteNice update
ReplyDeleteI love this khushie she goes straight to the point ,ASR Harvard brain getting its workout. Let's see how he untangles himself ,from this calamity .
ReplyDeleteArnav from IPK should be paani paani..
ReplyDeleteBut our Arnav here is a gem..I m sure..
Khushi may be naive but she has the strong sense of right n wrong..
I wonder what would be his reply..
Smita..
U pinpointed two issues which always disturbed me..
Y does the hero always get the heroine though he already has a fair share of past n existing relationships ....of course without any strings attached :(
N what about the other girl who is destined to quit as if it was her fault..
N why does it not affect the heroine that she is not his first..
ReplyDeleteKhushi so inncocent and cute here.Here our Arnav is gem.He doesnt have any live in relationship.Isn't?
ReplyDeleteArnav is going to have tough time ahead .He has to answer all ''big questions'' of Khushi in her language.He cant now allow her to ask any one else .Lol Waiting for next update.
he explains a no-ball, she asks a googly.. loved it..
ReplyDeleteOh my... What is Arnav's answer? Smita, update soon.. Can not wait longer
ReplyDeleteKhushi is so innocent... Arnav has to be so careful in explaining her this things... loved the update...
ReplyDeleteLord have mercy on him
ReplyDeleteShe asks most difficult questions with such ease
Putting him at unease
Shame man
She bought that explanation
But this what will she say
Oh boy
Did he have a live in
And why did he have it
What happened to the girl in live in
This could get messy
Not for her
She will ask questions
And make him answer
He gotta answer
Hmm so explained live in
But will he be as to explain why he did what he did if he did same
This just got more interesting
Enquiry commission of khushi
Very danverous ain't it
Amazing chapter
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Lets see what Arnav's answer is to this question. Poor guy. I can't wait for them to be married.
ReplyDeleteKhushi is really ajeeb..............innocently she asked important question
ReplyDeletelol
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