Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you
Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi
"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
A blog for my VMs:
http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/
Part 9
“Khushi has
agreed to marry me,” Arnav said softly, his eyes on his mug of black tea.
Mami looked
up from her plate at the breakfast, her eyes wide. “Bhen did this chamatkar
happens?” she asked, shocked.
“Last
night,” Arnav admitted, smiling slightly.
Nani threw
her arms open and hugged him fiercely.
“Me too,
Saasumma,” Mami got up and hugged Arnav till his ribs were in danger of
cracking.
Anjali
hugged him and wept all over him.
HP came to
place a tub of butter on the table.
“HP, hamre
Arnav bitwaa is going to climb the horsewaa,” Mami informed him, thrilled to
bits.
HP stared at
Mami and then at Arnav.
“Chotey is
getting married, Hari Prakashji,” Anjali explained.
Joy lit
HP’s face. “Badhai ho, Arnav bhaiyya,” he wished.
“Thank
you,” Arnav said, flushing slightly.
“Do you
know who the girlwaa ijj?” Mami asked.
“Kaun,
Mamiji?” HP asked.
“The girl
who went to Arnav bitwaa’s room on the night of the pooja and phell in his
pool,” Mami explained.
HP’s eyes
widened.
“She is
Laxmi’s phraand too,” Mami explained.
HP shook
his head and left for the kitchen smiling. Arnav bhaiyya was going to have an
exciting life!
“Manohar
and Akash will here tomorrow,” Nani smiled.
“We can ask Madhumatiji to fix a
date for the wedding.”
“Arnav
bitwaa, diwali ijj in three days. Do you want to marry before it or aphter?”
Mami teased.
Arnav
looked down at his plate. He was ready to marry immediately, but Khushi needed
time to get used to him and the idea of marriage. “After,” he said.
Nani, Mami
and Anjali smiled.
“Shall we
invite Buaji and Khushiji here for Diwali, Nani?” Anjali asked with a naughty
smile at Arnav.
He looked
up with hope.
“Yes,
Anjali bitiyya. This time Chotey will attend the party without invitation,”
Nani laughed.
“Inbiting
ijj alright, lekin keep all lamps, phires, pools away from our Khussi,” Mami
advised them.
Arnav
smiled.
Mami looked
at him with a smirk on her painted lips. “Arnav bitwaa, keep her tied to you.
Then she won’t gets into trouble, Hello Hi Bye Bye!” she teased him.
Arnav
flushed. The others chuckled.
Arnav,
Akash, Mamaji, Mami, Anjali and Nani descended on the Guptas the next day.
Buaji
beamed at them. “Please come in, Nandkisore,” she welcomed them.
“Madhumatiji,
this is Manohar, my son. This is Akash, my grandson,” Nani introduced them.
“They were away on business when we had the pooja at home.”
“My one and
only hujjband and bitwaa,” Mami explained.
“Namaste,”
Buaji greeted Mamaji. “Jeeyath raho, babua,” she said to Akash who touched her
feet.
Arnav
hugged Buaji.
Akash’s
eyes widened to rival saucers.
Buaji
cupped his face and murmured, “Such a good babua Sanka Devi has got.”
The
Raizadas smiled.
“Where is
Khushi, Buaji?” Arnav asked.
“She has
gone to the temple, bitwaa. She will be back in ten minutes, Nandkisore,” she
replied, pinching his chin.
All sat
down.
“Madhumatiji,
shall we fix the date for Chotey’s and Khussi bitiya’s wedding?” Nani asked.
“Yes, yes,”
Buaji agreed. “When do you want to have it, Nandkisore?” she asked.
“We have
bought gifts for Khushiji, Buaji,” Anjali explained. “If you don’t mind, we can
have shagun now.”
“We need
only family for the function,” Nani explained.
“Yes, let
us book the girlwaa,” Mami added her mite.
Buaji
nodded uncertainly. “If that’s what you want, Nandkisore,” she said. “Khussi
will be back in a few minutes.”
“And we
want you to join us on Diwali night, Madhumatiji,” Nani invited her.
“We have a
small party that night every year. Fireworks, mithai, friends—it will be fun,
Buaji,” Anjali added.
“Fireworks?”
Buaji looked downright scared.
“I will
take care of Khushi, Buaji,” Arnav soothed the middle-aged lady softly.
Buaji
leaned towards him. “Last Diwali, Titliya lit a rocket,” she whispered.
“Whom did
it hit?” Arnav asked, now wise to khushi's ways.
“Medha’s
grandmother was transferring pickle from big jars to small bottles. The rocket
flew in through the window, Nandkisore, and fell into one of the jars,” Buaji
recounted.
Arnav tried
to hide his smile.
“When that
old lady peeked into the jar to see what had fallen in it, the rocket burst,”
Buaji sighed. “The walls of the room and her face were covered with red pickle, Hai Re Nandkisore! It took
weeks for her to see again and months before anyone could walk into that house
without feeling they had jumped into a pickle jar,” Buaji supported her head
with her hand.
Arnav
struggled to control his hilarity.
Mama and
Akash looked at Buaji and Arnav with incredulous eyes.
Mami
whispered in Nani’s ear, “Saasumma, no picklewaa in our house after hamre Arnav
bitwaa’s marrijj.”
Nani
nodded.
“We will
take care, Buaji,” Anjali tried to allay the lady’s doubts.
“And our
friends will get a chance to meet you and Khussi bitiya,” Nani said smiling.
“Aur nahi
to kaa. Zara duniya bhi dekhe what a beautiful girl hamre Arnav bitwaa has got,”
Mami added.
“Buaji,
guess whom I met today,” came the call even before Khushi entered the house.
All looked
towards the door.
A whirlwind
in pink entered the hall and came to a shocked standstill.
“Arnavji,”
Khushi squealed.
He smiled
at her, his eyes molten chocolate.
Mami nudged
Nani and looked meaningfully at Anjali.
The men stared at Arnav. Was this his
bhai? Akash wondered. Or had some alien taken over his body?
Khushi
quickly greeted the Raizada ladies and ran to sit by Arnav.
“This is my
uncle and this is my cousin, Akash,” he introduced the men.
She folded
her hands in greeting.
“We were
thinking of having the shagun today, Khussi bitiya,” Nani said with a smile. “Do
you mind?”
“No,”
Khushi replied. “If it is alright with Buaji.”
Before
anyone could think better of it, Mami quickly plucked a gift-wrapped packet
from the table, marched up to Khushi and placed it on her lap.
“Shukriya,
Mamiji,” Khushi said softly.
“This is
shagun, matmal booking price. Now you have to marry hamre Arnav bitwaa. No paanwala has any right
over you,” Mami informed her.
Khushi
nodded, still shaken by the close-up view of Mami’s made-up face. She looked at Mamaji with respect in her eyes.
One by one
all the other Raizadas filled Khushi’s lap with gifts. Arnav watched
indulgently and helped Khushi arrange the packets safely on the sofa.
“Doesn’t
the boy get any gift, Naniji?” Khushi asked.
All smiled.
“No need,”
Mami explained. “The bride ijj the brooms’ gift.”
Khushi
frowned. “That’s unfair,” she muttered. “Arnavji, we can share the gifts given
by Nani, Anjaliji, Mamaji, Mamiji and Akashji.”
Arnav’s
shoulders shook.
“Hein?”
Buaji exclaimed. “What will Arnav babua do with kajal and gold bangles and
bindi?”
“Oh!”
Khushi looked at the packets with disappointment.
“You Sanka
Devi!” Buaji shook her head.
“Khussi
bitiya has a big heart,” Nani smiled and dropped a kiss on Khushi’s cheek.
“Yes, you
are bilkul right. She also has a big hole where her head is supposed to be,
Nandksore!” Buaji had the last word.
“Khushiji,
we would like you and Buaji to grace us with your presence at our Diwali party,”
Anjali made a formal invite.
“Ji, ji,”
Khushi replied. “But please keep me away from the crackers,” she pleaded,
looking at Arnav.
He nodded.
“Shall we
have dinner here?” Buaji asked. “It will be very nice to spend this evening
together.”
The
Raizadas agreed.
Dinner was
fun and laughter. They feasted on delicious dishes and spent an evening getting
to know each other.
Khushi sat
next to Arnav, her right arm against his left.
“We don’t
have the serial on weekends,” she informed him.
“I see,” he
responded.
Khushi
sighed. “I wonder what the two of them are doing on Saturday and Sunday.”
“Two of
them?” he asked.
“The hero
and the heroine,” Khushi told him.
Arnav
choked with laughter.
“Khushi,
are you talking about the actors?” Arnav asked. He could arrange for her to
meet them if she was so interested in them.
“Actors?
Why should I worry about the actors? They have their wives and husbands and
amma and babuji to worry about them. They have their own lives. I am worried
about my hero and heroine,” Khushi said, putting a piece of puri in her mouth.
“Why?”
Arnav managed to ask. “Why are you worried about them?”
“They are
so lonely,” she sighed. “Now I have you for company, Arnavji. But they are
alone.”
Arnav gave
up the fight and burst out laughing.
It was late
when the families decided to separate. As the others bid goodbye, Khushi pulled
Arnav away into her bedroom.
“Kya hua,
Khushi?” he asked, his voice soft, tender. He had enjoyed the evening with her.
He couldn’t remember having enjoyed an evening more.
Khushi
leaned forward and pressed a long kiss on his lean cheek. His eyes flew open.
She moved
away from him. “Now you have got your shagun, Arnavji,” she whispered, her lips
warm and pink.
He stood
looking at her for a long moment. Then he asked, “I didn’t give you any shagun,
did I?”
“No, you
didn’t,” she said, her eyes twinkling.
He stepped
forward.
She moved
back. “You copycat, Arnavji! Are you going to give me a pappi on my cheek like
I did to you?” she laughed.
Taking her
by surprise he moved swiftly. The next thing she knew was the warm press of his
delicious lips on hers.
Khushi fell
down to sit on the floor, her limbs going on a lightning strike.
Arnav stood
looking at Khushi sitting on the ground at his feet, her head lowered.
“Kya hua,
Khushi?” he asked.
“Lightning
struck me,” Khushi explained.
“Lightning?”
he asked, one eyebrow lifted.
“I—I think
it is going to rain,” she muttered. “There must be thunder and lightning in the
sky.”
Arnav bit
his tingling lip to stop himself from laughing.
“It is not
lightning, Khushi,” he murmured.
“No? Then
what is it?” she asked, her eyes round.
“It is what
my touch does to you,” he breathed.
Wowwwww..... 😊😊😊😊
ReplyDeleteWowwwwwwwwwww.................... indeed.
ReplyDeleteThe shagun exchange between Arshi was mind blowing...
ReplyDeleteEveryone is so happy ..
Raizadas r pleasantly surprised to see a smiling,happy Arnav...
No other girl can ever be better for Arnav but our Sanka devi :)
WAITING FOR DIWALI UPDATES...
Wow!!!! that Shagun exchange was too good:-) Cant wait for Diwali updates
ReplyDeleteit was great....please continue soon....
ReplyDeleteSimply awesome
ReplyDeleteLoved it
awesome, khushi is so beutiful soul
ReplyDeleteAwesome.........
ReplyDeleteSuper. Khushi is cute and child like.
ReplyDeleteSuper. Khushi is cute and child like.
ReplyDeleteAwesome update. Happy holi in advance.
ReplyDeleteSmita, I am loving this story... I also like the fact that Mamiji in you stories is very loving and caring lady. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteIf only that's how a Shagun be done.
ReplyDeleteBut than it's khushi doing the honors. Not to forget her Arnavji.
But lighting struck 😳😁😃
Wow. What a wonderful shagun. I am eagerly awaiting for the Diwali celebrations. It's going so much fun with Khushi.
ReplyDeleteArnav-Khushi always have their own set of unique events. Their shagun exchange was cute! And Khushi is still so naive. She's adorable!
ReplyDeleteBuaji's words have been having a negative effect on Khushi, sadly. She feels she's not worth anyone. sigh...
Anyway, lovely update! Looking forward to their Diwali together! :D
P.S: Arnav, please arrange my meeting with the actors!!! Thank you! :P
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeletelonely hero heroine
ReplyDeletewhat about your hero
he will be alone at weekends too
you arent gonna be there
wow she is disaster queen
pickle jar huh
that was funny
hmmm lightning
no sweetie it may feel like lightning but it aint
shagun ho gaya
awww she wanted to share
but i think i liked his shagun gift more
it sure shocked hers
ahhh yes mama he sure does have to deal with loads
when his wife happens to be like she is
hmm shaadi of arhi
what can be better
arnav is waiting to bring his bride home
arent we all
hain yahan AD mein holi time and there arhi land mein diwali
but diwali mein jyada masti hogi
this is one diwali where khushi might not mess up
though you never know
Awesome update Smitha!!! Totally loved it!!!!
ReplyDeleteLovely update...
ReplyDeleteShagun ki paapi ;)
this Khushi is rocking... loved it....
ReplyDeleteLovely update. Khushi is like a breath of fresh air.
ReplyDeleteShe is a riot ,I love this arnav ,he is so looking fwd to the fireworks in his life
ReplyDeletewow superb update loved it thank you...........ameena671
ReplyDeleteAmazing👌👌..... Vinovember
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by a blog administrator.
ReplyDeletehahaha m so dead🤣🤣🤣
ReplyDeletesuper
ReplyDelete