Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you
Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi
"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
A blog for my VMs:
http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/
Part 18
Khushi
looked like a newly-bloomed rose, that too red. Her rich red lehenga with
intricate gold work made her look bridal and the elaborate hangings arranged by
Mamaji at the entrance provided a fitting background.
She smiled
widely at Arnav and the rest of the family waiting to greet her and Buaji and
opened her mouth to compliment Arnav on his looks and his cream kurta only to
stop short as her eyes fell on the rose petals.
She stared
at the blood-red rose petals for a long moment in silence.
Buaji
pushed her from behind. “Hai Re Nandkisore! Why are you standing in the
doorway, blocking me?” she asked.
“Buaji,”
Khushi’s voice shook. Her eyes lifted to meet Arnav’s molten ones.
“What is
wrong, Titliya?” Buaji asked, her eyes wide with worry.
Khushi
moved aside so that Buaji could see the red carpet of welcome.
The
Raizadas waited anxiously for the Guptas’ reaction.
“How
beautiful, Nandkisore!” Buaji’s face relaxed in a fond smile. “Kaun kiye rahe
ye sab?”
The
Raizadas smiled.
“Arnavji,”
Khushi was definite on this point.
Arnav looked
away, his lips smiling.
The
Raizadas stood amazed at Khushi’s belief in her swain’s romantic heart, a heart
that not even his family had been fortunate to see in all the years they had
lived with him.
“Arnavji,
shall I walk on it?” Khushi asked, her eyes glittering with excitement, her
face flushed with eagerness.
“Yes,”
Arnav invited softly.
Khushi
quickly slipped out of her high heels.
“Tum kaa
kar rahi ho, Hello Hi Bye Bye?” Mami asked, her expressive eyes wide.
“The
flowers will be crushed underfoot by the sharp points, Mamiji,” Khushi
explained. She lifted the heavy skirt of her lehenga and carefully placed her
bare right foot on the petals. She stood for a moment taking in the sensation
of having fragrant and soft silk against her sole.
She lifted
her head to look at Arnav’s waiting face.
She
stumbled slightly at the expression on his face, managing to regain her balance
at the last moment.
Arnav moved
fast to stand by her. He held out his hand, his eyes a vat of hot honey.
Khushi
slipped her hand into his.
“Arnavji,
remove your jooti,” Khushi whispered. “It feels so—so warm, like silk.”
The
Raizadas waited with bated breath. Akash cleaned his specs to see better.
Arnav
obediently shed his footwear.
Anjali
looked at Nani and Mami, joy suffusing her face. Her Chotey was shedding his
inhibitions and letting new experiences and pleasures into his life.
The couple
walked along the bed of rose petals towards the bower holding hands, Arnav walking
ahead, leading Khushi.
“Arnavji,
thank you,” she whispered, tightening her hold on his fingers for a second.
He returned
the clasp, asking, “You like it?”
“I love it.
No one has ever done this for me,” she whispered.
Arnav
smiled.
“Aap ko
pata he how much I love red roses? I could spend my whole life staring at them
and sniffing their sweet smell,” she confessed. “I won’t get up even to have
food.”
Arnav’s
shoulders shook slightly.
“Do you
know what I really want to do now?” she asked him, her eyes dancing.
“What?” he
asked, knowing it would be something out of the ordinary.
“I want to
lie down on these petals and roll in them, Arnavji,” she breathed. “It is like
a bed.”
An image
flashed through his mind faster then the speed of light. A dimly-lit room
decorated with red roses, red rose petals scattered on the white silk of a big
bed, Khushi lying on them, her hair unbound, he bending over her, covering her
naked body with his...
“How do you
always know what I like?” Khushi asked him, her eyes wide and innocent. “It is
like you read my mind.”
He
swallowed. Hard. He seriously hoped that she couldn’t read his. If she could,
she would run for the hills, screaming at the top of her voice.
They
reached the stage set for the sagai.
“Shall we
begin, Madhumatiji?” Nani asked.
“Yes, yes,”
Buaji smiled.
The family
joined them on the stage.
“Arnav
bitwaa, Khussi, gets ready,” Mami exhorted them. “Phinally the moment of sagai
is here.”
Khushi
beamed at her; Arnav smiled slightly.
“You are a
strange couples,” Mami laughed. “Your Buaji and we picked out your rings, Hello
Hi Bye Bye! Saasumma, normal girls phuss about the saijj of the diamonds in
their rings and here Khussi was too bijji to come and select a ring.”
“Our Chotey
is no better, Manorama. He was in Agra when we were looking through a thousand
rings for him,” Nani grumbled.
“Sanka Devi
has found her Sanka Dev, Devyaniji,” Buaji declared.
All nodded.
Khushi
turned to look at Arnav, their eyes twinkling with amusement.
“Buaji
thinks you are mad to want to marry me,” Khushi whispered.
“I am madly
eager to marry you,” Arnav corrected, his eyes dancing.
Khushi
giggled.
The ladies
tied raksha dhagas on the wrists of the couple. They then held out the trays
with the rings.
Khushi
picked a slim platinum band and slipped it on Arnav’s finger. Arnav took the
slim band of white diamonds and slid it on her slim, shapely finger.
Khushi
looked at her ring. “I hope I don’t lose the ring, Arnavji,” Khushi whispered
anxiously.
“I will buy
you more if you do lose it,” he calmed her. He looked down at his own finger. “I—I
normally don’t wear rings or any jewellery, not even a watch,” Arnav muttered.
“You can
take it off after we are married,” Khushi offered him a way out. “I will give
you mine too. You keep both of them safe in your locker.”
Arnav
smiled. “You won’t mind that I am not wearing a ring, Khushi?”
Khushi
waved off his concern. “What does a ring matter? If you don’t wear a ring, will
it make you any less married to me?” she asked.
Arnav had
to laugh.
“Lo shuru
ho gaya,” Mami sighed. “Put them together in one place, Saasumma and they will
talk for hours.”
All smiled.
“Our Khussi
takes after you, Mano,” Mamaji teased.
Mami lifted
her nose in the air.
“I am too
talkative, Mamiji,” Khushi pouted, unhappy with herself.
“That is
not a bad thing, Khushiji,” Anjali assured her. “You talk as much as your heart
desires.”
“You have
no idea how much she can talk, Nandkisore,” Buaji chuckled. “Don’t encourage
her.”
“Our Chotey
is too silent, Buaji,” Anjali complained.
“Yes,” Nani
added. “He is.” She turned to her new bahuriya. “You talk, Khussi bitiya. Talk
to your heart’s content and make Chotey talk too.”
Khushi
smiled happily and looked down at the line of fire on her finger.
One by one
the ladies and men approached the pair and gave them heart-felt blessings, hugs
and gifts. They then sat around the dining table and shared a feast, laughing
and talking till late in the evening. Khushi sat by Arnav and entertained him
throughout dinner.
“It is
late,” Buaji said as her eyes fell on the clock. “We have to leave.”
“It is just
ten,” Nani said. “Stay a while longer, Madhumatiji.”
“Yes,
Buaji,” Anjali wheedled.
“Ten is not
late,” Mami said. “The night is just beginning for us young peoples. Let’s play
antakshari.”
Buaji stood
up and said regretfully, “It is too late, Devyaniji. We have to open the shop early
tomorrow morning. There is a load of fabric that will be delivered tomorrow
morning from Lucknow. We have to be there.”
“I will
drop you,” Arnav offered.
Buaji
acquiesced. She was tired, but happily so.
The
Raizadas hugged and kissed Khushi and helped Buaji into the car.
"Just a minute," Khushi said. She ran back into the house and returned with a handful of red rose petals from the carpet Arnav had spread for her.
She slowly opened her hands and showed Arnav what she held. "To remember what you did for me today," she whispered.
He swallowed hard. He wanted to hug her, shower her with kisses and all the roses in the world.
"Chalo, Titliya," Buaji called.
The Raizadas waved
them off with smiles of joy and satisfaction on the faces.
“The sagai
is done. Now it is time for the sangeet,” Nani said happily.
“Let’s hire
a dance choreographer, Nani,” Anjali suggested. “Chotey and Khushiji will have
to dance and you know Chotey! He will crush Khushiji’s feet.”
“And Khussi
ijj no better,” Mami added. “She will phall off the stage and take hamre Arnav
bitwaa with her, Hello Hi Bye Bye!” She sighed, “Imagine two people getting
married, one lame and the other with a
broken arm.”
“Shubh shubh
bolo, Manorama!” Nani glared at her daughter-in-law.
Khushi sat
behind Arnav while Buaji occupied the passenger seat in the front.
“What is
the next rasm, Buaji?” Khushi asked.
“Sangeet,”
Buaji replied, hiding a yawn with her hand.
“It will be
fun, Arnavji,” Khushi danced up and down in her seat.
Arnav
smiled at her in the mirror.
“Chup karke
bait jao, Nandkisore,” Buaji ordered. “Are you a child or a monkey to jump up
and down?”
Khushi
pouted. “If I can’t be happy at my own sangeet, then for whose sangeet should I
jump up and down?”
Buaji
pursed her lips. Arnav hid his smile.
“I can’t be
happy at my own wedding but I should dress up like a mannequin and dance all
evening at other people’s shaadi! What a strange world this is!” Khushi
grumbled.
Buaji
sighed. “Brides have to be modest, Titliya. You should keep your head lowered,
your eyes on the ground, speak only when spoken to...”
Khushi
gasped. “If these are the conditions to
getting married, then hamari shaadi to ho
chuki. Arnavji, if I don’t see where I am going, I will fall. And I can’t stay
for more than five minutes without talking, not even for you.”
Arnav chuckled.
“You talk,
Khushi. Just be yourself,” he suggested mildly.
Khushi
leaned forward, clutching the headrest of his seat with her hands. “Thank you,
Arnavji,” she gushed.
Buaji
sighed. “Do you know what you have just asked her to do?” she asked Arnav.
He nodded,
laughing.
“To ab
bhugto, bitwaa” Buaji blessed him, smiling.
When they
reached Laxmi Nagar, Arnav got out and opened Buaji’s door for her. He helped
her out and she went up the steps to open the door.
Then he
circled the car and opened Khushi’s door. As he bent to help her alight, he
felt her lips touch the corner of his. Her arms were on his shoulders.
He stopped
for a moment, his breath caught in his chest at that innocent whisper of a touch.
His
startled eyes looked into her mischievous ones.
“I wanted
to kiss you, lekin I have bad aim,” she confessed.
Arnav
smiled. He then quickly looked at Buaji. She had unlocked the door and gone in.
He looked around. The road was deserted except for a brown and white dog.
He turned his
face to Khushi. “I won’t move,” he promised. “Now you can practice your
kissing,” he offered himself selflessly as target for practice. He shut his
eyes and waited with bated breath for the touch of her soft lips.
Her plump,
pink lips slowly settled on his.
Experimentally she rubbed her lips against
his.
“Thank you,
Arnavji,” she breathed against his lips. “For the bed of red roses.”
“Anything
for you, Khushi,” he murmured, hoping desperately that she wouldn’t take her
lips away.
“Can we
have red rose petals on our bed for our suhaag raat?” Khushi asked.
The dog wagged its tail, waiting for Arnav's reply.
This Khushi is going to kill Arnav someday....
ReplyDeleteOverload of senses for arnav
ReplyDeleteHis mind going to their SR already
Well her innocent suggestions ain't so innocent for him
And then she even goes to suggest the same for SR
Good she can't read his mind
Sharam se pani pani hi jaati if she did
Awww the way she knew arnav laid out the rose path was just so cute
She knows her man
That's good
And getting to know more
He listens to what she says without queetioning it awww
Haiyye they are now engaged
Am sure he will wear that ring dear
And she is right not wearing the ring don't mean he won't be married to her
As if he will want that
Buaji is right sanka devi found her sanka dev
Ram milaye jodi
She tried to kiss him but missed
But not second time
When our hero so selflessly offered himself
Life with khushi for arnav shall never be dull
Arnav toh total ghayal hogaya hai... chat maagani chat vivah ;)
ReplyDeleteloved the update :D
This khushie is an original ,loved the update ,
ReplyDeletehey i loved the update a lot and am in love with arnav in this .......
ReplyDeleteZabardast update
ReplyDeleteEagerly waiting to know arnavji's reply
A very refreshing and fragrant update!
ReplyDeleteAwesome! Oh! how delightfully Khushi expressed herself. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteAwesome update Smitha!!!!
ReplyDeletewonderful update...khushi ne arnav ke man ki baat keh di
ReplyDeleteSuch a cute n beautiful update
ReplyDeleteLoved it
wow superb update loved it thank you..............ameena671
ReplyDeleteloved the update... this is soo good.. Khushi is one masterpiece..
ReplyDeleteLooks like Khushi can read his mind!
ReplyDeleteLooks like Khushi can read his mind!
ReplyDeleteWow smita good o
ReplyDeleteso lovely and sweet
ReplyDeleteExactly Arnav, do you have any idea what you are getting into?
ReplyDeleteKhushi will be the death of him... her innocents will one day give him heart attack for sure...
This part was very nice...
Awesome update.. she actually tell arnav's though and also she suggested Arnav in her innocent way that she wanted roses for SR"--"
ReplyDeleteKhushi was wearing a gorgeous dress. So sweet of arnav is is a sweetheart. Khushi was nicely giving ideas for SR :-). Very nice part Smita.
ReplyDeleteLocks like both of them read each other's mind.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and romantic engagement ever..............
ReplyDeleteThat was one Beautiful and romantic engagement ever... Loved the way ASR sacrificed himself to allow Khushi some kissing practice.
ReplyDeleteLol @ Khushi giving Arnav ideas for their suhagraat when the latter has already imagined it all ;)
ReplyDeleteLoved the way Khushi was all okay with Arnav not wearing the ring if he didn't want to, and loved the way Arnav always indulges her . <3
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
Both r thinking about their suhaah raat...
ReplyDeleteKhushi is set to kill Arnav by her bold yet innocent gestures...
wow hahaa
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