Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you
Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi
"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
A blog for my VMs:
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Part 19
Arnav
stared at her for a moment and then nodded faintly.
“Ji?”
Khushi asked doubtfully.
“Yes,”
Arnav croaked, his mind back in the world of white silk sheets and red rose
petals it had conjured up with little effort.
Khushi
beamed at him. She leaned forward and pressed her full, warm lips against his
for a long moment.
Arnav’s
lashes fluttered shut, hoping the kiss would last forever. He parted his lips
slightly to indicate that he wasn’t averse to a more intimate caress, but she
was clueless.
She
withdrew her lips with a sigh and smiled. “Are you coming in?” she asked.
“No...” his
voice trailed away. He was in no condition to appear before public. Her
innocent kiss had unmanned him.
“Shubh
ratri, Arnavji,” she whispered.
“Wh..what?”
he stuttered.
“Good
night,” she giggled.
“Good
night,” he muttered.
He held out
his hand for her to alight. She hopped down and with a final smile, lifted her
skirt and ran up the steps.
Arnav stood
there watching his angel in red leave him. Then he got into the car and drove
away.
The shagun
was done. The sagai was done. Two down and three to go. Sangeet, mehendi and
haldi. Then it was wedding time for Khushi and him. Then suhag raat...
Arnav
smiled.
He parked
before the house, tossed the key to the guard and ambled into his house. The
decorations hadn’t been removed, his rose carpet was still in place. He smiled
thinking of Khushi’s reaction when she had seen it.
“Chotey,”
Anjali called.
“Yes, Di?”
he asked.
“We were
thinking,” she paused.
“Yes?” he
asked.
“You and
Khushiji will have to dance at the sangeet,” Nani stated bluntly.
“Dance?”
Arnav paled.
“Kono
excuse naahi he, Arnav bitwaa. You hab to dance,” Mami supported her
mother-in-law. “Bhat bill the guests says if you run away, Hello Hi Bye Bye?
Ijj my nephew a darpok?”
Arnav drew
in a long breath.
“We were
thinking of hiring a choreographer, Chotey,” Anjali suggested.
Arnav
blinked.
“She will
teach you to dance for the sangeet,” Nani added.
Arnav
swallowed.
“One
dancewaa, Arnav bitwaa,” Mami wheedled. “Sirf one choti-moti dancewaa.”
Arnav
opened his mouth to refuse.
“Khushiji
will expect it of you, Chotey,” Anjali delivered the clinching argument that
could silence any Arnav Singh Raizada.
“She will?”
he asked faintly.
“Of course
she wills,” Mami declared.
Arnav
escaped from his family and locked himself in his bedroom. He looked at the
phone in his hand. Maybe he could call Khushi and find out if she really
expected him to dance.
He called
her.
“Arnavji,
did you get home safe?” Khushi asked, chewing channa.
“Yes,” he
muttered. “Khushi, it is our sangeet next week,” he began.
“Arnavji,
please fix it on a Saturday or Sunday,” she pleaded. “I don’t want to miss my
serial. Who knows what that idiot will do to the heroine if I am not there to
watch him?”
Arnav had
to smile. “I will make sure it is during the weekend,” he promised.
“Ji,” she
smiled.
“Khushi, what...err...what
exactly do people do during sangeet?” he asked, his heart in his mouth.
Khushi
frowned. “Do?” she asked. “Dance,” she replied.
“Oh,” he said
softly, feeling like a punctured balloon. He opened his mouth to ask if she
would excuse him from the dancing exercise.
“It will be
fun, Arnavji,” Khushi said, feeling on top of the world.
His
question remained unasked.
“Won’t it
be wonderful, Arnavji, both of us dancing? We will be like the hero and heroine
of a phillum,” Khushi squealed, hugging herself in excitement.
Arnav could
only nod silently. The phillum would be a tragicomedy.
Khushi
continued, her rapture transmitted over the phone, “I am waiting to dance with
you, Arnavji.”
Arnav sat
down. There was no escape now.
“What shall
we dance to, Arnavji?” she asked.
“Err...a
choreographer is coming here, Khushi,” he said weakly.
“Really?”
Khushi was over the moon.
“Yes, Di
was talking of it,” Arnav admitted.
Khushi
said, “Arnavji, just think. We can learn together and then dance together. It
is like a dream, Arnavji.”
Arnav
swallowed. How could he tell her that it was his nightmare?
“Aren’t you
happy, Arnavji?” she asked, doubt creeping into her voice.
“Yes, yes,”
he hurried to reply.
Khushi
smiled, content.
“You have
one week to get this right, Chotey,” Di told him kindly.
Arnav
looked at the jeans-clad lady talking to Khushi.
“Ankitaji
is very popular at wedding parties. She manages to get most guests dancing,”
Anjali encouraged him.
He nodded,
looking at Khushi. Her face was flushed with joy and she was listening to
Ankitaji as though her life depended on the choreographer’s words.
As he
watched, Khushi turned towards him and called, “Arnavji, can you come here for
a moment?”
Arnav
walked towards them, his heart in his shoes.
“Ankitaji,
this is my groom, my Arnavji,” Khushi introduced him. “This is Ankitaji, the
choreographer.”
Arnav
folded his hands in greeting. Ankita, who was about to extend her hand to
shake his, quickly followed suit.
“Ankitaji
was asking me which song we would like to dance to,” Khushi informed him.
Arnav
swallowed hard. “Any song will do,” he croaked. There was no choice really. He
could dance badly to any song.
“Shall we
have a passionate number, say Aaa Zara Kareeb?” Ankita asked.
“Yes,”
Khushi clapped her hands in glee.
Arnav
nodded. He seriously hoped that he wouldn’t damage Khushi’s feet beyond repair.
Ankita
played the music. She instructed, “Khushi, stand here. Arnav, walk towards her
as the opening music plays.”
Arnav
obeyed her.
The
Raizadas watched him with anxious eyes.
“Take hold
of her hand and twirl her in time to the music,” Ankita instructed.
Arnav
caught hold of Khushi’s arm and twirled her.
“Throw her
back and pull her close,” Ankita instructed. “Maintain the speed, the tempo of
the music.”
Arnav
pushed Khushi away and then tried to bring her back to him. But somewhere in
the process, she slipped through his fingers and fell on the ground with a
crash.
Awesome Smita. Loved it😍
ReplyDeleteoh god poor Arnavji....he has 2 left feet i guess....and now dropping kushi must be the last straw....
ReplyDeletewow superb update loved it is arnav going to learn how to dance thank you...............ameena671
ReplyDeleteCourse he will say yes to petals for SR
ReplyDeleteHe was already dreaming of it dear
Then you go give him a go ahead for it too
No way will he say no
Awww she kissed him
He wanted more
But she didn't know
Hmmm dancing huh
Two left feet huh arnav
But how can he disappoint khushi
All was going well
Before he dropped her
But that was accidental
Poor arnav
Dropping his fiancée
Which he was afraid of doing
Awww not his time it seems
I feel.for him
But surely khushi is used to falling down
Arnav must be horrified though
Having dropped her on her butt like that
That's why he wasn't up for dancing
Lovely update. Hope Arnav learns to dance with Kushi's help.
ReplyDeleteThe last para is hilarious. Waiting for both their reactions.
ReplyDeleteDancing khushi....this should be good!
ReplyDeletelovely.
ReplyDeleteOuch..... Hope they remain good till the sangeet....
ReplyDeletePoor kushi
ReplyDeleteLovely update...
ReplyDeleteLovely update...
ReplyDeleteAmazing update...
ReplyDeleteThe last part was hilarious... hope Arnav learns to dance :D
That was awesome. The last part is absolutely hilarious. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteFantastic chapter
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Awesome update Smitha!!! Last part was too funny :-)
ReplyDeleteOh.. Khushi has met her match. Loved the update.
ReplyDeleteloved it ...my god he dropped her
ReplyDeleteReading all these chapters one by one....amazing writing Smita:) what a romantic and cute story...loving it!!!!
ReplyDeleteKhushi fell...oh my, Arnav is going to feel terrible...aww he's trying so hard..he's amazing!
oops.. ASR and dance is always a nightmare.. hehe.. poor Khushi.
ReplyDeleteha ha am so waiting for the sangeet:-))
ReplyDeleteOh dear. Poor Arnav. He has dance for his sangeet and Khushi.
ReplyDeleteLol! Khushi fell..hahaha I can picturize it. I hope her clumsiness doesn't make Arnav get all the verbal lashing for making her fall though :P
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to the next update :)
That was funny Smita :-)).
ReplyDeleteThis is going to be fun..........Arnav and khushi dancing..
ReplyDeleteHaye....
ReplyDeleteArnav bitwa...
Ye kya kia ???
Meri Khushi..
hehehe nanav mere bhai can't dance
ReplyDeletelol
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