Friday, 10 July 2015

226. OS 11. An Uncomplicated Wife (Parts 13-14)




Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You


“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.

 “How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”

He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.

Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.


http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you



Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi

http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi

"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."

Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.

A blog for my VMs:

http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/






Part 13




Arnav coiled Khushi’s arm around his as they walked down to join the crowd gathered in his living room.

“Our bahuriyya are good, better, best,” Mami told her friends. “Both of them are so bootiphool!”

Her friends nodded.

“Hamre Akass bitwaa and Arnav bitwaa are no less kamaal. They are phasting for their bifes, Hello Hi Bye Bye!” she added.

“Sachi?” Mrs. Mehta asked in surprise and awe.

“Sachi Muchi,” Mami said firmly, revelling in the chagrin on her friends’ faces. None of them had sons and nephews like Manorama Raijjada’s.






“Chotey, Khussi bitiya, you are here,” Nani exclaimed, her face wreathed in smiles. “Shall we start the pooja?”

“Fine,” Arnav grunted.

All the guests and Raizadas gathered before Devi Maiyya and began singing. One by one, they did aarti to the goddess. When it was Khushi’s turn, Arnav stepped forward with her. They held on to the same thali and did aarti together.

The Raizadas smiled at the sight even as Khushi stole a glance at her unpredictable husband and blushed when she met his molten eyes.

Once the pooja was done, Mami said, “Arnav bitwaa, give your bife water and food. Nahi to woh faintiyya hi jayenge, Hello Hi Bye Bye!”

Arnav lifted the small pot of water to Khushi’s lips. She took a sip, took the pot from his hand and held it to his lips.

He smiled tenderly into her eyes before taking a gulp of water.

Then he took a peda from her thali and held it to her mouth.

She bit into it, leaving the major part in his hand. She made to take another peda from the thali to feed him, but he indicated that he wanted the rest of what she had eaten.

With a scared look at all the guests swarming around them, Khushi slowly took the piece from his hand and held it to his lips. He parted his lips, letting her place the sweet in his mouth. As she withdrew her fingers, his lips caressed them, sending tendrils of heat travelling down her body.

She bent to touch his feet, but he caught hold of her shoulders with loving hands. “No, Khushi,” he murmured. Uncaring of all the eyes on them, he quickly pulled her into his arms and hugged her tight. He then kissed her dupatta-covered head.





“Chotey, Khushiji,” Anjali tried hard to keep the smile from her voice and face.

He looked up.

Khushi scrambled to get out of his hold.

“Someone has come to meet you,” she said before moving out of the way to reveal Buaji in all her glory.

“Buaji,” Khushi squealed. Payal too came running with Akash in tow. Both girls hugged Buaji.

“Let me go, Nandkisore,” Buaji begged. “I am too old to take your violence.”

Akash and Arnav touched Buaji’s feet. She blessed them lovingly.



“I wanted to attend your first teej. I am sorry I am late, damadji,” Buaji apologised to Arnav. “The traffic in Delhi, Hai Re Nandkisore! The rickshawala almost threw me out halfway because it was taking too much time to get here.”

“Buaji, you should have called me. I would have come to pick you from the station,” he asserted.

“Yes, Buaji,” Anjali added. “Had we known you were coming, we would have made all the arrangements for your transportation.”

Nani and Mami nodded.



“Now that you have come, Madhumatiji, we won’t let you go,” Nani declared. “Stay with us for a month at least.”

“No, no, Nandkisore,” Buaji exclaimed. “I have to return tomorrow.”

“Tomorrow? No bays! We bill not let you go, Madhumatiji,” Mami declared. “Akass bitwaa, Arnav bitwaa, we bill lock her in her bedroom.”

“No, no, Nandkisore,” Buaji tried to protest, but Nani quickly stepped in. “How are Sasiji and Garimaji?”

Before Buaji could reply, Anjali jumped in, “Dinner is served, Buaji. Shall we talk as we eat? Our brothers and sisters-in-law are starving.”

“Yes,” Nani concurred and all moved to the tables loaded with food.




Arnav sat by Khushi, his right arm rubbing against her left as they ate.

Khushi looked away, trying to compose herself. ‘What is happening to you, Khushi? You have been married to him for two months now, have been sleeping in the same bed. You had no problems till now. Ab kya? Why is your heart racing, your pulse beating madly? Control yourself,’ her head told her.

Her heart answered, ‘How can I control myself when he persists in touching me all the time, says he wants me to be a real wife, kisses me?’

Her head insisted, ‘Control yourself, Khushi.’

Her heart challenged her head, ‘I dare you to control yourself when Arnavji looks at you with those melting eyes, touches you with those lips...’

She stole a look at his lips, those sinfully delicious curves that could make her lose her sud bud and hosh. Her eyes moved up his straight nose to meet his chocolate brown eyes.




“Kya hua, Khushi?” Arnav leaned forward to whisper.
His nose touched strands of her hair and his hot breath fell against her ear.

“Kuch nahi....” she gasped.

“Sure?” he teased.

She nodded uncertainly. Life was getting too unpredictable and out of control, especially when Arnavji came too close to her, Khushi thought. Life was crowding her and her husband wasn’t helping any. He was pushing her into something she wasn’t ready for, rushing her into a real marriage with all the finesse of a road roller.

Buaji offered her a lifeline.

“Arnav bitwaa, Akass bitwaa,” Buaji began. “Don’t be angry with me. I have come to take your brides away.”

Arnav stared at her, slack-jawed.

All the Raizadas, Payal and Khushi looked at her in wonder.

“Oo kaa he, Nandkisore, a boy came to see our neighbour’s daughter, Preetho. He liked her and she liked him. All were happy till his family insisted that the wedding be conducted in a week. The ladka has been transferred. He has to join in one week. You can imagine how difficult it is, Nandkisore!” Buaji sighed.

Nani, Mami and Anjali nodded.

“Preetho’s shaadi?” Payal’s face was a picture of happiness.

Khushi was smiling too.

Nani looked at Payal and Khushi and said with a smile, “You should definitely take our bahuriyya with you, Madhumatiji.”




Arnav opened his mouth to protest but Mami beat him to it.

“Take our bahuriyya to Lucknow? Nahiiiii,” she cried. “Bhat will become of hamre bitwaas?”

“Manorama, just because you don’t want to visit your relations in Lucknow does not mean that your bahuriya don’t. Preetho is their childhood friend. Won’t they wish to attend her wedding?” Nani asked with a smile.

Arnav looked at Khushi’s face. She was delighted at the news.

“Ask your husbands, Payaliya, Titliya,” Buaji prodded them.

“Akashji?” Payal asked. “May I go with Buaji?”

Akash nodded, wanting to ask Payal to stay back but unable to do so.

Khushi looked at Arnav. “May I go to Lucknow, Arnavji?” she asked.

He asked, “Do you want to go, Khushi?” Say no, say no, he prayed.

“Yes, Arnavji,” she smiled, dashing all his hopes to the ground.

He looked down at his plate, feeling lost, scared, bereft.







Khushi came to bed late that night.

“You aren’t asleep, Arnavji?” she asked in surprise as she entered their bedroom to see Arnav standing by the window looking out at the pool and the garden.



He didn’t reply.

Khushi hesitated for a second and then moved to the wardrobe to gather her clothes together.

“I will pack for a week,” she said softly, stealing a glance at his rigid back.




He swallowed hard.

“It will be nice to see Amma and Babuji again,” she added, wondering at his silence.

“Convey my regards to them,” he muttered.

“Ji,” she replied, relieved that he was talking again.

He turned around to see her placing her folded clothes in a suitcase neatly. He stood looking at her, his eyes tracing every inch of her.



“Preetho and I,” Khushi said softly. “We were in the same class at school.” She looked up. He was listening intently. “She was always kind to me. Jiji and she used to defend me when the other children poked fun at me and made me cry,” she explained.

He frowned, furious at the very thought of children bullying Khushi. “Why did they poke fun at you?” he asked. He couldn’t think of any reason why Khushi should become the butt of ridicule.

“Because I am an orphan,” she said softly in a matter-of-fact manner.

“What the!” Arnav exclaimed.

“My parents died in an accident when I was ten,” she shut the suitcase and sat by it.



“Your Amma, Bauji...” his voice trailed away.

“My mother was Amma’s sister. She and Babuji adopted me. I call them Amma and Babuji. Jiji is my cousin,” Khushi explained, troubled by his shock. “Naniji knows all this,” she assured him. “Mamiji and Anjaliji too were told the truth by Babuji before our wedding.”

He parted his lips to speak but could only stare at her speechless.

“That is why Preetho is so dear to us,” Khushi explained. “She ran around doing everything for our weddings. How can we not do the same for her?”

Arnav nodded. He managed to say hoarsely, “I am sorry about your parents, Khushi.”

She nodded slightly. “Shall we go to sleep? Buaji wants to leave early in the morning,” she informed him.

“I have arranged Mohan to take you to Lucknow,” Arnav told her. “Akash will accompany you. He will drop you at your home and return.”

“Ji, shukriya,” Khushi mumbled.

“Call me when you want to return, Khushi,” he told her. “I will make the arrangements.”

“Ji,” she nodded.






After a restless night of tossing and turning, Arnav saw Khushi, Payal, Buaji and Akash off.

“Call me, Khushi,” he instructed. “If you need anything.”

“Ji,” she replied, standing before him, her fingers clutching the edge of her dupatta.

Arnav quickly walked into her and hugged her, uncaring that his whole family including Mohan and HP were watching his PDA.




“Drive carefully,” he instructed Mohan who was gaping at him after Khushi squirmed out of his hold.

“Ji, bhaiyya,” Mohan stammered.

Khushi tried hard not to blush at the look on her Buaji’s face.

“Akash, keep me posted,” Arnav ordered.

“Yes, bhai,” Akash promised.

He waved them off, his eyes on Khushi’s pink face as long as he could see her. After the car vanished from his sight, he turned and walked away to closet himself in their room.


The Raizada ladies sighed.





Part 14








Khushi sat back in her seat, feeling relieved and troubled as the vehicle moved away from Shantivan. Relieved because she was being given a few days to get used to the concept of having a husband who had her firmly in his sights and troubled because she was being given a few days to get used to the concept of having a husband who had her firmly in his sights.


She frowned. ‘What is wrong with you, Khushi?’ she asked herself. ‘You are happy to be free of Arnavji for a week and unhappy to be free of Arnavji for a week? You are pagal, bilkul pagal.’


“Kaa hua, Titliya?” Buaji asked.


“I am fine, Buaji,” Khushi smiled.


Buaji sighed in relief. “It is a blessing to have such good damadjis in our family,” she mused. “Nandkisore has been very kind to us. They care so much for both of you and their family is so loving.”


“Yes, Buaji,” Payal seconded her.


“And you are both in the same house by Nandkisore’s kindness,” Buaji folded her hands in prayer.


Payal nodded.


Khushi frowned at the road rushing past her, her confused thoughts almost strangling her.




                                                ***



Her phone rang. Arnavji.


“Ji?” Khushi asked, her voice shaking a little bit.


“Khushi, tum theek ho?” his husky voice carried concern.


“Yes...” she said even though her heart laughed at her avowal that she was fine when she was anything but.


“I am at the office,” he informed her. “There are more things to do now that Aman is not here.”


“Where is Amanji?” Khushi asked.


“On leave for a month,” Arnav explained.


“Oh...” she said softly.


“Did you stop for breakfast?” he asked.


“No, Buaji does not like to eat from restaurants. Hari Prakashji had packed food for us. We had it in the car,” she explained.


“Call me if you need anything, Khushi,” he reminded her.


“Ji,” she murmured before cutting the call.






                                                     ***


They finally reached Lucknow to a rapturous welcome by Garima and Sasi Gupta.


“It is so nice to see your happy faces,” Babuji said, hugging his daughters.


“Did Devyaniji feel bad because we asked them to let the girls return to Lucknow for Preetho’s shaadi?” Garima asked anxiously.


“No, Garima,” Buaji comforted her. “They were very understanding. Tum chinta mat karo.”


“Khushi, chalo. Let’s tease Preetho a bit,” Payal invited her, her eyes dancing.


“Just a minute, Jiji,” Khushi said before turning to Mohan. “Shukriya,” she thanked him for driving them to Lucknow.


“It is nothing, Khushi bhabhi,” Mohan replied with a smile. “Call me when you want to return. Hum khushi khushi aayenge to take you back to Arnav bhaiyya.”


Words trembled on Khushi’s lips—words asking Mohanji to take care of her husband, to drive him around carefully, to make sure that he didn’t work too hard, to ensure that he ate on time...but how could she ask Mohanji to do all these? These were the prerogatives and duties of a wife—a real wife, not Mohanji.


“Hum chalte hein, Khushi bhabhi,” Mohan folded his hands.


Buaji frowned. “Drive back immediately?” she asked. “Never, Nandkisore,” she ruled. “This is Gomti Sadan. No guest who crosses our gate goes without having a meal here, Mohan. Come in, have food, take rest. Only then will we let you go.”


“Buaji, nahiiiii,” poor Mohan tried to refuse.


Khushi told him with a smile, “Mohanji, don’t argue with Buaji. You will never win. Better obey her.”


Mohan nodded with a scared look at Buaji’s military stance.



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The childhood friends were in Preetho’s bedroom, packing her clothes and belongings for her.


Khushi looked at Preetho’s happy face, feeling happy for her but sad for herself. She had never anticipated her wedding so eagerly, having been pushed into it by circumstances, never mooned over her groom or his photo, never been teased by her friends, never felt the thrill of starting a new life with a man she liked...It had all happened in a hurry. She had been pushed, driven, rushed into her marriage. And that too to a man she had only heard of.


She hadn’t worried about how her marriage would turn out then. She had been more worried about Jiji’s wedding. She had left her own fate to Devi Maiyya.


She looked down at her fingers clutching the fringe of her dupatta.


After the wedding had come the murder attempt and the almost surreal experiences after the event. Two months later, she was still stuck in a limbo, scared to more ahead, terrified to move back.


“Khushi, how is your husband? I know he is handsome, but does he treat you with care?” Preetho asked.


Khushi looked at Preetho’s worried face.


She was lucky, she thought. Her marriage had been a gamble but it had paid off. Arnavji was decent, hardworking and very responsible, very caring.


“Yes, very,” she replied.


“He looked a bit forbidding at the wedding. Isliye I was scared for you,” Preetho confessed.


Khushi smiled. “He just looks that way sometimes,” she replied mildly. “He is very nice, very patient.” She tried to shift the focus to Preetho’s groom. “What about Vikas?” she asked.


Preetho blushed. “Pata nahi what happened when I saw him for the first time. My heart stopped, Khushi.”


“Love at first sight?” Payal teased.


Preetho nodded and all laughed.


Love at first sight? Khushi thought. Their first sight had been while rolling in the mud trying to escape the bullets. Arnavji had stared at her and she had stared at him. Love? They had been too busy trying to save their lives...


Her phone rang. Arnavji.


“Hello,” she murmured, her eyes lowered to Preetho’s bedspread.


Preetho nudged Payal, their eyes eager, their ears cocked.


“Khushi,” was all he said.


Khushi’s lips trembled.


“Did you have breakfast?” she asked.


Preetho grimaced at Payal. Breakfast? Khushi was worried about poori and aloo rather than his heart?


“Yes. You?” he asked.


“Ji. I am at Preetho’s house. Jiji and she are with me. We are packing for her,” Khushi explained. “Aap?” she asked.


“Office,” he said. “I have meetings all day.”


“Please don’t forget to take your lunch,” she murmured.


Preetho looked at Payal, disgusted at Khushi’s lack of romance. She whispered in Payal's ear, "Khushi has taken the saying 'The way to a man's heart is through his stomach' to mean something else altogether."


Payal grimaced.


Arnav nodded. He desperately wanted to ask her if she would return to him, but manfully managed to hold his tongue. He had spent all night tossing and turning, hugging her pillow and breathing in her scent...


“Are you happy, Khushi?” he finally asked.


Khushi parted her lips to say yes, but her tongue refused to utter the lie.


She was saved the trouble.


“Khushi, something has come up. I will call you later,” Arnav said, glaring at the employee who had come to call him for his next meeting.


Khushi cut the call.


She lifted her head to see Payal and Preetho staring at her.


“Kya?” Khushi asked.


“You must be the most unromantic girl on earth!” Preetho exclaimed.


“Poor Arnavji,” Payal muttered.


“You can’t even whisper sweet nothings in his ear?” Preetho chided her. “He is away from you and you can’t even talk lovingly to him? Even fifth standard girls do better with their boyfriends.”


“You could have told him that you missed him, Khushi,” Payal rebuked her. “You do, don’t you? You spent all of last night twisting and turning in bed, your face looks as though a bee stung you and you have no appetite. Then why couldn’t you tell him you wanted to see him?”


Words trembled on Khushi’s lips, never to be uttered.


“Girls, here, have some sherbet,” Preetho’s mother entered the room with a tray in her hands.


The moment was lost. Khushi sank into her thoughts of her husband and her marriage as the other three talked cheerfully about the coming nuptials.




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Khushi lay in bed, eyes wide open, staring at the ceiling.
What was Arnavji doing now? She wondered. She turned her head and looked at the clock.


One at night.


She sat up, angry with herself. ‘What will he be doing at one, Khushi? Sitting up and praying for you? Get a hold on yourself. If you think about Arnavji all night and wake up with a heavy head, you will have no one to blame except yourself,’ she told herself.


But her heart strayed towards him. His eyes that had looked at her on Teej night had a fire in it, turning the chocolate brown into the colour of hot honey...


“Khushi, kya hua?” Payal muttered sleepily, sitting up.


“Fire,” Khushi murmured.


“Kahan?” Payal sat up, her big eyes widening to their full proportion.


“Nothing, Jiji,” Khushi muttered, her face turning red. She dived into bed and pulled the covers over her head.


“This girl will be the end of me,” Payal grumbled as she settled down to sleep.




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Ladies were inspecting Preetho’s new clothes stitched for her wedding, her jewellery and finery. They teased Preetho and made fun of her groom. All laughed as Preetho blushed.


Khushi sat quietly in a corner.


Soon the jokes ended and the ladies began to sing old wedding songs, clapping their hands in time to music.


Khushi leaned back against the wall, letting her head loll. She had a headache; her eyes hurt. But Arnavji’s face was in her head 24x7. What could she do?


She shut her eyes.


She saw in her mind his tense face as he had caught her hand in his and walked and ran through the forest, his alert eyes looking for their killers, his protective stance, his warm, caring touch, the way he had handed over his coat to her, the gentle touch of his hands as he had removed her small bangles from her arms, the warmth of his hard body as they huddled together in the cave, the way he had carried her across the mire, his arms forming a safe cradle for her, how he had refused to go on without her, how he had carried her to the nearest town...


“Why is our bandariya looking tired and gloomy?” Kamla chachi asked, ruffling Khushi’s hair.


“Nothing, Kamla chachi,” she smiled.


“Is there any achi khabar, Madhumatiji?” Kamla chachi asked.


Khushi blushed. Payal was no less red.


Buaji laughed. “No, Kamla,” she said. “Give them time.”


“Let me know, Khussi,” Kamla chachi said smiling at her. “I will leave mango pieces on my terrace to dry.”


Khushi nodded, feeling a total fraud. If only Arnavji were here with her!





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HP came to collect the tray of food he had left in Arnav’s room, only to find that it was untouched.


He looked at Arnav working on his laptop and said timidly, “Arnav bhaiyya, you haven’t eaten anything.”


Arnav lifted his head to look at HP. “I am not hungry, HP,” he said softly before lowering his eyes to his laptop.


“Arnav bhaiyya,” HP called. “I made dal just like Khushi bhabhi makes.”


Arnav swallowed hard.


“I am not hungry, HP,” he repeated softly.


“When will Khushi bhabhi return?” HP was forced to ask. Arnav bhaiyya had lost weight. His face had become lean, there were hollows in his cheeks. His eyes had circles beneath them and his cheekbones were prominent.




“By the end of this week,” Arnav said hopefully.


HP nodded and left with the tray, counting the days in his head. If only the week ended soon!




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Khushi slipped into exhausted sleep, her body too tired to keep up with the punishing schedule she had put it through.


She saw his eyes light up as she walked to join him on Teej, his eyes roving over her in the lehenga choli he had gifted her.


Her fingers tightened around the edge of her blanket.


She felt his body crowding her, pulling her into its safe warmth, his mouth touching her forehead, her eyes, her nose, her cheeks...and then her lips.


Khushi shivered in her bed.


She felt him pulling her closer against his hard length, felt his lips press more confidently against hers, felt them suck at her curves, tasted him in her mouth... A wild longing raged like fire within her.







Her arms reached out to hold him close but could feel only air.


She jumped up, her eyes wild. Where was Arnavji?


She looked around. Her bedroom in Lucknow. Her Jiji sleeping by her side.


Khushi buried her head in her hands. Arnavji, Arnavji, her heart chanted.






                                              ***






Arnav called Khushi.


“Khushi, when will you return?” he asked bluntly, fed up, exhausted, desperate to see her.


Khushi swallowed. “Preetho’s wedding is on Sunday morning. We were thinking of returning on Monday or Tuesday,” she said softly.


He saw red. The dam of his patience broke. “I will send Mohan on Sunday, Khushi,” he ruled. “Return as soon as the wedding is over.”


“Arnavji...” she protested weakly, shocked.


“No more excuses, Khushi. I miss you like crazy. Do you know how hard it has been to sleep in our bed without you?” he fumed.


She listened to him, speechless. Arnavji too? He was feeling as lost as she was?


“You are never leaving me again. Got it, Khushi? If you want to go to Lucknow, then I will accompany you. If I have to travel, you will come with me. Bas,” he put his foot down.


She drew in air to calm her excitement. “Are you sure?” Khushi asked, worried. “Woh kya he, if I become a real wife, I will be a very inconvenient and cumbersome wife as well.”


“What have I been telling you for days, Khushi? I want you as my wife, inconvenient, real, complicated, cumbersome, difficult—whatever. Got it?” he bellowed.


“Ji,” she acquiesced, shocked at his words and the depth of emotion behind them.


“Sunday noon, Khushi,” he warned. “No more excuses.”


“Ji, I will be ready,” Khushi replied, feeling a trickle of happiness seep into her heart.






“And call me daily,” he ordered.


“Ji?” she asked in wonder.


“Call me daily. Tell me how you spend the day, how you feel, your dreams. Don’t cut the call after asking if I had breakfast or lunch or dinner,” he decreed.


“Ji,” she flushed.


“Do you know what I would do if you were before me right now, Khushi?” he asked, his voice sounding dangerously exciting.


“Kya?” she asked bravely. There were kilometres separating them. She could afford to be brave.


“Hug you and kiss you, Khushi, till all thoughts flee your mind and you can think only of me,” he proclaimed.


Khushi blushed. “Arnavji,” she cried. Her dreams and his desire seemed one and the same.


“We are married, Khushi. I am your husband and you are my wife. You have full right over me, Khushi. It is your haq to own all of me. Samjhi tum?” he asked.


Khushi nodded with difficulty.


“You can tell me anything, ask me anything, Khushi. That is why I told you how much I am missing you,” he explained.


“Ji,” she stammered.


“Khushi,” he said seriously. “I am just getting the hang of what a marriage is all about. We will learn together, get there one day, after making a hundred mistakes on the way.”


She nodded vigorously, relieved.


“Khushi, are you missing me?’ he asked openly.


“Y..yess,” she admitted.


Peace flooded his heart.


“Good,” he said outrageously. “You were the one who wanted to go away from me. I never wanted you to leave me. Now miss me.”


Khushi pursed her lips. “Arnavji,” she protested. “You are a big tease.”


“You are no better, my dear patni. We are well suited. See you on Sunday. Till then think of the kiss I am going to give you when we meet,” he said, his very voice sending tingles down her spine.






Part 15














129 comments:

  1. Yeah I am the first one. I have been stalking you Smita to see if there was any update. I had to know how Arnav was going to get out the new situation he created for himself.Poor guy. He needs a break badly!!! He wants just "me" time with his wife and now she is off to Lucknow. OMG! he is going to go through so much misery. But I love this story and all your others too.

    Hydsri

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    1. Aag donon taraf lage ho to mazaa aata he.

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  2. Awww!!!! This is going to be one lambi Judaii

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  3. Poor ASR. He is already all lost due to the fact that he has bichadofied from his Khushi. Smita dear please don't make this a very lambi Judai.

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  4. Aap ne ye acha nehi kiya. Bichare Arnav ko khushi se ek hafte ke liye door kar diya. Poor he Khuhsi ko miss karke 7 din mein 7kg lose kar dega.

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    1. New weight loss secret! Judai! But jokes apart, let them know how much they care.

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    2. Aree wah kya secret hai? Kya pyaar hai!?

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  5. Awesome uodate Smitha!!! Poor Arnav let us see if he will be able to stay without Khushi or he will go running to Lucknow, waiting eagerly for your next update!!!

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  6. Nice update.. I think Arnav is going to go to Lucknow and shock Khushi... waiting for the next update...

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  7. What a lovely story. Loved how Arnav is showing his love and trying to rectify his mistake about his uncomplicated wife.

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  8. wow brilliant update loved it can't wait to read next part thank you.........................ameena671

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  9. I have been loving your updates- sorry work was busy so on occasion unable to leave comments - bechara Arnav ...his declaration of wanting Khushi to be his wife in every sense has resulted in her going away for a while.. I do wonder is Aman is Preeto's dulha?? And will this bring Arnav to Lucknow to his wife !!

    Sita

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  10. How sad hope he follows them to Lucknow

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  12. Awesome chapter........Oh no.........they just started and now this distance between them...........how is Arnav going to handle this.......

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  13. Awwww- Bechara Arnav! Smita, Arnav ko itna kyun tadpade?? Haan mein manti hoon k usko "uncomplicated wife" chahiye tha- magar usko ehsaas aagaya k woh ghalat decision tha aur woh sudar gaya :) aur woh bhi boht tezi se.

    Hope this judaai isn't for too long- otherwise Arnav will become a lovesick romeo! :D Also hope that Khushi avails Arnav's offer of help- shayad uss wajey se woh dono ko milne ka mauqa milega. Mujhe yakheen hai k Arnav pakka koi bhi bahaney ka faida utahyega! Akhir uska shaatir dimaag jo hai :D

    Hope to see the next update soon!

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  14. Oh... Arnav and khushi's judaai... Please don't let Arnav wait for long...
    Nice update
    Can't wait for the next update

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  15. I sighed too... Our poor Arnav, DM is also testing him. Poor soul. I am sure Arnav will some how land at his sasural, he will be forced by his heart to do so.......

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  16. Awesome update
    Kya baat hai
    Poor Arnav bitwaa, with bhuriya gone, ab ziyada angriya tu nahin honge? :p
    I think he'll leave for Lucknow day after tomorrow as he won't be able to stay without khushi
    What say Smita? :p

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  17. Awww... Poor Arnav. I guess he will soon follow her.

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  18. Feeling bad for Arnav.......Lovely update.......:)

    Absence makes the heart grow fonder.....!!

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  19. Awwwww.... That's so sad.... Hope there will be more surprises!

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  20. Smita ji, yeh kya Milne se pehle hi judaa kar diya !!

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  21. Dushman na kare Buaji ne woh kaam kiya hai....kitne din ka gham unhe inaam diya hai ?..

    Bahut budhiya Update smitaji.
    Arnav babua iss judai ke mausam mein kaunsa sing a song karega ? Socho NK...


    Koi baat nahi..hum haina..lol

    " yaad aa rahi hai, Teri yaad aa rahi hai,..
    Yaad aane se ..tere jaane se haan ja rahi hai.."

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    1. Then Khushi breaking into ...bole re pappi hara, pappi hara.... Is it? ;)

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    2. Or may be ...Piya basanti re ....kaahe sataaye aaja......

      Bedardi baalma tujko mera Mann yaad karta hai...

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    3. O mere Pappi saiya...tu aaja ab na tarsa... ;) lol

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  22. Very interesting... Arnav has to wait still to woo his wife..hahahhaa..nice...bahut uncomplicated wife chahiye thi na Ab thodi judai to banti hai..why do I have a feeling that he ll run after khushi to Lucknow to catch her glimpse... Hahahaha...very nice update and interesting situation...gud luck to u smita ji

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  23. Awww poor baby
    He just had the chance to be with her
    And now she is gone for a while
    How will he cope without her
    Lost he already is without her
    Awww be didn't want her to go
    But couldn't say no
    Neither could aki for payal
    Hope both brothers won't become devdas
    But would be funny to see
    Awww khushi internal debate was funny
    How does it happen to her man
    Wonder what arnav will be like for a week now
    Wow he loves her so
    It's good to see
    Buaji ko bhi abhi aana tha
    But it was her best friend wedding so she would have gone
    Well he knows more about his wife

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  24. ooohhh... char dino ka pyar aur lambi judaii... bahut nainsafi hai smita dear... ;)

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  25. Lovely update...
    Let arnav follow khushi and go to lucknow....

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  26. Lovely update...
    Let arnav follow khushi and go to lucknow....

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  27. Wonder how his going to cope.....but in some ways it will make them stronger. Can't wait for the next update.

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  28. Mind blowing updated. Can't explain in word .

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  29. Awesome update Smita. Ab Sunday kab ayega for the big kiss. I will be waiting in anticipation for next update:-)

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  30. Smita....
    When they meet again on Sunday is it in rainy season...???
    If so then its...
    O sajana, barakha bahaara aai.... ;)

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    1. And Jab they will meet...

      Albeli naar pritam dwaare....

      Very beautiful update Smitaji.

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    2. Ha..ha.. nahi, no rain. Lekin lots of lights, music, diye.

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    4. Then by the time she reaches Delhi it will be night....
      Mohan is not ASR to drive at high speed....

      So...

      Yeh raaten, yeh mausam, pool ke kinaara, yeh chanchal hawa
      Kaha do dilon ne, ke milkar kabhi hum na honge judaa....

      Hai na??? Bolo bolo... ;)

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    5. Perfect! ...ke milkar kabhi hum na honge judaa....

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    6. Reshu agar mohan ki jagah ASR jaaye toh...kaunsa gaana hoga !????

      Chala jaata hoon kisi ki dhoon mein ,
      Dhadke dil ke taraane liye...

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    7. Hetal if that is the case.... then when Arnav is speeding...
      Khushi can sing
      Ruk ruk ruk ruk.......
      Ruk ruk ruk arey baba ruk, o my darling give me a luk...
      Dil meraa dhadake tere liye, dil meraa tadape tere liye...
      Gussa teraa wallah wallah, nakhre tere uff uff uff
      Love love love love tumse love huwa..
      Ruk ruk ruk ruk.......

      Once they reach RM and by pool side...
      Arnav can sing...

      Roop tera mastaana pyaar mera diwaana
      bhuul koi hamse naa ho jaaye...

      raat nashili mast samaan hai

      Raat nashili mast samaan hai
      aaj nashe mein saaraa jahaan hai
      aaye sharaabi mausam bahakaaye ....;)

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    8. Aree Reshu...Arnav gaayega...pool side pe apni woh ke liye...

      Saath ho tum aur raat jawaa,
      Nind kise ab chain kahaa ?
      Kuchh toh samaj e bhole sanam...
      Kehti hai kya nazro ki zuba...

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    9. Hetal... continuing it with....

      Raat Baaki, Baat Baaki
      Hona Hai Jo Ho Jaane Do
      Socho Na Dekho To
      Dekho Haan Jaane-Jaa
      Mujhse Pyaar Se...;)

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    10. Reshu...

      Raat akeli hai..
      Booj gaye diye..
      Aake mere paas,
      Kaano mein mere ..jo bhi chaahe kahiye...jo bhi chaahe kahiye. ;)

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  31. Smitaji....
    Lovely ...update.
    Oh he confessed..I miss you. Buddhu pati of sanki Khushi...agar woh nahi chaahte tha toh jaane kyo diya....but jo hua achchha hi hua aakhir dono ko pata chala ki dono ek dusare ko kitna miss karte hai....

    Waise aaj aapne mera Sunday bana diya...
    Lovely Sunday evening,
    Arshi ka pagal prem...
    Aur saath mein poorane nagme..." Na toh karwan kitalaash hai..na toh humsafar ki talaash hai.."

    "Zulfon ki ghata lekar saavan ki pari aayi..."

    Waiting eagerly for the next part.

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  32. Zulfon ki ghata lekar
    Sawan ki pari aayi
    Zulfon ki ghata lekar
    Sawan ki pari aayi
    Barsegi tere dil par
    Has has ke jo lehrayi
    Barsegi tere dil par
    Has has ke jo lehrayi
    Zulfon ki ghata lekar

    Machle huye is dil mein
    Armaan hazaro hai
    Machle huye is dil mein
    Armaan hazaro hai
    In pyasi nigaho mein
    Toofan hazaro hai
    In pyasi nigaho mein
    Toofan hazaro hai
    Tujhse na bichadne ki
    Tujhse na bichadne ki
    Is dil ne kasam khayi
    Zulfon ki ghata lekar

    Aati to aankho mein
    Bijli si chamakti hai
    Aati to aankho mein
    Bijli si chamakti hai
    Shayad yeh mohabbat hai
    Aankho se chhalakti hai
    Shayad yeh mohabbat hai
    Aankho se chhalakti hai
    Todu na tera daman
    Todu na tera daman
    Main hu tera saudayi
    Barsegi tere dil par
    Has has ke jo lehrayi
    Barsegi tere dil par
    Has has ke jo lehrayi
    Zulfon ki ghata lekar

    Surkhi hai mohabbat ki
    In phul se galo mein
    Surkhi hai mohabbat ki
    In phul se galo mein
    Kya chiz main layi hu
    In aankho ke pyalo mein
    Kya chiz main layi hu
    In aankho ke pyalo mein
    Aa tujhko bata du main
    Aa tujhko bata du main
    Aye husn ke saudayi
    Zulfon ki ghata lekar
    Sawan ki pari aayi
    Barsegi tere dil par
    Has has ke jo lehrayi
    Zulfon ki ghata lekar.


    Ek chhotu sa tohfa for you... ;)

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  33. Its superb update... I loves the way arnav in his missing khushi cleared her all doubts and almost confessed to her...very interesting...they both are missing each other badly...Ab wapas Milne main maja ayega...let's see what happens..amazing and very good update.. Gud luck to u smita Ji and thanks for a wonderful update

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  34. nice update. finally his confession. can't wait for the next update.

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  35. That was a cute update you shown their inner feelings for each other beautifully ,

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  36. Simply superb.
    Both khushi and arnav are missing each other terribly. It's good that arnav has confessed his feelings. He is not going to leave khushi once she returns from the wedding.
    Continue soon

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  37. Lovely update
    Arshi missing each other terribly
    Can't wait for the next update

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  38. Simply now words for this update Smita!!! LOVED IT!!!

    I'm beyond happy that Romeo Arnav confessed his feelings and FINALLY said the he missed her!!! **does happy dance*** and Khushi was no less!

    I'm now in eager anticipation of that promised kiss!! <3

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  39. I loved to see both Arnav and Khushi reflecting on the extraordinary circumstances surrounding their marriage.

    Arnav finally realising that the marriage he had looked upon as a chore to be completed so that he could give undivided attention to his work, was in fact a very critical moment of her life. She had to leave her friends, family, her familiar surroundings and enter into matrimony with a complete stranger. She might as well have married a martian! (BTW, wonder how "what the.." sounds in martian lingo. :P)
    Her entire life as she knew it changed in the blink of an eye. He had completely overlooked her dreams and aspirations. Even under normal circumstances marriage brings a drastic change in a girl's life. And here she was tied to a man who had honestly but blatantly confessed to having gone through with the wedding only at his family's insistence. And yet she had taken it all in her stride and reconciled to the situation. That, right there is gonna make him love her even more.

    Awww, our Khushi finally got the love bug!! Or she's atleast caught the miss-him-want-him-ache-for-him-itch-for-him bug. :-D

    “Call me when you want to return. Hum khushi khushi aayenge to take you back to Arnav bhaiyya.” Mohan, aren't you a sweetheart!! Of course, you would drive khushi khushi, even in the dead of night to bring Khushi bhabhi back, if it makes your Arnav bhaiyya less virulent and explosive!!

    Loved ASR's phone confession. When he decides to pour his heart out, he goes beyond measure, doesn't he?!? "Hug you and kiss you, Khushi....." aaannnnddd .... ahem ahem...
    Oh come on, ASR get on with it. Isn't it khush khabari time, Smi??? ;-)

    So basically, moral of updates 13 & 14 is as follows.

    Absence makes the heart grow fonder. Apparently it also helps you lose weight and gives you time and space to mull over things!!
    What say Smi, let's book a 3 day package, in the coming week, at Rotorua Day Spa. Just the two of us. Imagine 3 days of culinary delights, massages and mud baths. We can use some solitude and pampering. Weight loss ki aisi ki taisi :P

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      Desperation made Arnav spill his heart out. Dekhte hein kya hota he ab.

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  40. Part 13/14
    Loved both the parts..as always. :) Buaji's request was a shock on our poor Raizada's dilwa..lolss taking thre brides away from them. Now Arnav ji knows about Khushi..he was polite with her nd "ASR" with Mohan..lolsss thts his style of expressing tht he cares..by almost giving dhamki to mohan..
    Part 14 Our Khushi ji has lost her dilwa nd doesnt know..hehe..but now i guess she knws tht both of thm are in Love..!!
    loved Arshi's convo..only Arnav ji can be so blunt nd to the point in love too..!!
    Waiting for the promised kissiesss... ;)

    Isha

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  41. Dekha... dekha... kaha tha na ki bichara arnav weight lose karega... bichara pura dubla patla ho gaya hai...
    aur bichari humari phool si khushi woh bi kitni khoi khoi si hai...
    yeh sunday afternoon kab ayega... tab jake woh apne arnavji ke paas wapas jayegi,,,
    waiting... update soon.

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    1. Soon update karna he to mujhe bribe dena hoga. Poems likho, film songs gao about Arnav & Khushi. Follow Hetal!!!!!!

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    2. Hetalji genius hai... hum kahan unke jaise ho payenge...
      lekin kosish karenge ek song likhne ki.
      jab likh lenge to post bhi kar denge.

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  42. Aa gaya Arnav track pe! I can only think of one song... Saari raat besharmi ki hieghts!

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  43. wow superb updates loved part 13 and 14 can't wait for next part thank you..................ameena671

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    1. Poetry likho, dear, if you want an update before Friday..ha..ha..Film songs bhi chalega.

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    2. Already done Smitaji.... Ab update please ;)

      Aap check kar sakti ho...

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    3. Haiku chalega? Lemme give it a shot. Any haiku lovers or writers out here, please forgive me, cos I know not what I am doing!!

      Ok, so here I go.

      On a warm July evening
      with tiny raindrops pattering on my windows
      I ask for an update
      ;-)

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    4. chalega kya, daudega!

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  44. Absolutely loved part 13 and 14 Smita. One song looking at Arnav's intezar...

    Ye sama sama hai ye pyaar ka kisike intezar ka.

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  45. Awesome part 14...........both are missing each other........I am so happy that Arnav expressed his feelings...........

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  46. Smitaji....
    Aaona...ek update dedona...lagi bujaadona...O darling ji....
    Tumne jo agan lagaai hai.....

    Bas hum aage kuchh nahi likhenge....

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  47. Viji's contribution:

    Kya kahe kuch kaha nahi jaata,
    Dard milta he par saha nahi jaata
    Pyaar ho gaya kuch iskadar aapse,
    Bina Disturb kiye mujhse raha nahi jaata.....

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    1. Wah! Kya baat hai! Dekha Smi, sabke andar ka kalaakaar jag raha hai!
      Smita's readers've Got Talent!

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  48. O mere...
    dil ke chain....
    chain aaye mere dil ko dua keejiye....

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    1. Update bina, jiya jaayena
      update bina jiya jaayena,
      bin tere update ke, O Smitaaaa..
      saans me saans aayena.. ;-)

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  49. Arnav: Tujhe dekh dekh sona,
    Tujhe dekh kar hain jagna,
    Maine yeh zindagani
    Sang tere bitaani,
    Tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai,

    Jiya dhadak dhadak Jaayen

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    1. Khushi:Hum dil de chuke sanam,
      tere ho gaye hai hum...
      teri kasam, teri kasam.

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    2. yeh kya hua kaise hua
      kab hua kyon hua
      jab hua tab hua
      arre chorro yeh na soccho

      :o)

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    3. Do shaiyir!!!! wah wah!

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  50. Hey Smita, loved part 14. One song for Arnav: Dard-e-dil dard-e-jigar dil mein jagaya aapne

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    1. V.true! Arnav was hit by her love when he least expected it!

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  51. Aapke Arnav babua kuchh iss prakaar ke hai....

    Dil vil pyar vyar mein kya jaanu re,
    Jaanu toh jaanu ki bas itna ki mein ..tumne chumna chaahu re....

    Aur uski dhamki bhi kuchh aisi hai....

    Intzaar ke ik ik pal badla lunga.... ;)

    Shabbakhair Smitaji.. Hope to see you soon with the next update...

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    2. Aww so Smitaji ab kya hoga ?
      Sweta aap ko sorry ...dil se sachchi

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    3. Ha..ha..bribe accepted.

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  52. Ishq hua... Kaise hua... Jaise hua.. Achha hua... Na main jaanu na tu jaane... Him ho gaye kyun deewane..?? ;)

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  53. loved the update so cute loved how both were missing each other loved Arnav telling her he won't let her go without him again.

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  54. o neend na mujh ko aae, dil mera ghabaraae chup ke chup ke, koi aa ke, soya pyaar jagaae

    soya hua sansaar hai, soya hua sansaar main jaagun yahaan, tu jaage vahaan, ek dil men dard dabaae

    main hun yahaan beqaraar tu hai vahaan beqaraar main gaaun yahaan tu gaaye vahaan dil ko dil bahalaae

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    1. Puchho na kaise Maine rein bitaayi,
      Ik pal jaise ik yug bita...jug bite mohe nind na aayi...

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    2. Mast. Ye lo,

      Chaandani raatein, chaandani raatein,
      Sab jag soye hum jaage, taaron se karein baatein
      Ho o o o o chaandani raatein... chaandani raatein...

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  55. So close, I was waiting, waiting here for you
    And now, forever I know all that I wanted.
    To hold you, So close...
    So close to reaching the famous happy end
    Almost believing this was not pretend
    Now you're beside me and look how far we hv come....
    So far, we are so close.

    Oh, how could I face the faceless days
    if I should lose you now....
    We're so close to reaching the famous happy end,
    almost believing this one's not pretend.
    Let's go on dreaming for we know we are.... so close.
    So close and still so far. :)

    Love this song, Smi.
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ad7ejBn3KSQ

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    1. SEAL KIss from a Rose

      There used to be a graying tower alone on the sea.
      You became the light on the dark side of me.
      Love remained a drug that's the high and not the pill.
      But did you know,
      That when it snows,
      My eyes become large and
      The light that you shine can be seen.
      Baby,
      I compare you to a kiss from a rose on the gray.
      Ooh,
      The more I get of you,
      The stranger it feels, yeah.
      And now that your rose is in bloom.
      A light hits the gloom on the gray.
      There is so much a man can tell you,
      So much he can say.
      You remain,
      My power, my pleasure, my pain, baby
      To me you're like a growing addiction that I can't deny.
      Won't you tell me is that healthy, baby?
      But did you know,
      That when it snows,
      My eyes become large and the light that you shine can be seen.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AMD2TwRvuoU

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  56. Lively part Smita. Both are missing each other like crazy. I have to applaud arnav for confessing this first. Finally he realized and ordered khushi to come back to him at the earliest :-). And that to he will be waiting to kiss her ,,. Nice part. I liked it.

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  57. i love this arnav, who is not afraid of of confessing first

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  58. Awww.. I loved the update...
    Smita..
    u surprise me with the simplicity of emotions.. love,attraction,jealousy,happiness..

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  59. Here is another one
    Mujhe neend na aaye, mujhe chain na aaye,na jane kahan dil kho gaya. ....

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  60. अर्ज़ किया है -👌
    महफ़िल में हमारे जूते खो
    गये तो हम घर कैसे जायेंगे ?
    महफ़िल में हमारे जूते खो
    गये तो हम घर कैसे जायेंगे ?
    किसी ने कहा-"आप शायरी तो
    शुरू कीजिए
    इतने मिलेंगे कि आप गिन नहीं पायेंगे "

    Credit: Benarsi Masti ke Benarsiwaale

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  61. Wah Wah!!
    Waise koi bhi mehfil Ghalib ki shayari ke bina adhoori hai. To yeh lo.

    Ghalib:
    Humein to apno ne luta,
    Gairon mein kahan dum tha.
    Hamari kashti wahan doobi,
    Jahan paani kam tha.

    Ghalib's wife:
    Tum to the hi gadhe,
    tumhare bheje me kahan dum tha
    wahan kashti leke gaye hi kyun,
    Jahan paani kam tha.

    Credit to a friend who pinged me this brilliant piece, right before I was trying to fall asleep!!

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  62. Smitaji.. Imtiha ho gayi intezar ki..aayi na kuchh khabar pyari update ki...yeh humein hai yaki ...bewafa aap nahi...phir wajah kya hui...

    Eagerly waiting..

    Next installment ...

    Wada karle janeja mere bin tu na rahe tere bin mai rahu , na honge jooda....yeh wada raha....

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  63. Wow man
    This was explosive
    They miss one another. So much
    Neend udd gayi chain lutt gaya
    And they want the other in front of them
    Good arnav you told her to come
    She was .missing you too
    No more stuck in limbo
    Time to move forward
    The way he said to her that she is coming back to him as he is missing her haiyye
    Kya baat hai
    He has big plans for her
    Preeto kya karein she is confused if she should romance with him or not
    Though she wants to
    But guess isn't sure how
    Let the romance commence
    With their passion its bound to burn all

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