Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
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Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi
"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
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Part 15
“Arnavji, I
am going to Preetho’s sangeet,” Khushi announced over the phone.
“Really?”
came the reply. “What are you wearing?”
She
frowned. Why was he asking about her clothes? “A peach lehenga and golden
blouse,” she explained. “The dupatta is peach with golden peacock design.”
“Is the
choli long or short?” he asked.
“The
choli?” she asked in confusion. “Short. Why?”
“How short?
Can I see your waist through the dupatta?” he asked, his voice husky.
Khushi
blushed. “You are besharam, behaya!” she exclaimed.
“Haq he
mera,” he claimed. “Pati jo hun tumhara.”
“Arnavji,
you...” she was lost for words.
“Khushi,
don’t forget to wear sindoor,” he reminded her. “And don’t let the dupatta hide
your mangalsutra. I want everyone there to know that you are married to me.”
Khushi
burst out laughing. “Shall I write your name on my forehead?” she asked.
“Yes,” he
agreed with alacrity.
“Aap bhi
na!” she teased. “The hall will be filled with uncles and aunts and kids I have
known all my life. I am sure all of them were present at our wedding,” she
laughed.
“Good,” he
heaved a sigh of relief.
***
“How was
the sangeet?” he asked.
Khushi
yawned. “Fun,” she replied. “We danced to London Thumakda, Chunari Chunari...”
she yawned again.
Arnav
smiled.
“When you
come to Shantivan, Khushi, I am going to make you dance. Just for me. In your
peach lehenga and choli, but without the dupatta,” he murmured.
“Awww,” she
covered her open mouth with her hand. “You are so shameless, Arnavji!” she
exclaimed in astonishment.
“Abhi pata
chala? After we have been married for two months?” he asked, a smile in his
voice. “That is soooooo bad, Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada!”
Khushi
pouted. “How could I know what you really were? You were so distant!”
“Distant?
Me?” Arnav asked outraged. “Who was it who wanted to sleep with Di every night?
Who ran away to Lucknow?”
“Me,” she
admitted in a low voice, penitent.
Arnav
melted. “It is alright, Khushi. We have a full lifetime to know each other,” he
comforted her.
“Ji,” she
smiled, the smile distorted by a yawn.
Arnav
smiled. “Go to sleep, my dancing queen,” he said softly.
Khushi
slipped into bed, holding the phone to her ear.
“Arnavji,
phone mat rakhiye,” she requested.
“No, I
won’t,” he promised, a smile on his lips as he settled his head comfortably on
her pillow.
“Are you in
bed?” she asked.
“Yes,” he
replied. “I am using your pillow,” he said in a low voice. “It makes me feel
you are here with me.”
Khushi
sighed. “I thought you wanted a wife who wouldn’t nag you, disturb you. That’s
why I stayed away from you,” she confessed.
“I had no
idea what marriage entailed, Khushi, when I nodded my agreement to marry you.
That was stupid, Khushi, dangerously so. Even more awful was describing my
expectations from marriage to you. You must have been shocked?” he asked,
anxious.
“Disappointed,”
Khushi admitted. “I thought—I thought maybe...”
“Maybe?” he
asked, feeling like he had inadvertently hurt a puppy.
“Maybe I
would—no, it doesn’t matter. It is ingratitude to want more,” she concluded.
“Ingratitude?”
he frowned. “Khushi, talk to me.”
“It is
nothing, Arnavji,” she shrugged. “Just a thought that passed through my head.
That’s all.”
“Khushi,
what did I tell you about our marriage? You can tell me anything. I can tell
you anything,” he said softly, shutting his eyes in self-disgust.
“It is not
important,” Khushi said slowly. “Just that—I hoped that when I married, I would
find someone who would want to—want to be a family with me. Matlab, my husband
would be really related to me, bound to me. It wouldn’t be charity or kindness.
It would be a real bond...bas yahi tha. It is nothing.”
Arnav
couldn’t find a reply to her simple words.
“Today was
nice, Arnavji,” she moved on without waiting for a reply. “All were happy at
the sangeet. Vikas and his parents came to join Preetho and her family. They
look very nice together, Arnavji, very happy. They were talking and laughing.
The ladies were teasing her saying that she looked eager to be leaving us and
going to Vikas’ house,” she said smiling, her eyes shut.
Arnav
swallowed. How had Khushi felt on their wedding day, marrying an unseen stranger
for her sister and moving away to Delhi?
“I felt sad
for a moment, thinking of Preetho leaving us. Then Buaji reminded me that I
will be in Delhi anyway. So what is the use of keeping Preetho here?” Khushi
chuckled.
Arnav
smiled slightly.
“We are
lucky, Arnavji,” she said softly, her words slurred due to sleep. “Lucky to be
alive, lucky to be together. I am lucky it was you. Had it been another man,
maybe I...” her voice trailed away.
He had to
blink to clear his eyes.
“Go to
sleep, Khushi,” he said hoarsely. “Tomorrow is mehendi, right.”
“Ji,” she
replied, half-asleep. “Shubh ratri.”
“Good
night,” he wished.
Part 16
“How was
mehendi, Khushi?” he asked with a smile.
HP stole a
look at Arnav’s smiling face as he placed dinner on the low table.
“Nice,
Arnavji. My hands, arms and legs are covered with the design. The ladies sang
and teased Preetho,” Khushi said smiling. “By the time she gets to Vikas’
house, if the ladies have their way, she will resemble a tomato. A very ripe
one. Her cheeks were so red,” she chuckled, remembering her friend’s fate.
Arnav lay
back on his recliner, his face relaxed, an amused smile stretching his lips.
HP smiled
secretly as he left the room. Arnav bhaiyya would eat dinner tonight, he
thought.
***
“Arnav
bhaiyya,” Mohan spoke as he parked Arnav’s car before his office.
Arnav
looked at him in enquiry.
“When
should I go to Lucknow to bring back Khushi bhabhi?” he asked timidly.
Arnav
opened his mouth to reply that he had to go on Sunday, but thought better of
it. A long moment later he said, “I will let you know.”
“Ji,” Mohan
replied.
***
Khushi
combed her hair, lost in dreams.
What would he
do if Arnavji were in the room with her? Would he take the brush from her hand
and comb her hair for her? Would he drop a kiss on her ear, sending her earring
moving?
She
blushed.
She had
lived with him in one room for two months. But she had learned more about the
man her husband was after leaving him in Delhi and coming to Lucknow.
He was no
staid businessman. Yes, he was staid at times and a businessman always, she
corrected herself. Lekin he was more than that. She blushed again.
He was
naughty, devilishly so.
But you are
no less, Khushi, she taunted herself. You like it when he tells you wicked
things, threatens to hug and kiss you...
“Khushi,
kya hua?” Payal asked. “Your face is pink. Did you go out in the sun?”
“No, Jiji,”
Khushi mumbled. “I am fine.”
“Do you
want my kadda, Titliya?” Buaji asked. “It will take care of all your illnesses,
Nandkisore.”
“No, buaji,”
Khushi replied sedately.
There was
no kadda that could obliterate the effect of Arnavji and his roguish tongue
from her heart, she thought.
***
“Chotey,
when will Payaliya and Khussi bitiya return?” Nani asked impatiently, pushing
away her plate. “The house seems empty without them.”
Mami
chuckled. “Both of them are gaay, cowzzz. Both silent, doing work chupke
chupke. But when they are not here, it feels ajeeb ajeeb,” she agreed.
“Poor Amma,
babuji and buaji,” Anjali pouted. “How sad they must have felt when they
married off both daughters at the same time.”
Arnav bit
back a smile. It was time to scare Nani. “But I thought you said that the
Guptas insisted on getting both Payal and Khushi married off at the same time?”
he asked, painting a frown on his face to agitate his family.
Nani
gasped. Mami jumped. Anjali stared at him, all flustered.
“Chotey,”
Anjali stammered, recovering first from the blow.
Arnav
looked at her, appearing mildly confused. Akash looked at the two parties with
mild curiosity.
“Yes, yes,
they did,” Nani mumbled.
“They
wanted to marry off the two girlswaa, Arnav bitwaa,” Mami tried to save the
situation. “But parents he to bura to lagega, kyon Saasuma?”
“Yes,” Nani
tried her hand at firefighting. “Any parent with two girls to marry off will be
eager to conduct the ceremonies together, want them to marry into the same
house, Chotey and be happy together. Isme kono aashcharya ki baat nahi he.”
Arnav
looked at them as though he were not fully convinced.
The Raizada
ladies held their breath, looking anxious and terrified.
He decided
to put them out of misery. He shrugged and said, “Alright.”
The ladies
heaved a collective sigh of relief that
sent the petals of the flowers in the vase on the table fluttering.
Arnav bent
his head to hide his enjoyment of the situation. If only Khushi were here with
him, he thought with a pang as he usually did a thousand times every day. She
would enjoy the humour of the incident.
“When will
Mohanji go to get Payalji and Khushiji?” Anjali asked Arnav.
“Sunday,”
Arnav replied.
“Will you
inform him or should I, bhai?” Akash asked.
“I will,”
Arnav replied.
***
On Saturday
night, Khushi and Payal returned from the party at Preetho’s house. Payal shut
the door, sighing wearily.
“How was
the function?” Amma asked with a smile.
“Nice,
amma,” Payal replied. “But the house was too crowded. There was no place to
stand.”
“But
Preetho was happy to see all of us,” Khushi said. “She began crying and saying
her goodbyes. She stopped only when her mother reminded her that her bidai was
yet to happen,” she chuckled.
All
laughed.
Buaji
asked, “Titliya, when will Arnav bitwaa send the car for you and Payaliya?”
“Tomorrow,
buaji,” Khushi smiled.
“Look at
the happy smile on her face!” Buaji laughed. “She is eager to leave us and go
to her preetam.”
Amma and
babuji smiled.
Khushi
flushed, realising the truth of buaji’s words.
“I will
pack the sweets and pickles I made for you and the Raizadas,” Garima said,
moving to the kitchen.
“Don’t
forget the sarees and suits we bought for Devyaniji and the others, Nandkisore,”
Buaji reminded her.
“Haan,
Jiji,” Garima muttered.
“I will go
and change, amma,” Khushi said as she walked up the steps, her hands holding up
the hem of her yellow lehenga.
“Why is
Akashji not picking up his phone?” Payal frowned as she sat in the living room
and tried his number.
There was a
knock on the door.
“Kaun he, Nandkisore?”
Buaji asked from the kitchen. “Payaliya, see who it is.”
Frowning at
the phone, Payal went to open the door only to stand shell-shocked to see Akash
and her jetji standing at the entrance. Their car was parked in the courtyard.
“Akashhhhji?”
Payal stuttered. “Arnavji?” Joy warred with shock on her face.
“Kaun he,
Payaliya? Is it Preetho’s mother?” Amma asked.
“Amma,
buaji,” Payal called unsteadily. “Arnavji and Akashji have come.” She stood
back to let the men enter the house.
Akash
quickly put his arm around her shoulders and hugged her to him. Payal wanted to
hug him tight and weep, but she desisted exerting great willpower.
Amma,
babuji and buaji came rushing to greet their damadjis.
“Arnav
babua, Akash bitwaa, kaisen ho?” Babuji asked.
The boys
touched his feet. Arnav said, “We are fine. We—we thought it might be safer to
take Payal and Khushi with us rather than make them travel alone with Mohan.”
Only a slight flush betrayed his discomfiture.
Akash’s
eyes glittered with gratitude to his bhai who had refused to let an eager Mohan
take up this pleasurable duty and had insisted that he and Akash do the
honours.
Babuji
opened his mouth to ask how Payal, Khushi and Mohan travelling together in
Arnav’s car could be considered travelling ‘alone’, but was nudged into silence
by buaji.
“Yes, Nandkisore,”
Buaji replied. “Our damadjis are perfectly right. Zamana kharab he. It is
better that the girls return with you.”
“Shall I
serve dinner, bitwa?” Amma asked.
“No, Amma,”
Akash replied. “We had dinner on the way.”
“You must
be tired, Nandkisore,” Buaji said. “Payaliya, take Akash bitwaa to your late
dadi’s bedroom on the ground floor. I will bring the pillows and blankets in a
moment.”
“Yes,
buaji,” Payal murmured as she led Akash away.
“Arnav
bitwaa, Khussi is in her room upstairs. Just go up the steps, Nandkisore. It is
the third door on the right,” Buaji said.
Arnav
nodded and he climbed the stairs to her room, his bag in hand, his heart eager
for a glimpse of his wife.
Arnav found
the room with little difficulty. The door was open and Khushi was seated before
the mirror removing her jewellery.
Sensing
movement near the door, Khushi called, “Jiji?” as she unpinned the dupatta.
Arnav
entered the room, placed his bag on the floor and shut and locked the door.
Khushi
turned her head to look at him and gasped. The dupatta fell from her hands. She
stood up on trembling legs, an ethereal fairy in a yellow chiffon lehenga and
choli with a gold and silver border.
“Khushi,”
Arnav whispered, his eyes running gladly over her delicious form and beautiful
face, his heart galloping in his chest at finally breathing the same air as his
wife.
Slowly
Khushi put one foot before the other and moved towards him, as though not sure
he was not a figment of her imagination.
He held out
a hand.
She ran
towards him, crashing into him, throwing her arms around his shoulders and neck,
weeping and wailing. “Arnavji, you came—I was waiting—why didn’t you tell me?”
“Khushi, I
was going crazy without you,” he confessed.
“Me too,”
she whispered, her lips moving against the taut lines of his neck.
“I love
you, Khushi,” he admitted easily as though he had been saying it since birth.
Khushi
sobbed uncontrollably for a moment, her body moving convulsively against his.
Her arms tightened around him and she breathed, “I love you too, Arnavji. I don’t
want to stay away from you ever again.”
“I won’t
let you, Khushi.” It was a promise. His arms locked her to him, his fingers
touching the bare skin of her back revealed by the low neck of her choli and
the dori.
She moved
closer, her leg between his, her fingers clutching his back to pull him closer
into her.
Arnav lowered
his head to place a kiss on her forehead.
She
reciprocated, lifting herself on her toes to press her lips to his forehead.
He kissed
her left cheek. She responded by caressing his lean cheek with her lips.
“You have
lost weight,” she complained.
“I have become
a devdas in your love,” he muttered against her right cheek.
Khushi
chuckled against his right cheek even as fresh tears coursed down her cheeks.
He kissed away her tears and slowly moved to her lips.
She threw all caution to the winds and
set out to learn how to kiss. She mimicked him, sucking and licking his lips as
he did hers.
Both of
them shuddered with desire.
Her fingers in his hair pulled his head down for more
kisses.
His hands clutched her bare waist and ran up her back to play with her
dori and the hook of her choli.
“Arnavji,”
she invited him to ravish her, her body squirming against him for closer
contact, her desperate fingers clutching his back.
His trembling
fingers obediently pulled her dori.
She
shuddered in relief.
The dori
fell open, letting the neck of her choli gape.
Khushi
fumbled with the buttons of his jacket. His fingers joined hers to undo them.
He shrugged out of the offending article of clothing.
Her fingers
then attacked his thin white cotton shirt. The buttons popped and fell
somewhere on the floor. Her fingers stole into his shirt and touched his bare,
hot, silky skin, running all over his chest eagerly.
“Khushi,”
he gasped.
Khushi’s
only reply was to press a hard kiss on his heart.
His lips
kissed her neck and he bit gently.
She moaned,
“Arnavji...”
His name
had never sounded sweeter, hotter...
His tongue
laved the slight bite. She shivered and her nails bit into his skin through his
white shirt.
His lips
moved down from her neck to pastures new as Khushi gasped and panted his name
again and again.
***
Arnav
opened bleary eyes to see the sun shining brightly through the window.
Where was
he?
He looked
around. Khushi...she was asleep, her sweet face on his pillow, her lush hair
covering her bare shoulders. The rest of her was under the blanket.
He smiled,
his eyes tender and aglow with love.
A knock
sounded on the door.
He sat up
and looked around for his clothes. He grabbed his trousers and picked up his
shirt. It was missing three buttons. He smiled wickedly.
“Arnav
bitwaa?” Buaji called. “Khussi?”
“Just a
minute, buaji,” Arnav replied before unzipping his bag and shrugging into a
white t-shirt and his pants.
He opened
the door, careful to hide Khushi from buaji’s eyes.
“Bitwaa,
here is your chai,” buaji said smiling.
“Thank you,
buaji,” Arnav took the tray from her hands.
“Hasn’t
Titliya woken up yet, Nandkisore?” buaji asked.
“Err—no,
she is still asleep,” he replied, trying to look as innocent as possible as
though he hadn’t kept her up all night.
Buaji hit
her forehead with her hand. “Hai Re Nandkisore!” she exclaimed. “Still asleep? It
is eight already. Doesn’t she want to attend Preetho’s shaadi at ten?”
“I will
wake her up, buaji,” he promised earnestly.
“Haan,
bitwaa,” buaji smiled at him. “Come down when you are ready for breakfast. We
have made halwa poori.”
“Yes,
buaji,” he replied obediently.
He waited
till buaji walked away before shutting the door.
He then placed the tray on a
small table by the bed and sat down by a dozing Khushi.
He smiled.
She was so
beautiful. Gorgeous when dressed and even more gorgeous when undressed. His
eyes twinkled. A tigress who had demanded his lovemaking as though she could
not get enough of him. But that was in the darkness of the night and under the
influence of the terrible week-long separation. How would she react when she
woke up?
He wanted
to know.
He had to look into her eyes as the realisation of everything that had
gone on all night dawned on her. Would she be shy? Or would she take it in her
stride?
He ran a gentle finger down her cheek.
“Arnavji,”
she mumbled as she settled more comfortably in bed, rubbing her face against
the pillow.
“Khushi,”
he called softly.
Her lashes
fluttered and she opened her eyes to see him looking down at her, his eyes
soft, loving.
She smiled
at him. “You are really here,” she sighed in happiness, still half-asleep.
He smiled,
waiting.
She
stretched her arms, only to still as the soft fabric rubbed against her naked
body.
Her wide
eyes looked at him, as if asking him if everything she remembered of last night
had really happened. A pink colour spread across her face and neck.
“Yes,” he
said softly, his lips quirking.
“Good,” she
smiled, heaving a sigh of relief even though the flush on her cheeks had no
intention of dying down. She would have been very disappointed if it had all been a dream!
Arnav
looked away to hide his amusement.
Her eyes
fell on the tray.
“Tea,” she
cried. She sat up, clutching the covers to her chest. “Arnavji, will you turn
your head away? I will get out of bed,” she explained.
Arnav
asked, a wicked twinkle in his eyes, “Why? Don’t tell me you are shy, Khushi. I
won’t believe you after the way you ripped the shirt from my body last night.”
Khushi
blushed. “I didn’t exactly rip it, Arnavji. I just...” her excuse died away.
“You did
too. Three of my buttons are missing,” he claimed, his eyes dancing.
Her blush
intensified. “Woh..will you turn your head away?” she begged.
“Alright,”
Arnav turned his head away.
Khushi
waddled modestly to the bathroom, dragging the heavy covers along with her.
Then she put her head out. “Arnavji, don’t peep,” she pleaded.
“I won’t,”
he promised, shutting his eyes.
Khushi came
out in a towel and gathered fresh clothes. She darted back into the bathroom, shut
the door and then yelled, “Now you can look, Arnavji.”
Arnav bit
back his smile as he saw the covers heaped outside the bathroom. He carried
them back to bed and straightened the room and their bed.
Khushi
emerged in a pink Paithani saree with a peacock design on the pallu, her wet hair
wrapped in a towel.
His breath
stopped somewhere in his chest.
“You are
beautiful, Khushi,” he whispered.
Her face
became as pink as her saree.
He tweaked
her nose before walking into the bathroom with his toiletries.
The
bathroom was fragrant, filled with Khushi’s special scent. The satisfied smile
remained on his face as he showered.
He emerged
from the bathroom with just a towel around his waist.
Khushi felt
her heart pounding as he crossed the room to pull out a cream kurta pyjama and
underclothes from his bag.
‘What will he do if I tug at his towel?’ Khushi’s naughty mind wondered. She stared at his
image in the mirror. ‘Will he remove the towel now?’ she wondered hopefully.
Awwwww..... That was a very reasonable conversation..... Now let us see what Arnav does....
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DeleteVery beautiful update...
ReplyDeleteThank you.
And yeh he is very Besharam...
The naughty twinkle in his eyes...haiyye!
DeleteLoved it. Dreaming about them.
ReplyDeleteMust be a very interesting night..ha..ha..
DeleteLoved it. Dreaming about them.
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome.
ReplyDeleteThank u. I had fun writing it!
DeleteCan't tell how much i am loving Uncomplicated wife.. awesome parts.. Arnav's desperation to be with his wife and also his wife's need to have him as hers.. loving this sweet talking of a real husband and uncomplicated wife.. looking forward to their meet on sunday once when Khushi returns from Lucknow.. Arnav kissing her hard and her dance for him.. But feels Arnav is gonna land up at Lucknow to bring Khushi home himself.. wonderful story..
ReplyDeleteThey are slowly getting to know each other. Dekhte hein!
DeleteBrilliant update...........the easy banter between them feels so good........they have come a long way............it is touchy when khushi said what she wanted from her husband.........hope Arnav tries to be one for her............she missed so many things but I believe Arnav will give all she missed and much more...............can't wait for more..........
ReplyDeleteYes, life hasn't been easy for both of them. Let's see where this goes.
DeleteBrilliant update. Loved the conversation between them as it cleared a lot of air. This judai is definitely opening them up and bringing them closer/
ReplyDeleteAm looking forward eagerly for next update...
Yes, bridging the gulf. Thank God for mobile phones..ha.ha..Imagine Arnav using the landline in Shantivan with Mami breathing down his neck & Khushi talking to him in the presence of Buaji..ha..ha..
DeleteOMG that would have been one classic conversation :))
DeleteMy goodness I just imagined that but all I could think of is Hello HI bye bye and Hai re nandkishore with each line that arnav and khushi speak... he he he
DeleteDheere Dheere.. Aa Re!
ReplyDeleteDheere Dheere.. Aa Re!
Badal Dheere Ddheere Jaa!
Mera Bulbul so Raha Hai!
Shor o Gul na Macha!
Dheere Dheere.. Aa Re! ....
Dheere aayein, lekin aaye jaroor kyonki ...
Deleteo sajana, barakha bahaar aayee
ras ki phuhaar laayi, aakhiyon men pyaar laayi
tum ko pukaare mere, man kaa papeehara
mithhi-mithhi agani me, jale mora jiyara
o sajana.....................
aise rim-jhim me, o sajan pyaase pyaase mere nayan,
tere hi khwaabon men kho gaye
o sajana.....................
saawali saloni ghata, jab jab chhaayi
aakhiyon men raina gayi, nindiya na aayi
o sajana...................
Kola Lakka Vellari..... Welcome, welcome, welcome.... Ruchi... Glad to see you here....
DeleteWAH! WAH! Dil garden garden ho gaya!
DeleteFinally Khushi is opening up to him. Poor girl. Such a simple expectation.
ReplyDeleteSmita your stories and writing is just amazing. I have reread your stories so many times. Each one is good. But now over the last few I find that the stories are getting better and better and with a lot of depth too.
Hydsri
Thank u, my dear. My craze seems to be increasing instead of decreasing!
DeleteWell I am all for it and ever ready to read all that you write.
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ReplyDeleteAmazing update
ReplyDeleteI am loving this story so much
Thank u!
DeletePart 16 was fab... Arshi's love story has finally begun... ;)
DeleteWhat she said made sense
ReplyDeleteShe is opening up to him
That's good
And arnav is flirting with her
Going good
Hope she doesn't run when she comes back to him
Arrey waah arnav aap toh lover boy bann gaye
Possessive aint he
Not that I blame him
Now he knows how she felt in her marriage
No excitement no teasing
She didn't even know him properly
Can he remedy that
Hope so man
They need to move forward now
They definitely need to move on. This is a new chance for them to leave their past behind.
Deletewow beautiful update loved it can't wait for next part thank you.................ameena671
ReplyDeleteSoon. Promise. Maybe even tomorrow. Depends on how many songs I get as bribe..ha..ha..
DeleteAww that was such a cute update and possessive Arnav, cannot watch for the next update Smitha!!!!!
Delete"Wear your sindoor and mangalsutra. Let the world know you are taken and you belong to me." Being extremely territorial, are we?
ReplyDeleteHere's a toast to Arnav's possessiveness.
Tumhe Koi Aur Dekhe To Jalta Hai dil
Badi Mushkilon Se Phir Sambhalta Hai dil
Kya Kya Jatan Karte Hain Tumhe Kya Pataa
Yeh Dil Beqaraar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahi Jaante
Magar Jee Nahi Sakte Tumhare Bina
Hume Tumse Pyaar Kitna ..
Fitting, Sups! What a change from an ASR who was not even interested in seeing his wife's face to the Arnav who wants to keep her away from all eyes!
DeleteShe is going to show him and teach him what belonging to each other means.
ReplyDeleteYes, both are going to learn.
DeleteAwwww...... That was nice
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Thank u!
Deletethat was really lovely...awesome...they are getting closer day by day...very nice update..i m liking khushi is opening to arnav..instead of just saying ji...ji...she is telling him what she wants..very gud update..gud luck to u smita ji
ReplyDeleteThey need to know each other. Acha he they are talking.
Deletelovely update.. ASR is becoming Arnav with all his flirting..waiting for them to meet..
ReplyDeleteFlirting ka raja, Arnav!
DeleteBeautiful part.
ReplyDeleteArnav cannot wait to have khushi back in his arms and his house. He feels jealous of everyone who can see his wife all dressed up.
Khushi is shocked to hear arnav flirt so openly with her. She has never see this possessive side of his before
It's good that all the misunderstandings between them is cleared.
Continue soon
They need to figure out what they want. Thodi distance acha he!
DeleteBeautiful update
ReplyDeleteThank U!
DeleteLoved Arnav flirting with Khushi over the phone and so cute how he was teasing her awesome update loved t wicked cute.
ReplyDeleteGlad to see u, Dumas. The poolside kiss on Payal's mehendi is etched in my head..what a flirt!
Deletelovely update
ReplyDeleteThank u, my dear!
Deletelovely update
ReplyDeleteThis was so beautiful, love how they were talking to each other
ReplyDeleteArnav is behaving like his dil has gone "batmeez Batameez Dil" hehe
Seems like khushis wish will be coming true of Arnav being only hers and becoming true family forever
Yes, both are going to get what they want.
DeleteArnav: Mere man ki ganga aur tere man ki jamuna ka,
Bol Khushi bol sangam hoga ki nahin
Sindoor and mangalsutra... They will shout on behalf of arnav.... "Tum mere hooo... BA's mere hi mere hoooo.....!!" :)
ReplyDeleteDekhe tujhe jab koi jalta mera dil,
DeleteTu hai meri bas meri meri manzil,
Ab roke chahe sara zamana,
Tay kar liya tujhko hai paana,
Tune vadaa jo kiya hai woh nibhana, bairiya ve,
Tujhpe hai sirf mera haqq.
I love you o sayyoni, Koi shaq?
Lovely update. Khushi and Arnav are bonding nicely
ReplyDeleteTere liye dil mera aisa lutiya ve
DeleteTere bina jiya mera naiyo lag da ve
Meri gali aaja ve mahiya
Bas ek vari Aaja ve
So super update!!
ReplyDeleteJust read it!! loved their bonding!! Flirty arnav!! wah wah wah!!
Cool update waiting for the next one already!
Arnav: Aashiq banaya , aashiq banaaya, aashiq banaya aapne,
DeleteTere bin suni suni hain baahein,
Teri bin pyaasi pyaasi nigaahein,
Tere bin bin asar meri aahein
ye arnav itna besharam kaise ho gaya..? Pata hi nehi chalta ki yeh wahi ASR hai...
ReplyDeletelekin kya karein pyaar ache achon ko badla deta hai to arnav babua kya cheese hai... :)
Arnav bitwaa singing: Aapki kashish sarfarosh hain,
DeleteAapka nasha yu madhosh hain,
Kya kahe tumse janeja, gum huwa hosh hain...
Arnav to shayar bhi ban gaya yaar...
Deletepyaar logon se kya kya karwata hai...
Hi Smita.....u r amazing and ur arnav is absolutely amazing. I still read ur old creations.i feel good n smhw few of my stress goes dwn....plz continue.
ReplyDeleteAwwww- what a sweet update! Love their slow but steady bonding! Loved it when Arnav said abh pata chalra k mai besharam hoon, after 2 months?! :D
ReplyDeleteIn a way I think this separation was a good thing for these 2... Coz they're learning A LOT about each other - probably more than either one of them expected and it's changed them in a good way.
STILL looking forward to that kiss though-- I know there's gonna be fireworks!!
Hey Smita, when is the next update?
ReplyDeleteArnav is missing Khushi like anything. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful update...
ReplyDeleteLoving Arshi ke phone conversations..
ReplyDeleteArnav is getting very bold with his talks.. :p Saamne aayenge tab kya karenge.. ;))
Khushi is lucky to get married to him... Jo bhi hota hai it happens for good.!
Arnav's POV
ReplyDeleteThen : Marriage ! dammit!!! I just agreed for Di's sake. I want an uncomplicated wife.
Now : What the .... Why can't she be more involved in my life. I want the complications.
Then : I don't want to see her, talk to her or have any sort of interaction.
Now : What is she doing in Lucknow? How long is she going to be there? I should ask Aman to get the chopper ready so that I can get her back. A wife's place is with her husband, isn't it? Should I ask Di??????
Then : She can do what she wants as long as she leaves me alone.
Now : She had better wear her sindoor prominently. I want everyone to know she is off limits. She should wear only her mangalsutra, after all she is so beautiful that she doesn't need any other jewellery. I will ask her what she is wearing.
Arnav's mind : STOP! Since when are you a love sick puppy.
Arnav : Keep quiet . It is my haq after all.
A's mind : Stick to the plan man! You are thirtyand you wanted an uncomplicated wife remember.
Arnav : Is there any way I can shut you up? I didn't know what I wanted. If you can give me constructive suggestions that would be good, other wise......
No wonder poor Khushi is confused. That was a superbly written update. Arnav
s 180 degree turn - too good.
I have a request Smita. I came across a lovely song by a group called Creative Beggars " Pehli Pehli baar hua hai". The lyrics remind me so much of our favourite jodi. Is it possible for you to make a VM? Eagerly waiting for your next update.
My VM software is driving me crazy. Really, Kaaycee. I can't use it to even edit stuff properly.
DeleteI love your comment. That's exactly what is going through bitwaa's conphused mind. Will post next part in 2 hours.
Lolzzzz, Kaaycee! So, when are you writing your own Arshi fiction? Going by the dialogue you have treated us to, your work promises to be one heck of a ride!! So can we expect a 'Kaaycee's crazy' blog? ;-)
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DeleteThank you! Thank you! I really appreciate the compliments from you both. Of course I'm Smita's die hard fan and I really love your lengthy comments Priya. I read KK once again after you comment re: the ideal Arnav. Definitely inspired me. I wanted to continue the dialogue but I thought the comment might become really long. If you don't have any objections I'll write it out.
ReplyDeleteWRITE!
DeleteBrilliant update! Finally even she is opening up to him about her thoughts on this marriage !! Like how Arnav is getting possessive of khushi! :)
ReplyDeleteASR is changing...ha..ha..
DeleteMind blowing update. Loved that both brothers decided to show up at Lucknow. I like Khushi's naughty mind:-)
ReplyDeleteI know you do. A bond of sympathy with a wicked sanka devi, eh?
DeleteI was waiting for them to come to Lucknow.. loved the update.. Khushi is equally naughty..
ReplyDeleteVery naughty. Arnav's hosh uda degi woh!
Deletewow this is amazing .... i was waiting for ur update so curiously ..... ahhhh this is so good dear ... that they have came to lucknow by themselves ........ arnav is so impatient ...........
ReplyDeleteCan we blame him? Two months hui gawa and he has been running after her. Lekin woh bilkul time nahi de rahi thi..ha..ha.
DeleteAahhh... Finally they meet.. And how..!! ;)
ReplyDeleteArnav as Devdas in khushi's love.. Awww...
Imagine Arnav-Devdas with a bottle of daru in one hand and a beard on his face! Khushi would be horrified. IPKKND's Khushi would have asked him, "Aap ye kya kar rahe ho?"
DeleteThat was awesome. Naughty Khushi
ReplyDeleteVery naughty girl!
DeleteThat was awesome. Naughty Khushi
ReplyDeleteSuper awesome.
ReplyDeleteIf arnav has surprised khushi by coming to her house to take her back with him then khushi has surprised arnav by her boldness in showing her love for him.
Continue soon
A night of surprises..ha..ha..
DeleteAwesome update!! Loved it!!'
ReplyDeleteSo glad!
DeleteBack after a long break..Enne orma undo?..
ReplyDeleteCatching up with all the stories that I missed..
Arnav needed an uncomplicated wife and life...But after meeting Khushi Gupta and falling heads over heels in love with her,he realized that he needs the real naughty,bubbly,chirpy,innocent n not-uncomplicated Khushi beside him,always and forever.
The prince now came to take his princess..He confessed his love and they both *blush blush*..
Khushi has become even more naughty and mischevious ;)
Will be waiting to read the next part.
People must have wondered how will a naive girl like K manage a khadoos ASR. Now the real question is how will ASR manage a naughty K..ha..ha.. Yes, orma undu ee mukham. Maveli ithra naal evide aayirunnu?
DeleteHahahha...it clearly showed how a week separation make them bare there feelings...its lovely to see arnav coming with akash to Lucknow and more interesting to see khushi's reactions and her demands of love from her husband.. Very cute update..distance really makes one realise there love and feelings..and I think arnav is going to see a naughty khushi now since he has removed his demands of uncomplicated wife from her..khushi is naughty..hahaha..lovely update...let's see what happens next.. Thanks for the update smita Ji and gud luck
ReplyDeleteArnav has his hands full. He has no idea of the real Khushi...LOL!
DeleteThe change in the complicated man who wanted an uncomplicated wife...
ReplyDeleteFrom...
Hello,hindustan ka Lucknow... hello,main Dilli se bol raha hoon main apni biwi Khushi se baat karna chahata hun haan haan
Mere piya, ho mere piya he Dilli mein kiya hai wahaan se teliphoon tumhari yaad sataati hai, jiya men aag lagaati hai
To....
Khushi, Khushi...
Aaja re, o dilbar jaaniya
Aaja re, aaja re o mere dilbar aaja
Dil ki pyaas bujha jaa re....
Kya baat he Smita... Literally its a metamorphosis of ASR into Arnav for Khushi...
Loved it...
So happy! Yes, ASR has become an Arnav that even Khushi can't recognise! Aur sab se ajeeb baat, Khushi didn't even try to change him!
DeleteAwesome poetry! Mere Piya Gaye Rangoon is one of my fav songs.
Lovely part. Liked it very much. Khudhi is so naughty and I love that. Continue soon,
ReplyDeleteMonday, pukka.
DeleteSmitaji... Wonderful update,
ReplyDeleteLoved their sweet moment of togetherness,
And the morning... Uff Buaji ....
now me waiting for the next update....
Uss pyar bhari raat ke naam two songs....
Ibtada-e- ishq mein hum sari raat jaage.allaah jaane kya hoga aage.....
Dhoondho dhoondho re baalma..dhoondho re saanjna more kaam ka baala...
*kaan ka baala.
DeleteAwesome update...
ReplyDeleteSmitaji Khushi ke bahane se we all wish Arnav would drop his towel 😄
ReplyDeleteRaat ka nasha aankh se gaya nahi ..Tera gathela badan ...
Aage nahi aata
To fall or not to fall, that's the question...ahem...
DeleteAwesome. ASR could not take the judai from his uncomplicated wife anymore. Poor ASR. :)))
ReplyDeletewowb superb update loved it thank you.............ameena671
ReplyDeleteBeautiful ,looking fwd to more
ReplyDeleteAmazing! i knew Arnav will be there to take his Khushi home but had no idea that he will have their first night in lucknow.. it was beautiful union of two longing hearts.. loved the update :)
ReplyDeleteArnav's POV contd.
ReplyDeleteA : If you can give me constructive suggestions go ahead, otherwise... Wait a minute. Since you're being such a busy body perhaps you can do something about this RABBE VEY that I keep hearing.
A's mind : WHAT THE !!! rub away???? Rub away what??
A: Not rub away you i***t! RABBA VEY.
A's mind(gingerly) Errrr! What is a RABBA VEY?
A: It's a song that only I seem to be able to hear.
A's mind (slighlty worried and flipping frantically thro' the Swayam Rakhrakhav pustak herein referred to as SRP) Only he can hear this song? What is going on? Note to self # 1 (a) Call Aman (b) Give Akash more responsibilities so the company doesn't go belly up. (c) Make appointment with psychiatrist. Now what does SRP say. Hmmm. Keep subject calm. Lull subject into a sense of security while collecting info. Okay. Here goes. Ahemm! Ahem! Asr? ASR??
A : What? and don't call me ASR. I'm Arnavji. My name has never sounded sweeter.
A's mind (in a full blown panic) What the h**k? Arnavji? (gagging) Note to self #2.Call Aman asap. Probability of stay in a padded cell - imminent. Possibility of psychiatrist helping - slim. Remember- keep subject calm. Errr! AS.. sorry Arnavji, Since when did you start hearing this RABBA VEY?
A: The first time was when we were on the run after that nasty shooting. We took shelter and I saw her for the first time. Oh man! When our eyes met I could hear this song and I thought nothing of it at that time. Then I kept hearing it in the hotel when we slept and then every time I saw her or thought about her. I thought it might have something to do with the Gupta sisters but Akash doesn't seem to hear it.What is she doing now? I can't wait to see her. Who does this Mohan think he is? Always asking if he can go to Lucknow to pick up Khushi? Is Khushi his wife or mine? Wait till I see him tomorrow. I will ...
A's mind: Oh for the love of... FOCUS! DAMMIT!!!
A : sheesh! what a grouch!!! Okay, sometimes the music is sad like when she thought I wanted to separate and sometimes it's really loud like when I saw her in that pink outfit on Teej!(Breathing heavily) She looked like a princess. no a queen no an angel ....
A;s mind : This SRP doesn't say anything about breathing difficulties in conjunction with lost marbles. Now what do I do? Okay Okay She looked like a goddess. I get it. then what?
A: Then when we were about to go down, I caught her by the arm ..
A's mind : and ???
A : I pulled her close
A's mind : and ????
A : we shared the most amazing ......
A's mind : What ? What did you share? ASR? Sorry, ARNAVJi? ?? Arnav ??? Yo bro Raizada?? Chotey ??? Anyone ???? WHAT THE!!!!!!
BGM : Rabba Veeeeyyyyyyy O Rabbaaaaaa Veeeeeyyyy!!
Lovely update Smita! The yellow outfit was really stunning. Can't wait to see how ASR handles this naughty Khushi. As usual waiting for the next instalment.
Awesome, man. I am laughing here. You should definitely write stories, Kaaycee. Your sense of humour and your way with words will make them an instant hit! Come on, girl!
DeleteHahahahaha..... Kaaycee. ROFL!!
DeleteI have had a hectic past week. It's as if I opened my eyes to a brisk Monday morning, just blinked a couple of times and suddenly it is Thursday noon! But Arnav's POV took care of any lingering fatigue. I loved it. Absolutely Hilllariiious!!
Give heed to Smi's words. Your words rock. Rabba Vey, Girl!!
Smita, I know that I've written a lot but I couldn't help it. Your stories fascinate me esp. the way to handle the change from ASR to Arnav and I wanted to pen down what could possibly be going on in ASR's mind. Your stories are sapnon ki duniya which we need to put up with the asli duniya. Asli duniya caught up with me when I lost my co-sister( husband's brother's wife) in the MH 370 disaster last year. I used to read and re-read all your stories till the wee hours during the interminable wait - for news that never came. I have read every single story of yours and they never failed to lift my mood even at that juncture and I'm grateful. We all cope in different ways and this was mine. So this POV of Arnav that I've written is just my way of saying thank you. God bless and please continue writing.
ReplyDeleteI am so glad my stories could lift your mood, Kaaycee. I write to kill my stress as Rash and Sups know very well. Yes, asli duniya can be something of a bitch at times. Sigh!
Deletereally u r superb writer,
ReplyDeletedo continue,
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Mind blowing update! Arnav and alash turned up at Lucknow! Desperate:p khushi the tigress!! Loved the update:)
ReplyDeleteGotcha! So two can play the game! Wicked....
ReplyDeletekhushi is beautiful and bold
ReplyDeleteAwesome part... arnav has no idea how naughty his khushi is...
ReplyDeleteAwesome part... arnav has no idea how naughty his khushi is...
ReplyDeleteWhen are you planning to update next part dear?
ReplyDeleteFriday, my dear.
DeleteHey dear when are you going to update the next part?
DeleteWaiting for update
ReplyDeleteWowie, the detached, emotionless workaholic has finally been domesticated or what?!? An erstwhile doubter in the institution of marriage, is he really chatting about mundane things like mehendi and shaadi ki rasams!!
ReplyDelete“Khushi, kya hua?” Payal asked. “Your face is pink. Did you go out in the sun?”
No amount of sun block is gonna help with the pink on Khushi's cheeks!! With ASR not getting enough of his wife, that hue is here to stay. ;-)
Akash having no qualms about displaying PDA right on Payal's doorstep; Arnav taking the stairs directly to his wife's room and then the dreamy confession and the toe-curling kiss and the amorous activities followed by tender love-making. haiyee.... Raizada men are MEN!! High five, Guys!!
And Smi, why does Khushi's wardrobe always have to be drop dead gorgeous? It makes me wanna go on a spree, invading the malls in my neighbourhood. I have already exceeded the quota of apparel shopping for 2015. I invest in one more outfit and my own Arnavji is going to have a temper-tantrum!! Waise, already got one in green but I could do with another paithani in pink and peacock design. :P I am incorrigible and I know it!!!
Priya.... The pink Paithani looks good in pics... but in reality Green is gorgeous. Black is a stunner.. :)
DeleteGreen is the best. And the next in line would be black, Rash. I couldn't make Khushi wear black to the wedding. nahi to, she would have been draped in this.
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DeleteWords from experience. Do you own a stunning black paithani yourself? :) Black sounds gorgeous and Swarowski crystals on it would make it irresistible.
DeleteYou inspire me, Rulama, to completely brush off my annual apparel budget and just go for it. :P
Priya.... I have the green traditional one... By the time I realized about black.... two~three years later I didn't want to buy one more... So I selected it for my friend and it was a hit when worn...
DeleteUpdate soon please
ReplyDeleteFriday, dear!
Deleteupdate soon ..
ReplyDeleteIn a few minutes.
DeleteDidn't get a chance to read it till now because I was traveling back to my maika, but... OH MY GOODNESS!!! I LOVED chapter 16!! Arnav teasing his family was cute. But obviously the best was Arnav and Khushi's reunion!! :D hayyyyeeee, mai kya bolu... That was so romantic, sweet, hot ;-) - it was everything thing! One of my fave updates by far!! Liked it so much that I've lost track of how many times I've read it. But the ending of Arnav in only a towel has Khushi excited it seems and she's not the only one. Lol! I know I'm chichori but I can't help it.
ReplyDeleteEagerly looking forward to the next update today!
Soon....Towel girga ya nahi? That's the question!
DeleteMillion dollar question, Smi!! Waise I was thinking what if our respective Arnavjis decide to take a tour of the comment section. Reading our 'chichore' (courtesy of Juhi!) thoughts might drive them to excessive nervousness or worse....paranoia!!
DeleteHehehe! Our respective Arnavji's would likely run screaming in the opposite direction! :-)
DeleteWaise, I think that Arnav and Khushi have passed the point of being shy in front of each other! :-)
All our Arnavjis are suffering from inferiority complex as it is for we keep on chanting Arnavji, Arnavji....If they read the comment section, they will freak out!
DeleteLet the towel fall,pleaseeeeee:-)
ReplyDeleteLOL!!!!!
DeleteSuperb update
ReplyDeleteWhen are you updating new Arshi stories?
ReplyDeleteWhere are you Smita. I loved all your stories in this blog. I want to read your stories in future. Please comeback in this blog. Please. Please.
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