Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you
Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi
"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
A blog for my VMs:
http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/
Dedicated to Supriya Sahasrabuddhe (Sups/ aniyathi). She wanted Mami and Payal to plot to bring A-K together. So here goes,
Part 17
“Arnav
bitwaa!” mami screamed as she ran up the stairs, her high heels click-clacking
against the marble floor.
“Kaa hua,
mamiji?” HP asked. He was coming out of ASR’s room with a tray of used
utensils.
Mami
knocked HP down as she ran into Arnav’s room.
“Arnav
bitwaa, Arnav bitwaa,” she screeched.
“Mamiji,”
HP called from where he was lying on the floor. “Arnav bhiayya went to office
early today.”
“Arnav
bitwaa go, went, gone hui gawa?” mami cried. “Ab kaa hoga?”
Mami ran
down screaming, “Bhere is Anjali bitiya?”
“Di went to
the temple, saasumma,” Payal reminded her.
Mami hit
her head. “Temple? Ab hum kaa karein, Hello Hi Bye Bye?” she asked.
“Maasi,
chill,” NK said, sauntering into the living room, a packet of chips in his
hand.
“Chill?”
mami asked. “Hum frojjen hui gawa, NK bitwaa. Chill karne ki jaroorat naahi he.”
Her eyes were red and moist.
“Sasumma,
please don’t be so upset,” Payal tried to calm her.
“Acha yaad
dilaya tumhe, Payaliya. Bhere ijj my sssaumma?” mami looked around.
“Dadi is
praying in her room,” Payal said.
Mami ran to
nani’s room, skidding to a stop and avoiding falling over nani at the very last
second. Payal and NK followed her.
“Saasumma!”
mami cried.
Nani opened
her eyes. “Kaa he, Manorama? Savere savere what drama are you staging here?”
nani asked in resignation.
“Khussi ijj
going to get married,” mami wept.
“Kaa?” Nani
couldn’t believe her ears.
“What?” NK
asked. “Khushiji is getting married and she didn’t tell me?”
“Yejj,
saasumma. A boy ijj coming to see her today evening,” mami howled. “Arnav bitwaa
ijj missing, Anjali bitiya ijj in temple. Hum kaa karein?”
“Don’t
worry, maasi,” NK took over. “Don’t cry. Sit down.” He sat down. “I will call Nannav.”
The ladies
watched anxiously while he tried his Nannav’s number and Payal tried Anjali’s phone
in vain.
Payal shook
her head, indicating that Anjali was unavailable.
“It is
ringing but Nannav is not answering,” NK mused. “Must be on silent mode. Lekin aap
sab chinta mat keejiye. Mein hoon na?” he asked with a big smile.
The ladies
looked at him in wonder.
“Give me a
list of the gifts you want. I will buy them, go to Nannav’s office and get him and
Akash, go to the temple and get di. Then we can go to Lucknow to celebrate
Khushiji’s shaadi,” NK said cheerfully.
Mami picked
an orange from the fruit dish on nani’s table and threw it at NK.
“We don’t bant
to attend Khussi’s shaadi, NK bitwaa, we bant to break it,” mami shrieked.
“Break it?”
NK asked, confused. “You don’t want Khushiji to be a dukaan (shop)?”
“Dukaan
naahi, dulhan (bride),” mami shouted. “We bant her to be a dulhan, but only
hamre Arnav bitwaajj.”
NK almost
fell down in shock.
“Nannav’s
dukaan?” he gasped. “Maasi, Khushiji is the best, but why do you want her to
marry Nannav? Matlab he is happy with his...”
Mami rolled
her eyes in warning, shooting a look at nani.
“...happy
with his life. Why end his bachelorhood?” NK asked in a heart-felt manner.
“Becaujj
your Nannav likes your Khushiji and we don’t want him to be alone all hijj liphe,”
mami explained.
“Nannav
likes Khushiji?” NK frowned. Nothing that Nannav had done, especially cavorting
with his girlfriends had given him the impression that Nannav was dying to
marry Khushiji.
Anjali
walked into this argument.
“What is
wrong, mami?” she asked softly.
“Bhere were
you?” mami asked, upset.
“At the
temple,” Anjali smiled. “Listening to a speech on the need for moderation in
all we do. Mami, you should have come too. It was...”
“You sit
there and listen to moderation while hamre Arnav bitwaajj liphe is going down
the drainagewaa,” mami wept.
“Mami,”
Anjali called anxiously. “What is wrong?”
But mami
was crying too hard to speak.
Nani dabbed her eyes.
Payal said,
“Di, a boy is coming to see Khushi this evening.”
Anjali
gasped. She set the thali down on the table before her and asked, “Where is
Chotey?”
“In his
office,” nani said quietly.
“I tried to
get him on the phone, but,” NK interjected.
“Get Akash,”
Anjali panted, looking at Payal. “Tell him to catch Chotey by his collar and
drag him home. No excuses.”
“Yejj,”
mami nodded. “Jaldi, jaldi. Otherbise hamre Arnav bitwaa bill have to wear
sherwani and go to Lucknow to say congratulations to Khussi and her husbaaand.”
“Rest of
you, pack to leave for Lucknow,” nani ordered. “I will inform Mohan and Kishen
to get the cars ready.”
All nodded
and left the room.
Anjali
asked HP to pack for Chotey.
NK caught
mami by the arm and pulled her aside.
“Maasi, are
you sure Nannav wants to marry Khushiji?” he asked seriously. “Woh kya he, he
is happy playing the field and,”
“Bitwaa,”
mami said. “Hamre Arnav bitwaa ijj not a boy to play football in a field. He ijj thirty. Soon baal chadne lagenge, his face
will become lined. Eberybody ijj not lucky to have skin like Manorama Raijjada.
Then who will give him a girlwaa?”
NK tried to
explain. “Maasi, imagine you are Nannav. You have a table full of sweets before
you,” he began.
“Hamre
Arnav bitwaa ijj diabetic,” mami cut in.
“Ok, fine,”
NK pull his hands up. “You have paratha, chole bature, kulfi, tehri,” he tried.
“Chup,”
mami put her finger on her lips to silence him. “Hum dieting karbe and you
tempt me?”
NK threw up
his hands.
“Imagine
you are Nannav. Before you is a table full of fruits,” NK said.
“Oo theek
he,” mami concurred.
“Pineapple,
apple, mango, bananas, grapes,” NK said.
“Tho?” mami
asked.
“Why should
you eat only bananas, maasi?” NK asked.
“Matmal?”
mami asked.
“Nannav has
lots of girlfriends. He is having fun, is enjoying the variety. Why should you
force him to marry Khushiji?” NK asked.
“Becaujj
your Nannav loves bananas,” mami said, making to walk away.
“Maasi,” NK
stopped her.
“Kaa?” she
asked. “I have to do my packings.”
“Maasi, do
you think Khushiji will enjoy being married to Nannav?” NK asked, his eyes
stern and grave for a change.
“Don’t tell
saasumma or Payaliya about the girlfraands, NK bitwaa. Baaki hum sambhal leibe,”
mami walked away.
NK shook
his head in exasperation.
***
“Di, Akashji’s
phone is switched off,” Payal said nervously.
“I will try
Amanji,” Anjali dumped the sari in her hand in her suitcase and limped to her
phone.
But it was of no use. His phone was switched off.
“I will ask
Mohan to go to the office and get hold of Amanji,” Anjali left her open suitcase
and went down.
Mohan
returned in one hour to give the family the unwelcome news that Aman, Arnav and
Akash were in a meeting with an international delegation at a seven-star resort
and couldn’t be disturbed.
Anjali sat
down, feeling weak.
“Ab hum kaa
karein?” nani asked, her forehead furrowed.
“Pata nahi,
nani,” Anjali said, her voice feeble.
“Payaliya
wajj saying that Khussi is ready to say yejj to the boy,” mami dropped the bomb
quietly.
“Kya?”
Anjali and nani called out loudly.
Payal
nodded, her mind filled with uncertainty and fear. There was no saying what Khushi
would do. She was predictably unpredictable and consistently inconsistent.
***
Khushi
pinned the dupatta on her shoulder and tucked it into her waist, making sure
that she looked as modest as possible.
Buaji
frowned. “This is the lehenga-choli you wore at Payaliya’s wedding, isn’t it, Nandkisore?”
she asked.
“Yes,
buaji,” Khushi replied quietly. Then she wore matching earrings and a slender
chain around her neck.
“Wear the
gold bangles with white stones, Khussi,” buaji suggested.
She nodded
obediently and slipped them on her arms.
Garima came
rushing into the room. “Jiji, they have come. Please come with me to welcome
them,” she begged.
“Sasi
babua?” buaji asked.
“He is
talking to them. Khussi bitiya, are you ready?” Garima asked.
“Yes, amma,”
she replied, her voice low.
Garima came
to her and hugged her, saying, “Sunn, bitiya, don’t agree to this wedding thinking
we want to be rid of you. Look at the boy, talk to him. See if you can live
with him.”
Khushi
nodded.
“If you pick
this boy, you have to live your entire life with him, Titliya,” buaji warned
her. “So be careful, Nandkisore.”
Khushi
nodded.
Garima and
buaji left, with buaji muttering, “May Nandkisore help our Khussi in making the
right decision.”
Khushi
looked at herself in the mirror, her eyes dull, her heart duller. ‘What must he
be doing right now?’ she wondered. ‘What will he be doing, Khussi? He will be
roaming around the city with two or more girls. Why should he be worried that
your life is going to change?’
She had to
blink away tears.
“Khussi,”
came the call from Garima. “Zara yahan aana, bitiya.”
Khushi
walked out of her room.
Buaji
handed her a tray with filled tea cups.
Khushi
walked to the living room and placed the tray on the low table. She took a few
steps back and looked at the family that wanted to make her their bahu.
The boy’s
father was plump and cheerful, cracking jokes with her father. His mother was gaudily
dressed in a yellow sari and lots of jewellery.
Bilkul like
mami, Khushi thought. But not as cheerful as her.
She turned
her eyes to the boy.
He was very
handsome, tall, slim, fair, with light eyes. Dressed in a light pink shirt, he
looked like a hero. He smiled at her, showing his shining, pearl-like teeth.
OMG I had to rush through to see how Arnav reacted only to find that he doesn't even know yet :(
ReplyDeleteI have to read it again slowly now to see mami's theatrics.
Hydsri
What happened. I thought msmi will inform arnav and all will rush to lucknow smita hamare umeedon pe pani pher diya. Hai rama kitna hr drama
ReplyDeleteOh no!!! When are they going to land in Lucknow? Smita you have us on the edge. Can't wait for more
ReplyDeleteOw arnav is unaware...pls let him know soon and make him fly to his khushi very soon to woo her....this update was incomplete as there was no herowwa :( :p pls update asap;)
ReplyDeleteFirst of all muuuahhh for the update.
ReplyDeleteI think I've set some sort of speed reading record only to find that Arnav doesn't know. Why does the boy have to look like a hero? Can't he be hunch backed, bald with a squint (may be a limp too)
I swear my heart is beating so fast that I think I'm having a seizure. At this rate I won't be able to wear the blush dress on a date with my hubby.
Second that girlfriend... I want to hate the boy... And Smita ji made him a Prince Charming.... Arghhh..... Still hate him!
Delete"dukaan, dulhan" - NK is a riot as usual.
ReplyDeleteIs this the boy that almost ran over NK in Delhi?
Smitaji, it's a wonderful update but I'm terribly sorry 'cos I'm tooooo tense to enjoy it. Who asked ASR to hole up in a 7 star resort. All week he was hanging around the house making a nuisance of himself. Hmmpphh!!!! Serves him right if he loses Khushi.
No, get a grip Kaaycee, all ijj well, all ijj well.
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ReplyDeleteWhere ijj hamre Arnav bitwaa gads about when he is needed here!!!! What meeting can he attend when here is smt terrible is happen!
ReplyDeleteOMG, I'm so worried!!
Thank you,dear Smita, for this update!=)
Smitha chechi......what a twist...handsome boy for Khushi???.....ufff.....
ReplyDeleteAb kya Karoo??
I lyk NK's logic here...banana ??lol mami and NK rockzz....
Awe watched new promo of ipkknd ek jashn..so excited..
Chechi kandayirunno???...super na??
Loved it poor khushi she has fallen for him and he is sacred yo give a name to his feeling , lovely update , a little request plz let arnav be sorry for girlfriends thing because a woman cant accept his man with other man and basiclly arnav should nt use women as a excuse for his fear its an insult to a women hope u understand my point of view and sorry if u felt bad
ReplyDeleteThanks 4 beautiful update
Omg Smitha mami and NK are a riot, loved the update!! Where is Arnav???? Loving these daily updates!!
ReplyDeleteIt's about time that a handsome boy came to see Khushi. Now eagerly waiting for the next update!
ReplyDeleteI slould worry about my tomorrow's job interview, and I'm worried about Khushi's marriage! I'm really runnig mad, as I'm checking up every 5 min. your blog!!=))))))
ReplyDeleteIn Russia all IPKKND-lovers also are going mad because of IPKKND's reunion of 24 Nov. I'm really happy with this news, and I desperatelly waiting for these 9 series and for russian subs for them=)))))))
*"should", of course...=)
DeleteI'm sailing in the same boat. I have to set question papers for the upcoming exam and my brain is deadwaa. Can't proceed. Thinking of sweet talking my husband into checking Smita's blog periodically.
DeleteGood luck with your interview.
Thank you, Kaaycee!! I hope, I will get this job!=)
DeleteThis story is a true James Bond thriller now waiting for mr bond to come and get his girl and mission accomplished ,,I loved it ,waiting to see how he reaches in time
ReplyDeletewhat an update!!! I think Arnav will be really chocked. Waiting for the next,
ReplyDeleteArnav doesn't know still,... What a update! Too good:))
ReplyDeleteSmita ..I'll be away for a few days.. So won't be able to comment but will aftet I'm back :)
wow superb updates loved both parts 16-17 can't wait for next part thank you.....ameena671
ReplyDeleteCrap this is not good!!!!!!!! WHERE IS Arnav!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteKhushi looks shocked looking at the to-be groom.. Is that ASR? or anyone she knows?
ReplyDeletewho the hell he is
ReplyDeletewho the hell he is
ReplyDeleteDamn can't wait for ASR reaction loved his family reaction so cute all want to get him on the phone to let him know.
ReplyDeleteEagerly awaiting for the next part.
ReplyDeleteSince every one has already commented on the elephant in the room thus I will refrain from that... But I have to concur... you are being really cruel here... The reason is not that Arnav does not know yet... The reason isn't that THE BOY from Varanasi is handsome, either... The reason is and I quote...
ReplyDeleteSoon baal chadne lagenge, his face will become lined. Unquote...
We do not need this image in our heads... That will NEVER happen to Arnav... Why would you... okay Mami ji... say that?
BTW NK's and Mami ji's conversation was a riot... Especially where she throws the orange at his clueless head...
Once again, you have written a very different story.. Love it!
Please more! Soon.
Please insert "George Clooney " comment here. ASR's lined face is not a problem right now. If Smitaji continues in this vein it's my face i have to worry about.
DeleteAur mere baalon ka kya hoga... peeche kuch nahin bache ga...
DeleteAur mujhe Clooney ki koi parwah nahi... Arnav ko kabhi kuch nahin hoga... So there.
LOL!!!
DeleteWhere the hell he is. Edge of the seat thriller. I am so anxiously waiting along with raizada ladies fof his darshan. Smita it is so unfair.
ReplyDeleteThis is one of yourbest stories I like other than marrying kushi slso. All your stories are gems. But this one takes the cake. I want arshi milan asap.
Arnav is like good wine. Here better with age. A hundred times better than George Clooney.
ReplyDeleteOh there... you said it already... No comparison... Don't know much about wines... but I agree with the sentiment.
DeleteI also agree with you with all my heart!!!!!=)))))))
DeleteMy hearts pounding very much, can't even imagine khushi's halat and that Laddgoverner doesn't even know that his world is going to blast....:) come on Anjali, Manoomami, Nani aur payaliya koi to khuch Karoo...where's that nk? Samita outstanding dear enjoining every bit off it.
ReplyDeleteRead it again. Nice comparison - fruits and ASR's gfs. Best line " predictably unpredictable and consistently inconsistent" - that's quintessential Khushi.
ReplyDeleteSmitaji, hubby dearest has back to back meetings and has expressed his inability to keep checking your blog. I think, secretly, he is quite relieved. Now I have no choice but to keep checking it myself. Got to set question papers, prepare debate topics - you get the pic. I am so dead. Have mercy, pity, compassion and all that sort of thing.
ReplyDeleteIt's a compliment - you are such a wonderful writer that you've dragged us into the story and we empathize with the protoganists. God bless!!!!!!
Wonderful update smitaji...
ReplyDeletePoor HP..mamiji ki takkar....
And poor mamiji ...ab kya hoga ?
I loved the hilarious vartalaap between NK and Mamiji.
please please make arnav come asap to stop this..........
ReplyDeleteplease please make arnav come asap to stop this..........
ReplyDeleteJust when I begin to decipher what lies ahead for our Khushi, you pitch a curve ball!! The latest update left me with a bewildered 'what the...' look on my face.
ReplyDeleteThen I dug deep and realised this is actually good. I can see two scenarios emerging out of this.
1. We have a prospective groom who is 'handsome, tall, slim, fair, with light eyes. Dressed in a light pink shirt, looking like a hero'. This has held my attention.
I am glad he is not your average John Doe. It's time ASR caught on to the fact that although he himself is quite the dish, the world is not short of tall, fair, light-eyed studs. In fact, in addition to being hot, if the new guy is refined and a versed professional as well, cherry on top!! That would be fierce competition for our smug, dogmatic tycoon!! Plus, if the guy comes without any excess baggage, that would make him the ultimate veritable partner for Khushi. If in the meanwhile, our bitwaa comes to know of Khushi's past, he would appreciate how deeply she requires a loving, caring support. Basically, this guy would be everything an angel like her truly deserves.
But then, would he love her with as much passion? Would his need for her be even remotely comparable to ASR's own overpowering want? And the moment ASR comprehends that 'perfection' is not what Khushi is looking for but him with his earnest love and all honesty, would he let her walk out of his life? I think this is what he needs to be jolted with. That he is unworthy of her is the universal truth. An equally undeniable reality is that they have been made for each other. All he really has to do is love her, cherish her, make her the most important part of his life and she is all his, completely and irrevocably. :)
2. Mr 'Potential Competition' is not what he is seems to be. Appearances can be deceiving, you know. Background checks reveal that pink-shirt guy is a con. ASR, in his alpha protective avatar, takes the guy down for trying to ruin Khushi's life. ASR simply can not take a another chance now, with any other future suitor and decides, firmly and finally, to make her his!!
In either case, Arnav bitwaa ko connphess to kareka padi, hello hi bye bye ... He...he...he.
Aman, get the band and bajaa ready. Hum baraat leke Lucknow aa rahe hai. :-D
Smi, I have explored all the possibilities. Ab third scenario leke mat aa jaana, Nandkisore!!
I loved what you have written in option 1).
DeleteThe third scenario could be that...Khushi goes through all the churning and decides ....
Love option 1 and 2 - basically any thing that brings A and K together. While my dimag agrees with option 1, dil is set on option 2. Knowing Smitaji there is probably a googly in there somewhere. I did want ASR taught a lesson but underestimated the toll on me. Devi maiyya raksha karna!!!
DeleteSmita, If you are stuck on writing the next update...here is the starting...
ReplyDelete"Aman found ASR, ASR called family, got the information dump, took his car and drove to Lucknow and stormed into the living room yelling...Khushi.,...."
Now you continue...
Meemou, kitna help karti ho meri. Muah!
DeleteAnd the ending line is..."Arnav and Khushi promised to each other...hamesha,...."
ReplyDeleteAbhi...sirf beech mein aapko likna hai...;)
i actually like the twist here....thanxs for making the groom so handsome.....only then competition will be tough.....so khushi can proudly announce in future that the Mighty ASR fight hard and try hard to make her his......but that toothy smile handsome guy by any chance is like shyam the snake????? lol just guessing....
ReplyDeletedont rush with Arnvs feeling...the guy is still in confused mode....but i think this will kick his emotions and feelings in right way.....
battle begins...
Update? Update? Update? Update? Update???????????????????
ReplyDeleteWriting! 1 hr
DeleteUpdate plj:)
ReplyDeleteWaiting ..........,......
ReplyDeleteArnav, Aakash and Aman are not available........how are they going to stop Khushi............
ReplyDeleteoooh
ReplyDelete