Link to my first e-novel
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi
A blog for my VMs:
http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/
Part 3
A blog for my VMs:
http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/
Part 3
The
Raizadas looked at Arnav’s gobsmacked face and at Khushi’s frown. She was busy
adjusting the pallu to please herself. Her hair was unbound, the silky fall
cascading down her shoulders.
“Pin the
pallu to your shoulder, Titliyya,” Buaji advised Khushi, unaware of Arnav’s condition.
Anjali
cleared her throat. “Chotey, are you joining us for pooja?”
“Of course,”
he croaked.
Mami
gasped. “Saasumma, bhat ijj happenings here?” she whispered loudly, batting her
eyelashes.
Nani tugged
Mami’s arm. “Let’s all go down. Aaiye, Madhumatiji,” she invited.
Buaji
nodded.
“Chotey,
escort Khussi bitiya downstairs,” Nani helped him. “Take care she does not fall
down the stairs. She may not be used to wearing a sari.”
Buaji
nodded. “And the heels. She runs around wearing salwar suits and jootis all day,
Nandkisore. I have to force her to wear a sari, Devyaniji.”
The ladies
moved towards the door.
Anjali
twisted her neck to see Arnav walk up to Khushi saying, “Khushi, shall we go
down?” His voice was soft, tender, husky.
A glad smile
twisted Anjali’s lips.
“I hope I
don’t trip on the pleats,” Khushi muttered, still looking at her feet in silver
sandals.
“Nothing
will happen to you, Khushi. Main hoon na?” Arnav offered himself as security.
Khushi looked
up to smile into his intent eyes. “I know. But today has been so
accident-filled a day that I don’t trust myself. I may very well land on my
face before all the old ladies and lose my front row of teeth.”
Arnav
smiled. “Come, let’s go down,” he held out his hand.
Khushi
happily put her hand in his and they walked out, Khushi teetering on her high heels and Arnav providing her support.
“Do you
think I will look ugly without my teeth?” she asked Arnav seriously.
He chuckled
under his breath.
“Boliye na?”
she pressed.
“You couldn’t
look ugly if you tried,” he murmured.
Khushi
laughed. “You are saying this because you haven’t seen me with morning hair.”
Arnav
chuckled.
“Or after I
have been playing cricket with Chotu and Munna,” she smiled.
He looked at
her, his eyes dancing with amusement.
“Buaji says
we have the entire dust of the street on us. She asks me if I have been rolling
in mud like an elephant,” Khushi grimaced.
“You drive
her wild, don’t you?” he asked.
“Yes, I do.
And that too without even trying. Pata nahi why it happens, but I always make
her go Hai Re Nandkisore, Hai Re Nandkisore,” Khushi sighed.
Arnav
looked down to hide his enjoyment of her experiences.
“Shall we
sit down here?” he asked, pointing to the last row.
Khushi
nodded.
They sat
down together, Arnav ignoring the astounded eyes of the guests and Khushi
sublimely unaware of the attention they were garnering.
“Why don’t
you wear sari more frequently?” he whispered. “You look beautiful.”
The
compliment went right over her head.
“How can I
wear sari and play cricket?” she asked directly.
He looked
at her face and down her delicious body with possessive eyes.
As he
watched, she pressed her heart with one hand and breathed deep.
“Kya hua,
Khushi?” he asked.
“This choli
is too tight,” she admitted.
His mouth
fell open as he looked at her choli and the curves straining the line of
stitches.
“It suits
Anjaliji’s smaller size,” she sighed. “I am too big. It is killing me.”
He
swallowed hard as he studied her closely. “You are..perfect,” he choked.
Khushi
squirmed, the blouse hurting her.
“Arnavji, what
is that room?” she pointed.
“The kitchen,”
he informed her.
“I am going
to slip in there for a moment. I need to loosen the dori. Otherwise I will choke
to death,” she scared him.
“I will
help you,” he offered, his eyes on the doris.
“You will?”
Her eyes were wide in shock.
“How can
you tie them on your own?” he asked reasonably.
“I did.
That’s why they are such a mess,” she pouted. “You are so sweet,” Khushi smiled
at him.
He cleared his
throat. Only he knew how hot he felt.
“Shall we
go?” she asked.
“Of course,”
he replied. They got up and went to the kitchen, unnoticed by Buaji who had her
eyes shut.
Anjali, who saw the couple leave the room, nudged Mami who nudged Nani in turn.
***
There was
no one on the kitchen as Khushi and Arnav entered it.
“Arnavji,
jaldi,” Khushi urged him on. She flipped her unbound hair over her left
shoulder and turned her back to him.
He gulped.
Two thin doris held the rich red silk against her. His eyes ran over the golden
skin of her back, mesmerised.
Mami slowly
sidled to the kitchen and stood at the door, her ear cocked to hear the secret
conversation between her Arnav bitwaa and Khussi.
“Arnavji, I
am dying here,” Khushi egged him on in an urgent whisper. “Jaldi, please.”
“Yes, yes,”
he murmured. He lifted a trembling hand to the top dori, caught one end and
tugged gently.
The dori
fell open.
Khushi
moaned in relief.
Mami gasped
soundlesly. What was Arnav bitwaa doing to that girl for her to make Suhaag Raatwala
sounds?
“Arnavji,”
Khushi urged him, her hand on her chest, holding the piece of red silk to her.
Should he
tie the first one before untying the second one? he wondered.
She solved
his confusion.
“Untie it,
Arnavji,” she pleaded.
Mami
clutched her heart. Was Khussi asking her Arnav bitwaa to remove her sari?
He
obediently tugged the second dori loose.
Khushi
sagged in relief. “That feels so good,” she groaned in pleasure.
Arnav
swallowed hard at the sight of the unfettered curve of her back. His eyes narrowed.
The doris had left red marks on her back. Almost without his volition, his
hands went up. His left hand held her shoulder firm and his right hand massaged
the firm, supple skin of her back.
“Arnavji?”
it was an uncertain question.
“Let me
make you feel better,” he whispered against her ear.
She nodded
obediently. His gentle fingers trailed over her over-sensitive skin.
Khushi
squealed in pleasure.
Mami
jumped. What was happening in the kitchen? She turned her head to look at
Madhumatiji who was praying earnestly, her eyes still shut. Nani and Anjali had
questions in their eyes. Mami grimaced. How could she tell Saasumma that her
first great grandchild was on the way to being born? That Arnav bitwaa was
having his suhaag raat with Khussi in their kitchen, woh bhi without shaadi?
Arnav’s warm,
hard hand massaged and manipulated Khushi’s sore muscles.
She
trembled.
Minutes
passed by as he played with the skin of her back. She twisted, shuddered and shivered
as his fingers ran all over her back.
Khushi
forgot Buaji and the pooja.
Mami leaned
forward to see what Arnav bitwaa was doing to Khussi. Her hand hit the lock of
the door and made a slight sound.
Arnav
stilled.
“More,”
Khushi demanded in a throaty purr.
“Someone
will come here,” he warned her softly.
“Let them,”
Khushi said.
Arnav
smiled. “What if Buaji sees us like this? You with the blouse untied and me
behind you?” he whispered in her ear.
“She will
blame me,” Khushi replied, sure of her answer.
Arnav
smiled as he slowly fastened the doris, taking care to make her comfortable.
“OK now?”
he asked.
Khushi
nodded. “Shukriya,” she said softly.
Arnav
smiled.
They left
the kitchen together, missing Mami who had plastered herself to the wall to avoid being
seen.
***
After the
pooja, Arnav and Khushi had their dinner together, Khushi giving him every
vegetable and fruit she didn’t like.
“I don’t
like karela,” she murmured.
“I love it,”
he smiled.
“Yeh
leejiye,” she said as she transferred the karela on her plate to his.
She frowned
at the fruit salad. “Santra?” she winced.
“I love
oranges,” he offered.
“Very good,”
she complimented him as she gave him all the orange pieces in her bowl.
“Arnavji,
can you have this kheer?” she asked.
“No,” he
replied.
“Then I won’t
have it too,” she stated.
“Khushi,
you don’t have to give up kheer just because I am with you,” he smiled.
Tears filled
her big eyes. “I would feel bad if I couldn’t have kheer and my friend had it,
right before me.”
“Khushi,”
he laughed. “Tum bilkul sanki ho.”
“You are a
better man than I am,” she realised.
“I most
definitely am. You are a ladki,” he laughed.
Khushi
laughed along with him.
“Arnavji,
will you visit me at Laxmi Nagar? We can watch the serial together,” Khushi
offered him the treat.
He took it
with alacrity. “I will.”
Khushi
smiled.
“Khushi,
give me your phone number,” he asked.
She recited
it like an obedient girl.
“Titliyya,
it is time to leave,” Buaji called.
Khushi grimaced.
“I have to go now.”
Arnav
nodded. “I will see you soon,” he promised.
“We will
have fun watching the serial together,” she declared.
“Yes, we
will definiely have fun,” Arnav whispered, watching Khushi leave with Buaji.
***
“What made
you join us for the pooja today, Chotey?” Anjali asked, laughter in her eyes.
Arnav
looked at his laptop, his face slightly flushed.
“I invite
you every time and you make it a point to be far away from home on those
evenings. Aaj kya hua?” Nani teased.
Arnav pretended
to be deaf and dumb.
Mami
cleared her throat meaningfully. “Arnav bitwaa, bill you be habing ‘fun’ with
Khussi bitiya any time soon?” she asked deliberately.
Arnav’s
eyes flew to hers.
“Woh kaa
he, Saasumma, I think it ijj better to have marrijj before fun,” Mami spoke to
Nani but looked at Arnav. “Naahi to chotey packetwaa aa jayenge before marrijj.”
“What are
you talking about, Manorama?” Nani frowned.
“Kucho
naahi, Saasumma. I was just telling Arnav bitwaa that Khussi seems a good girl,”
Mami said.
Nani &
Anjali nodded.
“And her Buaji
seems strict,” she added.
“Yes, she
is,” Anjali agreed.
“So it
might be good to take Arnav bitwaa’s marrijj proposal to Madhumatiji before
something happens,” Mami looked at Arnav.
“What can
happen?” Nani frowned, confused.
“Shall we
ask for Khushiji’s hand?” Anjali asked Arnav eagerly.
Arnav
blushed. “I will let you know when,” he replied.
Nani and
Anjali smiled at him, thrilled.
Mami
frowned. “Phone numbers exchange hui gawa, next datewaa phixed hui gawa. Bhat
are you waiting for now, Arnav bitwaa?”
“To see her
serial with Khushi,” he murmured before walking away, a small smile on his
lips.
"Bhere are you goings?" Mami called after him.
"To give Laxmi a treat," he smiled.
Ahahahaha..... Mami And her brain.....
ReplyDeleteOutstanding! I read it twice Smita. Love this Arnav and clueless Khushi.
ReplyDeleteHydsri
superb
ReplyDeleteTooooo gooood
ReplyDeleteAwesome. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteHey Smitha, What is with Khushi in the last story and this one...she is childish, naive and innocent...but i am sure she is not ignorant about what she could allow a man to do and not do to her physically... sorry...not able to relate...:(
ReplyDeletePatience, my dear, patience. So glad to see you here.
DeleteHahahaha Mami's mind works in overdrive mode! Lol!
ReplyDeleteKhushi is so naive! She was wreaking havoc in Arnav, and there she was, enjoying herself at the new sensations she was experiencing! :P
Loved it Looking forward to the next update! :) x
Maami should have said the truth.. would have been awesome.. and Khushi, why will Arnav watch serial with you.?? too naive..
ReplyDeleteWow naive or what
ReplyDeleteNot helping him
And Mami taking it so wrong
They weren't doing much
Well not really
He was just untying her dori
And messaging her back
Nothing scandalous
Yeah right
Good no one saw them
How to seduce a man without knowing you are doing it go to miss khushi kumari Gupta
She will tell you
But then she doesn't know
She told him how and why her blouse was tight
Girl his control will slip
If it hadn't already
She is dangerous for him
He didn't faint luckily
But boy was that a treat for him or what
Shaadi karwa do
Before great grand child comes
Bless Mami
Eavesdropping like that
Gutter mind she has
But can you blame her
So arnav found this visitor all than to laxmi
He is gonna love that goat for that
This was cute and funny
So arhi wedding it is huh
But let them finish their serial date first
Smita this was mind blowing. i was laughing so loudly my family was like what happened. God superb one.. painted & sainted was best descriptions of mami & anjali ever heard.. khushi is sanki number one and arnav have fallen for her so hard.. looking forward to serial watching session.. love you and loved your new story a lot.. :)
ReplyDeleteLoved the update
ReplyDeleteOh my god. Khushi is so naive about her actions. Arnav seems to be having a nlast of course. And Mami's mind is imagining things.
ReplyDeleteSo he will be watching serial with Khushi. This is going to be fun.
LOL Mami is imagining more than required hehehe Nice update
ReplyDeleteOmggggggg haayeee Romance
ReplyDeleteMami n her imaginations
LOL!!!!! awesome...update... hahahaaaa
ReplyDeleteHahah loved it Mami back to spying!
ReplyDeleteLovely update Smita. That sari was so beautiful and the dori... OMG :-). Mami is so cute. She is always ready to investigate what is happening between arnav and khushi :-). Arnav is going to laxmi nagar to watch serial with khushi :-)). Very nicely written. BTW, I am reading Finding Khushi again. I don't remmeber how many times I have read it already :-).
ReplyDeletewow superb update loved it can't wait for next part...............ameena671
ReplyDeleteYou killing us with red sari and it's untying dories... Awesome
ReplyDeleteAwesome!!!!
ReplyDeleteLol....Arnav and Khushi are going to watch serial together. And Maami she is altogether another piece in every story of yours.
Lovely!!!!
Waiting for next part already.
umm ,, who planned this match fixing??? khushi seems a mystery
ReplyDeletewow what a chapter
ReplyDeleteloved it very much
Khushi is so innocent, naive and cute.Looks like Arnav has fallen in love with her already.
About mami what can I say? her's mind is imagining things and working in overtime.
Now Arnav will be watching serial with Khushi, can't wait to see what happen next.
Lovely update...
ReplyDeleteRed saree and dori... kya baat hai... ab toh Arnav totally smitten hoyegaye ;)
It was you behind Mami's wild imagination.. It was you behind Khushi's naivity...
ReplyDeleteIt was you behind Arnav's uncontrolled actions..
Smita...
I m really scared of ur capabilities...
What'll become of us when there will be playing double tune of Rabba Ve at Laxminagar ...
*wink*
DeleteWell said!
DeleteAwesome
ReplyDeleteOh my how come Laxmi got such an awesome treat.
ReplyDeleteAnd omg what was that Khushi so naive and Arnav so dazed and out of control and that massage.
Oh my Mami is no less first investigation than indirect confrontation and finally the lasting with marijj proposal.
Awesome.
Amazing OS..............they exchanged numbers.......they planned their next date in laxmi nagar to watch the serial together.............
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Arnav is going to give Laxmi a treat.Yes he definitely knows whom to thank for the unexpected beautiful hugs he got. Khushi is so clueless that she is telling her choli is tight and asking him to untie her blouse Hai re NandaKishore!!! Arnav has so much control .Now he is going to test his control by seeing serial with Khushi.Very nice .How will be their Suhag Raat 😁 with the special suhaag raat sounds...
ReplyDeleteLove you for the beautiful updates
Hi Smita, I read all your updates in one go. I have been so busy that I didn't have time to breathe. I sat up late last night determined to read the updates even if I had to lose sleep. (Am a zombie this morning, but a happy one) I was laughing so hard after reading the latest update that I woke my husband up. ( Needless to say, my ASR was not amused) While Khushi tied up Arnav with her artless seduction, mamiji stole the show esp. her imagination re. suhaagraatwala sounds!! A very novel story line Smita. Looking forward to the next update. Will there be an epilogue? Now I have to watch at least one scene from the show- perhaps the new year one.
ReplyDeleteKhushi is innocence personified......;)
ReplyDeleteLoving it............:)
Awesome.: )
ReplyDeleteHi Smita Di.. I just read ur new OS.. its awesome.. Khushi is talking abut "Our" fav serial..loved it even more.!!
ReplyDeleteLoved the 1st part the most..very unexpected visitor visiting Arnav in his room..thre convo was wonderful.
Loved Mami ji's reactions seeing Arshi together in the roon & thn the kitchen as well..lolsss
Khushi is tooooo innocent..driving Arnav crazy ;)
Now they hv exchanged thre nos. me expecting more fun ;) Continue soon di..
Sorry for not coming here before/early.
Awww...khushi is just adorable...
ReplyDeleteloved the update...
n
conggrrrtttttssss dear on publication ov ur first novel....
u really deserve this n many more....
Lo ji.. in pic Laxmi is giving treat to Arnav.. not as stated by Arnav bitwa
ReplyDeleteAww that was such a sweet update!! Last pic was too funny!!!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome
ReplyDeleteAwesome
ReplyDeleteIt feels good to be here again in this warm and pleasant " Arshian" ambiance!
ReplyDeleteOnce I read all the updates, I will be back!
Missed you a lot! You, your stories, and the comments and some new friends that I have known since I found this blog :-)
checking Smita....
ReplyDeleteGtting complaints as to unable to comment via WP and also gmail!
Good story going on here...
Writing next part. Will post soon.
Deleteloved it. couldn't stop myself from laughing aloud in the end.
ReplyDeleteJust imagining Arnav giving head massage to Buaji itself is very hilarious and out of this world.
I love it. My belly hurts because I couldn't stop laughing :-)
ReplyDeletei was laughing so hard my hubby thought i was nut this is so cute and he really does have to treat laxmi loving the update .
ReplyDeletehehehe ay it's so funny😂😂😂
ReplyDeletelol
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