Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you
Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi
"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
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Part 8
Khushi
stood before the mirror brushing her hair into obedience before going to bed.
She thoughtfully plaited the silky length, her mind on the proposal of marriage
that Arnavji had offered her.
She smiled.
Arnavji
wanted to marry her! That was a coup, a victory she could throw in Buaji’s face
for years...even if she didn’t accept him.
Her lips turned down.
She would
never see him if she refused him. With whom would she laugh? Who would
patiently watch the serial with her?
She sighed.
He would be
very disappointed if she refused him. She could almost imagine his face fall if
she said no, see his facial muscles clench in his effort to keep his face
expressionless, visualise his eyes dim, his lips droop...
He would
become sad.
Khushi
frowned.
No, no he couldn’t be sad, shouldn’t be sad as long as she was alive.
She was determined to entertain him as long as she was around. But how could
she agree to marry him to keep him happy?
Especially
as he would soon regret his impetuous proposal?
Khushi
threw her plait over her shoulder and proceeded to walk towards the open
window. It was a moonlit night, lending magic to the prosaic lines of houses
and shrubs on her street.
Her phone
rang.
She picked
up the phone from the bedside table and looked at the caller ID.
Arnavji.
“Arnavji?”
she asked.
“What are
you doing now, Khushi?” he asked.
“Worrying
about your proposal,” Khushi replied directly.
He smiled.
She could feel the smile and hear it in his voice as he murmured, “I didn’t
know my proposal would make you lose sleep over it.”
“What did
you think my reaction would be?” Khushi asked curiously.
“I thought
you would agree because—because we are friends,” he replied.
Khushi
sighed. “It is because we are friends and I like you that I can’t agree to
marry you,” she admitted.
He bit back
his smile. “Is there a rule that friends can’t marry?” he asked simply.
Khushi
smiled. “Yes, there is when one friend is me,” she replied mildly. “Arnavji,
what were you doing at this time of the night?” she asked.
He looked
at the laptop and files on his table. “Working,” he said, leaning back in his
black metal recliner in the garden.
“Working?”
she grimaced. “When there is a full moon?” she asked, disgusted with him.
He chuckled
silently.
“You are a
sadu like the hero, aren’t you?” Khushi asked frankly.
Arnav
guffawed. “I am afraid so,” he managed to croak between laughing his heart out.
Khushi
snorted.
“Khushi,”
he explained softly, his voice still holding traces of amusement, “I have been
alone all my life till you hid in my cupboard. That is why I am such a
killjoy.”
“You were
alone?” she asked, her voice dripping pity.
Arnav hid
his smile. If pity for him could make her marry him, he would take it. “Yes,”
he sighed. She was not the only one with a penchant for drama!
Her brain
cells kicked in at the wrong moment. “How can you say you were alone, Arnavji?”
she asked doubtfully. “You had your family with you.”
“My parents
died when I was young, Khushi,” he delved into the past. “I was the man of the
house. I had to be strong for Di. Life was all responsibility and work till you
appeared in my life.”
“So I am a
clown?” Khushi asked.
He burst
out laughing. “My family is definitely a circus, Khushi, but you are not a
clown.”
“Then what
am I?” the orphan in her asked to know her place in his world.
He
understood the longing behind her simple words. “My family,” he replied. “You
would be my family.”
She mulled
over his reply.
“I hadn’t
thought about marriage, Khushi, till I met you,” he said clearly. His ego was
insignificant in the face of her insecurity.
Her mouth
fell open. She, Khushi Kumari Gupta could inspire such a change of mind in a
man?
“But after
meeting you, I realised that I was missing out on a lot of pleasures in life. I
want to marry you, live with you, have children with you,” he said simply.
“And become
old?” she clarified.
“And become
old with you,” he smiled.
“Are you
sure you won’t change your mind?” she asked.
He smiled.
“Very sure, Khushi. I am no teenager to take decisions lightly,” he murmured.
She
pondered on his words. Then she asked, “Arnavji, when do you think the hero
will propose to the heroine?”
Arnav’s
smile widened. “When better sense prevails,” he replied.
“Then it
won’t be any time now,” she fretted. “I hope I am alive to see their marriage.”
Arnav
laughed silently, his shoulders shaking in mirth.
“You don’t take
paan, do you, Arnavji?” she made sure.
“No,” he
smiled in understanding. “I don’t take paan. I drink once in a while at
official functions, but in moderation. I don’t smoke.”
“You
drink?” Khushi asked.
“Yes, at
functions,” he admitted, hoping that his honesty wouldn’t doom him to eternal
bachelorhood.
“I take
bhang at Holi,” she confessed.
His lips
trembled in delighted merriment.
“Do you
sing after drinking?” Khushi asked.
“I always
sing after I take bhang,” she informed him.
His
shoulders shook.
“Buaji says
I sound like a dying toad,” Khushi warned him.
“I will buy
earplugs,” he reassured her.
Khushi
waited silently for a long moment. Then she asked, “Arnavji, why are you being so
accommodating?”
“Because I
want you in my life,” he said simply.
“If it
turns bad?” she asked.
“We will
manage,” he smiled.
“Will you
be sad if I refuse?” she asked.
“Very,” he said
truthfully.
She sighed,
“If it turns bad, we have Devi Maiyya.” She took comfort from the thought of
divine aid.
“Yes,”
Arnav agreed, smiling.
“I will
marry you,” she said softly, uncertainly.
Arnav drew
in a deep breath of relief. “You will never regret it, Khushi,” he promised
her.
“Haan, but
you may,” she responded.
it was great.....i cant wait to see what happen next....update soon.....
ReplyDeleteKhushi agreed. Yippee. The family is so happy. I can't wait.
ReplyDeleteArnav had a hard time convincing Khushi. Hope there are no more hurdles.
ReplyDeleteat last...she agreed ..lol
ReplyDeleteFinally..
ReplyDeleteKhushi said YES.
Yayyyyyyy...
Fun just begins :)
after lot of worrying she said Yes.. waiting for their marriage..
ReplyDeleteYay she said yes cant wait for the next update!
ReplyDeletewow awesome update loved it thank you................ameena671
ReplyDeleteFinally khushi agree to marry arnav
ReplyDeleteSimply awesome
Yes... Khushi agreed to marry him. That was a very cute conversation. Arnav was also doing drama... Hilarious:-). Nice part.
ReplyDeleteLoved it the nuance is of a time where things were simple and not as fast paced as life is today ,
ReplyDeleteFinally Khushi agreed to the proposal. YAY
ReplyDeleteYippeeee... Finally Khushi agreed. Loved the update dear. Looking forward to next part.
ReplyDeleteAwww it's so heartbreaking to read about how Khushi thinks he will not be able to cope with her or not like her
ReplyDeleteBut truly Arnav is only for her
And I am glad she finally said yes
Awesome! It's amazing that Khushi and Buaji both concerned for Arnav (Ha. Ha. Ha) Loved the update.
ReplyDeleteLOVED IT !!!!! YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER ,THE EXPRESSIONS SEEM REAL TO ME AND I FEEL AS IF I AM IN THE STORY LIVING WITH THEM AND LISTENING TO THEM !!!!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteOmg! It was so nice. Khushi wanted to sure if his reasons for proposal but at the same time she wanted to make sure he knew what he is signing for.
ReplyDeleteShe is so adorable.
Now they both know what they are getting into. Very matured conversation. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteNo way lady
ReplyDeleteNo chance in hell
He will never regret marrying you
Just not possible
After all he loves you
Though he does need her
Can't spend rest life alone
He will have someone so will she
She sure was thinking about this
Not for her
But for him
Awww she already cares
See buaji DM is helping take care of him
And by khushi
She just made all of us and arnav very happy by agreeing
Well he laid it all out for her
Why he wants to marry her
Am glad she agreed
Or arnav would become sad
And she didn't like seeing him sad
Ahhh the hell with hero of your serial dear
You have live hero to think of
Khushi's maturity has always kept me in awe....
ReplyDeleteawesum part....loved the arshi convo....loved the way arnav persuaded hr to say yesss.....beautifully written...continuue sooon
ReplyDeleteBeautiful update,very well written.
ReplyDeleteKhushi was so innocent but same time mature also.Liked the way she said that she was worrying about Arnav's marriage proposal. Khushi doesn't want Arnav to regret later marrying her.I am glad finally Khushi agreed.
Wonderful update
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Awesome update Smitha!!! Khushi at last agreed so happy for Arshi!!!
ReplyDeleteThis OS is the funniest of all, Choti! So very glad that to read it after so long. And congratz on the publishing your first ever ebook!
ReplyDeleteFantastic
ReplyDeleteFinally khushi agreed marrying arnav....let's see what happens next...
ReplyDeleteFinally khushi agreed marrying arnav....let's see what happens next...
ReplyDeleteThis was really amzing :) loved it too much :)
ReplyDeleteSpoonai (IF)
Awesome...........khushi is insecure about the marriage...........I am happy she agreed for the marriage............
ReplyDeleteamazing story.. my stomach is paining as i read 5 parts in one go.. it is so sweet, subtle tale of love of ARSHI.. khushi at her sankiness and arnav in his lover boy image.. i am loving them and this story.. thanks a ton smita for writing such beautiful simple stories of our dear ARSHI.. love you and your stories.. :)
ReplyDeleteFinally..a yes....this is so awesome..I have never imagined arnav to watch serial....
ReplyDeletearey
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