Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you
Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi
"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
A blog for my VMs:
http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/
OS 11: An
Uncomplicated Wife
Part 1
Arnav
looked impatiently at the time on his phone. It was getting late and he wanted
to be on his way to Delhi at the earliest. He had asked Aman to schedule a
meeting at noon the next day, expecting the wedding fuss in Lucknow to be over
in an hour or so.
“Chotey,
the Guptas want to talk to you,” Nani hissed. “Be polite,” she warned.
Arnav shot
an impatient look at his Nani and turned to look at his newly-acquired in-laws.
“Bitwaa, I
hope you will be very happy with Khussi,” Sasi Gupta hoped with folded hands.
Arnav
folded his hands and nodded in reply. “Thanks,” he grunted.
“Woh...she
is young,” Garima looked downright worried. “I hope she doesn’t trouble you,
babua.”
‘Trouble
me?’ Arnav frowned in his mind. ‘What do they expect her to do? Let loose mice
in my bed every night?’ “I will manage,” he said shortly.
“Oo kaa he,
Nandkisore,” Buaji explained, “Everything happened in a hurry. She may find it
difficult to adjust. One minute she was preparing for Payaliyya’s shaadi with
Akass bitwaa and the next minute,” her voice trailed away.
Arnav
nodded. He too was in a similar situation. He had come down to Lucknow for
Akash’s wedding and found himself sharing his brother’s mandap with him.
“Bhat ijj
Arnav bitwaa telling the Gupta phamily, Sasumma?” Mami asked. “Ijj he scolding
them?”
“I don’t
know, Manorama,” Nani was weary. “I reminded him to be polite.”
“You can’t
blame him if he is angry, Nani,” Anjali whispered. “We steamrolled him into
marriage.”
“Would he
have married if left to himself?” Nani asked in exasperation. “He is thirty
now. How many years should I wait for my great grandchild? That boy thinks only
of his business, not of a wife or a family of his own.”
“That’s
true, Sasumma,” Mami concurred. “Girls can walk for hours in phront of hamre
Arnav bitwaa and phaintiyyaa in exhaustion bephore him, but his aijj (eyes)
bill still be on his laptop, Hello Hi Bye Bye!”
Anjali
looked at her brother and the Guptas with worried eyes.
“Looks at
him standing there, Sasumma,” Mami exhorted. “Wearing a coat suit as if he were
going to his ophice. That too black in colour, Hello Hi Bye Bye!”
Nani
sighed. “Forget his dress, Manorama. I am just grateful that he didn’t kick up
too much of a fuss when we insisted that he marry Khussi bitiya.”
“I think he
did it for Akash,” Anjali whispered. “Chotey realised that Akash wanted to
marry Payalji.”
“Hamre
Arnav bitwaa ijj Ram and hamre Akass bitwaa ijj Laxman,” Mami added. “How can
Arnav bitwaa refuse his brother anything he wants?”
“Where is
Khussi bitiya?” Nani asked softly.
“Bidding
farewell to her friends,” Anjali whispered.
Mami
sighed. “Poor girlwa. She doesn’t know she has married Sage Durvasa.”
“Manorama,
Anjali bitiyya,” Nani called softly, “Go get the brides. The sooner we leave
Sheesh Mahal and return to Delhi the better.”
“Yes,
Sasumma,” Mami agreed.
“I will say
our goodbyes to the Guptas. Anjali bitiya, damadji is in charge of our transportation,
isn’t he? Ask him to get the cars ready to leave immediately.”
“Yes,
Nani,” Anjali muttered even as she looked around for her husband, Shyam Manohar
Jha.
***
Arnav
frowned at the worried faces of the Guptas. Why were they so upset at the
thought of parting from their daughter? If they wanted her with them, then why
had they married her off to him? Insisted on marrying her off with Payal? Why
had they told Nani that they couldn’t marry Payal to Akash till their second
daughter too had a groom?
He looked
at his own family. Nani, Mami and Di were huddled together whispering.
He smiled
sardonically. It was too late for them to lament over his wedding, pity his
wife, wonder why he had agreed...because he had agreed to marry Khushi
willingly. They hadn’t fooled him one second. He hadn’t married for Akash. He
hadn’t married to please his female relations. He hadn’t fallen for their
emotional blackmail. He had married Khushi because it suited him to marry an
uncomplicated wife.
He had always
planned to marry when he was thirty. He was thirty now.
In Khushi
he had a ready-made bride. He didn’t have to waste his time finding one.
And his
family adored her. They were protective of her. It was always Khushi this and Khushi
that.
He couldn’t
have hoped for a better wife. And that was why he had nodded his agreement
after taking one cursory glance at a passport-sized, black and white photo of
his bride-to-be.
To be fair,
Khushi’s father had insisted that he meet the girl. He hadn’t bothered to. What
was the need? Payal was pretty. The whole family was reasonably good looking.
His bride wouldn’t be a total antidote,
he was certain. What did it matter to him if she was intelligent or dumb, smart
or shy? He wanted a wife who would occupy her place in his house but not in his
life and leave him alone to work in peace. A wife who wouldn’t cause
complications in his simple life that held work, work and more work.
He sighed.
Families
were crazy and illogical but he didn’t have the time to ponder on such
philosophical issues when there was a deal waiting for him in Delhi. He looked
at the time on his phone. It was high time they left Lucknow.
He looked
at the anxious faces of his new in-laws. A strange feeling tugged at his heartstrings.
“Why don’t
you keep..err...Khushi here?” Arnav asked. “You can send her to Delhi when she
is ready to travel,” he offered.
Maybe this would make them feel better.
The Guptas
gasped.
“Keep her
here after marriage?” Garima was scandalised. “No, bitwaa. The place of a wife
is with her husband,” she stressed.
Arnav
shrugged. ‘Whatever,’ he thought.
“Sasiji,
Garimaji, Madhumatiji,” Nani called. “It is time we left.”
“Ji, ji,”
Sasi Gupta agreed. “This is the auspicious time for you to set out.”
Arnav moved
away to answer a call from Aman.
“Yes, I
will be there,” he assured Aman. “Get the files ready. Mail me the details.”
***
Anjali led
out the two brides, both dressed in heavily brocaded pink lehengas, the dupatta
over their heads to cover their faces.
Akash
smiled at the sight of his wife. Arnav frowned at his phone. How much time
would this nonsense take?
The brides
threw rice over their heads, severing their bonds with their home. Tears
trickled down the faces of the people gathered for the bidaii. Payal wept
copiously while Khushi remained stoic under the dupatta.
The Guptas and their
friends hugged the brides and cried over them.
“Akash,”
Shyam Manohar Jha called. “This is the car assigned to you and your new bride,
Payalji.” He held open the door of a decorated luxury sedan.
“Thank you,
Jiju,” Akash smiled. He waited as Anjali and his mother settled Payal in and
then joined her.
“Arnav,
your chariot awaits,” Shyam held the door open.
Arnav
frowned at the black SUV and the driver in white uniform. “Where is my car?” he
asked. He looked around for his vehicle.
“We are
travelling in it,” Shyam smiled, showing all his teeth. “Saale saheb, you can’t
ask your new bride to squeeze in between us and perch uncomfortably in
inadequate space for five to six hours.”
Arnav
clenched his jaw. He hated surprises. “I prefer to drive myself,” he bit out.
“You are
the dulha, Saale saheb,” Shyam smiled. “Let the driver take you to Delhi.”
“Where are
my things?” Arnav asked, fuming.
“I have
transferred all your files and your laptop to this vehicle,” Shyam smiled. “Your
luggage too.”
Arnav bit
on his tongue. He hated it when others touched his belongings.
“Khushiji,
aayiye,” Anjali called nervously. “Get in.”
The bride
walked slowly to the car and got in.
Anjali
arranged the bride’s pink dress comfortably around her and shut the door.
Shyam
held the other door open for Arnav.
Arnav
nodded his thanks and took his seat.
Shyam shut
the door with a nod to the driver.
Akash’s car
left first.
Then the
vehicle carrying Arnav and Khushi moved out of the huge yard, down the driveway
and out through the open gates.
The
Raizadas spent some more time at Sheesh Mahal consoling the Guptas, inviting
them to Delhi, promising to take care of their daughters and offering to call
them at regular intervals with news about their daughters.
They then got into the car and after much waving, let the driver take them away from Sheesh Mahal.
"Naniji, we are taking a shortcut today," Shyam smiled at the elderly lady.
"Shortcut?" Nani asked.
"Yes. We need to get to Delhi before the couples reach there," he smiled. "We have to make arrangements to welcome them."
"Shyamji thinks of everything," Anjali smiled fondly at her husband.
"As you wish, damadji," Nani smiled before lying back to rest.
Part 2
Arnav
looked at the slim figure seated by him in the car. Her long legs were covered
by a rich pink skirt. Long, slim, fair fingers lay clasped on her lap. They
were covered with some design drawn in deep reddish brown mehendi. A heavy pink
dupatta covered her body and fell over her head, revealing only the tip of her
straight nose and a big gold nose ring.
It had been
two full hours since their journey began. Two hours of silence.
He parted his
lips to say something—anything, but could not think of a single thing to say.
He knew why
he had married her, but had no idea why she had married him. He should have
talked to her, spent some time with her before their wedding... She may be his
uncomplicated wife but she was also a mysterious one.
He looked
at the back of the driver’s head, his lips thin with annoyance. If he had been
driving, then maybe he could have found something to say to the girl. But
performing before an onlooker was not just difficult but impossible. His Jijaji
and his brilliant ideas!
He looked out
through the glass window. It was getting dark.
The car
came to a sudden stop.
Arnav
looked up frowning. The girl stiffened.
“There is
something wrong, Sir,” the driver explained apologetically. “Let me check.”
Arnav
nodded.
The driver
opened the bonnet and fiddled inside.
Arnav looked
at the girl. Her head was lowered, her gaze apparently on her fingers.
The driver
returned to Arnav’s side.
“Sir, I can
repair it. Why don’t you both sit on the bench by the road as I get this done?”
he asked with a small smile.
Arnav opened
his door and left the car. It felt good to stretch his back and legs. He walked
to the girl’s side and pulled open the door.
“Khushi,”
he called, her name sounding strange on his lips.
She left
the car.
He stood
back.
She glided to
the side of the road, the rich ends of her lehenga trailing on the tarred
surface. He joined her. They stood looking at the vast expanse of forest land
they could see from the road. Trees grew in a lush cover. The sky was darkening
and a cold wind was making its presence felt.
He looked
down at his phone at the time. Six.
Maybe he
should phone Akash and tell him of the minor delay on the road. Or call Jijaji.
He heard
the sound of a vehicle on the road behind him. Arnav turned his head to see a black
car approaching them. It slowed down as it neared them.
Arnav
stiffened, his sixth sense warning him, alerting him to some danger. He stepped
forward to cover Khushi.
Many things
happened at the same time.
The windows of the new car slid down.
The driver repairing the damaged car shut the
bonnet, jumped in and drove away.
Hands with
guns appeared at the windows.
Masked killers shot at Arnav and Khushi before
disappearing in the dark.
Arnav
rolled with Khushi in the dust of dark evening, moving away from the road to
the mud by the side. They lay stunned, too shocked to move.
“Khushi,
tum theek ho?” he asked, his voice sounding rusty, unused.
There was no
reply.
Arnav lifted
his head to look at the girl trembling in his arms.
His heart
stilled.
An angel.
More beautiful than anyone he had ever seen. Fine features and beautiful, wide
eyes.
He stared at her, shaken to the core. The
bullets and the murder attempt paled in comparison to the impact her face had
on him.
“I—I am
fine. Aur aap?” she asked, her voice sweeter than the rarest honey.
He
swallowed through a dry throat, his eyes running over as much of her as he
could see.
She
squirmed, feeling his body resting heavily on hers.
He let go
of her and moved away from her prone body. She sat up. He helped her stand up,
his fingers around her elbow. Her skin felt soft, satiny.
“Who..?”
her voice trailed away. “Why?” she asked.
“I don’t
know,” he admitted.
“The
driver...” she swallowed.
“Was in on
the plan apparently,” he replied.
She nodded.
Then she gently pulled out of his hold and dusted herself down.
He looked
down to see his phone lying on the road. It was in four pieces. He quickly picked
them up and pushed them into his pocket.
“Khushi,”
he called softly.
She looked up.
“We need to
move away from the road. They will return for our bodies. Once they know we are
not dead, they will look for us,” he said gently.
Her face
paled.
He held out
his hand.
She put
hers in his.
Wow Smitha you promised to be back on June 15th and you are 10days early with a super surprise. Love this new story and have a lot of questions already. Is Shyam the snakewa responsible for the shootout? Can't wait for your next update
ReplyDeleteWhat an intriguing place it must be, a writer's brain. With a surge of all these thoughts waiting to take form. Words conjuring the framework up and a story taking shape. No wonder then, that my dear Smi succumbed to the temptation!! Hey, am not making a fuss over it. :) It's 6th June. You had to give us an anniversary special. I understand. ;-)
ReplyDeleteAnd what a fiery start to the story. I mean literally. For once am excited about a 'Shyamful' Arshi tale. We can all get a kick out of reading the varied ways in which the snake's trickery fails and true love triumphs. Arnav's protective and possessive instincts have already kicked in. It's gonna be one thrilling ride.
So, when is your brain getting another work-out, so that your humble readers are gifted the next update? :P
Smitaji ....aap aur aapka shaatir mind...wonderful start.
ReplyDeleteKya Shyamji ka haath aur dimaag hai inn dono KO maarne mein?
Hum chinteet hai bhi aur nahi bhi. Kyon ki humko aap par aur aapki likhaavat par bharosa hai. Hum aapse love you dammit.
Smita... What a fabulous beginning. Wow... I loved the first 2 chapters.
ReplyDeleteArnav's indifference regarding his in-laws and khushi and later he was mesmerized by her beauty. They were attacked in the beginning itself ! Eagerly waiting for next parts. Do update soon.
Wow...... This is interesting
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Well.well well
ReplyDeleteAnother one
But this one more mysterious
He married her not due to aki
But because he would have to marry eventually
And so he just went with it
But khushi she is mystery
Why did she marry him
Why did they want her married with her sister
What's going on
And this murder attempt
What's with that
Once again you are here to shock and surprise us woohooo
He sure took being married to her in stride
But that didn't mean. His life would change
I think it just did
Was murder attempt for arnav
Or khushi
Hmmm that was close call
Now how are they to let their family know about this
Angel huh arnav
Interesting of you to think so
Can't wait for more
Let the mystery continue
Welcome back Smitha!!! That was an amazing start, totally loved both chapters!!!!
ReplyDeleteYeaaayyy.... U r back early.... Wonderful story dear....
ReplyDeleteWell it is a start with a Bang......pun intended ;-)
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to the uncomplicated wife of a complicated. ASR...
You're back and also early. The mystery of the assassination continues. This sounds exciting.
ReplyDeletewow an early start and what an intriguing start. a very different one and mysterious too :)
ReplyDeleteHydsri
wow brilliant start loved both parts thank you.............ameena671
ReplyDeleteLovely start..:) update soonnnnn....
ReplyDeleteWow!! such a beautiful start!!
ReplyDeleteYou know eventhough you mentioned you need a break and you will come only by june 15th i used to come here daily to read other stories also to check whether there is anything i left out or anything new! You literally surprised me coming this early!! Love you for that!! and belated Ipkknd Anniversay!! and thanks for this vivid gift!! what more can anyone ask for!!
You are awesome girl!! i dont understand how that brain of yours work! but anyways i just loved the start!! oru oru storyum has one flavour and no mixing at atll that's the specialty of you!
So here the shyam is the one behind this attack as he was only incharge for the transport or my brain and intutions are wrong? wantoing to read more!
Read these 2 parts already for more than thrice!
Really sorry for not commenting for the previous updates!! really busy AD!! thats the issue anyways atleast now am 50% back i feel!!!
Am Waiting!!!!
he wanted an uncomplicated wife now already a murder attempt.. waiting to see if it is Shyam..
ReplyDeleteThe title says something but already we see some sparks.......why was there a murder attempt on them.......who could it be............Arnav has least expectations from his wife and this marriage.............but we do not know why khushi married Arnav...............brilliant start.................
ReplyDeleteWow this is amazing
ReplyDeleteLooking very interesting as always............waiting impatiently for the next update.......happy to see you back soon :)........keep it going.....
ReplyDeleteWill get back soon with the next part. So happy that you liked the first 2 parts!
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ReplyDeleteWohhhh ur back. Party time....
ReplyDeleteLoved the story, the concept was different cannot wait to read more. Is this story going to be a long or short one?
I wonder is Shayam is evil, as he arranged the cars which tried to kill the couple. A car that has Arnavs files and laptop...
Wow smita u r early ... A fabulous binging … I lov surprises.
ReplyDeleteYay its earlier then expected nice updates!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant start. Glad to see you back earlier. Is Shyam behind the murder attempt? Looking forward to reading next part...
ReplyDeleteinteresting start ..khushi and uncomplicated ..lol
ReplyDeleteI glad that you started a new story it looks like a mystery ,
ReplyDeleteOooooh! The tension! I certainly wasn't expecting this! Good job!
ReplyDeleteWhy all the hurry to get Khushi married? Together with her sister? For a while there I wondered how two hours had passed with Khushi being so quiet. Whether she was dumb? But then after the shootings she did talk. Phew!
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