Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
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Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi
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"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
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Part 5
Nani sat
before Devi Maiyya’s idol with her eyes shut and her hands folded. “Please
protect my Chotey and Khussi bitiya,” her voice trembled. “They have both been
through so much. Don’t punish them any more.”
Anjali,
lying exhausted on the sofa in the living room, sobbed.
“Rani
Sahiba, don’t make yourself sick,” Shyam pleaded.
Mami patted
Anjali’s hand. “Two days hui gawa. Hum poochath he, bhere ijj hamre Arnav
bitwaa and Khussi?” she asked, her face pale. “Akass bitwaa, did you asks Aman
if Arnav bitwaa has phoned?”
Akash who
was pacing the room, stopped and sighed. “I called him two minutes back, mate.
Bhai hasn’t called.”
“The car,”
Anjali gulped. “Did you get the driver, Shyamji?” she asked.
“No, Rani
Sahiba,” Shyam ran his fingers through his hair in agitation. “He absconded
with the vehicle. The travel agency has no record of the driver. Nor does that
black car belong to the agency.”
Payal
sobbed quietly, dark circles under her eyes.
“How can
this happens?” Mami asked. “Damadji, you arranged cars for the wedding. How can
Arnav bitwaa’s car not belongs to the agency? Jhoot!”
“Mamiji,”
Shyam’s eyes flew wide open.
“They are
lying,” Mami continued. “I bill go and asks them. Damadji, take me to their
office.”
Shyam stood
up in nervous excitement. “Mamiji, I asked them, threatened them. They have no
idea.”
“How can
they not have ideas?” Mami asked. “Bhere ijj my Arnav bitwaa? That ijj bhat I
am asking. I bill sit outside their office in hartal till they returns my Arnav
bitwaa to me! How can they say they don’t knows bhere my Arnav bitwaa ijj?”
“Mate,”
Akash tried to calm her.
“Aman has
not heard from Chotey,” Nani murmured. “Aisa ho hi nahi sakta. Will Chotey stay
away from his work or office?”
“Naniji, I
was thinking,” Shyam said feverishly.
All looked
at him.
“You know
Arnav,” he began. “He is unpredictable.”
All
listened keenly.
“Maybe he
took Khushiji on a honeymoon, a surprise trip,” Shyam tried. “Maybe his phone
is damaged. Maybe he picked a remote area for a holiday...”
“In a car
you arranged but don’t knows anything about?” Mami challenged Shyam. “Driven by
a driver nobody has heard about?”
“Chotey...on
a honeymoon...with Khushiji?” Anjali’s eyes moved to Nani. “I don’t think
he...”
“No, he
won’t,” Nani said firmly. “He doesn’t even know Khussi bitiya. We forced the
wedding on him; it was not what he wanted.”
Payal stared
at them in horror.
“Hamre
Arnav bitwaa ijj headstrong like a bull, but even his enemy can’t calls him
romantic. Honeymoon! If he stays in his ophice for honeymoon, I will believe,
damadji, but not on a secret running honeymoon.”
“He knows I
will worry,” Anjali gulped. “He has never done anything of this sort before.”
“He has
never been married before, Rani Sahiba,” Shyam tried to persuade his gullible
wife.
“We must
approach the police,” Nani decided.
“Naniji,
the scandal,” Shyam blustered. “If the world knows that Saale sahib is missing,
then it will affect his business. Am I not right, Akash?” he asked.
Akash
nodded. He parted his lips to reply but Shyam rushed in.
“See, Akash
agrees with me. The newspapers will love the scandal. India’s leading
businessman and his bride missing immediately after their wedding. Naniji,
reporters will camp on the doorstep of Shantivan. The news will be shown on
TV.”
Mami parted
her lips to reply.
Shyam
added. “What if they have been kidnapped? If the news gets out, the kidnappers
may kill them.”
This
silenced the ladies.
Nani and
Anjali sobbed, their throats and eyes raw from crying.
But Mami
asked, “Bhat kind of third-rate kidnappers he yein? No ransom demand, no
threatening letterwa, no phoone call?”
There was
pin-drop silence in the room.
“I need to
get to the office,” Akash told his family.
“I will
come with you,” Shyam offered. “Saale sahib may call Aman.”
“You stay
here, Jiju. Otherwise Di will starve and fall sick. I will be back soon,” Akash
said, his eyes on Payal’s wan face.
She nodded.
“If Arnav
gets in touch with Aman, let me know immediately, Akash,” Shyam said. “Call me
on my phone.”
“Ji, Jiju,”
Akash said before leaving.
Shyam’s
phone rang. He looked at the display and jumped up.
“I will go
to the travel agency once more, Naniji. Maybe I can get some new information,”
Shyam told the ladies.
They
nodded.
“Shall I
comes with you?” Mami asked, standing up.
“No,
Mamiji,” Shyam blocked her, his face flushing. “I will manage.” He rushed out to
answer the call before Mami could make any more offers of help.
***
Arnav and
Khushi joined a crowd of tourists leaving a bus and moved towards the lodge.
Some of the travellers opted for the dormitory, some for private rooms.
When it was
Arnav’s turn, the clerk asked him, “Name?”
“Sunil and
Pinky Dhawan,” Arnav replied. He gave a false address in Delhi.
“Room or
dorm?” the clerk asked.
“Room,” he
replied.
“There is
just one room left. It is a single room. The doubles are all gone,” he said regretfully.
“We will
take it,” Arnav said. What did the clerk know about how he and Khushi had spent
last night? He quickly paid cash and pocketed the key.
“Third
floor, last room. 310,” the clerk informed him.
Arnav
nodded.
“Is there a
pay phone nearby?” Arnav asked.
“Yes, near
the restaurant,” the clerk pointed to the small cubicle placed near the on-site
eatery. “We also have a clothes store, Sir. Woh kya he, guests often find that
they have forgotten to pack underwear,” he chuckled.
Arnav
nodded his thanks with a small smile, quickly took hold of Khushi’s arm and
marched towards the steps.
The room
was tiny but clean.
Arnav
quickly shut and locked the door.
He rushed
to the window and parting the curtains, looked out. He could see the highway.
“We can see
if anyone is looking for us, Khushi,” he murmured to Khushi who had joined him.
She nodded.
“Arnavji, shall I use the bathroom first?” she asked.
“Take the
toothbrushes and paste from the bag, Khushi,” he replied. “We need to get some
more clothes. I will go down to the small shop in the lodge after having a
bath. I need to call Akash and Aman. Your parents too.”
“They must
be so worried,” she said, her voice trembling.
“We will
get home soon, Khushi,” he promised softly, his eyes kind, intent. “I promise.”
Khushi
nodded. “I know,” she said.
Arnav
turned to look out of the window, feeling something settle within his chest at
her plain statement.
Khushi went
to have a hot shower.
Arnav took
a paper from the notepad on the bedside table, looked for a pen, found it in
the drawer of the table and quickly made a list of things they needed to buy
and do.
Khushi came
out wearing the same green anarkali, rubbing her hair dry.
“Look at
the list, Khushi. Add anything we need to get,” he told her before entering the
bathroom.
Khushi
looked at the list. It was comprehensive. She added some underclothes and a
comb to their needs, placed the paper on the table, weighed it down with the
water jug and slowly walked to the window.
She parted
the curtains slightly and looked out.
It was
night. Bright streetlamps lit the highway and the yard before the lodge. Buses
and cars were parked in neat lines and drivers and cleaners were moving about
washing and checking their vehicles.
Arnav left
the bathroom and came out rubbing his wet hair with a towel.
“A...arnavji...”
she called, her voice a scared, faint cry.
He dropped
the towel and rushed to her. “Kya hua, Khushi?” he asked anxiously. Maybe she
was feeling weak after their ordeal. He caught hold of her shoulders, tugging
her to lean against him. She was trembling.
“There...”
she whispered, pointing to the road.
He focused
on the road. A car like the one that had carried their assailants was parked on
the road by the low wall marking the boundaries of the lodge’s compound.
His fingers
tightened on her shoulders. She leaned back for support.
As they
watched, a man exited the vehicle.
Khushi
gasped. Dressed in a black T-shirt and trousers, his build looked very familiar.
“Is it...?”
her voice trailed away.
“They were
masked,” Arnav whispered.
As they
spied on him, he took out his phone from his pocket and answered a call. He
looked around for landmarks to explain his location to the person on the phone.
They then
saw him walk to the backseat of the vehicle.
The glass
came down. The man passed on some information to the passenger seated in the
vehicle.
“Khushi,
move back,” Arnav murmured. He slowly let the curtain slide to cover the
window. He then rushed to switch off the lights in their bedroom.
“They
shouldn’t see us,” he explained. “Come on,” he said before leading her to the
window and parting the curtains to look at the men and their car.
The suspect
was pacing impatiently.
“He is waiting
for someone,” Arnav surmised.
Khushi
pressed against his arm to see the road. Arnav lifted his arm and let her move
under it. They stood together in the dark for a long time.
A
white-coloured car came to a stop by the black.
“What the!”
Arnav exclaimed.
Khushi
turned her head to look at him, surprised.
“What is my
car doing here?” he asked in astonishment.
He stared
speechlessly as Shyam alighted from his car and walked towards the man in
black. The car door opened and the second suspect stepped out to join his
friend.
“That
is..that is Jijaji, isn’t it?” Khushi asked, her head spinning.
“Yes,” he
breathed, feeling his world shatter into a thousand pieces.
Khushi
moved closer to him and put her arm around his waist, hugging him close. His
arm tightened around her shoulders.
They stood
looking down at the proof of treachery as Shyam handed over a packet. One man
pulled it open and counted the money within. The partners in crime seemed to be
arguing with Shyam about money and Shyam was seen trying to placate the irate
criminals.
Shyam
argued with the men, maybe about their inability to kill and locate Arnav and
Khushi. He pointed to the lodge as if asking them to check among the guests. The
men in black moved towards the reception to gather information.
“Arnavji,”
Khushi buried her face in his neck.
“Sshhh,”
Arnav said softly. “Nothing will happen. We are safe,” he comforted her. “I
don’t think the men have our photos and we have registered under false names.”
They looked
down at an impatient and ruffled Shyam waiting for the killers to return with
news.
“Poor Di,”
Khushi sighed.
“I can’t
believe he dared to try to kill us,” Arnav bit out.
The men
returned to Shyam, apparently unable to get any information on Arnav Singh
Raizada and Khushi Kumari Gupta. Shyam’s nose twitched with disappointment and
fury. He gave hissed orders to the men and drove away to Delhi in Arnav’s car.
The men got into the black car and drove away in the opposite direction.
“Khushi, I
am going down to call Akash and Aman,” Arnav told her softly, his face drawn,
his eyes pained. “This is the best time. Shyam won’t reach Delhi for another
couple of hours.”
She nodded.
He took the
list, pocketed his wallet and left the room asking her to lock the door.
***
Akash
looked at the unfamiliar number on his phone’s display and frowned as he
answered the call.
“Hello?” he
asked.
“Akash,
don’t call out bhai,” Arnav warned.
Akash’s
mouth fell open. He was too shocked to make any sound.
“Are you
alone?” Arnav asked.
“Yes,”
Akash croaked, his eyes moist. “Where are you?”
“Are you at
office?” Arnav asked.
“Yes,”
Akash confirmed.
“Shut the
door,” Arnav ordered.
Akash ran
to do his bidding.
“Done,”
Akash said.
“Shyam paid
men to kill Khushi and me,” Arnav said bluntly.
Akash sat
down in his chair, his legs failing to hold him up. “What?” he cried.
“The driver
stopped the car on the way, said it had to be repaired, asked us to wait by the
road. Two men shot at us from another car. We managed to escape,” Arnav
recounted.
“Bhai,”
Akash was horrified to say the least.
“We walked
through a jungle all day to find shelter in a lodge,” Arnav told him. “My phone
is broken, Akash,” he admitted. “Otherwise I would have gotten in touch with
you earlier.”
Akash
swallowed the tears choking him. “Khushiji...?” he asked.
“Safe,”
Arnav replied. “We had no idea who it was, Akash, till we saw Shyam paying off
the killers now with our own eyes.”
“How could
he?” Akash asked. “After all that you have done for him...”
Arnav
sighed.
“Bhai,
shall I come over now? We can get home tonight,” Akash asked.
“No, the
killers are still around,” Arnav vetoed him. “Call Aman to your cabin and tell
him everything I told you. Ask him to get in touch with the Police Commissioner
and to keep this quiet. Tell him...” Arnav gave Akash a description of the driver,
black car and the two men in black.
Akash noted down the points. He also gave
him the location of the lodge they were in. “I will call you tomorrow, Akash. Hopefully
by then the police will have picked up the killers and the driver. How are
Nani, Di and Mami? Payal?” he asked.
“Praying,
crying,” Akash mumbled.
“Don’t tell
them we are alive. We have to trap Shyam,” Arnav told him.
“Yes,
bhai,” Akash agreed. “Bhai, please take care.”
“How about
the Guptas?” he asked.
“We didn’t
inform them,” Akash replied.
“Good. I
will stay in touch,” Arnav promised before cutting the call.
Arnav
returned to the room with their dinner and the necessities they had noted down.
Silently
Khushi took the packets of food from the cover and set them on the table. Arnav
joined her and they ate without plates or cutlery, silent and thoughtful.
As Khushi
cleared the remnants of dinner, Arnav took out the clothes he had purchased.
Leaving Khushi’s on the bed, he went to change into nightwear.
Later, as
he lay in bed, his eyes on the ceiling, Khushi slipped into bed wearing a pair
of white pyjamas.
The single
bed made it impossible for them to maintain a decorous gap between them. They
lay together, their sides aligned and touching, both of them awake but silent.
“I never
thought,” Arnav heard himself saying.
She
listened quietly.
“Jijaji...”
he shook his head. “Poor Di. How will she live with the truth?”
“Why?”
Khushi asked. It was a cry of incomprehension.
“Money,”
Arnav sighed.
“But
murder!” Khushi was horrified. “And that too your wife’s brother!”
Arnav shut
his eyes. He said softly, “Shyam was a two-bit lawyer when he met Di. I built
him an office in Delhi; I paid for staff. I make a handsome monthly allowance
to Di. They live at Shantivan. All their needs are met, all their bills are
paid. No questions are asked.”
Khushi
stared at Arnav.
“I wanted
her to be happy, Khushi. I bought her a husband. I am paying the price now,” he
confessed.
“You wanted
Di to be happy,” Khushi defended him. “That is not a crime. It is not your fault
that he is such an evil man.”
Arnav placed
his arm over his eyes. “Mama was unhappy in her marriage. My father—my
father...,” he paused, unable to continue. “I wanted Di to have a happy life
with the man she wanted to live with. And it turned out this way.”
Khushi turned
to lie on her side. She placed her head against his shoulder to give comfort.
After long
moments of silence, he said, “My mother shot herself with my father’s hunting
gun when she realised that he was having an affair with some woman.”
Khushi
gasped.
“My father
killed himself a couple of hours later,” he said, his voice calm.
“Arnavji,”
Khushi gasped.
“This drama
happened on Di’s wedding day. The groom refused to marry her. To add to the fun,
my Chacha threw us out as soon as the funeral was over,” he said quietly.
“What?”
Khushi sat up in outrage.
He removed
his arm from his hurt, grief-filled eyes.
“The world
is a terrible place, Khushi. Every event in my life has proved this truth to
me. Shyam’s duplicity and greed is just another instance,” he said, his voice
low.
“Why? How?
How could he do this?” It was a cry to Devi Maiyya.
“Shyam
reached Lucknow after our wedding was fixed, didn’t he?” Arnav asked.
“Ji,”
Khushi agreed.
“He was supposed
to reach there early, but told Di that he had a case in Allahabad. He joined us
for Akash’s wedding at the last moment, never dreaming that I, the goose that
lays the golden egg, was getting married along with Akash. The news must have been
a terrible shock for him,” Arnav smiled wryly. “All his hopes of inheriting
everything I had made must have been shattered. He had to act fast, had to kill
both of us, not just me. That’s why he hired these goons.”
Khushi
blinked, processing these facts.
“You became
a target because you married me, Khushi,” he stated. What an introduction to
married life, he thought. She must be cursing the day she had set her eyes on Nani,
he was sure.
Khushi took
one look at his set face and said mournfully, “Poor Kamla chachi. Khamoka I
misunderstood her.”
Arnav had
to smile at that.
“Shall we
get some sleep, Arnavji?” she asked. “We have to deal with Shyam tomorrow.”
“Yes,”
Arnav agreed. “Aman will get in touch with the police. Hopefully the hired
clowns will get caught tomorrow. Then we can travel to Delhi and tackle the great
Shyam Manohar Jha. I spoke to Akash.”
“How are
they at Shantivan?” she asked.
“Crying and
praying for us,” he replied. “Your family has no idea of the truth. They think
you are happy with Payal at Shantivan.”
“Devi
Maiyya, shukriya,” she folded her hands and prayed.
“So jao,
Khushi,” he invited, laying his arm on the bed for her to place her head on.
Like a
homing bird, Khushi lay down close to him, her head on his arm, her fingers
seeking the neck of his nightwear.
They slept.
Just awesome Smita...
ReplyDeleteMami is in her Bond avataar sending Shyam into tizzy...
Her shaatir dimaag has set him into committing blunders...
Loved it...
Just awesome Smita...
ReplyDeleteMami is in her Bond avataar sending Shyam into tizzy...
Her shaatir dimaag has set him into committing blunders...
Loved it...
Loved this update. It's nice to see them bonding under the circumstances they are in. Can't wait to read more
ReplyDeleteI knew it! That manhoos Shyam is after them!! Greed and envy makes people conoct crazy plans and Shyam is no stranger to greed. What I think Shyam is forgetting is just exActly WHO he is dealing with. He's mistaken if he thinks Arnav is going to let him get away from this unscathed.
ReplyDeleteOne thing though, I don't want Shyam to get apprehended just yet. I'd love to see some romance between Arnav & Khushi while they are hiding from the kidnappers. �� Even just a little romance.
Can I also add that I'm so loving all the suspense and drama you're creating in this fic? It makes for a really refreshing read. Especially from the typical he-hates-her or wants-revenge-on-her fics! Even though this marriage was done by duplicitous means, I love of you had both Arnav & Khushi on equal footing from the start.
Eagerly waiting for the next update already!
Oh my my.... It's a mahaupdate dear.... Loving the story....
ReplyDeleteYES, we get to see what the rest of the family was doing.
ReplyDeletePoint to me, for guessing about Shayam. What a creep.
Also, a good one making mami suspicious.
This chapter had me on my seat, too good.
Eagerly awaiting for next chapter.
Hi dear...I had once read ur story marrying khushi on myeduniya.. I wanted to read it again and so i asked in myeduniya about that story link and I got ur blog link.. When I saw ur blog I must say I was so happy and surprised to see so many arshi stories and was sad that I was not knowing about ur blog..but better late then never..I m very happy to read all ur stories on ur blog..they are just awesome..u are writing all your stories brilliantly and u are a very talented and gifted writer..I am loving ur story writing and different stories on yR blog. Ur latest ongoing story an uncomplicated wife is also just awesome..loving the building relationship between arnav and khushi...all the best and keep writing so that we can keep reading yR beautiful stories.. All the best and gud luck
ReplyDeleteso it was snakewa i knew it from the start kamina hai wo
ReplyDeletevery well that now asr know about him
Just mind-blowing. Love it.
ReplyDeleteIt is our favorite villian Shyam :) I am surprised as to how quickly he has been uncovered. Waiting to see him get trapped. Arnav Khushi bonding is super.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story line! Wish the serial had incorporated parts from this story where Arnav and Khushi are running together and where both know Shyam is the villan. Can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeletei still feel there is something more to shyams story.. he cant be thaat bad:-))
ReplyDeleteShyam is truly a snake. Hate him.
ReplyDeleteThe update was amazing. Would love to see the trap set by the ASR for Shyam and ARHI romance ofcourse.
Aha...I knew it was shyam. I like the way this story is progressing. I love the way arnav and khushi are communicating and comforting each other. What will happen next? Men in black will get caught? Will arnav and khushi reach Delhi safely? Eagerly waiting Smita... Superb story.
ReplyDeletewhat beautiful and dhamakedar story
ReplyDeleteAmazing update...
ReplyDeleteI knew Shyam was the culprit...
I am loving the story... :)
Now we are all in for the bashing of snakewa shyam
ReplyDeleteMami is an intelligent one. Shyam as usual greedy and I hate him.
ReplyDeleteBrilliant update Smitaji,
Continue soon.
Move over Pierce Brosnan and Daniel Craig. Mami Bond is here ! I love how she zeros in on the pertinent questions like a heat seeking missile. Glad to have it confirmed that our favourite snakewaa is the villian. When is your next update? I'm reading keeping Khushi all over again and am loving it all over again.
ReplyDeleteFantabulous update.
ReplyDeleteMami Bond has flustered the Snake with her questions. Love her.
Am looking forward to next part and the way ARHI has romantic moments and also how they trap the Snake
nice update
ReplyDeleteAwesome..just awesome
ReplyDeleteLove the story line..
ReplyDeleteMind blowing update
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Awesome thrilling update
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed reading it
So it is snakewa, Mami bond coming into action
Amazing Smita... As I thought Syam ,he's behind al this
ReplyDeleteWelcome back Smita! :D Hope you had a great break and enjoyed writing your short story!!! :))
ReplyDeleteWas impatiently waiting for 15th and I just realised you posted this 10 days ago :P
This is an awesome story! I'm so glad that Arnav knows of Shyam's treachery much before things may get worse.
Love it already! Looking forward to the next update! :)
oved the friendship that's building up between them as they try to trap Shyam in his own plot
ReplyDeleteidiot man
ReplyDeletehe will pay for it
he forgot who he was dealing with
ASR isnt easy to get rid off
and now he is gonna pay for his stupidity
oh good that should be fun
thank god arhi are okay
but their family
they are all worried about them
and shyam trying to stop them from calling police
or finding out he is involved
well he messed with wrong family
arnav she doesnt think like that
never would
lets just say she doesnt mind
yes she could have done without this murder attempt but she doesnt curse being married to you
sure changed her life and his
hmmm makes sense why that idiot made this plan
arnav wasnt meant to marry
but he did
now creep shall pay for it
what with police being on his track
Shyam toh gayo... love mami.. Arnav opened his heart to his wife and told her his past and they slept in each other arms.. good they have come long way from forceful marriage to sharing past to sleeping each other arms.. good progress in one night.. loved the update..
ReplyDeletewow superb update loved it thank you.............ameena671
ReplyDeleteAwesome update...........shyam is so evil.....he wanted his saale and his newly wed wife to be dead..............I am happy that at least Arnav and khushi got to know who the culprit is...........hope Akash and Aman act accordingly and get the culprits caught.........Arnav who is so reserved has told his past to khushi.....he is worried for his Di...........who has to bear the pain of this betrayal............can't wait for Arnav and Khushi to come out safe...........Love Mamiji..........she asked the right questions................
ReplyDeleteJust came back to your blog to find a brand new story. The cherry being 5 chapters up already
ReplyDeleteIts almost as if Onam has come early.
I hope Shyam's greed ensures he is taken down.
Smita Di.. loved this story ..loved the concept.!! naniji is cute nd smart as always..i love her for her tricks..lolss This struggle of getting home..will bring thm close to eachothers heart..i m sure.. Arnavji is already falling for our cute beautiful Khushiji..i hope shyam is punished nd pays for his crimes..how dare he try to kill The ASR..he doest knw wht trouble he has invited.. ;) looking forward to read more..update soon di..
ReplyDeletelove..Hugs
Isha
Isha... Forget repercussion from ASR... If Smita writes any other way will you let go of SMJ or her easily???? hehehe....
DeleteIsha will take a belan to me & Shyam!!!!!
DeleteHi Smita, was eagerly waiting for ur new story. Yesterday i had checkd ur blog and found this one. Amazing writer u r. Waiting for another one. Luv ur creations😊
ReplyDeleteHi Smita, was eagerly waiting for ur new story. Yesterday i had checkd ur blog and found this one. Amazing writer u r. Waiting for another one. Luv ur creations😊
ReplyDeleteAwesome update! Mami in the bond avatar:p
ReplyDeleteSmita I just recently discovered your blog. You are a wonderful writer. Love your version of Arnav and Khushi's relationship a lot. This story is so sweet and gentle. Cant wait for Arnav and Khushi's relationship to progress when they get back to Shantivan
ReplyDeleteI knew Shyam was fishy! What an idiot, God I hate him as usual! Hopefully everything will go ok for Arnav and Khushi now! Another great chapter Smita!
ReplyDeletei figured it was shyam the moment mami was questioning him
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