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“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
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Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
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"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
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Part 12
It was Sunday.
Khushi was at the temple and ASR was in Agra, negotiating like the pro he
was. Aman was with him.
The doorbell rang.
“Kaun he, Nandkisore?” Buaji wondered as she got up and walked to the
door with a ponderous gait.
“I will get it, buaji,” Payal offered. “Must be the milkman for his
money.” She marched to the door and pulled it open to stand blinking at the
motley crew at her doorstep.
Nani, Anjali, Mami and Akash stood with folded hands.
“Namaste,” they chorused.
“Namaste,” Payal muttered. “Please come in,” she invited wondering why
Anjaliji was invading her home with her entourage. Was she here for a catering
order?
Akash’s shy eyes rested on Payal’s beautiful face and big, lustrous eyes,
fascinated.
Buaji stood staring at Mami’s colourful appearance. Who was this rainbow?
“Please sit down, Nandkisore,” she invited.
“Buaji,” Payal began. “This is the Raizada family. We catered for a
couple of poojas they had at their house a month back. Anjaliji, this is our
buaji, Madhumati Gupta.”
“This is Devyani Raizada, my nani. This is Manorama Raizada, my mami.
This is Akash, mami’s son,” Anjali performed the introductions. “Where is Khushiji?”
“At the temple,” Payal replied. “Kya hua, Anjaliji? How can we help you?”
“Aap ko yaad he, Payalji, that you didn’t take the full amount of the
last order from us? We wanted to give you the cheque for the remaining,” Anjali
smiled, handing over a cheque.
Payal looked at the numbers on the piece of paper and said, “Thank you.”
“We want you to take over the catering for all the poojas in our house, Payalji,”
Anjali smiled widely.
“Ji?” Payal asked.
“We hold one pooja per week, every Tuesday. Can you cater for about a
hundred ladies every week?” Nani asked.
“If it is in the evening, we can manage,” Payal said. “Woh kya he, we are
contracted to a company every morning six days a week. We can start work for
your party only at two at noon. If your pooja is in the evening and the menu
isn’t elaborate, we can manage.”
“Company?” Mami asked, nudging Nani. “Kaun sa company?”
“AR Designs,” Payal said.
The ladies almost shivered in excitement. Akash choked. He hadn’t
believed the ladies when they had told him about his bhai and Khushiji when he had returned from a business trip to Mumbai.
“Then it is fixed, Payalji,” Anjali beamed.
“Give us your requirements a week before, Anjaliji.We will cook here and
deliver the food to you on time,” Payal said.
Anjali pouted. “Can’t you come home and cook, Payalji? It would be so
nice to have you there.”
“We won’t have the time, Anjaliji,” Payal explained patiently. “Khushi, I
and two boys will be in the company kitchen till one. We have two other helpers
here, but we can’t leave all the work to them. Carrying our commercial-strength
stoves and vessels to your house will take time. It is easier for us to cook
here and deliver.”
Realising that Payal wouldn’t budge, Nani said, “That’s fine, Payal
bitiya.” She turned to buaji. “You are so lucky to have two enterprising and
hardworking nieces, Madhumatiji.”
“Ji,” buaji agreed. “Generations of our family have been cooking, Nandkisore.
We are khandani halwai and bawarchi.”
“Madhumatiji, where are their parents?” nani asked.
“Sasi babua and Garima are in Lucknow, Devyaniji. We have our Satwik
Mishtaan Bhandar and Caterers to look after. They will be visiting us for two
days next month on the 2nd, Nandkisore,” buaji explained.
“We must meets them, Hello Hi Bye Bye!” mami exclaimed. “Nahi to baat
aage kaise badhegi?”
“Baat?” buaji frowned. “Kaunsi baat, Manoramaji?”
Nani glared at Manorama. “Jaan pehchaan ki,” she explained quickly. “You
are from Lucknow, we are from Lucknow....”
Anjali nodded vigorously.
Before poor beleaguered buaji had to find a reply to the Raizadas who
were forcing their acquaintance on her, Khushi walked up the steps.
“Jiji, buaji,” she called. “Dekhiye what I have brought home. The priest
gave me sheera for prasad,” she said as she hung her bag on the peg.
She turned
around to see her living room filled with Arnav Singh Raizada’s relations. The
specs-wala must be his cousin, Khushi surmised. But what were they doing here?
She had expressedly asked him to wait till her parents came to Delhi. She would
take his class when she saw him next, she thought.
“Khushiji,” Anjali trilled.
Khushi folded her hands and greeted all of them, trying hard to smile.
Akash took a good look at his soon-to-be bhabi. She was beautiful and the
family seemed a very orthodox and sanskaari one. Would they accept his bhai and
his anger? More to the point, would this frail girl be able to stand up to his
bhai and his aggressive behaviour?
“I will bring tea,” Payal offered. Khushi excused herself to join her
sister in the kitchen.
“Where in Lucknow are you from?” buaji asked nani.
Nani talked about her home in Lucknow, her relations, their spouses and
children and how they had shifted to Delhi more than a decade back, how Anjali’s
brother, Arnav Singh Raizada had started his business, how Akash had helped him,
how they were a great success in the city, how they hadn’t visited Lucknow in
years, the friends they still had in Lucknow etc.
“Kamla Shukla? The wife of Ravi Shukla, the namkeen king?” buaji asked. “She
is your friend, Nandkisore?”
“Yes. Do you know her?” nani asked, smiling.
“Yes. We went to school together,” buaji replied.
***
After the Raizadas left, Khushi and Payal served dinner. They sat together
and began eating, only to notice that buaji seemed distracted.
“Kya hua, buaji?” Khushi asked.
“Why did the Raizadas come here?” buaji asked, a frown on her face.
“Chodiye na, buaji,” Khushi tried to distract her.
“No, Sanka Devi. There is something wrong. Why should they come all the
way here just because you cooked for them for two poojas?” buaji asked
reasonably. “If they wanted to book you for further poojas, all they had to do
was phone you. Coming here and that too with their entire family. Kuch to
gadbad he,” the aunt of two personable nieces decided.
“I think they came to give us the cheque for the remaining amount, buaji,”
Payal remarked.
“Yes, buaji,” Khushi tried to calm her aunt. “They should have given it
to us a month back. I think they were so ashamed of themselves that they came
here to hand it over in person.”
Buaji nodded unwillingly. “Payaliya, Khussi, eat well and go to sleep.
You have another busy day ahead of you tomorrow.”
***
After the girls went to bed, Buaji called up Kamla Shukla.
“Kamla, do you know a Devyani Raizada?” she asked anxiously.
“Yes, I do,” Kamla said, smiling. “Why? Did you meet her in Delhi?”
“Yes. What do you know of her family?” buaji asked.
“Good family,” Kamla said without hesitation. “Her husband, Rudra Pratap
Raizada was a zamindar and a gentleman. They owned estates in Lucknow and
Kanpur.”
Buaji felt her heartbeat slow down.
“Poor Devyani,” Kamla sighed.
“Kya hua usse?” buaji asked, perplexed. “She looked fine.”
“Poor thing. She married off her daughter to another reputed family in
Lucknow,” Kamla explained. “Par kya karein? Fate had terrible things in store
for her.”
Buaji frowned. “What happened?” she asked.
“You know the Malliks, don’t you? The ones who lived in Sheesh Mahal?”
kamla asked.
“I have heard of them,” buaji admitted. “One son and his wife killed
themselves, didn’t they?” buaji asked.
“Yes,” Kamla answered. “The wife was Ratna Mallik, Devyani Raizada’s
daughter.”
Buaji placed her hand on her head and shut her eyes. “Hai Re Nandkisore!”
she whispered.
“Ratna married Arvind Mallik and had two children. On her daughter’s
wedding day, Ratna found out that her husband was having an illicit
relationship with another woman and she shot herself,” Kamla said softly.
Buaji could only chant, “Hai Re Nandkisore.”
“Arvind Mallik shot himself a couple of hours later,” Kamla explained. “The
wedding was cancelled. Ratna’s daughter and son went to stay with Devyani.”
“Anjali,” Buaji whispered. She had met the girl that very day.
“Yes,” Kamla said. “Anjali and Arnav. Ravi was telling me that Arnav
changed his name to Raizada and is a big businessman in Delhi.”
“Yes.” Buaji could feel her legs tremble. She sat down quickly. “How many
children did Devyaniji have?”
“Two. Ratna and Manohar. Manohar married a girl who came to work in their
house as a maid. Her name is...” Kamla tried hard to remember.
“Manorama,” buaji supplied, her voice low.
“Yes,” Kamla smiled. “That’s the name. Manohar fell in prem with her when
she came to their house to clean. It was the scandal of the decade. Devyani was
very upset, very angry. Rudra Prathap Raizada wanted to throw his son out of
their house, but Devyani managed to stop him from taking such a harsh step. And
it is a good thing she did. Otherwise Manohar would have had to beg on the
streets for a livelihood. Manorama had nothing and Manohar was still in
college. I think they have a son now.”
Akash Singh Raizada. Buaji saw the bespectacled youth sitting by his
painted mother.
“And as if this wasn’t bad enough, it was followed by Ratna’s suicide. Thank
God Rudra Pratap Raizada had died by then. I don’t know how he would have taken
his daughter’s death and the humiliation and the gossip. Devyani moved her
entire family to Delhi after selling off many properties she owned in Lucknow
and Kanpur.”
Buaji leaned her head on her hand, feeling weak and scared.
“Are Arnav Singh Raizada and Akash Singh Raizada married?” buaji asked,
her voice thin, hopeful.
“No,” Kamla dashed buaji’s hopes. “The last I heard, they are still
bachelors.”
“I will call you later, Kamla,” buaji managed to say. “It is very late,
too late.”
***
“I won’t talk to you,” Khushi declared, pacing her room, the phone at her
ear.
“Khushi, kya hua?” Arnav asked, a smile in his voice.
“I told you not to approach my family. I told you to give me one month,
but you couldn’t wait, could you?” she asked, one hand on her waist, ready to
do battle.
“What the!” Arnav exclaimed.
“The minute I said yes, you ran off to tell your family. And they couldn’t
keep the secret. They raced to visit us in Laxmi Nagar,” Khushi grumbled.
Arnav was too shocked to react, to say that he had said nothing.
“Buaji couldn’t understand why strangers were visiting us. Anjaliji gave
Jiji the cheque you owed us and asked us to cater for the poojas every Tuesday,”
Khushi explained.
“Maybe they came over for that purpose,” Arnav tried to calm her down.
“Do you take your grandmother, your mami, her son and the neighbours with
you when you go to make business deals, Mr. Raizada?” Khushi asked scowling.
“No, of course not,” Arnav blustered.
“Ask your family to sit at home and not help you in this marriage thing,”
Khushi said firmly. “Buaji, amma and babuji think love marriage is a dirty word—no,
two dirty words. If they know that we love each other, this marriage won’t
happen. They will throw you and your bhajan mandali out and send me to Lucknow.
If you want this to happen, you have to make a formal proposal as though it
were an arranged marriage. They will match our horoscopes, our wealth, our
heights, the size of our pupils, our blood groups, our hair colour etc and then
decide if we are to spend our lives together. Then, like two innocent souls who
don’t even know that the other existed, we can get married with their approval.”
“Khushi,” Arnav called, his voice fading away.
“It is no use calling my name. Take Devi Maiyya’s name. That might prove
more useful. Arnavji, this is the only way our marriage can happen. If anyone here
so much as gets a whiff that we like each other, getting this marriage to
happen will be more difficult than going to the moon. In fact, it will be
easier and safer to go to the moon. At least you won’t get attacked by Buaji’s
belan on the moon,” Khushi said, showing him the direction their lives were to
take.
Arnav sighed.
Khushi smiled. “This is what happens when you get tangled with a smalltown
girl, Arnavji. There will always be too many rules, too many rasms and too many
people poking their noses in our business. You are regretting meeting me now,
aren’t you?”
“Never,” Arnav said, a smile on his lips. “Never, Khushi,” he reiterated.
Khushi grimaced. “Arnavji, amma, babuji and buaji are the best,” she said
softly. “Very loving, very protective. But they are also very traditional and
orthodox.”
“It is fine, Khushi,” he soothed her. “We will do this their way.”
Khushi smiled. “Good night, Arnavji. Aap so jaayiye. You have to start
work early tomorrow, don’t you?” she asked.
“Yes,” he admitted. He sent her a kiss through the phone. “Good night,
Khushi,” he said.
Khushi blushed, hearing the sound of his kiss.
“Don’t blush, Khushi. You are a Lakhnavi chef and Devi Maiyya’s ladli. Be
brave. Come on,” he encouraged her.
Khushi kissed him through her phone.
"I am counting the days when I can see you, Khushi," he whispered.
"Me too," Khushi admitted.
They went to sleep with smiles on
their faces.
***
When the Guptas met for breakfast the next day, buaji’s face looked drawn
and pale. She had her inhaler with her.
“Buaji, kya hua? Did you have trouble breathing last night? Why didn’t
you call us?” Khushi asked anxiously.
“I am fine, Titliya,” buaji said, pinching Khushi’s chin fondly. She
turned to Payal. “Payaliya, tell the Raizadas you won’t be taking their
catering order.”
“Kyon? Kya hua, buaji?” Payal asked, her eyes wide.
“Do I have to explain everything, Payaliya?” buaji asked. “Isn’t it
enough that I don’t want you walking in and out of their house?”
Payal and Khushi looked at each other in astonishment.
Khushi opened her mouth to protest.
Buaji took puffs from her inhaler, trying to regulate her breathing and
ease the congestion in her chest.
Payal gave Khushi a glance of warning and said, “Fine, buaji. As you say.”
Maybe buaji would think better of it when she felt better, Payal thought.
Buaji nodded, relieved. “It is getting late. Go to your company and cook
a feast for the workers. Get home at noon, both of you. Don’t loiter around gazing at chudiyaan and colourful dupattas. Don't be late getting home.”
“No, buaji. We will be back on time,” Khushi promised. Arnavji was out of
office and she didn’t have to stay back.
“I will take you out in the evening and buy you as many golgappe as you
can eat,” buaji promised them a treat for their obedience, feeling bad that she
was killing their innocent joys because of what was possibly her paranoia.
Khushi and Payal ran to hug her, crushing her in their arms till she
squealed like a stuck pig. “Hai Re Nandkisore! Chodo mujhe, you pagal girls.
You are out to kill your buaji, aren’t you?” she asked, panting and rubbing her
ribs.
Payal and Khushi hugged her once more before leaving for the company, promising
to beggar her that evening by devouring the entire golgappe stand and laughing
as they left the house.
***
Buaji left the bank and walked slowly along the footpath to Laxmi Nagar.
Why did she feel so unsettled, so worried? Maybe it was the heat, she thought,
wiping her neck with the fringe of her pallu.
She turned her head to see Vishal, a neighbour standing behind her.
“Bitwaa, aap?” buaji asked. “What are you doing here?”
Vishal smiled at her. “This is my business,” he said, pointing to a small
Internet cafe and DTP centre.
“Acha,” buaji said, making to walk ahead.
“It is very hot and I was planning to have a sherbet. Why don’t you join
me, buaji?’ he invited.
“Nahi, bitwaa,” buaji refused politely. “You have it.”
“Then sit in our office for a moment,” he insisted. She looked tired and
pale.
“I will,” she agreed. He took her into his office and seated her in his
air-conditioned cabin. Buaji leaned against the headrest and sat silently as
Vishal did his work.
“Bitwaa,” she called suddenly.
“Ji?” he asked.
“Can you find information about a man on the computer?” she asked.
“If he is famous, then easily,” Vishal assured her. “If not, it
will be difficult.”
“He is a businessman. Arnav Singh Raizada,” buaji revealed.
"He is a well-known businessman, buaji. Who in Delhi doesn't know of him?" he asked before typing in his name. Links to articles in business sections
of newspapers and magazines appeared.
“Here, buaji,” Vishal moved aside so that
buaji could see her quarry.
Madhumati saw a handsome man in formal clothes, his eyes cold, his face
lean, his jaw clenched.
‘Hai Re Nandkisore! He is too good looking,’ she
murmured to herself. ‘What if Payaliya or Khussi sees him at his house and likes
him? It is good that I asked Payaliya to refuse their offer.’
“Bitwaa, what business does he do?” buaji asked.
“His firm designs clothes for the rich, buaji,” Vishal explained. “AR
Designs has won more awards than they can count.”
“What?” buaji asked loudly after a moment of shock. “What is the name of
his company?”
“AR Designs,” Vishal said.
Madhumati felt her head spin.
“Buaji,” Vishal shook her. “Are you alright?”
“I am feeling slightly dizzy,” she whispered.
“I will take you home. Let me get a rickshaw,” he said.
“Yes,” buaji whispered. She had lovingly sent her innocent, pure nieces to
the den of Arnav Singh Raizada that very morning!
“That’s nonsense,” Akash was the first to respond.
Part 13
Buaji sat
in a chair on the veranda by the open door of her house and gazed anxiously at
the road.
Where were the girls?
“Hai Re Nandkisore, it is already twenty minutes
past one. Where are the girls?” she fretted.
The
catering van came to a halt before the house that very moment as if buaji’s
thoughts had summoned it and she drew a deep breath of relief.
Payal
walked up the steps to the house. “Kya hua, buaji? Why are you sitting
outside?” she asked.
“Where is Sanka
Devi?” buaji asked anxiously.
Payal
laughed. “Where will she be, buaji?” Payal asked, shaking her head in
exasperation. “She has gone to make sure that Sureshji has set up the golgappe
stand today. How can she miss her treat today?”
Buaji
pursed her lips. “This Parmeswari will be the death of me, Nandkisore!” she
muttered. Then she asked Payal, “Sun, Payaliya, where do you work in the
company?”
Payal
frowned. “In the kitchen, buaji,” she replied.
“Woh—does
anyone come to check on you while you are working, Nandkisore?” buaji asked
anxiously.
“Amanji
looks in once in a while, that’s all. It is a very busy office, buaji. Who has
time to peek into the kitchen when all the employees are running about with
laptops in their hands?” Payal replied.
“Payaliya,
woh—who owns this company?” buaji asked, feeling dread close over her heart.
Payal
frowned. “How should I know, buaji? Why should we know? Our work is to cook for
300 and leave at noon. That’s all that matters to us. As long as they don’t
interfere in our work, it can be owned by Raavan-with-all-ten-heads and it
wouldn’t matter to us,” said the cool-headed businesswoman.
Buaji
almost sagged in her chair in relief.
“Kya hua,
buaji? Are you unwell?” Payal asked, the frown intensifying.
Before
buaji could reply, Khushi came rushing in, a triumphant look on her face.
“Buaji, Sureshji has set up the stand. I told him we will be coming by in the
evening to eat golgappe,” she informed them of her efforts.
Buaji
buried her head in her hands. “This chatori, Hai Re Nandkisore! Please give her
a husband who owns a golgappe stand or he will become bankrupt buying her
golgappe,” she grumbled.
Payal nudged
Khushi teasingly. “Or get her a millionaire, buaji. He will buy her a hundred
golgappe stands. She can spend her whole life eating them and becoming as gol as
a golgappa,” she teased.
Khushi
blushed but buaji’s head was thankfully still buried in her hands.
“Buaji, can
we go to Devi Maiyya’s temple before we attack golgappe?” Khushi asked. “I
promised Devi Maiyya a basket of laddoos last week.”
“Yes, of
course,” buaji replied. “But why did you promise her laddoos?” she asked.
“I made a
bet with Munna. He said that my ice halwa would look like kheer but I said it
would come out perfect. I promised Devi Maiyya a basket of laddoos if she
helped me win. She helped and I won,” Khushi explained smugly. Her expression
changed to that of a starving dog. “Buaji, I am hungry. Kuch khane ko do na?”
she begged.
“Hai re
nandkisore! She is such a tiny girl but she eats enough for four men. Such a
bhooki atma,” buaji teased as she led the way to the kitchen, worries of a
handsome Arnav Singh Raizada with a murky and sordid background swooping in and
stealing her sweet nieces’ hearts leaving her mind for the moment in her preoccupation
with poori and aloo.
***
Khushi
placed a basket of golden laddoos at Devi Maiyya’s feet and stood with her
hands folded and eyes shut.
‘Here, I
have made the laddoos as I promised. In pure desi ghee and the best
ingredients. Aap khayiye, maza leejiye. Thank you for making my ice halwa
perfect, especially as it was the first time I was making it. Munna dang reh
gaya when he saw how perfect it was! Shukriya, shukriya, shukriya,’ she thanked
Devi Maiyya.
“Chalo,
Parmeswari,” buaji called.
“Ek minute,”
Khushi begged.
She continued, ‘Please make buaji healthy and strong. Pata nahi
kyon, she has been behaving strangely since yesterday. Was it because the
Raizadas came to visit us? Please take care of jiji and get her a handsome and
sweet husband. Lekin he shouldn’t take her away from us. She is learning to be the
Kheer Kumari of Lucknow and no husband should stop her from her goal. Please
take care of Munna and Krishna. They work with hot oil and boiling curries
daily, wield knives, light fires. Please, please keep them safe. And my sweet,
sweet Arnavji who is so diabetic and is working so hard in Agra. Please keep
him safe. Let his brain be as sharp as my knives. Let him vanquish his enemies.
Let him be happy and smiling always, his lips twisting unevenly and so cutely
when he smiles at me. And Amanji too. He is so nice, bilkul like a brother. I
will tie rakhi on his wrist this rakshabandhan.’
Buaji
pulled Khushi by the arm and dragged her away. The ladies waiting behind Khushi
to pray heaved a collective sigh of relief.
‘Bye, Devi
Maiyya. I will see you soon,’ Khushi said on her unwilling way out. ‘They never
let me talk to you in peace. We will continue this tonight in our room before
I go to bed,’ she promised.
Payal
looked up at the sky as they left the temple. “Poor Devi Maiyya,” she said,
tongue-in-cheek. “It is a wonder she does not get up and run when she sees you
coming from far, Khushi. You eat her bheja daily.”
“Jiji,”
Khushi protested indignantly.
“She was
born to eat everyone’s bheja, Nandkisore,” buaji grumbled. “Why should Devi
Maiyya be spared of the torture we have been bearing for years?”
Before
Khushi could refute the unfair accusation, a glad cry fell on buaji’s ears.
“Madhumatiji?”
All the
Gupta ladies turned around in astonishment.
Nani, mami
and Anjali stood beaming at them, thalis in hand.
Buaji’s
heart sank in degrees, falling to her stomach and then to the soles of her
feet.
Payal and
Khushi folded their hands and greeted the ladies politely, Khushi trying hard
to hide her annoyance and fear that they would spoil all her and Arnavji’s
plans. The Raizadas rushed over to talk to them.
“What a
coincidence meeting you here, buaji,” Anjali gushed.
“Ji, Nandkisore,”
buaji responded wondering why Nandkisore was testing the strength of her heart.
She stepped forward to stand between the Raizadas and her nieces, hoping
desperately that her not inconsiderable bulk would protect her girls from being the
target of the Raizadas’ matrimonial ambitions.
The
Raizadas moved as a group to the side to gaze at the girls with a lot of
affection.
Mami’s eyes
ran over Payal and Khushi with what buaji felt was a look of covetousness. “Two
beautiful girlswaa,” she exclaimed. “Woh bhi Lucknowi. Woh bhi cookers. You are
berry lucky, Madhumatiji. We have only two boys,” she said, sending buaji’s
heart fluttering in alarm and making Khushi want to commit murder.
“Madhumatiji,
their parents will be here next month on the second, won’t they?” nani asked.
“Ji,” buaji
murmured, shifting to cover her nieces again.
Khushi
tensed.
“You can
expect a visit from us then, Madhumatiji. We need to meet and ask them for
a favour,” nani said, a naughty smile on her face.
Khushi
wanted to stuff an entire basket of laddoos in nani's mouth to stop her from
destroying the small chance she and Arnavji had of making their wedding happen.
Buaji
swallowed hard. Her suspicion was right, founded on her sound instincts. It was
not paranoia.
Anjali
smiled widely. “Yes, the two families should build jaan-pehchaan,” she said. She
caught hold of buaji’s cold hands in her warm ones. “I can’t tell you how happy
we are, buaji.”
“You have
raised your nieces so well, Madhumatiji. They are so sanskaari, so
well-behaved,” nani showered praise on a silent and scared buaji. “It is our
good luck that they came to our house to cook for the pooja. Otherwise how
would we have met them? Lal Bahadur Singhji, Vimala’s husband recommended them
to us. May Devi Maiyya bless him.”
Buaji
struggled to find her voice. “We—we must leave now. Namaste,” she said firmly.
“Namaste,”
the Raizadas were forced to say goodbye.
***
Buaji
herded the girls home, pushed them inside and shut and locked the door. She
leaned against the locked door, upset and terrified.
“Kya hua,
buaji?” Payal asked.
“Nothing,”
buaji said in a low voice. “Don’t open the door whatever happens.”
Payal and
Khushi nodded, Khushi’s heart sinking at the knowledge that the Raizada ladies
were behind buaji’s excessive bodyguard tendencies.
“Both of
you go to your room and don’t come out till I call you,” buaji instructed.
Payal and
Khushi looked at each other, Payal stupefied and Khushi scared.
“Go,” buaji
ordered.
They walked
to their room, pausing to look at buaji many times on that short trip.
***
Khushi
called Arnav from the bathroom.
“Khushi,”
he crooned, settling back in his bed.
“No, not
Khushi. A dayan,” she replied.
“What the!”
he exclaimed.
“A dayan
who will kill your family and drink their blood,” she retorted. “If they pop up
again when we go out, you can forget me, Arnavji. This marriage will never
happen.”
“What
happened, Khushi?” he asked. The concern in his voice did much to douse her
ire.
“Arnavji, I
am scared. I don’t know what to do and you are not here,” she admitted, her
voice small.
“Khushi, I
am setting out right now,” Arnav said, getting up.
“Your
meeting,” she reminded.
“That can
go to hell,” he replied.
“No,
Arnavji. Finish your work. Just ask you family to lay off. Did you talk to
them?” she asked.
“I asked
them not to visit you at your home,” Arnav replied. “I thought a face-to-face
explanation was better. So I didn’t elaborate on it.”
“Your Mami,
sister and nani are competing with each other to prevent our shadi,” she began.
She explained the incident at the temple.
Arnav shut
his eyes in fury. “I will call them now,” he said. “They won’t dare to look
buaji in the eye the next time they see her by the time I am done with them,”
he said, sure of his bulldozing, browbeating ways.
“They scared
buaji so much that she has condemned us to house arrest for today. Pata nahi if
she will let us out tomorrow. If she doesn’t, your employees can eat air tomorrow
for lunch. When Amanji calls me to ask why we broke the contract, I will tell
him it is all because of your relations,” Khushi threatened.
“Contract
ko goli maaro,” ASR summarily dismissed the agreement.
“And I didn’t
get my golgappe,” Khushi cried.
“What the!”
he exclaimed.
“What the
nahi, my golgappe. I arranged Sureshji to be ready with the golgappe because
buaji said she would treat us to golgappe today evening if we got home on time
like good girls without hanging about markets gazing at dupattas and trying on
choodis. But our sacrifice was in vain! We met your family in the temple. They
satyanashed the evening and my golgappe,” Khushi’s long lament was heart-felt.
“Khushi,
Khushi,” Arnav tried to calm her. “I will buy you a hundred golgappe stands.”
Khushi
burst out laughing. “That’s exactly what Jiji said. That I should marry a man
who is well-off and can buy me a hundred golgappe stands,” she laughed.
Arnav had
to smile.
He heard a
banging on the door through the phone.
“Khushi,
are you done? I need to use the bathroom,” Payal called.
“One
minute, jiji,” Khushi called. She whispered into the phone, “Hum chalte hein,
Arnavji.”
“Are you
hiding in the bathroom?” Arnav asked incredulously.
“Or nahi to
kya?” Khushi asked. “How else can I talk to you? Jiji and I have to stay in our
room and we can leave it only to use the bathroom.”
“I am
sorry, Khushi.” He had to say this.
“Koi baat
nahi. Jiji and I were playing cards on our bed. So it is alright,” Khushi said.
“Good night,” she whispered.
“Good
night, Khushi,” he whispered right back in his husky voice.
Khushi
shivered.
***
The next
morning, Khushi and Payal looked anxiously at buaji as they sat around the
breakfast table.
“Go to the
company,” buaji said calmly, “and get back here on time.”
“Ji, buaji,”
Payal said, relieved.
“We will
settle this by night,” buaji spoke to herself.
“Settle
what?” Khushi asked Payal.
Payal
shrugged. “Who knows?” she asked. “Come on. Let’s leave before she changes her
mind.”
Khushi
nodded and quickly left the table with Payal.
***
That
evening, there was a knock on the door.
Khushi got
up to open the door, but buaji stalled her. “I will open it,” she said.
Payal and
Khushi stood back and let buaji open the door. They gasped when they saw their
parents.
“Amma,
babuji,” they screamed as they ran to hug them as tight as they could.
After their
luggage had been placed in their room and they had freshened up, Sasi & Garima
sat with their girls and buaji around the dining table having tea and snacks.
“Why did
you summon us to Delhi, jiji?” Sasi asked.
Khushi
choked on the samosa she had been devouring happily. Payal rubbed her back till
she could get her breath back.
“Yes, jiji.
What is wrong? Have the girls been causing you any trouble?” Garima asked
anxiously.
“No,
Nandkisore,” buaji replied. “The girls haven’t been causing any trouble. But I
want them to wind up their Devi Maiyya Catering and return to Lucknow with you,”
she said.
All stared
at her, their jaws hitting the floor for different reasons.
“At the
earliest,” she added. “And if possible, I want you to marry them off fast to
two good boys from our biraadri.”
“Kya hua,
jiji?” Sasi asked, his eyes serious.
“Have you
finished your tea?” buaji asked Payal and Khushi.
“Yes,
buaji,” Payal replied.
Khushi was in no condition to reply with a piece of samosa still stuck in the wind pipe.
“Go to your
room. I want to talk to your parents in peace,” buaji instructed.
Payal and
Khushi left.
“What is
wrong, jiji?” Garima asked. “You are scaring me.”
“A family
has been showing interest in our girls,” buaji began. “They have two boys in
their family and from the way they spoke the last time we met, they seem
interested in having Payaliya and Khussi as their brides. They said they would
visit to ask for their hands when you came to Delhi.”
“Isme burai
kya he, jiji?” Garima asked. “What is wrong with this?”
“Everything,”
buaji said. “The family is not a good one, Nandkisore.”
“Then we
can refuse when they bring the proposals,” Sasi said mildly. “Why do you want
the girls to shut down their business here just because a family is interested
in them?”
Buaji drew
in a deep breath. “Sasi babua, listen
carefully. The girls went to their house to cook for a pooja. They have two
boys who are cousins,” buaji tried to explain.
“To? What
is the problem?” Sasi asked.
“They own a
big company in Delhi, AR Designs. A boy named Aman came here and got Payaliya
and Khussi to sign a contract to cook at their office daily from morning to
noon, Nandkisore,” buaji added.
“Yes, the
girls discussed it with us. The family must have liked their cooking, jiji,”
Garima tried to downplay the seriousness of the situation.
“Khussi and
Payaliya have no idea the Raizadas own AR Designs,” buaji wiped the sweat off
her forehead. “The Raizada ladies have been hinting that they are eyeing
Payaliya and Khussi for Arnav and Akash Singh Raizada, Hai Re Nandkisore. I don’t
want them to come here with a proposal, Sasi babua. It will be very difficult
to tell them to their face that we don’t want their boys for our girls.”
Garima
looked at Sasi, her eyes clouded with confusion.
“Even worse
is the thought, Nandkisore, of the boys dangling behind our girls. What if
Khussi and Payaliya like them?” buaji fretted.
“What is
wrong with the boys, jiji?” Garima asked, perplexed.
“They are
too handsome, especially Arnav Singh Raizada,” buaji fanned herself with her
pallu.
Sasi smiled
slowly. “Is being good-looking a sin, jiji?” he asked.
“No, babua,
it isn’t. But when the boys belong to the family they do, giving our girls to
them is like sending them to the slaughterhouse, Nandkisore,” buaji had to
pause to dry her eyes. “The sons are not responsible for the sins of their
parents, Nandkisore, but we can’t take the risk of having them treat our
children badly.”
“Raizada,”
Sasi said slowly. “I have heard the name somewhere.”
“You must
have heard of Rudra Pratap Raizada in Lucknow,” buaji said softly.
“Yes,” Sasi
frowned. “One of his daughters was married to Arvind Mallik, wasn’t she?”
“Yes,”
buaji sighed. “Arnav Singh Raizada’s mother and father. Poor boy. They
committed suicide, the mother first and the father next, both on the same day.”
Garima
gasped, covering her mouth in shock.
“And that
too because—Hai Re Nandkisore, how can I say this? Nandkisore, forgive me. If
it were not a matter of life and death of the girls, I wouldn’t say this, lekin
kya karoon, Nandkisore...” buaji hit her head with her hand.
“Jiji, you
are scaring us,” Sasi said. Garima nodded.
“The father
was not a nice man,” buaji said weakly. “Woh—he and some woman—the wife found
out...” Buaji couldn’t say anything more.
Sasi’s face
became serious, drawn.
Garima bleated, “Jiji?”
“Avinash
Mallik is Arvind Mallik’s brother and he is a crook, a cheat,” Sasi said
slowly. “Bad family, not at all acceptable.”
“Immoral,”
buaji sighed. “What if Arnav Singh Raizada is like his father? Imagine Payal or
Khussi married to him!”
Garima
began to weep. “It is better our children remain at home as spinsters than be
married to men who will hurt them,” she said, sobbing.
“And Akash
Singh Raizada’s mother, Hai Re Nandkisore,” buaji sighed. “She came to work in
the Raizada’s house as a maid and married the son against the wishes of his
family. Naak kaat di of the Raizada family. It seems the Raizada-Mallik family
scandals kept the Lucknow society entertained for quite some time like a
nautanki show, Nandkisore.”
“We can’t
accept this proposal if it is ever made, jiji,” Sasi said quietly. “We can’t
risk our children’s lives and happiness. You were right to inform us. Aap
bilkul chinta mat keejiye. I will see to this.”
Buaji
nodded, relieved. “Whatever you do, babua, do soon. I don’t want the girls to
like the boys, Nandkisore. Agar aisa kuch ho gaya, then our children will be
unhappy when we tell them this can’t work, that the aukat of the Raizadas is
not such that we can marry our daughters into their family. I don’t want to see
their tears, babua.”
Sasi
nodded. “Don’t worry, jiji,” he pacified her. “I will see to this.”
Part 14
Khushi
looked at a comatose Payal, lost in dreams of vats of boiling kheer and tons
of balushahi. Then she looked at the time on her phone.
1am.
She
swallowed hard.
‘Shall I
call Arnavji? Or should I let him sleep?
Maybe I can call him during the day
tomorrow. But when? The house is filled with family and Munna, Krishna and jiji
will be with me in the company kitchen till noon.
Maybe I should call him now.
Bechara Arnavji. He will be woken up from deep sleep by my phone and what I
have to tell him is unpleasant. Should I save the news for another time?’ she
wondered.
But the
vision of buaji’s worried face and anxious eyes flashed through her mind. The
Raizada ladies had spooked her bad, so bad that she had summoned her brother
and wife to Delhi and asked them to take the girls home and marry them off.
Khushi
quickly called Arnav.
He picked
up on the third ring.
“Khushi?”
he asked, his voice huskier than usual with sleep.
“Kya hua?”
“Arnavji,”
she whispered.
The sleep
fell away from him as if it had never been. “Talk to me, Khushi,” he instructed
softly, firmly, sounding alert. “Tell me.”
“Amma and
babuji reached here this evening,” she informed him.
After a
moment he said, “That’s great, isn’t it, Khushi. We don’t have to wait a month
now.”
“Woh—Arnavji,
buaji asked them to come,” she admitted reluctantly, knowing that what she had
to say would be unpalatable to him.
“Why?” he
asked.
Khushi
swallowed through a dry throat and spared a look at her sleeping sister before
saying, “Buaji wants jiji and me to shut down Devi Maiyya Caterers and leave
for Lucknow with amma and babuji at the earliest.”
“What the!”
he exclaimed, unable to believe his ears.
“She—she
asked them to find grooms for us in our community and fix our weddings at the
earliest,” she said, her voice so low that he had to strain to hear her.
He was too
shocked to even exclaim. A long moment later, he asked, “Why, Khushi? Why the
hurry? What is wrong?”
“I don’t
know. Arnavji, I think it was something your family said. Buaji started
behaving oddly after they visited us at home, keeping an eye on us all the
time, becoming agitated if we were late returning from the company at
noon....The meeting at the temple rattled her. I have never seen her in so much
distress,” Khushi confessed.
Arnav asked,
“Why should she dislike it if my family praises you and Payal and wants to see
more of you? Any aunt would be happy that her nieces are thought so highly off,
wouldn’t she?” He was confused, bewildered, perplexed.
“I don’t
know, Arnavji,” Khushi said softly, trying hard not to sound scared.
But her
fear reached the man sitting up in bed far away.
“Khushi, I will take care of
this. Tum bilkul chinta mat karo,” he assured her.
“How?”
Khushi asked directly.
“I will
find a way,” he promised.
“Arnavji,”
Khushi said softly, “if buaji insists and amma and babuji give in, then jiji
and I will have to leave Delhi immediately.”
“Khushi, I
won’t let you go,” he reassured her. “How can you cancel the contract with AR
Designs and walk away? Tell buaji that AR Designs will hold you to the
contract, that we are very particular about such stuff. I will inform Aman. If
Payal contacts him about leaving, I will ask him to stress the negatives of
walking away.”
Khushi
nodded. “Yes, that may make buaji stop and think,” she muttered thoughtfully.
“Go to bed,
Khushi and sleep well,” he said softly. “I promise you things will get better
tomorrow, no, today.”
“How?” she
asked.
“Wait and
see,” he said softly.
A long moment later, Khushi asked softly, “Everything will be fine, won’t it,
Arnavji?”
“Yes,
Khushi,” he promised.
“We didn’t
do anything wrong, did we, Arnavji?” she asked, her voice soft and anxious.
“Nothing to hurt our families? We just like each other and want to marry, that
too with their blessings. It is alright, isn’t it, Arnavji?”
He shut his
eyes. “Yes, Khushi, it is alright. We are not doing anything wrong,” he said
softly. “In fact, it is good that your family wants to get you married off.
They won’t be averse to accepting our proposal,” he said, trying to make her feel
better.
“You think
so, Arnavji?” she asked, her voice small.
“Yes,
Khushi. Sleep now. Everything will be fine this time tomorrow,” he said.
“Shubhratri,
Arnavji,” she said.
“Good
night, Khushi,” he said, trying to smile for her.
He cut the
call and quickly phoned his nani.
***
Payal and
Khushi were setting the table for breakfast when the doorbell rang.
“Kaun he,
Nandkisore?” buaji asked, lifting her head from the newspaper. “And that too so
early in the morning.”
Garima was
praying.
Sasi set
down his cup of tea and went to open the door.
He saw
three ladies at the doorstep and blinked. Maybe they were jiji’s friends, he
thought.
“Namaste,”
he folded his hands in greeting.
“Namaste,”
the ladies greeted him in a chorus.
“You are
Sasi Guptaji?” Nani asked, a big smile on her lips.
“Yes,” Sasi
replied, wondering how on earth the ladies knew him. His gaze fell on Mami who
was dressed in fluorescent pink and had pink eye shadow and pink goggles
perched on her head. He gulped.
Buaji got
up and came to see what was happening there and froze on the spot, seeing her
nightmare playing out before her eyes.
“May we
come in, uncle?” Anjali asked, a pretty smile on her face.
“Of
course,” Sasi stepped back, inviting them in. “Please sit down,” he offered
before turning to look at his silent and petrified sister with bewildered eyes.
Payal and
Khushi peeped to see who their guests were and while Payal frowned, Khushi
almost fell down in shock. So this was what Arnavji had meant when he said he
wouldn’t let her leave Delhi.
Buaji found
a chair with shaking hands and sat down. Sasi sat down by her and Garima joined
them.
“Sasiji,
Garimaji, Madhumatiji, you must forgive us for disturbing you so early in the
morning,” nani apologised prettily.
“Lekin how
can we delay such a good thing, Hello Hi Bye Bye?” mami asked.
Garima’s
wide eyes took in mami’s magnificence, a sight which rendered her speechless.
“I am
Devyani Raizada,” nani introduced herself.
Sasi shared
a shocked look with his wife. These were the Raizadas, the ladies out to steal
away his daughters?
“This is
Manorama Raizada, my daughter-in-law,” nani introduced mami.
‘The maid
who walked away with her son,’ Sasi thought.
“This is
Anjali, my granddaughter,” nani introduced her.
The Guptas
nodded slightly, not knowing how to stop the horror unfolding before them. It
was not done to be impolite to guests and they were too well-bred to be rude to
the ladies who were looking at them as though they held the keys to heaven.
“Sasiji, we
have come with two marriage proposals,” nani smiled at him.
Sasi looked
at buaji who had her eyes shut and at Garima who was imitating a doe caught in
the headlights.
“I have two
grandsons, Arnav and Akash Singh Raizada. Akash is Manorama and my son, Manohar’s
son. Anjali and Arnav are my daughter’s children. We would like Payal’s hand
for Akash and Khussi’s hand for Arnav,” nani said, a smile on her face.
Buaji’s
plump body shuddered in fear. She saw a vision of her sanki Khussi shooting herself with a gun and the handsome boy killing himself later.
Payal
looked at Khushi with astounded eyes. “Yeh sab kya he?” she hissed.
Khushi
shrugged. There was no appropriate reply to this question.
“My
grandsons are businessmen, Sasiji. They are doing very well in the city. They
own AR Designs,” nani explained.
Payal gaped
at them. “Khushi,” she whispered. “The Raizadas own the company we cook for?”
“Sasiji,
your daughters will reign like queens in our house,” nani concluded.
The
Raizadas sat waiting for a reply, their hopeful eyes on the Guptas.
Buaji
looked away.
Sasi
cleared his throat and said, “Tea. We must offer you tea.”
Garima
jumped up. “Hum banake laavat he,” she said, flustered.
“Rehne
deejiye, Garimaji,” nani smiled. “There is no need for such formality. Pehle
aap haan kahiye to these two rishte. We will come with the boys and then we
won’t be satisfied with just tea, Madhumatiji. We will have dinner with you.”
“I will
bring tea,” Garima mumbled and escaped to the kitchen. Her step faltered for a
moment when she saw her daughters standing near the dining table, listening
avidly to the conversation in the living room, but she said nothing.
Sasi looked
at his sister’s fearful eyes and then at the expectant look on the faces of the
guests.
He cleared
his throat uncomfortably.
“Maaf
keejiyega,” he said. “We haven’t thought of marrying off Payaliya and Khussi
any time now,” he said softly, trying to put an end to this incident without
embarrassing the Raizadas. “They are focusing on their catering business now.”
Mami said,
“Bhy should shaadi stop their catering? Let them cooks after marriage too. Our
bahuriya bill be businesswomen and our sons businessmen.”
“Yes,
Sasiji. Aap bilkul chinta mat keejiye. We are not the kind of family that will
expect our bahuriya to sit at home doing nothing if they wish to work. And your
daughters are excellent cooks and we have been fortunate to taste their
cooking. How can we even think of stopping them from catering? They should
continue to cook and expand their business across Delhi. Our boys and we will
support them in this. Aap nischinth rahiye,” nani tried to put Sasi’s mind at
rest.
Garima
served tea and snacks and sat down by her husband.
“And if you
don’t want the marriage now, to kauno praablem naahi. Engagement kar dio,
shaadi phir kar dena,” mami added.
Nani and
Anjali nodded.
Payal
whispered in Khushi’s ear, “Akash Singh Raizada must be the man with specs who
came here the other day. He looked alright. Khussi, have you seen this Arnav
Singh Raizada? You must have. He called you to his room to give you the cheque
the other day, didn’t he?”
“Yes,
jiji,” Khushi mumbled.
“What does
he look like?” Payal asked.
Khushi
opened her mouth to describe her Greek god, her diabetic sajna, her akhdoo
saiyaa, her naughty mehboob, but desisted for fear of revealing the depth of
her knowledge to her jiji.
“Okay,” she
mumbled.
“Only
okay?” Payal asked, disappointed.
“I—I
didn’t look—matlab he is theek thaak looking,” she said and leaned forward to hear
the conversation.
“Aur hamein
dahej bilkul nahi chahiye, Sasiji. We don’t believe in giving or taking dowry.
Send the girls to us in the clothes they are wearing and we will take them
happily,” nani made it very clear.
“Woh—woh,”
Sasi stammered, finding it very difficult to refuse them without hurting their
feelings. But he had to do it. It was the lives of his girls that was hanging
in balance. “We want to marry them off to boys based in our hometown, not in
Delhi. Maaf keejiye hamein,” he said as firmly as he could, his hands folded,
hoping that the ladies would give up.
“Isme kaa
he?” mami asked, slurping tea from the saucer. “We live in Delhi, Sasiji, but
are from Lucknow. Shaadi ke baad, we will visits you in Lucknow so often that
you won’t pheel you have given away your daughters to boys from Dilli.”
Buaji
sighed.
“If you are
agreeable, Sasiji, we will visit you this evening with the boys. You can meet them
and we can have the shagun immediately,” nani suggested.
Garima
wilted.
Desperate, Sasi
looked up for heavenly aid. The more he tried to push them away, the more they
were sticking to him with Fevicol!
He turned
his head to see his daughters standing near the table in the dining room,
listening keenly. The sight of their innocent faces decided the future course
of action for him. He couldn’t consider the feelings of the Raizadas when his
daughters’ future was at stake.
Taking a
deep breath, Sasi took the battle into the enemy camp.
“Anjali is
Arnav Singh Raizada’s older sister?” he asked courteously.
“Ji,” nani
said with a smile.
‘Devi
Maiyya, forgive me for hurting them. I am doing this for my daughters,’ Sasi
said in his mind. Then he asked, “Anjali is not married?” he asked.
Anjali’s
face paled. The smile faded from her face. The brightness of her eyes dimmed
and she looked down at her fingers.
The Guptas
squirmed at having had to hurt that poor girl whom fate had ditched and
tortured.
Nani and
mami looked at Anjali in distress.
“No, our
Anjali bitiya is not married,” mami quickly said, hoping the Guptas wouldn’t
ask any more questions.
“My
marriage was fixed, uncle,” Anjali spoke quietly, all dignity. “But it was
cancelled on the evening of the wedding. The boy and his parents went away,
refusing to marry me. I was eighteen then. After that experience, I didn’t want
to risk disappointment again,” she explained. “I am also lame in one leg. I had
polio when I was a child.”
Sasi knew
what he had to do next. All he had to do was ask after Anjali and Arnav’s
parents and their family in Lucknow. Their reply would damn them and all he had
to do was tell them that he would contact them if he were interested in
considering their proposals. He could show them the door and be done with it.
But the pain on Anjali’s face and the sorrow on the faces of her nani and mami
stopped Sasi from doing it.
But he had
to protect his children. He had to let the Raizadas know that he would never
consider their proposals and the reason but he wanted to do this without hurting them.
So he asked
softly, “Do you know an Avinash Mallik who used to live in Sheesh Mahal?”
Three
stricken faces looked at him.
Sasi looked
down at the table holding the empty tea cups. He hated himself, but there was
no other way out.
“He is my
father’s brother, uncle,” Anjali replied softly.
“Your
father was Arvind Mallik and your mother, Ratna Raizada?” Sasi asked softly,
making it very clear to the guests that he was familiar with every aspect of
the sordid story that was their past.
“Yes.”
Anjali nodded, blinking away tears. Mami took her hand in her own, pressing it
softly to give comfort. Nani’s throat moved in an effort to swallow her tears.
“It is very
kind of you to bring proposals for our daughters,” Sasi said softly. “It is
very good of you to find our children worthy of your boys. We will contact you
after considering the offer.”
Nani, Mami
and Anjali stood up. The Guptas joined them and walked them to the door.
Part 15
“What did
Khushi’s family say?” Arnav asked, calling from Agra.
Nani turned
sad eyes on mami and Anjali. She said slowly, “Sasiji said that he would let us
know, that he wanted time to think about it.”
“That’s
fine, isn’t it?” Arnav asked. “Nani, get a priest in to fix the dates. Tell him
I want the weddings done at the earliest.”
Nani
swallowed her tears. “Chotey,” she said, her voice trembling slightly.
“Yes?” he
asked.
“I—I don’t
think Sasiji will agree,” she blurted out.
There was a
moment of silence. “Why not?” Arnav asked, unable to believe his ears. He had
gone the formal route as Khushi had wished, sending his family to make a
proposal. Then why were the Guptas against the two weddings? Akash was a gem of
a boy. Any self-respecting father-of-the-bride would grab him from the marriage
shelf with both hands. He had no illusions about himself. He was no prize, but
his desire to marry Khushi and share every moment of a hopefully long life with
her was so strong that he had been sure that her father would acquiesce to the
request.
“Why not?”
he asked again.
Nani
breathed in deep. She said, “They don’t want to marry off their daughters now.”
“Really?”
he wondered, disappointed. Then he rallied. “That’s fine. We can have the
engagement now and the wedding later,” Arnav said.
“No,
Chotey, they want boys from Lucknow, not Delhi,” Nani replied, praying hard
that Arnav would accept the excuse and give up.
“We are
from Lucknow,” Arnav replied, a frown of incomprehension on his face. “And if
they didn’t want their daughters to settle down in Delhi, why on earth did they
start Devi Maiyya Caterers here?”
Nani sent a
silent plea for help to mami & Anjali.
“Arnav
bitwaa,” mami stepped in to save her saasumma.
“Mami, what
the hell is happening there?” Arnav asked plainly.
“Kaa kahe,
Arnav bitwaa? How can we force Sasiji to marry off his daughters if he doesn’t
want to, Hello Hi Bye Bye?” mami asked.
“But Khushi
told me that they were planning to look for grooms for them. Why don’t they
want Akash and me?” Arnav asked directly.
“Arnav
bitwaa, tension mat lio,” mami tried to calm him down.
“We are
solvent, hard working. We don’t drink. We don’t smoke. We don’t gamble. We
aren’t ugly. What the hell is wrong?” Arnav asked, stung.
“Arnav
bitwaa,” mami began.
“It is
alright, mami. I will manage this,” Arnav said before cutting the call.
He called
Aman. “Arrange to leave for Delhi as soon as the deal is signed,” he
instructed. “I need to talk to Khushi’s family about our marriage.”
“Yes, sir,”
Aman replied, watching ASR walk away, his shoulders bunched in tension. What
had happened to the boss’ love story?
***
Khushi
called Arnav, sitting on a bench in the temple.
“Khushi,”
he said, his voice carrying a world of love.
“Arnavji,
your family came here early in the morning,” she began.
“I know.
They called me. Why did your father refuse the proposal?” he asked.
“I don’t
know, Arnavji,” Khushi replied, perplexed. “Amma and buaji were crying after
they left. And babuji came and hugged jiji and me and said that nothing bad
would happen to us as long as he was alive.”
“What the!”
Arnav asked.
Khushi
nodded. “Wahi to. I wanted to ask him what was going on, but the next thing he
did was ask us to cancel your contract and get ready to leave for Lucknow,” she
said with a sigh.
“No way,”
Arnav bit out.
“Jiji told
him that it may not be possible to break the contract and that she would ask
Amanji,” Khushi explained.
“Don’t
worry about that, khushi. I have already instructed Aman on how to tackle her
request,” ASR said.
“I begged
him to reconsider, but all babuji did was kiss me on my forehead and ask me to
pack my clothes. Aur aap ko pata he, buaji is talking of joining us in Lucknow.
She doesn’t want to return to Delhi,” Khushi informed him.
“What the
hell is happening here?” Arnav asked.
“I have no
idea, Arnavji,” Khushi replied, stumped, scared, feeling a life with her
Arnavji slip out of her hands.
“Khushi,
don’t worry. Suna tumne?” he asked.
“Ji,” she
replied, feeling tears choke her.
“I am on my
way back. I will get home in a few minutes, Khushi. I will take care of
everything,” he promised.
“Yes,” she
murmured.
***
Arnav
looked at his nani, mami, di and Akash with serious, sharp eyes.
“Why did
Khushi’s father refuse the proposal?” asked the Arnav Singh Raizada who had
perfected his interrogation skills in his office.
Three sets
of eyes slid away from his.
“Why?” he
asked again.
Mami looked
at nani’s wan face and decided to take up the dirty job nobody wanted to do.
“Arnav
bitwaa,” she said, her voice shaky. “Gupta phamily ijj from Lucknow.”
“Tho?”
Arnav asked.
“They—they
knowjj Avinash Mallik,” mami said.
“I know. He
owes them money for a catering order,” Arnav said. “So?”
A tear
trailed down Anjali’s cheek.
“Bitwaa,
they knowjj about—about your mother and phather,” mami said softly.
Arnav’s
face paled. Akash looked down at the floor, wringing his hands.
“If they
know about Ratna and Arvind, they will also have found out about you and
Manohar too, Manorama,” nani said softly, exhausted.
“Saasumma,”
mami protested.
“Who will
want to give their daughter to a boy whose parents created history and
geography by running away and marrying against the wishes of the groom’s
family, especially when the mother was working as a maid in the house?” nani
asked, lying back against the headrest of her seat. “The scandal, society
laughing behind our backs, the morbid curiousity of people...” nani shook her
head. “I don’t know how we survived those terrible times.”
There was
pin-drop silence in the room.
“I never
meant to hide any of this from the Guptas. I thought once they knew us we could
tell them,” nani lowered her head to rest it on her hand.
“He was
very polite, very careful not to hurt us,” Anjali said softly to Arnav. “All
uncle asked was whether our parents were Arvind Mallik and Ratna Raizada.”
Her
brother’s hurt, wounded eyes met hers. She looked away helplessly.
“What can we
does to change their mind?” mami asked, desperate.
“They are
planning to leave Delhi and relocate to Lucknow,” Arnav dropped the bomb
quietly.
“What?”
nani asked in astonishment.
“Bhai?”
Akash couldn’t control his shock.
“They are
running abay because of us, Hello Hi Bye Bye?” mami asked, her face a picture
of astonishment.
“They don’t
want to marry their daughters into our family,” Anjali said softly. “Maybe they
think Chotey is like our father.”
“That’s nonsense,” Akash was the first to respond.
“It is, but
kaun unhe samjhaye?” nani asked.
“Hamre
Arnav bitwaa and Akass bitwaa are not responsible for what their parents did,
Saasumma,” mami tried to find excuses.
“They
aren’t. Unfortunately shaadi doesn’t happen between two individuals, Manorama, but
between two families,” nani said, her voice a mere thread. “If Khussi marries
Chotey, Arvind Mallik will be her father-in-law and Ratna her mother-in-law. If
Payaliya marries Akash, you will be her mother-in-law and Manohar her
father-in-law.”
“The Guptas
are traditional, orthodox, very family-oriented. Maybe they have a big family
in Lucknow. They will have to answer questions as to why they picked us for
their daughters. I don’t think Lucknow has forgotten us, nani, even though we
have tried our best to forget it,” Anjali said quietly.
“But what
about hamre Arnav bitwaa and Khussi? They love each other!” mami cried.
No one had
an answer.
Arnav’s
phone rang. It was Aman.
“Payalji
called to ask if they could get out of the contract. I told her it was
impossible, that they had to supply food to our employees for one year whatever
happened, that if they reneged on the agreement, they would have to pay a huge
amount as compensation,” Aman informed Arnav.
“What was
her decision?” Arnav asked.
“She asked
me the amount. I told her,” Aman said. “She said she would get in touch with
me.”
“Let me
know their next move,” Arnav instructed Aman.
“Yes,
boss,” Aman replied.
***
“Show me
the contract,” Sasi asked.
Payal
handed over the copy of the document.
Sasi read
it thoroughly. Finally he said, “Yes, we will have to pay the amount Amanji
mentioned if we quit half-way through. That’s written quite clearly in the
contract.”
Khushi’s
heart filled with hope.
“It is a
huge amount,” buaji fretted.
“Yes,
buaji, it is,” Khushi added her bit.
“It is a
very advantageous contract,” Payal tried to sway her father.
“Very good
pay, excellent kitchen, very courteous employees,” Khushi joined her.
“There is a
way to continue with the contract and leave Delhi at the same time,” Sasi said.
“Nowhere in the contract is it said that Payal and Khussi have to be personally
present in AR Designs. Devi Maiyya Caterers has to cook on the premises of the
firm six days a week, that’s all. We can hand over the work to Munna and
Krishna. They and their assistants can supply food to AR Designs while we
return to Lucknow. I can visit Delhi once a month to check on them.”
Khushi’s
heart sank beneath the flooring of the house.
Sasi looked
around his family. Buaji and Garima looked upset and dismayed, Payal was uneasy
and Khushi looked downright perturbed.
“But that
is not how the Guptas do business. So we will cancel the contract, pay the
amount and wind up the business here before returning to Lucknow,” Sasi ruled.
“Call Amanji tomorrow and let him know, Payaliya. I will write you the cheque
for the amount.”
“Yes,
babua,” said buaji. “Wahi theek he, nandkisore.”
Garima
nodded her agreement.
Payal
nodded, very disappointed that they were cancelling a lucrative deal and paying
through their nose to do it.
Khushi
lowered her face to hide her tears and grief, feeling bereft.
Sasi smiled
at his daughters gently.
“Don’t
worry,” he said softly. “It is just money. You are more important to us than a
few notes of currency.”
Khushi
looked at him directly. “Why, babuji? Why are we running away from Delhi?”
“Yes, babuji.
Why?” Payal asked. “Is it because of the proposal?”
Sasi looked
down at the contract document, trying to find a reply that wouldn’t agitate
them.
“Yes, we
don’t want the proposal, Nandkisore,” buaji stepped in.
“All you
have to do is refuse, isn’t it?” Payal asked. “Why uproot us, buaji?”
“It is not
as easy as that, Payaliya,” buaji answered.
“We were
doing so well,” Payal sighed.
“Yes,”
Khushi added. “We put in so much work to build the business.”
“Trust me,”
Sasi told them. “I wouldn’t ask you to do this if it weren’t imperative. The
family is not a good one. Their background—it is not one we would choose for
you. I don’t want to say more. And they are persistent. Just know that we need
to be away from them.”
Khushi
paled. She understood now. Arnavji’s father’s lecherous ways, his parents’
suicide, his sister’s plight, his uncle’s treachery—her family knew all about
it and were repulsed by it.
“Go to bed,
both of you,” Garima said. “It is getting late.”
Khushi
follwed Payal on leaden feet, feeling the life force within her diminish, her
hope drain away. She stumbled as she walked into the bedroom.
“Khushi,
kya hua?” Payal asked.
Khushi
shook her head and turned her head away so that Payal couldn’t see her tears.
“Devi
Maiyya ki kripa he that our girls haven’t met the boys and aren’t swayed by
them,” Garima said in the living room. “Nahi to...”
“Sahi kaha,
Garima. Who can make girls understand they are being foolish when they fall for
a pretty face without knowing anything about him, Nandkisore?” buaji asked.
Sasi
nodded. “We can’t blame the children for what their parents did, but...” He
shook his head sadly. “All I ever wanted for them were good, decent boys who
would look after them like we do, care for them, stand by them. And now...”
“Imagine
marrying off Khussi to Arnav Singh Raizada. Will she find any happiness in her
marriage if he runs after all the girls in Delhi like his father did?” Garima
asked, her breath coming fast as she imagined the plight of her daughter.
Buaji’s
eyes filled with tears. “Our fate will be that of Devyani Raizada, watching her
daughter suffer and die because of her nalayak husband, Nandkisore. And Khussi’s
fate will be that of Ratna Raizada. Sasi babua, let’s leave Delhi soon. Oo kaa
he Nandkisore, I dream every night of Khussi killing herself out of parem for
her husband. Let’s go away.” She took deep puffs from her inhaler.
“We will
leave this week, jiji,” Sasi promised. “And as soon as we get to Lucknow, I
will look for grooms for the girls. We will conduct both marriages together.”
Buaji and
Garima nodded.
***
“Arnavji,”
Khushi wept.
“Khushi,
where are you?” he asked.
“Bathroom,”
she sobbed.
“Khushi,
your family is upset about my past,” he said sighing. “I can’t change it,
Khushi. I can’t change my father or mother. I wish I could change all the
miserable things that happened in the past to us, but I can’t, Khushi.”
“I don’t
want you to,” Khushi hiccuped.
“What?”
Arnav asked.
“Your past
made you what you are today. I don’t want you to change anything. I like you as
you are,” she confessed, her chest heaving as she wept through her confession. “I
am sorry you were so hurt, but...”
Arnav shut
his eyes and leaned back in his recliner. “Khushi, I love you,” he whispered,
the words slipping out of his mouth almost without his knowledge.
“I know.
Otherwise why would you have spent a fortune building a kitchen for me?” she
asked, sniffing.
“Khushi, I
tried to run away from my past. I tried to forget it, but it won’t let me. It
won’t let me live in peace. It will dog my footsteps till I die,” Arnav said,
his head lowered. “Your father is scared that I will be my father and you will
become my mother.”
“You are
not like your father and if you so much as look at another girl, I will gouge out
your eyes. Then how will you flirt?” Khushi asked, drying her eyes.
“I will
meet your father, Khushi. I will tell him, promise him that I will never cheat
on you or make you cry, except in happiness,” Arnav said.
Khushi
shook her head. “I don’t know if that will work, Arnavji. Babuji has asked jiji
to meet Amanji and pay him the money we owe you for cancelling the contract,”
she informed him.
“What the!”
he exclaimed.
“Yes. Jiji
will come to the office tomorrow with the cheque,” Khushi said softly.
“Khushi,”
he breathed, feeling her slip through his fingers.
"Arnavji, maybe we should run away and get married," Khushi suggested.
Arnav smiled. "I would take you away in a heartbeat, Khushi, if I could be sure you would never regret it."
"I won't, Arnavji," she promised.
"You will be crying as you steal out of the house, weeping when you get into my car, wailing as we get married without your family to witness it. No, Khushi. That's not the life I want for you," he said softly, a gentle smile on his face.
Tears trailed down Khushi's cheeks.
"They love you, Khushi. That's why they are being so careful and that's why I can't get mad at them. My wealth, my position--all these are irrelevant to your family. They care only about your happiness," he said in his husky, low voice.
They remained silent for a long moment.
“Arnavji,
there is only one person who can and will help us,” Khushi told him softly.
“Who?”
Arnav asked eagerly.
“Devi
Maiyya. Ask her for help, Arnavji. I will do the same. Aap dekhiye. Koi na koi
hal nikal hi aayega. We will find a way out of this,” Khushi said with full
faith.
Arnav
nodded slowly. He was short on options anyway.
“I will try, Khushi,” he promised.
Part 16
Aila! Kahani me twist!
ReplyDeleteFantabulous update
ReplyDeleteLoved it
Can't wait for more
Prem khani mein akbar khan se le aye .....
ReplyDeleteLiking it
Fantastic.. Buaji now has doubts about the Raizadas and she will throw a spanner in the love life of Khushi and Arnav. She is worried that one of her nieces will fall for the good looking ASR, not knowing that love is already in the air between Arnav and Khushi.
ReplyDeleteI liked,how buaji is going to put a spanner in the works ,khushie advised to Arnav shows she has figured out the mindset of her adoptive parents ,
ReplyDeleteAwesome update Smitha!! So it is not shyam the villIan in Arshi's love story but Buaji lol!!!
ReplyDeleteOye Teri...I ka hua ? Buaji ...aisan kaisa kar sakat he NK ? Beautiful update....
ReplyDeleteReminds me one classic song for Arshi....
Teri meri...meri Teri prem kahani he mushkil....
Abhi Razada ladies ko samaj mein aayega ki unhone kya bakheda kiya he ?
Next update jaldi please...
Oh no...
ReplyDeletebuaji will now become their pyaar ki dushmaan.
Oh yes... New twist in the story. I love it. Let's see what will arnav do to win buaji's heart.
ReplyDeleteHai Re Nandakishore!! Is Buaji going to throw the proverbial spanner in the works? You know Smitaji, I thought it was too good to be true when ASR and KKG met, sparks flew and they confessed their love for each other. I was waiting for some kind of bump but I certainly didn't expect this twist in the story. Wah Wah! Kya dimag hai aaap ka? On par with ASR's shatir dimag. Can't wait for the next instalment. BTW, loved Khushi's monologue on how an arranged marriage should be conducted. When are you updating next?
ReplyDeleteBuaji bani Villain!!Arnav aur Khushi ka ab kya hoga?Wait karthe rahiye agle chapter tak!!!Smita dear please don't make us wait toooooooo long!!!We believe Arnav will do something unique to win buaji's heart!!
ReplyDeleteFantabulous update. Loved it...
ReplyDeleteHai Re Nandkishore !!! Buaji became to roda between ASR's rasta to Khushi...
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to see how ASR pataofies Buaji and Khushi's family for marriage
Oh my gaad!!! Ee ka huiii gawa
ReplyDeleteWhy is buaji so nervous about the raizadas?
Arshi ki kahani shuru hone se pehle hi khatam
NAHIIIIIII ye nahin ho sakta
Pls Smita dear update soon and take us out of this misery
Hai re nand kishor...ab kya hoga
ReplyDeletewow superb update loved it can't wait for next part thank you............ameena671
ReplyDeleteOh dear...only Devi Maiya can help khushi and arnav now.
ReplyDeleteContinue soon
Oh my goodness! this story is too funny and awesome. I read the last three chapters and enjoyed every moment of it. I also loved that counting business hahahahaha and the choice of photos was great!
ReplyDeleteDevi Maiyya Raksha Karna!!!!! Smitaji, am biting my fingernails right down to the cuticles. Next updatewaaa when??????
ReplyDeletePoor buaji. She is in a tizzy. She doesn't know Arnav !
ReplyDeletenice twist...lets see what happen next???
ReplyDeleteAmazing update...only you can bring such a twist ka tadka ...now Buaji will stop khushi from going to AR ab kya ho ka....please update soon to see what shatir arnav will do for his luchnavi chef...
ReplyDeletewow.. such a twist.. i didn't expect.. good update..
ReplyDeleteThis is too funny... Scary, coz there seems to be trouble in paradise... yet I could not prevent laughter from spilling out... I always thought Buaji was a little over the top in the show... loving but over the top... a good match for Mami Ji. But her reactions here are hilarious... Closing door after the horse... me thinks. Also Khushi's rendition of how the Shadi will proceed... Wait I have to go back and reread so I can accurate quote... Oh yeah... our horoscopes, our wealth, our heights, the size of our pupils, our blood groups, our hair colour etc... Hilarious! Too funny! Really great story Smita! you have out done yourself!
ReplyDeleteWill post the next part today.
DeleteMake it first Smita ,at least it makes me happy when I am in horrible condition.
ReplyDelete30 mins.
DeleteYipee ..jaldi update karo. Let us see what does Arnav 's haridwar trained brain comes up with. Here buaji is a force to recon with.
ReplyDeleteBuaji vs Haridwar-educated brain. Kaun jeetega?
DeleteBuaji's protectiveness is very understandable. What she's saying is quite right. I feel bad for Arnav though. His bitter past, which he tried to keep behind and sees a future with Khushi, the same past comes knocking on his door in the form of rejecting his proposal to Khushi.
ReplyDeleteEagerly waiting for the next update! Can't wait to read what will happen next!
wow superb update loved it but what will happen to khushi and arnav i am scared for them hope they don't get separated i know buaji is right but what is arnav fault in all this can't wait for next part thank you.....................ameena671
ReplyDeleteno! No! NO!... What the heck is wrong with Buaji... Although, to be fair, her first objection is true... Arnav Singh Raizada is too handsome... She got that one right... But what a bunch of bull the rest of it... Hmm Shashi and Garima too... Oh! oh! so now what? Those Raizadas definitely 'satyanased' the road to matrimonial bliss by jumping the gun! It WAS too good to be true... sniff! sniff!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a cute/funny story. I'm lovin' it!
Totally agree with you about Buaji's objection - ASR is way too handsome. Those pics. Sigh!! Droooooool .
DeleteHahahaha...amazing twist..I just loved Buaji saying "aukat of raizadas is not that we can marry our daughters to them"...yuppps..this was a first from Gupta family...mostly it's always other way round... Ab kya karenge mr arnav Singh raizada.. Dulhan ki family to unke against hi ho gayi..hahahahah...Ab ayega maja....kaise patayenge Gupta family ko...I can see its getting very interesting.. Akhir asr ko bhi to realise ho all things are not easy as he thinks... Amazing update... Thanks for updating.. Gud luck
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ReplyDeleteOh my God! Now, with such Buaji-Bond I'm so worried about future of Arnav and Khushi...Thank you, Smitaji, for this awesome update!!! :))))
ReplyDeleteBy the way I like very much this situation of inappropriate Raizada-family and Arnav as part of this family instead of poor Khushi who has the only sin - she just was adopted by Garima...I like the other side of this problem - in the serial, and in some fanfics Arnav (or his family) accuse Khushi and the Guptas, but here they finally understand how is being accused for nothing, for just being the part of some family.
But of course I wish for Arshi long and happy life together, I'm not so cruel))))))
P.S. I'm sorry for all mistakes I have, I'm not very good in English, this is the second foreign language I study, the first is French :))))
If you know French, then Mojgane, Kaycee and Supriya are bound to be your friends, my dear. You noticed the point I wanted to stress in this part. In the serial it was always ASR taunting Khushi about her lack of aukat/ status. Here ASR is on the receiving end. Glad u are having fun reading this story.
DeleteSmita Di.. I m in love with this kahani!! it's awesome.. humor..love..drama all in one.. Buaji found out abut Devil (Handsome) looking Arnav Singh Raizada..nd I loved her reaction..lolsss..
ReplyDeleteand hamare love birds ka kya hoga ab?? Kya The Arnav Singh Raizada ...Khushi kumari Gupta ko bhaga le jayega!! I wud love it if tht happens.. ;))
Loved it
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for more
Fabulous... :-) buaji and her bondgiri:-). She turned Khushi's parents against the Raizadas. Let's see what happens next? What will be Shashi's opinion after meeting arnav . Very nicely written. Continue soon
ReplyDeleteOh my my ab hamare Arshi ka kya hoga?
ReplyDeleteArnav Singh Raizada sub theek kar de ga, right? :p
Eagerly waiting to know how you'll take this forward from here
Oh god
ReplyDeleteAb kya hoga ??.???
OH no now what will Arnav do to convince buaji that he really loves khushie ,
ReplyDeleteBuaji the giant wall in the love story, hope Arnav can deal with her.
ReplyDeleteNice update.good work.loved it.
ReplyDeleteYou updated!! Muaaah Muaaah !! Have mixed feelings about this one. The first half was too funny. Buaji hiding her nieces and the Raizadas trying to get a glimpse. It's not just Buaji. Mamiji, Anjali and Nani all seem to be bringing spanners of various sizes to muck up the works. The latter part - my heart is going dhak dhak dhak. The Guptas feel that the Raizadas are not good enough. The tables have certainly been turned.
ReplyDeleteHave read it over and over and the dhak dhak has not abated. Now I'm going back to my mantra. All ijj well. All ijj well. Smitaji, ijj all well? Please update soon. Please, Please,please, please, please, please, please. I have bitten my fingernails and have no cuticles to speak of.
ReplyDeleteAll ijj well, my dear. Bhy phear bhen I am here?
DeleteHahahahaha that was too funny! Buaji and her antics hahaha I loved it!
ReplyDeleteOmg that was so funny Smitha!!! Buaji Is moving faster than a rocket in ruining Arshi's love life lol!!! Loved the update!!
ReplyDeleteIt’s a great pleasure reading your post.It’s full of information I am looking for and I love to post a comment that “The content of your post is awesome” Great work! This is too funny... Buy Indian sarees
ReplyDeletenice update.. i thought she will directly talk to Payal and Khushi.. interesting that their parents are also involved..
ReplyDeleteOMG!!! Poor ARHI. Buaji ke ek rode ne aur Shashi and Garima naam ke aur do rode khade kar diye!!!
ReplyDeletePlease update soon dear.
Very happy to read your comments. Sorry, can't reply to each one. Next part to be posted by Monday.
ReplyDeleteInteresting one...continue soooon
ReplyDeleteYeh kya ho gaya.. ab ARSHI kya karenge.. Khushi's family is strictly against Raizada family following their past.. very interesting story.. i am loving it..
ReplyDeleteHwwww!!!!
ReplyDeleteYeh kya hua, kaise hua, kyun hua, jab hua......?
:-(
OH NO THIS BUAJI MAN!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteA very different concept. Normally Buaji is gushing over Arnav babua. Waiting to see how Shashi is going to tackle this.
ReplyDeleteOh dear. Things are getting our of hand. Arnav better get back soon....any deal can wait for ASR
ReplyDeleteHow can parents mistake make children responsible......it is a tough situation.....the guptas are judgemental....they have to understand that the children fought against all odds and now leading a happy life.....arnav owns a company now......feeling so bad...
ReplyDeleteOh man!!! What will Sasi Gupta decide? Smita this is not fair you left us on a cliffhanger. Please update soon, I can't wait to BAN all these kaante from Arshi's love issshtory
ReplyDeleteAs much as I was looking forward to you updating - now onlooking forward to the next update! Did Arnav really ask his family to show up at the Gupta doorstep or was it another misconstrued understanding on the "too eager to meddle" Raizada ladies part???
ReplyDeleteAll the power lies with the Guptas right now.... Although Shashi seems to be the sanskari luckhnowi man... I think he will not condemn Arnav and Akash based on the family history... I hope that's not wishful thinking on my part. The Raizadas were so enthusiastic... sniff, sniff!
ReplyDeletei feel sashi is right in his place..... why did nani hide all the details abt the family past... she shud have been open abt it ...
ReplyDeleteEagerly awaiting for the next part as to see Arnav's reaction if the proposal is refused.
ReplyDeleteSimply superb updates..(part-13/14)
ReplyDeleteEagerly waiting for the next move and twist from both the sides...
Love n hugs Smitaji.
Sasi was so polite even in refusing... nice update..
ReplyDeleteAmazing update...
ReplyDeleteNow waiting to see what will be arnav's next move...
Awesome update!!! Oh no Shashi refused, hopefully Srnav has next move planned.
ReplyDeleteThis is so different Smita. I cannot imagine what Arnav is upto next.
ReplyDeletewow superb update loved it but what's going to happen next i am getting scared can't wait for next part thank you..................ameena671
ReplyDeleteEagerly waiting for next part...cont soon di!!!
ReplyDeletetwist is twisting our brain...lol..continue asap
ReplyDeleteHope Arnav can change their mind and convince them that his family is not manuplative ,
ReplyDeleteSo sad.. ARSHI convo was so sweet.. Khushi calling her Arnavji at 1 to let him know about what is happening around them.. Shashi is good man but here is question of his daughters and he can do anything to see to that they are not hurt in life.. Raizada women left with heavy heart.. Waiting to know Arnav's reaction.. what will he do now? loved the update..
ReplyDelete"Grace under pressure" - thy name is Shashi Gupta. What a gentle way to express his dissent. Loved his characterization, so true to the one in the serial. Quite a change having Buaji objecting to ASR instead of gushing all over him. Still all said and done - dhak dhak dhak dhak dhak. Haunting and ghooring waiting for the update. Dhak dhak dhak dhak dhak.
ReplyDeleteAwesome chapter............poor shashi.......he is worried for his daughters.....
ReplyDeleteAs Rumi says... On the path of love, we are neither masters nor the owners of our lives... We are only a brush in the hand of the Master Painter....
ReplyDeleteArnav Singh Raizada is learning it... Gupta family's steadfast belief that every son quotes his father, in words and in deeds is their way of protecting their daughters... When Shashi and Garima have not yet met the boys and are unaware of how they really are and their integrity, such thoughts do take precedence over everything else... They are under the impression girls have not met the boys yet... But if Shashi gets an inkling that his daughters are not averse to this relationship, his thoughts are bound to change and he is bound by his conscience to give an ear to what Arnav has to say and check out his intentions and integrity... He has only the welfare of his daughters in his mind... The ladies think of the society too but not Shashi Gupta... If he was so, he would not have sent his daughters to Delhi and let them have a catering service... Now Arnav needs to show by his words and deeds that anyone who suspected him to be a chip off the old block was really way off the mark... An arrow can only be shot by pulling it backward... His confidence in himself and his destiny that oozes out stems from his chosen path of living with integrity on the inside...This is what he needs to convince Shashi off... Loved the update Smita... Its really a challenge thrown at ASR by Shashi Gupta...
ASR never met the Master Painter in the serial. So I thought, why not here? yes, ASR is in the strange position of having to prove himself to a middle-aged halwai if he wants to live happily with Khushi.
DeleteThank you for giving us this beautiful story smitaji. It's so real n the way you write each update ...hila ke rakh diya ji.
DeleteReshu ...welcome dear...hum kabse aapki raah tak rahe the...
DeleteLovely comment as usual.
Love n hugs.
Hey Rashmi, welcome back
DeleteThank you Hetal and Dipti... Glad to be back too...
DeleteHi Rulama, I think you got me started onto Smita's stories, when I entered the world of IF FF earlier this year... you posted her stories for while, right? because there was some trouble with her account... I apologize if I have it wrong. Thank you, I would not have missed these stories for anything. Apparently you have been away for a while. Well, welcome back! Regards
DeleteHi ! You are right... I am the very same one... You are welcome and it was my pleasure to post it there... AD took over and it turned out to be quite a donkey.... Thank you....Glad to know that you love Smita's works...
DeleteAs much as I love Arnav I cannot find a single fault in Shashi ji 's thought process. Which father would marry off his daughters into such family? Smitaji how will u get our lovebirds out of this ...
ReplyDeleteTrust ASR, my dear!
DeleteSimply amazing,
ReplyDeleteWaiting for the next part...
Arnav n Babuji's meeting...
Fab update Smitaaaa!!
ReplyDeleteLoving this story loads!! Although I love Arnav, it's very understandable where Buaji-Garima-Babuji are coming from regarding the marriage issue. Unfortunately, they don't know that Khushi-Arnav already love each other :(
ASR will put things back into place for sure. He's a determined lover ;) and that's what I can't wait to read!
Loved it. Eagerly waiting for the next update:)
Awesome update. Love this story. Totally different from what we see in other stories. Looking forward to next part.
ReplyDeleteSuper brilliant update. Shashi is right in his place. At the same time, I feel that he should have met Arnav and Akash properly before taking a decision
ReplyDeletePlease update next part soon Smita
That's indeed sad for the so much in love couple
ReplyDeleteAs much as khushi's father is right about not agreeing to the proposals of his daughters
But he himself said one should not punish the children for their parents wrong doings
You never know children of good parents can turn out to be bad and similarly children of bad parents can turn out to be one of the best too
Let's see how Arnav handles this situation
Hai re Nandakishore!!! Ab Kya hoga Smita. Will ASR and Akash meet Sasi Gupta to ward off his fears. Please update soon
ReplyDeletewow awesome update loved it can't wait for next part hope arnav and akaash can make khushi and payal parents change their mind about the weddings thank you.................ameena671
ReplyDeletefinally the truth is out... very nice update.. waiting for Arnav's action now..
ReplyDeleteSighhhhhhh!! The sins of the father ...... While it is absurd and unfair to hold the children responsible for their parents' actions, this sort of scenario is fairly common in reality. Moreover, in India, marriage is between 2 families more than the 2 individuals involved. I can't fault Sasi Gupta for being protective about his daughters and I can't fault the Raizadas for wanting to put their sordid past behind. At least naniji was honest about everything instead of trying to whitewash the whole affair. A very touching chapter. Being the doting father he is , will Sashi change his mind if he knows his girls' feelings? What is our Arnav bitwa going to do? All ijj well. All ijj well. DHAK DHAK DHAK DHAK DHAK
ReplyDeleteIt's so true ,that we marry into families and you shown the dilemma facing Arnav and khushie ,and her father has proven that his girls are his treasure and they deserve the best .
ReplyDeleteMy favorite, favorite part of this chapter... and I can't believe I had one since this one was so sad... quote ' created History... and Geography, by running away together'. I burst out laughing while I was in the process of getting satisfyingly emotional. I have NEVER heard it put this way. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteNow this twist in the tale... Call for arms for ASR, maybe? Hmmm, might backfire... See things work out for Arnav normally in his ASR avatar... but you have created an ALTERNATE alternate universe... Maybe if all pray for them... you will take mercy on them... You do realize, this is a serious departure from your usual style!
Poor Arnav and Khushi. Hope that Shashi comes around soon.
ReplyDeleteHaye. haye. The parents rejected the proposals based on who the family is. Nani is so correct in saying that it is not just the boy and girl who marry, it is the Milan of two families.
ReplyDeleteHope that Arnav will talk to Sasi soon and resolve the doubts.
I was away on holidays and so much happened in the story... I just can't stop crying
ReplyDeletewhat twist, even though I know you only do HEA, I still had tears in my eyes.
ReplyDeleteThey are so orthodox in their way of thinking....but that is a reality....and as Khushi says....Devi Maiyya will help them
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