Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you
Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi
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"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
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Part 20
“So bitwaa,
tell me. What are you doing now?” Sasi asked Anand.
They had
finished a delicious dinner and were sitting in the living room, all relaxed
and content. Payal and Khushi had been sent to bed as they had a catering order
to fill the next day and had to wake up early.
Anand
curled his long legs under him, hugged a cushion and said, “I am going to move
back to Delhi, uncle. I was in the US for ten years, working in a hospital. I
want to take life easy, take time out, enjoy a slower pace. I had an interview
today at a hospital. They agreed to my terms. I will be starting work next
month.”
“Nandkisore,
you are a doctor, aren’t you?” buaji asked. “I remember Deendayalji telling me
once.”
“Yes, an
orthopaedic surgeon,” Anand smiled.
“Bitwaa,
are you married?” Sasi asked directly.
Anand
smiled. “No, uncle. I went to California one year after our house burned down
and killed my parents. During that time, a family friend brought a proposal for
me from Goa. I thought maybe I could build a life from the ashes that were left, but...”
“Kaa hua,
bitwaa?’ Garima asked.
“On the day
of the wedding,” Anand said slowly, “when we sat down before the havan, the
girl jumped up, took a thali of flowers and threw it into the fire.”
“Hein?”
buaji asked.
“What?”
Sasi asked.
“Ee kaa he,
jiji?” Garima asked.
“She
suffered from mental illness. The family hid it from me. She became very
violent when she saw the crowd and the fire. She chased the priest, held him
down and hit him on the head with a lamp,” Anand said softly.
“The family
lied? Why? Matlab, how can you hide your daughter’s madness from her future husband? Did they
think you would never find out?” Sasi asked, astounded.
“I don’t
know, uncle. I had to call a friend in Goa who is a psychiatrist. He came with an
ambulance and three helpers. It took all four of them, me and a tranquiliser to
get her to the hospital,” Anand sighed.
“Ee to ghor
anyay hui gawa, Nandkisore,” buaji exclaimed.
“Yes,
buaji,” Anand admitted. “They had to admit her. She was under treatment there
for four months after which her parents took her away. Even though we weren’t
married, I offered to pay for her lifelong treatment through my friend, but
they refused it and left Goa for Kanpur.”
“Do you
know where she is now?” Sasi asked.
Anand
sighed. “They stopped her medication. A friend in Kanpur, who had been present
that day in the wedding hall, said that about three years after the wedding
fiasco, she died. She brandished a knife one day and succeeded in fatally
wounding her father. In the scuffle that followed, she was hurt badly and
passed away at the hospital in which he was working.”
Buaji had
to wipe away a tear.
“After this
mess, I was pretty scared to think of marriage, uncle. So I focused on my work.
But I am thirty-eight now. If I am planning to marry, I need to make a move
soon,” Anand said.
Sasi
beamed. “Bitwaa, what do you expect in your bride?” he asked.
“I would
like her to be between thirty and thirty-eight, uncle. I don’t want a young
bride,” he said.
“Bitwaa,
there is a very nice girl. Her name is Anjali,” Sasi suggested.
Buaji and
Garima nodded vigorously.
“She is
beautiful, very devout, very good-natured,” Garima added.
“She is in
her early thirties, a spinster,” Sasi said. “She lives with her nani, mami,
mama, one brother and one cousin. They are very nice people.”
Buaji and
mami nodded.
“Why is she
still a spinster?’ Anand asked. “Doesn’t she want to marry?”
“Three
reasons,” Sasi said directly. “One, she is Arvind Mallik’s daughter.”
Anand
frowned. “The family that lived in Sheesh Mahal?”
“Yes,” Sasi
said.
“There was
a scandal, wasn’t there, uncle?” Anand asked hesitantly. “I don’t remember
exactly what it was.”
Sasi
explained about the death of Anjali’s parents.
“I remember
babuji remarking once that Arvind and Avinash Mallik were shaitan in human
form,” Anand said mildly.
“He was
right,” Sasi said.
“What is
the second reason?” Anand asked.
“The double
suicide happened on Anjali’s wedding day. The shaadi was cancelled and the
groom and his family ran away,” Sasi said.
“I see,”
Anand said.
“So she is
scared of trusting men, Nandkisore,” buaji explained.
Anand
nodded. “I understand,” he said softly. “The third reason?” he asked.
“Polio, I
think,” Sasi said. “She has a limp.”
“I see,”
Anand said.
“Babua, her
father and uncle were ghatiya men, but her mother and the rest of the family
are good, sanskaari people,” Sasi said. “In fact, her brother, Arnav likes
Khushi and her cousin, Akash wants to marry Payaliya. We are considering the
proposals,” Sasi revealed.
“That’s
great,” Anand said. “Payal and Khushi in one family. Uncle, can we meet Anjali
informally? We can decide whether to proceed or not after that.”
“Why not?”
Sasi asked. “Let me see what can be done.”
***
Payal and
Khushi were serving Anand aloo paratha when Sasi came rushing in.
“Bitwaa, aa
jao. We can eat later,” Sasi said frantically.
Anand stood
up obediently.
“Babuji,
bhaiyya didn’t eat even a morsel,” Khushi complained.
“We will
get back soon,” Sasi said apologetically.
“The food
will cool,” Payal pouted.
“It is
urgent,” Sasi dragged Anand by the arm and led him out.
“Kya hua,
uncle? Is someone sick?” he asked.
“No, Anjali
and her family are at the temple,” Sasi said. “We can deliberately meet them
there by accident.”
“You are
wicked, uncle,” Anand said, chuckling as he crammed his length into a rickshaw
and left with Sasi.
“That’s
them,” Sasi inclined his head towards the three ladies standing on the landing.
Anand saw
the back of a tall, slim girl wearing a pink sari. Lush, black hair fell down
her back like a silk waterfall. As he watched, she turned and he caught his
breath. Bright, big eyes, a pert nose and full lips. A lovely complexion and a
beautiful smile. She had a pooja thali in her hands.
“I am going
up to meet them,” Sasi murmured.
“I will
wait here,” Anand whispered. “Will join you later.”
Sasi nodded
and walked up.
Anand saw
the moment Anjali’s eyes fell on Sasi. Her eyes lit up, her face bloomed.
“Uncle,”
she called, limping down the steps to reach him.
“I will
come to you,” Sasi called, quickly walking up to reach her.
Anjali
caught hold of his hand in her free one. “I am so happy to see you, uncle. It
has been one month since we met,” she pouted.
“Yes, hasn't it? How have you been, Anjali?” Sasi asked.
Anand
slowly walked up the steps to take a place from where he could hear the
conversation.
“Well,
uncle. How are Garima aunty and buaji? Payal and Khushi?” Anjali asked.
Mami and
nani joined them, greeting Sasi warmly.
“Garima and
jiji are fine. Khussi and Payaliya are not very happy,” Sasi said truthfully.
Anjali’s
face fell. “Chotey and Akash have been working very hard this month, uncle.
They have always worked hard, but this month—it has been too much. I am scared
they will fall ill,” she admitted.
Sasi
nodded.
“They don’t
eat properly, don’t sleep well and then work long hours. Aisa bhi koi karta he,
uncle?” she asked. “They know how we worry about them.”
“That’s why
Anjali came here today, Sasiji, to get two raksha dhagas for the boys,” nani
explained.
“And hamre
Arnav bitwaa was saying that there ijj no isspace on his wrists for another
raksha dhaga, Hello Hi Bye Bye!” mami added.
All smiled.
“Let me
introduce you to Anand Bharadwaj. He is the son of my friend, Deendayal,” Sasi
said.
Anand
stepped forward.
All the
ladies folded their hands and greeted him. He reciprocated.
“Anand,
this is Devyani Raizada, her daughter-in-law, Manorama Raizada and her
granddaughter, Anjali Raizada,” Sasi said.
“Are you in
Delhi for a visit, bitwaa?” nani asked.
“No, I am
moving here permanently. I will be starting work at AIIMS next month,” Anand
said with a smile.
“He is a
surgeon setting broken bones,” Sasi explained.
All smiled
at Anand.
“Your
parents are here with you?” nani asked.
“No, they
are dead. A fire burned down our house and my parents were caught in it,” he
said simply.
Mami
covered her mouth in shock.
“He
bhagwan!” nani exclaimed.
Anjali’s
eyes filled with tears.
“I am a bachelor. My wedding
was fixed, but we realised that the bride was insane, violently so, on the
wedding day before the shaadi. So I am unmarried and alone. Now Sasi uncle is
helping me find a bride,” Anand said directly.
Sasi nodded
his approval of Anand’s straight talking.
Tears
trailed down Anjali’s cheeks for the pain and disillusionment this stranger
must have felt.
Anand held
out his kerchief.
Anjali took
it and dried her cheeks.
“I am so
sorry you had two terrible experiences in your life, Anandji,” Anjali said in a
low voice.
“This is
life,” Anand said, shrugging.
She held
out the kerchief. He took it.
“I hope you
find a bride who makes you very happy, Anandji. Aap bilkul chinta mat keejiye.
I will pray for you,” Anjali promised him earnestly.
Anand
nodded. “I am sure I will, Anjaliji, if you pray for me,” he said, a small
smile lurking about his chiselled lips.
“You pray,
Anjali, but please, please don’t fast,” Sasi requested.
All
laughed.
Sasi turned
to Anand and said, “Anjali has an inordinate fondness for fasting.”
Anand
smiled.
“Acha, hum
chalte hein,” Sasi told the ladies.
“Sasiji,
you said you want to know the boys better, but you haven’t visited us even
once,” nani complained. “Aap hamare ghar aayiye na.”
“Ee long
distance jaan-pehchan se kaa fayda?” mami asked.
“And bring
Anand bitwaa with you, Sasiji,” nani said. She turned to look at the tall,
young man. “As long as we are here, you will always have friends in Delhi,
babua,” nani told Anand.
He smiled
his thanks.
“We will
visit tomorrow evening around six, Devyaniji, if it is fine with you,” Sasi
promised.
“Any time
is fine with us, Sasiji,” nani said smilingly.
“Pukka
promise?” Anjali asked, holding her hand out for Sasi’s promise.
“Pukka
promise,” Sasi placed his hand on hers.
***
“Chotey,
Sasi uncle and his family will be visiting us at six tomorrow,” Anjali told
Arnav over the phone.
“We will
get there before they do, di,” Arnav promised. “I will ask Aman to reschedule
the appointments.”
“Are you
fine, Chotey? You sound odd,” Anjali said.
“Just
tired,” Arnav said. His head hurt, his eyes felt as though
they were burning.
“And
Chotey, do you know whom we met today?” Anjali asked.
“Who?”
Arnav made the requisite reply.
“Anand
Bharadwaj, Sasi uncle’s friend’s son,” Anjali revealed. “His story is so sad,
Chotey.”
“I will get
back to you, di. I have a lot of work to get through,” he said before cutting the
call.
***
Sasi asked
Anand, “So what do you think of Anjali?”
“I think we
should pursue it,” Anand said softly. “But before that, we need to find out if she intends to
marry or has decided to remain a spinster. I have to respect her decision.”
Sasi
nodded. “I will talk to Devyaniji today evening. If Anjali is willing to give
shaadi a chance, take a few weeks to get to know her. I don’t want any more
unpleasant surprises in your life, babua,” he said.
Anand
smiled.
“You don’t
mind her limp?” Sasi asked to be sure.
“No, I have
seen worse,” Anand said lightly.
“Some
people consider the bride unlucky if her wedding gets cancelled,” Sasi reminded
him, wanting him to be certain of what he was planning to do.
“Then I
must be equally unlucky,” Anand smiled.
“The family—it
is not good,” Sasi spoke the truth.
“I know.
Had my parents been alive, they would never have considered a girl from the
Mallik family. But they are dead. I have no one to please, no one to ask, no
one to help me except you, uncle. If you are ok with them, I don’t mind,” Anand
said.
Mohan
phoned at that very moment.
“Your Arnav
Singh Raizada is working from home today. His brother is mooning about the
office like a hen that has lost its only chick,” Mohan said with a laugh.
Sasi
chuckled.
“The news
is that ASR is sick,” Mohan said seriously.
“What?”
Sasi asked. "Did he eat his own cooking?"
“The long
hours and lack of proper food have taken their toll,” Mohan said.
Sasi
sighed. “Mohan, call off your detective,”
he said.
“You are
satisfied with one month’s report?” Mohan asked.
“Yes, I don’t
have the patience to listen to you giving me the same list every evening for
six months,” Sasi said.
Mohan
smiled.
“Mohan
Tiwariji, I am delighted to inform you that my daughters are getting married
sometime very soon. You will receive a formal invitation as soon as we fix the
date and the place,” Sasi teased. “Waise, I wonder if ASR will be able to spare
two hours to get married.”
Mohan
laughed. “I am sure he will slot you in,” he said before cutting the call.
Payal came
in to give Sasi and Anand their tea.
“Payaliya,
you and Khussi need to come out with us this evening,” Sasi said.
“An outing,
babuji?” Payal asked in excitement.
“Yes,” he
replied. “We need to show your Anand bhaiyya the sights, don’t we?”
“Yes,”
Payal said, smiling widely. “I will let Khushi know.”
“Tell her I
won’t let her sit at home and mope,” Sasi cautioned her.
“Yes,
babuji,” Payal replied before leaving.
Part 21
“Sasiji.” Nani
was all smiles as she greeted him. “I am so glad you are all here. Garimaji,
Madhumatiji, Anand, Payal, Khussi, come in.”
Mami and
Anjali greeted them and dragged them off to the living room, chattering nineteen
to a dozen.
“Babuji
brought us to Akashji and Arnavji’s house?” Payal asked in astonishment. “Yeh
kya ho raha he, Khushi?”
“I don’t
know, jiji,” Khushi whispered. Her eyes looked around frantically for a sight
of her Arnavji. It had been one full month since she had laid her eyes on him.
“Maybe they
are not here. Otherwise babuji would never bring us here. He would be breaking
his own stipulation of six months of no contact,” Payal surmised.
“I don’t
know, jiji,” Khushi murmured, her eyes shadowed with pain because she couldn’t
see Arnav anywhere.
All sat
down.
“Hari
Prakashji, please bring tea and snacks,” nani requested.
“Ji,
naniji,” HP took one last look at his Devi Khushi before leaving for the
kitchen.
“I will
help him, nani,” Anjali said with a big smile.
As she turned to leave, buaji
said, “Khussi, Payaliya, jao, help Anjali, Nandkisore.”
Payal,
Khushi and Anjali made their way into the kitchen.
“Devyaniji,
we have come here today to let you know that we don’t need six months to know
your grandsons. We would be delighted to marry our daughters to them,” Sasi said
quietly.
Nani couldn’t
believe her ears. She stared at Sasi in disbelief.
“Saasumma,
pinch me,” mami invited.
Buaji
pinched her as hard as she could make it.
Mami
screamed in pain. Then she asked, “So it ijj true? You will give Khussi to
hamre Arnav bitwaa and Payaliya to Akass bitwaa?”
“Yes,” Sasi
said with a smile.
“Hello Hi
Bye Bye!” mami exclaimed.
“Let me
call the boys down,” nani said swallowing her happy tears. “They are upstairs
working.”
“I don’t
want to meet them, Devyaniji. I am convinced they are gems,” Sasi said.
“Phir bhi,”
mami tried to insist.
‘I know too
much about them as it is,’ Sasi muttered to himself. ‘No more.’ He said loudly, “Why
don’t we send the girls to meet the boys? They are the ones who need to know each other.”
Nani’s and
mami’s eyes brightened.
“Yes, that’s
right, Sasi babua,” buaji said.
“They will
be so surprised,” Garima said smiling.
“As you
wish, Sasiji,” nani said, happy to fall in with his plan.
“Are you
looking for a groom for Anjali?” Sasi asked bluntly.
Nani
lowered her eyes to the carpet. Mami touched her on the knee to comfort her. Then
she said, “Bhat ijj the use of lookings for a groom? They come for the money,
not for our Anjali bitiya.”
“She had
polio as a child, Sasiji. So she has a limp. Her age, the cancellation of her
wedding, her parents’ death—all are against her. We tried looking for a husband
for her, but all we got were fortune hunters,” nani said slowly. “Thank God she
has two brothers to look after her after we are gone. Otherwise, I don’t know
how we would bear this.”
The Guptas
nodded. Anand listened keenly.
“Is she
against marriage?” Sasi asked.
“No,
Sasiji. I am sure she too wants to get married, but the kind of men who came here
to see her were—let me say they put her off,” nani admitted.
“What do
you think of Anand for Anjali?” Sasi asked.
The Guptas
smiled at the look of shock on the faces of nani and mami.
Finally
nani said, “Bitwaa, you know nothing about us. We belong to Lucknow. We...”
“I know everything,”
Anand said softly. “Sasi uncle told me.”
Nani and
mami looked at Sasi for confirmation.
Sasi
nodded.
Nani heaved
a sigh of relief, her eyes filling with tears.
“Can we let
Anand and Anjali talk in private?” Sasi asked. "They should know if they suit."
“Why not?”
nani asked, smiling through the tears.
Anjali,
Khushi, Payal and HP entered with tea and snacks.
“Khussi,
Payaliya,” mami called. “Bhy don’t you goes up and sees the housewaa?”
The girls
nodded, confused.
“I will
take them, mami,” Anjali offered readily and turned to escort the girls up.
“Anjali
bitiya, you stays here. Khussi knows the way. She will take Payaliya up,” mami
said.
Payal and
Khushi walked up the steps holding hands.
“What is
happening, Khushi?” Payal asked.
“I don’t
know,” Khushi replied. “Jiji, I know only Arnavji’s room. This is it,” she
said, gently pushing the door open.
***
“Anjali
bitiya, sit down, “ nani said.
Anjali sat
down.
“Sasiji,
Garimaji and Madhumatiji have agreed to let Payal and Khushi marry Akash and
Arnav,” nani told her.
Anjali’s
eyes widened in shocked delight. She jumped out of her seat and uncaring of her
bad leg, launched herself at Sasi, buaji and Garima, hugging them fiercely
chanting “Thank you, thank you, thank you.”
Anand
laughed at her excitement.
“Uncle,
aunty, buaji, I promise, I will be the best sister-in-law ever and Chotey and
Akash will be model husbands,” she repeated, hugging them again.
“Woh sab
theek he, Anjali,” Sasi said. “We believe you. But...”
“But?”
Anjali asked, her big eyes filled with worry.
“I am
worried about you. Are you going to remain alone all your life?” Sasi asked
gently.
Anjali
looked helplessly at nani and mami. Then she said softly, “Uncle, I couldn’t
find anyone to marry.”
“No
problem,” Sasi said. “That’s what families are for. We meddle with pleasure. Anjali, after Arnav marries
Khussi and Akash marries Payal, who are we to you?”
“Ji?”
Anjali asked, bewildered.
“You can’t
call me uncle anymore. You will have to call me babuji. Garima will be your amma.
Buaji will be your buaji,” Sasi explained.
Anjali
nodded slowly.
“We take
our responsibilities very seriously, Anjali and have brought a proposal for
you,” Sasi said.
Anjali’s
mouth fell open.
“You don’t
have to marry him if you don’t like him. Just promise us that you will meet him
and talk to him, try to get to know him. That’s all,” Sasi suggested.
“Uncle...”
Anjali began.
Sasi raised
his brow.
“Babuji,”
Anjali corrected herself, trying hard not to cry.
“Babuji, my limp.”
“He doesn’t
mind it,” Sasi reassured her.
“What? What about my cancelled marriage?” Anjali tried.
“He couldn’t
care less about it,” Sasi said. “And he doesn’t mind about the Malliks.”
“Really?”
Anjali was shocked.
“Just talk
to him,” Sasi requested.
“I will,”
Anjali promised.
“So here we
present Anand Bharadwaj as a prospective groom for you,” Sasi turned to look at
Anand.
Anjali’s
jaw hit the floor.
Finally she
managed to ask Anand, “Anandji, aap? Really?”
He nodded,
a small smile on his thin lips.
“Now it is
your turn to show Anand the kitchen of your house,” Sasi pointed in the
direction of the kitchen. “Jaaiye.”
Anjali and
Anand left the elders and moved away to talk.
***
Khushi
pointed at Arnav’s bed.
“Arnavji’s
bed,” she said.
Payal
looked at her as though she had lost her marbles. She looked away to see the
open door to the garden and the pool.
Payal walked through it into the garden.
She stood looking at the placid water of the pool, feeling at peace.
Khushi
walked to the bed on tired legs and collapsed on it. She buried her face in his
pillow, breathing him in. She slowly pulled the blanket over her to lie
shrouded in the very place Arnavji had slept last night.
“P—payal?”
came a squeaky cry.
Payal
turned her head to see Akash staring at her through his specs. Behind him, Arnav
was sitting on a black recliner, a laptop on the low table before him.
Her mouth
fell open. “You are at home?” Payal asked. “Then why did babuji bring us here?”
Akash
strode to her and took hold of her hand. Payal blushed and lowered her eyes.
“Khushi?”
Arnav asked, his voice husky.
Payal
turned her head to indicate his room.
Arnav stood
up in haste, his legs hitting the table. The piece of furniture shook but didn’t
fall. He rushed to his room, his eyes looking for Khushi.
He saw the
bundle on his bed.
Arnav
slowly walked up to her and sat down by her, his legs trembling. He slowly
pulled down one corner of the blanket.
Khushi’s
face was buried in his pillow and she was weeping, her body shaking with
soundless sobs.
“Khushi,”
he called urgently, touching her shoulder.
Startled,
she lifted her head to look at him.
“Arnavji?”
she asked between sobs.
“Yes,”
Arnav said hoarsely. “Khushi, don’t cry.” He tried to wipe away her tears but
Khushi gave him no chance.
She threw
herself at him, sobbing brokenly into his chest, her arms tight around him. His
arms held her tight to him, his brain unable to process the truth that she was
really before him, with him, in his arms. He buried his face in her hair,
whispering, “Khushi.”
His phone
rang.
“Khushi,”
he said softly, before lowering his right arm and taking the phone from his
pocket.
“If it is
Amanji, I will kill him,” Khushi threatened, her voice laden with tears. “And I
won’t tie rakhi on his hand.”
“Mami,”
Arnav replied, smiling crookedly.
“Yes?” he
asked.
“Arnav
bitwaa, ek khuss khabri he tumhare liye,” mami began.
“What,
mami?” he asked.
“Sasiji has
agreed to the two marriages,” mami said happily.
“Kya?” he
asked, his voice thin.
“Yes,” mami
confirmed. “Your nani and the Guptas are fixing the dates for your wedding.”
Arnav
swallowed. “The six months,” he asked weakly.
“Six months
ko goli maaro, Arnav bitwaa. Sasiji ijj ready to give his daughters to us. That
ijj all that matters,” mami said.
Arnav
nodded. “I will come down now,” he offered.
“This boy!
You are bilkul like your mama. No romance. Don’t come down. Sit with Khussi. I
bill calls you if they want you.”
Arnav
nodded.
“And Sasiji
has brought a proposal for Anjali bitiya,” mami said with glee. “Anand
Bharadwaj. Kouno doctor he.”
“What?”
Arnav couldn’t contain his shock.
“They are
talking. You also talk with Khussi,” mami suggested.
“We are
coming down now,” Arnav said before cutting the call.
He looked
down at Khushi.
“Khushi, we
have to go down,” he said.
“No,”
Khushi protested.
“Your
father,” he began.
“No, I can’t
live without seeing you for another five months, Arnavji,” she whispered
against his neck. “I won’t go.”
“Khushi,
babuji has agreed to the weddings,” Arnav said, a tremulous smile on his face.
“What?”
Khushi gasped.
“Yes,”
Arnav said, dropping a kiss on her hair. “He doesn’t want to wait for another
five months.”
“How? Why?”
Khushi asked.
“I have no
idea, Khushi. I am just glad this is happening,” Arnav whispered against her
forehead.
“Devi
Maiyya ki jai ho,” Khushi said, her eyes shut.
“Yes, Devi
Maiyya ki jai ho,” Arnav seconded her. “Buaji hurting her foot at the temple,
me helping her, your father’s change of heart and now your father bring Anand
Bharadwaj’s proposal for di—it is like a caravan of miracles marching into my
life, Khushi.”
“Anand
bhaiyya for Anjaliji?” Khushi gasped.
“Yes,”
Arnav replied.
“He is a
wonderful man, Arnavji,” Khushi said, cupping his face.
“Really?”
Arnav asked.
“Will
babuji bring a bad man for Anjalji?” Khushi asked.
“No, never,”
Arnav had to say.
“To phir?”
she asked.
“Why is
Devi Maiyya so kind to us, Khushi?” he asked, unable to believe that many
burdens he had been carrying on his shoulders for years were no longer there.
“She likes
my laddoos, that’s why,” Khushi claimed.
“Maybe,”
Arnav said, smiling, his eyes showering love on her.
“Not maybe.
Say yes,” Khushi insisted.
“Yes, yes.
A hundred times yes, my own Lakhnavi chef,” Arnav said against her cheek.
***
Rash's Interpretation:
Part 20
You build on failure using it as a stepping stone… Anand has accepted the fiasco of marriage as his past, closed the door on it and has let it go… He has learnt that, the lessons learnt from the past needs to be applied… Hence when Shashi asked his willingness to marry Anjali, he decided to see her first and at Shashi’s suggestion to get to know her… Meeting Anjali at the temple Anand was enamored by her, yet he was cautious in his approach… He accepts to meet the Raizadas’ at Shantivan… Before going ahead and revealing himself as a prospective suitor to Anjali, he wants to know what really her opinion is on her marriage and whether she was willing to take the plunge…
Shashi is satisfied with what he has come to know of Arnav and Akash… His decision was conveyed first to Mohan Tiwary in appreciation of his work with the first invite to the double wedding… He is all set to surprise Khushi and Payal by taking them to Shantivan and give his decision…
Part 21
Though the rest were happy to see Raizadas’ Payal and Khushi were flummoxed to be taken there… Guptas’ sans the girls had a mission to accomplish…. The unsuspecting Raizadas’ were relieved with the pleasant surprise given by Shashi Gupta… of the double wedding… When Shashi suggested Anand as a suitor for Anjali once he came to know that she is willing to seek the marital bliss, their happiness multiplied manifold by the understanding that Shashi showed as to what their happiness really meant and with these alliances formed they were gaining not just relation but kindred clan too… for the value of relation is not how much one feels happy with a person, but it’s the emptiness that one feels without that person… Such is the personality of Halwaii Shashi Gupta, an ordinary man with an extraordinary good heart…
Arnav and Akash get a surprise too to see their girls in their house and Arnav is ecstatic but Khushi is heartbroken with the thought of having to be away from him for another five months… With Mami’s input that there would be a double wedding as soon as it could be arranged and if things went smoothly three weddings in the house both are confounded… Arnavs first instinct is to rush to his Di to see how she is taking it, for in each other, both sought support and strength to tide over all through their perils… But Mami’s chiding keeps him glued to Khushi and later takes her too to the living room where the plans to go ahead were taking shape…
Loved the update Smita…
Epilogue
Anand
opened the door of his car and held out his hand.
Anjali
placed her hand in his and alighted to stand looking at the beautiful house
before them.
“It is
beautiful, Anandji,” Anjali breathed. “The terrace, the gardens. It is exactly
what I dreamed of.”
“Come in,”
he invited, opening the front door with his key.
Anjali
stood on the threshold and looked at the expanse of marble within.
Anand
lifted her in his strong arms and carried her into the house.
“Anandji,”
she protested weakly.
“Hold on
tight,” he replied softly.
Anjali
tightened her arms around his neck.
He carried
her in and bent to lower her at the centre of the room.
Anjali
looked around at the spacious room and its bare walls. There were no drapes or
furniture.
“You will
have to furnish it, Anjali, make it a home,” Anand said softly.
She nodded,
her eyes shining with joy.
Anand took
out a catalogue of fabric and a notepad from a cabinet.
“Anjali, go
through this and pick the curtains you want in each room. I will note it down,”
Anand said.
“Ji,” she
replied. She looked at the windows in the room and flipped through the
catalogue. One fabric caught her eye.
“Anandji,
what do you think about this for this room?” she asked.
Anand
walked to her to peer at the picture. “It looks good,” he remarked.
His arm
went around her shoulder.
Anjali
stiffened in surprise. She turned her head to look at him.
He raised
his brow as if to ask if anything was wrong.
Anjali
shook her head to mean no.
Anand
smiled as he tightened his hold on her.
“What about
the furniture?” Anand asked.
Anjali
stammered as she told him what she wanted.
He freed
her to write down her choices.
They went
from one room to the next till they reached the master bedroom.
Anjali
swallowed.
Anand
smiled seeing her nervousness.
She fiddled
with the catalogue, picking a random fabric for the curtains.
“You are
sure?” Anand asked.
“Ji?”
Anjali hyperventilated.
“You are sure
you want black for the curtains in our bedroom?” Anand asked.
“Black?”
Anjali breathed, staring at the option she had picked at random.
“Black is
fine, Anjali,” Anand said, laughter in his voice. “It will look like night in
our bedroom even when it is daytime. Imagine lying here on our bed and looking at the black silk curtains,” he teased. "What an ambience for romance!"
Anjali
wished she could swoon and end this torture.
“What about
the furniture?’ he asked.
Anjali
swallowed hard, her throat dry like the Saharan desert.
“A bed is a
must, don’t you think?” Anand teased.
“You
choose, Anandji,” Anjali mumbled and made to leave.
Anand
caught hold of her hand gently. He tugged her to stand close to him, her chest
against his. He put his arms around her and cradled her to him.
He
whispered into her hair, “This is as new to me as it is to you, Anjali.”
Anjali
looked into his honest eyes.
He ran a
daring finger down her cheek.
“I am
looking forward to our life together,” he whispered. “Are you?”
Anjali
nodded, blushing slightly.
He bent to
kiss away the blush from her cheek.
***
“Payal, you
look like an angel,” Akash said, pushing his specs up the bridge of his nose.
“You need
to change your glasses,” Payal simpered. “Humein pankh thodi na he.”
“Payal, in
a sari—you—you—you are beautiful,” he continued.
Payal rearranged
the pallu on her shoulder with nervous fingers.
“It is our
sagai. Can you believe it?” he asked.
“No,” Payal
admitted. “I thought babuji would never permit our marriage. Suniye, what would
you have done had babuji refused permission after six months?”
“Payal, I—I
would have suggested we elope,” he said bravely.
Payal’s
eyes widened. “Sachi?” she asked. “Like we see in phillums?”
“Yes,” he
asserted.
“Kitne cute
he aap!” Payal exclaimed, tweaking his nose.
He blushed.
***
“Arnavji,
open your mouth,” Khushi said as she held a spoon filled with ambrosia to his
sinfully delicious lips.
He parted
them and let her feed him.
His lashes
fell as he tasted the nectar that was her cooking.
“Gajar ka
halwa, sugar free. Like it?’ she asked.
“Hhmmmm,”
was all he could say.
Khushi
smiled. She dumped the dish on the table and cupped his face. “How thin you
became in one month, Arnavji,” she lamented.
He smiled
into her eyes. “I was dying for you, Khushi,” he murmured.
“Don’t talk
about dying, suna aapne? I will fight with you and never talk to you again," she threatened him.
“Sorry,” he
apologised, his eyes dancing.
“Chalo,
maaf kiya,” she let him off the hook.
“I have a gift
for you, Khushi,” he said softly.
“More
diamonds? Arnavji, please,” she begged, folding her hands. “Don’t give me
diamonds. I am scared I will misplace them.”
“Not
diamonds, Khushi, but something more valuable,” he said, handing over a packet.
Khushi tore
it open with all the excitement of a child on its birthday. She pulled out a white
chef’s cap from it.
“Awww, you
remembered,” she gasped, hugging the cap to her chest.
“I can
never forget anything about you, Khushi,” he said, his voice low. He took the
cap from her and placed it on her head.
Khushi ran
to the mirror in his room, placed her hands on her hips and preened. She was in
her sangeet dress of pink and dark blue silk lehenga, her hair piled on top of
her head in an artistic bun covered with jasmine flowers. The chef’s cap was
the perfect finishing touch.
Arnav came
to stand behind her, his arms folded.
“Like it?”
he asked.
“Love it,
Arnavji,” she replied, beaming. The smile fell away. “But amma and buaji won’t
let me wear it to our sangeet.”
“Koi baat
nahi, Khushi,” he whispered in her ear, his fingers filching the cap from her
head. “I will keep it safe.”
“Aap kitne
ache ho!” Khushi gushed.
“You can
wear it on our suhaag raat,” he breathed against her sensitive ear.
Khushi
jumped.
“You can
wear the cap and nothing else on our suhaag raat,” he whispered, his nose
touching her ear, his eyes waiting for the shock on her face.
“Awww,”
Khushi exclaimed. “Besharam, behaya.”
Arnav burst
out laughing.
She stared
at the beauty of his face as he chortled.
“Waise,”
she began and stopped.
“Kya?” he
asked, turning her towards him, taking her hand in his and kissing her palm.
“You are a
thief too,” she said.
“Really?”
he asked.
She nodded.
“You stole
my heart,” she said with a smile.
“I did?” he
asked, trying to look innocent.
She nodded.
“And my neend,” she added.
“Acha?” he
asked, a teasing glint in his eyes.
“And my
chain,” she claimed.
“I am going
to steal one more thing before this evening is over, Khushi,” he promised.
“Kya?” she
asked. “What is left for you to steal? You have taken everything.”
He
swallowed his laughter.
“This,” he
said before lowering his lips to hers and stealing all her hosh and thoughts
away.
The End
I love this Sasi who is a bunch of surprises and love you more dear for not only giving us this fabulous update but also promising us another one today itself. Thanks for the double Dhamaka's:-)
ReplyDeleteLooking fwd to the upcoming evening where he sees his happiness
ReplyDeleteAnand must be someone really special in your life... You always create him with such love. He is so ...'shaant'... so peaceful... so patient, always. Made to order for Anjali.
ReplyDeleteWonderful update. My fav humorous line today...
“We can deliberately meet them there by accident.”
I love Shashi's character... absolutely! No qualifications at all!
Really having a blast reading this story. Thx
My favourite lines :
Delete"What? Did he eat his own cooking?"
" I don't have the patience to listen to you giving me the same list for six months".
Perhaps this was ASR's secret strategy : To drive Shashi insane with boredom and he finally gives up in exasperation. Seems to have paid off.
Hey Kaaycee... Yep... Love those too... The list gets too long, too quickly, LOL! And yes... we can't put anything past that 'Shaatir Dimaag'!
DeleteYES! YES! YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!!! Shashi has relented. He's already invited Mohanji for the weddings.
ReplyDeleteLoved the temple meeting. Anjali deserves some one special in her life. I love how you are tying up all the loose threads into one nice, neat little package.
I like this Anand as much as I liked your Anand in "Keeping Khushi". And wow, he is quite a hottie too.
The last pic. had me laughing my head off. A pic. does equal a thousand words. I'll be reading this over and over for sometime now. Will pester you for an update later.
I had missed the picture! I don't know how... Thx for pointing it out... Riot indeed! I will join your queue for pestering!
Deletewow... they are all going to meet tonight
ReplyDeletewow... they are all going to meet tonight
ReplyDeleteOh, I am so happy for Arnav and Khushi, and Anjali! They deserve to be happy! :) Thank God (or to be more exact, thank you,Smitaji) for Sasi's decision! Arnav could be totally ill in the end of six months, and Khushi totally unhappy...So that's good, this "amnesty":))))))
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for this update!
Double damaka, day to day update, really surprised me, love you dear
ReplyDeleteSimply superb.
ReplyDeleteAs per your record ...please don't end this one in the next part.
You know me so well, Hetal!
DeleteOmg Smitha that was such a funny and awesome update, Akash ans Arnav had boring lives than 2 old men lol!! Love the pick fir Anji, cannot wait for the next update!!!!!
ReplyDeleteUpdate?? Plzzz... I sooo want to see arnav n khushi meeting after a month!!
ReplyDeleteUpdate?? Plzzz... I sooo want to see arnav n khushi meeting after a month!!
ReplyDeleteWhere is update..? Waiting here I wanna know if Arnav got fever or not & if he did what will Khushi do...? After reading chap21 will I give comment on both chaps, so please hurry waiting here since evening...
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ReplyDeleteIs that outing perhaps a visit to Shantivan with the girls, to visit a love sick man... I have heard of the term 'love sick' and poor poor ASR, he is truly sick due to his love... poor poor ASR.
ReplyDeleteThat last picture, ROTFL. Is that for his own cooking. Poor poor ASR
The word love sick was made for this ASR. I don't know who edited that pic, but I love it!
DeleteOh Yes... ASR lacked the Vitamin K...
DeleteAwwww.... Such a lovely story! Can't believe it's ending soon.... Do write soon Smita....
ReplyDeleteWill post epilogue today.
DeleteSUPERB UPDATES
ReplyDeleteThank u!
DeleteSuperb updates...why it is ending soon??
ReplyDeleteEvery story has a natural end. Only 4Rats can stretch a tale where it doesn't want to go.
DeleteAh ha! Stalking pays! I read it in a rush and I can now go to sleep in peace. Will read again and comment.
ReplyDelete"If it is Amanji, I will kill him" - For a change it was not Aman.
And we would have held her coat... Right Kaaycee?
DeleteThat Diwali night. GRRR!
DeleteWe never find out who called... lucky for them!
DeleteWhat does it matter - who called on Diwali night. We all know what happened. Boooo Hooo!! And till today I don't have the guts to watch that episode where he drops her home.
DeleteFirst of all, a biiiiiig, no BIIIIIIIIG! Hug for you... I would send a kiss, but the relationship is new yet. As of two chapters ago we were in the dumps of despair... And you wrapped it up so beautifully. Kudos to you! Just wow! I mean seriously... amazing!
ReplyDeleteMy fav line ( why break tradition?)
‘I know too much about them as it is,’
Cracked me up. Love that Shashi... He is so different from any portrayal of him, I have ever read. A true doer!
No .2 ‘We meddle with pleasure'. So true..... Oh god, loved it.
I am not going to talk about A and K, coz that goes without saying... But I have to say Shashi stole the show. Fantastic!
Hugs & kisses always welcome!
DeleteHa Ha!! Scrap Booker , Trust you to pick out my fav lines too. "Why break tradition"? Too good. I agree with you. This OS has a very clearly defined and utterly adorable Shashi.
DeleteIt's evident, I am late to the party. :) Most of what i wanted to say has been quite eloquently expressed by everyone here. I just want to highlight one important point ...... ANAND is H.O.T. :P If Anjali's HEA wasn't in question, i wouldn't hv given up my claim. ;-)
Deleteoh yes Priya... Anand is droolworthy...
DeleteOh man! You said it. What's with the Raizadas and the Bharadwajs? They definitely have claimed the hotness market. Hhmmmph!!
DeleteToo good Smita. I was hoping Shashi babua wouldn't stick to his 6 mths clause. Thank God you finally put him out of misery! Otherwise he wouldn't have been able to take another 5 mths of boring updates.
ReplyDeleteI wish it weren't ending so soon though :(
All good things happen at once.........all the burden Arnav was carrying on his shoulders has gone away...........beautiful story.........
ReplyDeleteYAY finally the lovebirds are united.
ReplyDeleteBoth the parts are superb.
ReplyDeleteArnav akash payal khushi and Anjali cannot believe that sasiji has agreed for the wedding so soon.
The Raizada family is super excited to see all three of their children getting married.
Waiting for the epilogue
Smitaji!!! I don't know how you do it. What really stands out, for me, is that you have completely turned the characters on their heads while still keeping their very quintessential quirks . ASR is still the workaholic khadoos but willing to believe in DM. Buaji is so protective about her nieces but wary of Arnav. I think I've said enough about Shashi and mamiji. Oh and I would be remiss if I didn't mention the "reverse aukaat". HATS OFF to you!
ReplyDeleteWhat a roller coaster it has been - first the girls could have been sent off to Lucknow, contract broken, then the 6 month penalty and then a wedding within the month, no, make that 3 weddings. WOW WOW WOW!
I've already said this a few times, but if they ever bring back IPKKND, I'll start a campaign to get you to write for them. Loved the story. Can't wait for the epilogue. MUUUUUUUAAAAAA HHHHHHHHH
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DeleteYou are most welcome to write that petition... There would be a queue to be the signatories Kaycee... I had told her umpteen number of times when the show was going on itself... You know what her response was? Yet to get a call from 4 Lions and waiting for it... ;)
DeleteOh my God! I can just only imagine how gooooooooooooood the entire show would have been. You've just confirmed what I have suspected for a long time. The makers of the show can't and refuse to recognize talent and the CV's have completely lost their marbles. How else could you explain it. So many unwanted tracks, loose threads - its enough to make me want to tear my hair out and I'm already losing quite a bit .
DeleteBeautifully done, I too want to create stories like this. But i am not getting enough time to spend with my hobbies, due to heavy work loads from school. I have lot of academic works, so that i left all my hobbies temporarily. But i want to start. For that i choose one online writing service who is writing essays for cheap to complete my academic works. I need to write stories like you!!! Good work.
ReplyDeleteWow! Here I was wondering how the 6 months would be, but even Babuji couldn't wait that long xD
ReplyDeleteYay for the Raizadas! 3 happy moments for them ^_^
Loved it! Can't wait for the epilogue, although it's sad to know that this story is ending :(
Anyway, looking forward to the next. :)
First of all thanks a lot for quick back to back updates, really appreciate it :)
ReplyDeleteNow coming to the update, as usual beautifully written, thought that we'll have to wait with the couples for six months but thanks for taking pity on us :D
Sasi has kind of become a father figure for the Raizada siblings
Looking forward to the epilogue, though feeling sad that this story will end soon but I'm sure you won't let us stay sad for long and give us another masterpiece of your imagination and writing :)
Aww Smitha awesome story, cannot believe it is over. You need to start a new one soon please!!!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome ending Smita. Loved this story to bits. Can't wait for you to get started on the next one. Muah.
ReplyDeleteAWESOME EPILOGUE. Anjali deserves to be happy and Anand is a perfect match for her. Anjali looks so cuuuuuuute. Love this Payal. " Kitne cute hai aap" Bold yet sanskaari. The "O Rly" pic is one of my favs.
ReplyDeleteRash summed it up really well . Shashi - an ordinary man with an extraordinary good heart.
As for ASR and KKG: what can I say - truly an immortal pair.
So many updates in such a short time. THANK YOU for taking pity on us and not making us wait.
A big thank you also for keeping ASR, KKG and all the Raizadas and Guptas alive in our hearts long after the end of the show. The best thing about your stories is that I can easily picture the characters mouthing your dialogues because they are soooooo true to form. So it's all the more entertaining.
I can see my very own ASR shaking his head in resignation, nevertheless, I'm off to read the entire story once again without interruptions.
Fabulous idea. I think I will follow suit...
Deleteawesome story
ReplyDeleteawesome story
ReplyDeletewow brilliant updates and ending loved them all will miss this story but please keep writing amazing stories thank you...........ameena671
ReplyDeleteorly!!!! :) lol
ReplyDeleteGonna miss this story. I am greedy for never ending story from you Smita.
Another fabulous story.
Looking forward for the next one :)
You posted the Epilogue... Sigh! It's over.... Such a fantastic, funny, romantic, tender,upside down story this was. Loved every crazy minute of it... Had me worried for a while... but you sailed through with flying colors... and we along with you. LOL! Sachi you are the Queen of these, feel good stories.... I have read and reread so many of them... I have my favorites, different ones for different moods...The list is too long. Thank you Smita, for once again giving us this fabulous dream!
ReplyDeleteAnd now for my fav line....
“You need to change your glasses,” Payal simpered.
Way to go, Payal... Maybe she should write the book on 'Romantic Moments bigarhnay kay Sau Tareeqay'!
Waiting for your next one! Keep them coming coz we can't have enough. Regards,
Man!! you can make anything sound funny!! you are damn good!! lovely story..
ReplyDeleteThey say love comes from the most unexpected places. Must be true. Or else, how does one explain a chef's hat playing catalyst to a love story as tender and pure as the first flakes of snow?
ReplyDeleteAn ill-tempered cynic, who one day returns from work exhausted and famished, to his home infused with the aroma of mouth watering delicacies. Thus begins his pursuit of the devi in white donning a chef's cap. A girl so deeply involved with her work, her family and its values, she is untouched by passion. He kindles that burn in her, makes her aware of her own desires. Then she falls, deep and hard. Seeks solace in his bed, wants to envelope herself in his scent, refuses to allow any distance between them. Her longing forces her to take exception to her own father's six month clause. Which is saying a lot about a girl who holds both her father and the morals he has inculcated in her, in high esteem.
The real star of this tale is Shashi. The super glue who keeps his family together. A doting father who encourages his girls to spread their wings, all the while trying to shield them from possible hurt. The patriarch in him has love and empathy for Anjali too. He strives to wipe out the desolation in her life with utmost seriousness and succeeds in finding her a suitable life partner. In him an orphaned daughter finds her Babji. I just want to go and hug Shashi.
Moving on to Aakash and Payal. Both staunch pillars of support to their respective siblings. These two are so intrinsic to the tale that it would have been incomplete without them. And last but not the least......ANAND.... he is hot, he is a doctor and he is just yummmm.... ;-)
A beautiful ensemble of cast, visual storytelling, pinches of humour sprinkled here and there and an ever-after for all the three couples.... I loved this 'Delicious Theft'. Muaah, my dearest friend. <3
You're back. Missed your comments. Yup, this Shashi is the gold standard benchmark for fathers.
DeleteThank you Kaycee. Hv been a lil busy. Was dropping in from time to time .... playing peek-a-boo. ;-) Try to find me between parts 16-19. ;-)
DeleteHow have you been? You are a teacher, if I remember correctly. Your students testing the limits of your patience ?😀
What with school and haunting Smita's blog, I've been busy. My students are all sweethearts but keep me on my toes. I have lots of patience with them; it's the adults esp. some parents that drive me up the wall.
DeleteWhich subject do you teach, Kaaycee?
DeleteMy guess, English lit? ;-)
DeleteHow did you guess? English for grades 7,8,9 and 10 and math for grade 8. With all the work involved, it's a good thing that I carry my laptop to school so that I can catch up on all the updates. Keeps me sane.
DeleteSmitaji, I just want to know. Will your next story have Shyam the creepwaa in it? I'm eagerly awaiting your next masterpiece. In the meanwhile I think I'll just meander through some of your other stories.
ReplyDeleteNo Snake in the next story, but he will be there in the one after that.
DeleteSnakewaa is a very good antagonist. One that we all love to hate. The Shyam in the serial nailed it.
DeleteMind blowing story.. loved every part of it.. oh god the month long vanvas for ARSHI, Payash was heart breaking.. but all wells that ends well.. happy for anjali too.. and very very happy for our Lakhnavi Chef and her Arnavji.. wonderful story.. Sasi was superb and his detective friend was also great.. the reports that he used to give even though they broke heart to see Arnav, Akash killing themselves with work.. Thanks a ton Smita for such a outstanding story once again.. will be looking forward to another flower from your bouquet of flowers.. love you and your work.. God bless. Best wishes and happy writing dear <3
ReplyDeleteLovely end to a lovely story..love can come in life in disguise of anything...shasiji was the show stealer of the story. .U portrayed him very well as an understanding and loving and caring father. ..a beautifull nd delicious story. ..thanks for the story ..Will wait for more
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Epilogue. Enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteThe best takeaway for me is the equal importance or more importance the other characters are given but still the essence of Arshi is the core of the story. A different attempt from you but enjoyable nevertheless.
Now the big question is when are you going to start your next one??? Your writing has become an addiction and can't wait to read what your mind will conjure up next.
Don't fret over it Re Re... The next story would already be plotted in her mind when the previous one would be in its last leg itself... All Smita now would be needing is the free time to hone the plot... May be the weekend... that means YKWIM.... ;)
DeleteDon't fret over it Re Re... The next story would already be plotted in her mind when the previous one would be in its last leg itself... All Smita now would be needing is the free time to hone the plot... May be the weekend... that means YKWIM.... ;)
DeleteRash, sahi pakdi tumne! Will post part 1 today.
DeleteWoohoo.,, what a lovely ending Smita. Loved it. I do wish you had continued this story. I never like when your story ends. You write so beautifully.
ReplyDeleteI am so glad Anjali got a nice man. Shashi was nice. He was like their real parent when he talked to Anjali.
Arnav and khushi.., What can I say, the eternal couple. You make me fall in love with them more and more with your stories.
Please start the next story soon. When will you post the next one?
Today, my dear. Thank you.
DeleteA new story today ? It's an early Diwali gift. Yaaaay!!!!
ReplyDeleteLoved the ending. Even with the other two couples there, Arnav and Khushi will alway take the cake.
ReplyDeleteLoved the ending :))))
ReplyDeleteWow awesome ending...
ReplyDeleteWhen are you starting a new story plz plz start one asap.
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ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful ending ,loved the nok jocks between Arnav and khushie
ReplyDeleteAn amazing story!! Loved how you have weaved the emotions of all the characters and given equal standing to one and all. In the end also gave justification for how each individual perceived the situation. I Guess that is one of the main stand out of all your stories, giving equal space for every one involved. Hats Off!!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant finish as always. Coming here after a month almost. And reading wonderful updates. This always gives me a peace which nothing else csn give... thanks for another wonderful story smita..
ReplyDeleteLoved it.. thank god it was not a 5 month torture FOR ASR and kushi.. it got over soon. Guptasnare really nice to bring anji a pair too..
So when is the next story??
Its a rainy season here. Am expecting another sizziling romantic one to read as and when I please..:):):) :D
Last both updates were beautifully written..apart from our beloved Arshi I loved the most Shasi's character in this story with the beautiful heart..a very beautiful man who not only loved his daughters but equally loves Anjali n Arnav ..the heart that only wants beautiful n sweet feature of his daughters n extended family. ( Anjali,Arnav n Akash.)
ReplyDeleteAnd as usual your version of Manorama mamiji.
Eagerly waiting for the next story.
Love n hugs with kisses.
what a story? amazing
ReplyDeleteis there a chance we can get a story but with the main characters as Anjali and her partner.
Amazing story and a lovely finish.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful story
ReplyDeleteI love how everyone got who they wanted
Even Anjali got someone
Raizadas got new parents as Garmia and Shashi
& Guptas got sons and a new daughter
So beautiful
loved this story. nice ending
ReplyDeleteAwesome ending.........
ReplyDeletesuch an interesting update and end.. it was too good..
ReplyDeletewow delicious theft is just awesome ...... it ended so soon .............. and new os is superb ...... arnav is flaten by khushi .......... ASR and his anger ,,,,,,,,
ReplyDeleteAww... lovely ending... I wanted to read more :)
ReplyDeleteLoved it :)
Amazing story
ReplyDeleteAwesome ending
ReplyDeleteSatisfied reading an awesome story. Tqvm.
ReplyDeleteNice ending...
ReplyDeleteKiller dude!
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ReplyDeleteWhat can i say but that this was a fabulous story and so well written...thank you
ReplyDeleteSuch a cutest story 😍
ReplyDeleteGood story
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