Link to my new short story: Taking Care of You
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
“I thought I was dreaming when I first saw you," he said.
“How did you know it was me?” she asked. “I could have been anybody. A thief even.”
He smiled wearily. “I don’t know many thieves who would look at me with anxious eyes and then cry because I was sick,” he mumbled.
Is it possible for love to bloom, sight unseen? Juhi and Abhay are strangers who know each other better than they know themselves. One night changes the equation and the even tenor of their lives and puts all their doubts and fears to rest.
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-taking-care-you
Link to my first e-novel; A Home for Meenakshi
http://pothi.com/pothi/book/ebook-smita-ramachandran-home-meenakshi
"I love the way you love, Meenu," he whispered, his eyes on hers. "Such loyalty, such passion..."
Meenakshi Sharma, an orphan, lives in Varanasi with her uncle, a chronic bachelor who wants her to become a professional musician. She unwillingly relocates to Delhi to study under a renowned musician for eight months. Staying for rent in the outhouse of the Agrawals, she meets Aditya Agrawal, an attractive young man brooding over the memories of his horrendous past. Pulled between her uncle's expectations of her and Aditya's love for her, Meenakshi struggles with her feelings. How can she disappoint her uncle who had devoted his entire life to her upbringing? How can she pretend to be blind to Aditya's feelings for her? A romance that moves between the alleys of the holy city of Varanasi and the modern city of Delhi.
A blog for my VMs:
http://smitarsvms.blogspot.in/
Part 16
“Sir,
Payalji has come with the cheque. She wants to cancel the contract,” Aman
whispered, his hand cupped over the phone.
“Let her
cancel the contract but don’t take the cheque from her. Let her go,” Arnav
ordered.
“Sir,” Aman agreed reluctantly. Something was wrong with ASR and Khushiji and he didn’t know how to make it alright.
“Aman, I
will be a bit late getting to the office today,” ASR informed him. “About
thirty minutes. Schedule appointments accordingly.”
“Yes, sir,”
Aman replied.
He returned
to the room and told Payal, “You can keep the cheque, Payalji. We don’t want
the money. If you are determined to leave us, there is little we can do about
it.”
“But...”
Payal protested.
The door of
the room swung open and Akash walked in. He stopped for a moment when he saw
Payal and then continued walking to join them.
“Anything
wrong, Aman?” he asked softly, sitting by them.
“No, sir.
Payalji here has made up her mind not to cook for us anymore. They are leaving
for Lucknow soon. She has come to give us the money she owes for cancelling the
contract. When I informed ASR, he said I was not to take the cheque. I was just
informing Payalji about ASR’s order and how it has to be obeyed,” Aman
explained.
“It is not
fair, Amanji,” Payal protested. “We are breaking the contract. You should take
the money.”
Aman’s
phone rang. He excused himself.
“Bhai’s
word is final, Payalji,” Akash said mildly, his eyes on her beautiful eyes and
shining hair.
“But,”
Payal tried, feeling at a disadvantage.
“Payalji,”
Akash spoke in the only way he knew how, directly. “Bhai and I, we are sorry
you and Khushiji are leaving Delhi because of us.”
Payal
gulped and looked away.
“I know
your family doesn’t have a high opinion of us, but they are wrong. Bhai is not
like his father. He is like his mother,” Akash explained.
Payal
blinked.
“You won’t
find any scandals in his personal or business life. He is not that kind of a
person. I—I don’t know how to explain—to convince you that he is a good man. He
gets angry at times and is a workaholic. That’s it. He has no other vices.”
Payal
stared at him. What on earth was he talking about?
He said,
“And my mother may have come from a poor family, but she is loyal to a fault.
She loves di and bhai like her own and would kill anyone who dares to harm her
family.” Akash added, “She is my mother and I love her.”
Payal
nodded. What was going on? Was she still asleep, curled up in her bed?
“I am sorry
your family found our proposal so unacceptable, Payalji. We—that is, bhai and I
were hoping this would work out. We asked our family to approach you because we
are interested in marrying you. Bhai likes Khushiji and I—I like you,” he
managed to say.
Payal would
have fallen down had she not been sitting down.
“Is your
meeting with Aman over?” Akash asked.
“Yes,”
Payal replied, getting up on trembling legs to leave.
“Let me
escort you out,” Akash offered. As they walked out, he said softly, sadly, “I
am sorry you are leaving AR Designs and Delhi, Payalji. I never had a chance to
taste your cooking. The employees were raving about it.”
Payal’s
lips trembled.
“They will
miss you,” he murmured as they walked side by side.
They
reached the car park. “How did you come to the office, Payalji?” he asked.
“By
rickshaw,” Payal replied.
“I will
arrange a car to take you home,” Akash said.
“No,
Akashji, please don’t,” she replied, feeling terrible.
“There is a
political demonstration in the city today,” he informed her. He looked at his
watch. “It will have begun now. I will arrange Mohan to drop you home. He knows
to avoid the blocked roads.”
He led her
to Mohan and gave the necessary instructions.
He helped
her into the car and shut the door after her. Through the open window, he said
softly, “Take care. I would like to think that you are safe and happy wherever
you are, Payalji.”
Payal
gulped.
“We may not
meet again,” he murmured. He held out his hand.
As if in a dream, Payal put her
hand in his.
His big
hand clasped hers softly, warmly for a long moment.
“Goodbye,
Payalji,” he whispered, his eyes behind the specs serious and sad.
Payal
parted her lips but couldn’t find words.
The car
moved forward, taking a flustered Payal to her house. As the car was about to
leave the premises of AR Designs, Payal turned her head to see Akash still standing
in his place, looking after the car carrying her away.
‘Why does
this feel like my bidai?’ Payal wondered.
***
Arnav stood
before Devi Maiyya, his hands folded.
All around
him, people were praying, asking Her for happiness, wealth, health, luck,
employment, marks, homes etc.
Arnav
wanted none of these. He wanted only Khushi.
He closed
his eyes and prayed, ‘Devi Maiyya, Khushi said you will help us. That’s why I
came to meet you. I want to marry Khushi and Akash wants to marry Payal. Her
family doesn’t want us to marry them. They imagine me to be some kind of an
ogre out to destroy their daughter’s life. I am no hero, but no demon either. I
love her and want her to be happy. I know I can make and keep her happy. I want
to marry her. I never thought I would marry or fall in love, but...’
A devotee
rang the temple bells.
‘We went
through hell, di, me, nani, nana, mama, mami and Akash. But it is done, over. Leave
the past in the past. Why do you want to drag it into the present to destroy it?
Di is still unmarried; nani is still crying over her daughter. You should visit
us each barsi. You can see enough tears to satisfy your demands. Why do you want
to punish us for one immoral man’s actions? Is there no escape from this?’
After a
long silence, he asked, ‘Khushi feels that you rule the world, that nothing
happens without your permission. Why was my father such a terrible man? What
did my mother do to deserve such a husband? Tell me. Di and I are still living
with what happened in our childhood. We have nightmares regularly. We can’t
trust people. We are trapped in the coils of our past. The whole world is
laughing at us. Why? What did we do?’
Even as he
asked the question, Khushi’s words fell on his ears.
“Your past made you what you are today. I don’t want you to change
anything. I like you as you are.”
He shook
his head to clear it.
He told
Devi Maiyya, ‘Don’t take Khushi away from me. I—I don’t want to—can’t go on as
before. And Akash. He loves Payal. Give him Payal. Give us a chance at life.
Give di a man who loves her. She deserves happiness.’
He gave
Devi Maiyya one last look and turned to walk away.
As he
walked down the steps, the plump lady before him stumbled.
He caught
hold of her arm, preventing her from tumbling down and hitting her head. He
forced her to sit down on the step and asked, “Are you alright?”
“Hum—theek—he,
Nandkisore,” buaji gasped. “My ankle...” She lifted her head to thank him.
“Shukriya...” The words remained unspoken as her eyes fell on his face.
Arnav Singh
Raizada? In the flesh? Hai re Nandkisore!
Her jaw hit
the floor and her eyes widened as though she had seen the devil incarnate.
Unaware of
the shock she had received and he had given her, he looked at her ankle. “You
must have sprained it,” he said thoughtfully. “You need to see a doctor.”
Buaji was
beyond a reply.
“Where do
you live?” he asked the middle-aged lady who reminded him of his nani.
Buaji
hyperventilated. “Nearby,” she managed to reply.
“I will
take you home,” Arnav decided.
“No, no,
bitwaa,” buaji gasped. “I will go on my own.”
“I will get
you a rickshaw,” Arnav said. “But you need to go down the steps.”
Buaji tried
to stand up. Arnav quickly held on to her arm and helped her hobble down the
steps to the entrance of the temple.
He flagged down a rickshaw. He helped
buaji into it.
“Shukriya,
Nandkisore,” buaji mumbled, the pain almost flooring her.
Arnav
quickly took out a five hundred rupee note from his purse and pushed it into
the driver’s hand. “Take her where she wants to go and help her into her
house,” he instructed.
“Yes, sir,”
the rickshaw driver said, his wide eyes on the note clasped in his hand.
Arnav
stepped back and the rickshaw moved away.
Arnav drew
in a deep breath of the cool air, feeling calm, at peace, a feeling he was not
very familiar with. He frowned, his analytical mind researching the reason for
his rare sense of well-being. Maybe it was because he had helped a middle-aged
lady. Or maybe it was because he had finally begun to notice people around him,
become aware of other beings around him, was not shut away from them, cocooned in
his own world and preoccupations.
It felt strange, but nice to feel alive.
***
Payal
reached home and knocked on the door absently.
Garima
opened the door. “Kaa hua, Payaliya? Were they very angry?” she asked
anxiously.
“No,” Payal
said softly. “Amanji said they didn’t want the money.”
“The
contract?” Sasi asked, his brows raised in surprise.
“They let
us break it,” Payal said, walking inside to sit by Khushi.
Into the
silence came buaji’s cry, “Garima, help me.”
Garima,
Sasi, Payal and Khushi rushed out to see buaji sitting in a rickshaw.
“Kaa hua,
jiji?” Garima asked, frantic.
“I sprained
my ankle,” buaji said. “Here, help me out. Hold my arms. Aaaaaa, hai re
nandkisore.”
One hour
later, buaji was seated in the living room, her bandaged ankle resting on a
stool. Her family was seated around her and all were sipping tea.
Buaji said,
“Sasi babua, something happened today.”
“Kaa, jiji?”
he asked.
“At the
temple,” buaji paused.
“Haan?” he
asked.
“When I
slipped and fell, a boy caught hold of my arm and helped me. I tried to refuse
his help but he took me down the steps and helped me into a rickshaw. He paid
the driver, Nandkisore,” buaji admitted.
“How kind
of him,” Sasi remarked. “Do you know who he is, jiji? We should return his
money and thank him for his timely help.”
“Hai Re Nandkisore,”
buaji muttered. “It was Arnav Singh Raizada.”
Khushi and
Payal gasped. Khushi raised her eyes heavenwards in gratitude.
Garima and
Sasi were too shocked to even gasp.
Payal said
softly into the silence, “When I tried to give the cheque to Amanji, he said
that Arnav Singh Raizada had ordered that no money be take from us and that we
be permitted to cancel the contract.”
Sasi looked
at buaji and Garima.
“Then Akash
Singh Raizada spoke to me,” Payal said.
Buaji, Sasi
and Garima jumped. Khushi’s eyes flew wide.
“Did he
scold you?” Garima asked, agitated.
“No, amma.
He is a very soft-spoken gentleman, just like babuji. He said that he and his
brother were very sorry that we were leaving Delhi because of them. He said
that there is some misunderstanding, that he and his brother are not as bad as
they are made out to be, that his brother gets angry often and is a workaholic,
but not a bad man. He has no vices. That his own mother may be from a poor
family, but loves her niece and nephew and would kill anyone who tried to harm
them. That he loves his mother. Then he,” Payal paused.
“Then he?”
Sasi asked softly. Khushi sat with bated breath.
“He said
there is a political demonstration in the city and that it would be difficult for
me to travel by rickshaw. So he asked his driver to take me home. I came home
in his car,” Payal said.
Khushi
looked hopefully at her parents and buaji.
There was
silence for a long time in the living room. Then Sasi asked Payal, “Payaliya,
do you have the Raizadas’ number?”
“Yes,
babuji,” she said and gave it.
“Khussi,
Payaliya, go to your room,” Garima said.
The girls
got up unwillingly. Khushi’s phone fell from her hand and shattered into many
pieces.
“Aww,”
Khushi gasped.
“Sanka
devi, is their no end to your sanak?” buaji asked.
“My phoone,”
Khushi cried, gathering up the pieces. How would she call Arnavji?
The adults
waited till the girls left before discussing the disturbing events of the day.
“Yeh sab
kya ho raha he, jiji?” Garima asked, scared.
“I don’t
know, Garima. Only Nandkisore knows,” buaji tied a red cloth around her
forehead.
“The boys
seem better than we thought they were,” Sasi murmured thoughtfully. “Can they
be Avinash and Arvind Mallik’s relations?”
The ladies
shook their heads in confusion.
“Are you
sure you met Arnav Singh Raizada, jiji?” Sasi asked.
“I think
so, babua. Oo kaa he, I have never seen him. I have seen only his picture,
Nandkisore,” buaji said.
Sasi
nodded. “Jiji, Garima, I need to meet Mohan Tiwari,” he said.
“Who?” Garima
asked.
“My
schoolmate. He is a private detective in Delhi now. I met him at the market
last week. We need to find out more about the boys before we refuse them. It is
only fair,” Sasi said.
“Yes, babua.
That’s the right way,” buaji seconded him.
Garima
nodded.
***
“Mohan,
Payaliya and Khussi have received proposals from two boys,” Sasi began.
“You want
me to look into their background?” Mohan asked cheerfully.
“Yes,” Sasi
sighed.
Mohan patted
him on the shoulder. “Don’t feel bad, Sasi. We have to change with the times.
Earlier, relatives would do this job for you. Now people approach private
detectives to make sure that they are giving their daughters to good boys. Tell
me, who are the boys?”
“Arnav
Singh Raizada and Akash Singh Raizada,” Sasi said.
Mohan
squealed. “What?” he asked.
“Yes,” Sasi
sighed.
“The
businessmen?” Mohan confirmed.
“Yes,” Sasi
said.
“Girls in
Delhi have been dying to marry them, but both of them have been very elusive.
How come they approached you?” Mohan asked.
“My luck,”
Sasi muttered.
“What do
you want to know about them?” Mohan asked.
“Everything,”
Sasi said. “Their past. Their present. Arnav’s father is Arvind Mallik of
Sheesh Mahal.”
“Ratna
Raizada’s son?” Mohan asked. “He took his mother’s family’s name?”
“Yes,” Sasi
said.
“Give me
three days, Sasi,” Mohan asked. “I will call you as soon as I get all the
details.”
Sasi
nodded.
***
Khushi
sneaked up to the phone and picked up the receiver.
“Titliya,
what is it? Whom are you calling?” buaji asked, lifting her head from the newspaper.
Khushi shut
her eyes and drew in a deep breath.
“No one,
buaji,” she replied cheerfully.
“Hein?”
buaji frowned. “How can you call no one on the phone?”
Khushi
slunk away before buaji came up with more questions.
Her phone was dead and she
had no way of contacting Arnavji. Maybe she could go out and phone him?
“Jiji, I am
going out to the market,” Khushi muttered as she quickly slung her bag around
her torso.
“Why?”
Payal asked.
Khushi
paused to think.
“Ber,” she
finally came up with an answer.
“I need
chudi. I am coming with you,” Payal said, getting up from her bed.
“Jiji!”
Khushi screeched. “I will get you chudi. You sit here and rest.”
Payal
frowned. “Acha? How will you get the measurement right? Will you take my wrists
with you?” she asked. She draped the dupatta around her neck. “Come on,” she
called.
Khushi
followed her, as meek as a lamb. ‘Poor Arnavji,’ she thought. ‘He must be so
worried about me.’
***
Mohan Tiwari
called Sasi Gupta.
“Sasi, the
report is ready. Can you come over now or should I come to Laxmi Nagar?” he
asked.
“I will
come to your office,” Sasi said. “It is better that the children have no idea
of this.”
“Fine,”
Mohan said.
Rash's interpretation:
When Akash apologized to Payal, his Bhai and he for being instrumental in driving them to the decision to leave Delhi, his words though heartfelt could have been construed as a lie by Payal but his action of making her reach her house safely conveyed the truth of his thoughts...
Faith is taking the first step even when you can't see the whole staircase... It's like Wi-Fi, invisible but has the power to connect you to what you need... Arnav's faith in Khushi and in turn her faith in her friend, Devi Maiyya, led him to the door of Her Abode... His prayers, may be awkward and a feeble attempt in the name of his belief in his Khushi, but....the power of prayer is in the One who hears it and not in the one who says it... Prayers do make a difference... Sometimes all it takes is just one prayer to change everything... It brings about positive energy, putting good out into the world, taking care of each other... This was what happened with Arnav Singh Raizada and Providence provided an opportunity [psst...read as Smita please ;) ] for him to help Buaji and that too without knowing whom he is caring for...
Words may show a man's wit but actions his meaning... Arnav's act of kindness to an unknown lady, Akash's act of helping out Payal did give Gupta family a point or two to ponder over...
At a certain point you'll know when you have reached a time for change... Its then you have to avoid looking down at all things that could go wrong but deal with them when and if they ever even happen... Its the time to spread the wings and ascertain that you are in the right path... That's what Shashi set out to do... and he contacted his friend Mohan Tiwari to do some sleuthing... on all known and unknown facts about Raizadas and their connections... He is taking his time to deliberate, so that when the time is for action he need not be jittery about the consequences....
Lovely update Smita... All actions are expressing their priorities...
Supriya Sahasrabuddhe:
What attracted me to IPK was the fact that not just the protagonists but every single character had an intriguing story to tell. Alas, not one of them was ever brought to conclusion. With the storyline slaughtered to shreds and numerous threads left open, in the end it was all greek to me!! Your stories have a way of picking up the fragments, putting them together and giving us the closure every character of the narrative deserved.
Filthy rich ASR might have bragged about the power of money being able to govern his own destiny. Plutocratic much, haan ASR ?!? But Shashi, definitely not one of the most well-heeled in the society, has certainly proved to be as astute a businessman as the lofty Haridwar brain. Above all, a doting father to his lil girls and a patriarch who keeps his family cocooned in the warmth of his love. Seriously Smi, I so wanted see this Shashi!!!
Frankly, as adults we are who we are because of the choices 'we' make. Most of us fail to dig this fact. Before striving to really know an individual, we tend to draw a character certificate based upon their family background and their status. I guess it's just human nature. We are quite judgmental that way! ASR has to swallow a nasty dose of this very bitter medicine. All the riches in the world cannot win over the heart of a father who will pull out all the stops to keep his daughters away from potential harm. Convincing the father that allthough he might be a Mallick by birth, ASR is a Raizada by breeding... that's gonna be a tough nut to crack.
Loved how you have taken the 'aukat' bull by its horn.
My heart melted at how ASR's love for Khushi, coaxed him to place his faith in Khushi's faith. One genuine heart-felt plea from Khushi's Arnav and Devi Maiyya has already begun to veer their love story to a Happily Ever After!! And in doing so She has made ASR realise that not money but magnanimity brings sunshine into the lives of one and all. Khushi and her DM are a lethal combination. I am guessing, in future ASR will frequently exploit this very precious alliance?!?
This story also gave us a level-headed Aakash-Payal. Loved Payal's confidence in walking up the steps of a multi-million dollar conglomerate to handover the cheque, with her head held high. Elder sister to Khushi and a more composed mind of the two, the reins of Devi Maiyya Caterers are truly in very sound hands. BTW, she seems to be quite persistent with her demand to accompany Khushi to the market. I wonder if she has an ulterior motive in doing so ...... hmm, food for thought.
Admire Aakash for cutting right to the chase, for calling a spade a spade. I don't see him just defending himself and his bhai. He bluntly highlights Gupta family's gross error in making assumptions based on past events.
I have always enjoyed your mamiji, Smi. You know that. I absoutely like Payal in this story. Maybe in the future, you could give us a tale where Mamiji and her DIL Payal play Kamdev/cupid/Eros/whatever in bringing Akhdoo Singh Raizada and his Jalebi Rani together. In the show their chemistry was reduced to the cliched saas-bahu saga. Your version will be such fun to read!!
Part 17
Twenty
minutes later, Sasi looked through the voluminous file, muttering, “Yes, Arvind
Mallik and Ratna Raizada—he was a rat by all accounts—poor lady—He Devi Maiyya,
all this happened on Anjali’s wedding day! How terrible!”
“Yes, poor
kid,” Mohan added. “And Avinash Mallik threw them out the next day.”
“He Devi
Maiyya! Is he a human being? Even animals are better than him!” Sasi was moved
to exclaim.
Mohan
nodded.
“So the
Raizadas took in Arnav and Anjali and they moved to Delhi,” Sasi said, studying
the report.
“Yes. The
report from Arnav’s college is that he was silent and studious. No drugs, no
drinking. He used to play basketball and drums. No news of any girlfriend,”
Mohan said.
Sasi
nodded, looking at the photos included in the file.
“He is
diabetic,” Mohan said.
Sasi’s eyes
met his. “At such a young age?” he asked, feeling sorry for the boy.
“Yes,”
Mohan said. “And Akash Raizada was an average student. No sports. No
girlfriend. No drugs, no drinking. He grew up in the protection of his brother
and is very attached to Arnav and Anjali.”
Sasi
nodded. “Then Arnav went abroad?” he asked.
“Yes,
Harvard. He returned and started his business,” Mohan informed him.
“Where did
he get the money for it?” Sasi asked.
“Devyani
Raizada sold her land in Lucknow and Manorama Raizada sold her jewels,” Mohan
told him. “He worked hard, still does. Managed to make a success of it. Has
offices in Delhi, Paris and London. Akash works with him.”
“Good,
good,” Sasi nodded.
“And best
of all, he bought Sheesh Mahal from Avinash Mallik two years back and threw the
crook out,” Mohan said, smiling.
“He did!”
Sasi was pleasantly surprised.
“He bought
the house in his sister’s name,” Mohan informed him.
“Good,”
Sasi smiled. “That’s justice.”
“Yes.
Avinash Mallik had managed to incur heavy debts. Arnav was keeping track of his
uncle's financial dealings and took the chance,” Mohan said.
Sasi
nodded.
Mohan said
slowly, “Sasi, I can’t blame you for not wanting to give your daughter to
Avinash Mallik’s nephew and Arvind Mallik’s son. Akash Singh Raizada’s mother
comes from a poor family and his parents’ marriage was a scandalous affair. We
can’t fight these facts. Nor can we turn a blind eye to them.”
Sasi sighed. "I know, Mohan," he said.
“But the
boys are not bad. I couldn’t find anything distasteful or disgraceful in their
personal lives,” Mohan admitted.
Sasi
nodded, his eyes on his clasped fingers.
“Sasi,
Arnav Singh Raizada runs a fashion business. Models swarm around him. And he is filthy rich. If he was
like his father, he would have led a life of debauchery and it would have turned up in our investigation,” Mohan said softly.
Sasi
nodded, looking down at a photo in the file he held on his lap. It was of Arnav
viewing a fashion show in which his models were displaying clothes designed by
his designers. His face was cold and tired, his gaze flinty, his body language
shouting inaccessibility. He could have been looking at a forest full of trees
for all the interest he was showing in the models.
“He is
known to be hot-tempered, short-tempered, reserved, stand-offish, unsociable
and hard working. Works from office and home. Stays late working. Comes early
to office. His secretary is male, a man named Aman,” Mohan said.
“Yes,” Sasi
agreed.
“He travels
for business and always takes Aman with him. Leaves Akash in charge of the
office,” Mohan said. “Akash dotes on his brother. Has a serious case of hero
worship. Never does anything his brother vetoes. The employees call him Laxman
to Arnav’s Ram,” Mohan said, laughing.
Sasi
smiled.
“The boys
are not bad, Sasi,” Mohan concluded.
Sasi
sighed. “If it were business I were doing with them, then this information
would have been enough, Mohan. But this is marriage. How can I risk my
children’s lives? I need you to give me a day-to-day account of both boys for
six months. Can you?”
“Why not?”
Mohan asked.
“Charge me
as you would another client,” Sasi insisted.
“Let me
think about that,” Mohan evaded a straight answer.
“Mohan,”
Sasi threatened.
“I said I
will think about it. Go home now,” Mohan led Sasi out of his office.
***
Sasi woke
up at midnight, a cry on his lips.
“Kaa hua?”
Garima sat up, scared.
“I had a
nightmare,” Sasi panted. “Spineless fellow. How dare he!”
“Kaun?”
Garima asked.
“The boy
who left Anjali at the mandap. How dare he! He should have married her and
taken care of Arnav,” said Sasi.
Garima
sighed. “When you were telling us about the information in Mohanji’s report, I
was thinking of Payaliya and Khussi in Anjali’s place. What a fate! Poor
thing,” she said.
“Still
unmarried, still scared. And the Raizadas are looking for brides for the boys.
They should conduct her wedding first,” Sasi said.
“It must be
difficult for her to get a boy. The family—just as we wanted to avoid their
proposal, other families too must have refused to link themselves to the
Malliks,” Garima said.
Sasi wiped
the sweat off his forehead.
“Some
people consider a girl to be unlucky if her wedding is cancelled,” Garima said
softly.
“How
unfair,” Sasi had to say.
“This is
the way of the world, Payaliya’s father,” Garima said sadly.
***
Arnav
looked at his phone, anxious, distraught. Why was there no calls from Khushi?
Could he
call her? What if her family found out?
After
moments of weighing the pros and cons, he decided to try. He called and called
and called.
What was
wrong? Was she fine?
Distrait,
he paced his room.
“Chotey,”
Anjali called him from the doorway.
“Yes, di?”
he asked.
“Chotey,
tomorrow is teej. Will you take us to the temple near the banyan tree?” she
asked.
“You are
fasting?” he asked, his face stern.
“Yes,
Chotey,” Anjali scrunched up her face apologetically. “Bear with me, please.
Gussa mat hona. You are my papad ka tukda, aren’t you?”
Arnav
looked heavenward for support.
“Yes, I am.
But don’t think I will let you endanger your health if you sweet-talk me,” he
growled.
Anjali
pinched his cheek and walked away, laughing.
Arnav
looked at the display of his phone, feeling helpless and disconsolate. Where
was Khushi?
***
“Payaliya,
Khussi, both of you have to fast today. Aaj teej he, Nandkisore,” buaji
announced.
“Ji,
buaji,” Payal replied.
“Alright,”
Khushi said quietly, drying her wet hair.
The plate
fell from buaji’s hand to the floor.
“Hai Re
Nandkisore! Did I just hear Sanka Devi agree to stay hungry for a day? Sasi
babua, I didn’t imagine it, did I?” she asked, her eyes wide.
Sasi hid
his smile. Garima chuckled.
“Titliya,
you are alright, aren’t you? Tabiyat to theek he na, Nandkisore?” buaji asked.
"I am fine,
buaji,” Khushi said dispiritedly before returning to her bedroom.
“What is
wrong with her?” Garima asked in wonder. “No smile, no mischief.”
“She has
been silent for a couple of days,” Sasi said thoughtfully.
“Kaa hua
isse, Payaliya?” buaji asked.
“I don’t
know, buaji. Maybe she is in low spirits because her phone broke. She tried to
get it repaired, but the boys in three shops laughed at her because it is in
pieces. She had to buy a new one and will get it tomorrow. Maybe when she gets
it, she will be more cheerful,” Payal said.
Sasi, buaji
and Garima shook their heads.
“This
girl,” Garima said.
“Why is she
so attached to her phone, Nandkisore?” buaji asked.
“She has
hundreds of songs stored in it, buaji. Maybe that’s why,” Payal explained.
“Pagal he,”
Garima grumbled before turning to speak to Payal, “Payaliya, ask Khussi to get
dressed. We have to go to the temple in one hour.”
“Ji, amma,”
Payal smiled.
***
The Guptas
minus buaji climbed up the steps of the temple, fighting the crowd of devotees
all intent on meeting Devi Maiyya on this auspicious day.
“Khussi,
Payaliya, tie the dhaga on the banyan tree and join us here,” Garima said. “We
will wait here. The bheed is too much for us.”
“Ji, amma,”
Payal said, dragging Khushi down the steps with her.
Garima
said, “Suniye, shall we sit here?”
“Yes,
Garima. Sit down. I think it will take us a couple of hours at least to get to
Devi Maiyya’s presence,” Sasi said.
They sat
together and watched the crowd surging towards the sanctum sanctorum. A long
time later, Garima asked, “Isn’t it time for the girls to return?”
“Yes,” Sasi
muttered. He stood up and scanned the people moving towards the temple with
alert eyes.
“Sasiji?”
came a call.
Sasi and
Garima looked in the direction of the call and saw the Raizadas in full force.
They
quickly folded their hands and greeted them. Sasi and Garima studied Arnav and
Akash Singh Raizada to their heart’s content. Arnav’s face was lean, his
expression stern, his demeanour remote. Akash took his cue from his bhai and
stayed in the background as the elders exchanged greetings.
“Jiji was
right. They’re too handsome,” Garima whispered to Sasi. “Especially Arnav. Acha
he, Khussi doesn’t know him.”
Sasi
nodded.
Arnav looked
around frantically. Was Khushi with them? Would he be able to see her? Akash
kept his eyes open for Payal.
“How are
you, uncle, aunty?” Anjali asked cheerfully.
“Fine,
beta,” Sasi replied.
“Are you
fasting today?” Garima asked.
“Yes,
aunty,” Anjali replied with a wide smile.
“Hamri
Anjali bitiya never lets a vrat go without following it, Hello Hi Bye Bye!”
Mami informed them. “She is phasting for two days to tie raksha dhaga around
her brothers’ wrists.”
“Acha? It is very
crowded,” Garima said. “And hot. I hope you are not feeling faint.”
“Hum bhi
wahi kahe rahe,” Devyani said. “We told her to rest at home but she wanted to
pray here.”
The Guptas
nodded.
Arnav felt
acute disappointment. There was no sight of Khushi anywhere. Akash sighed. It
looked like the Guptas had left the girls at home.
“Sasiji,
Garimaji, this is Arnav and that is Akass,” nani introduced them.
The Guptas
folded their hands in greeting. Arnav and Akash reciprocated.
“Amma,
babuji,” Payal called as she and Khushi managed to make their way through the
crowd to their parents.
“He Devi
Maiyya!” Garima gasped.
Sasi drew
in a deep breath. It was a risk, but he had to take it.
“Payaliya,
Khussi, you know the Raizadas. This is Arnav Singh Raizada and that is Akash
Singh Raizada, Devyaniji’s grandsons,” Sasi introduced the boys to the two
girls staring at the boys with eyes as wide as saucers. “This is Khussi and
that Payaliya,” he said.
Someone
rang the temple bells.
In that
moment two things happened.
Payal
folded her hands and said, “Namaste” to Akash who reciprocated. They gazed at
each other with bashful interest.
Khushi
rushed forward and hugged Arnav Singh Raizada as tight as she could. “Arnavji,”
she wept into his coat, her fingers clawing at his back, trying to absorb him
into her being so that no one and nothing could keep them apart.
The
Raizadas gasped.
Sasi and
Garima were too far gone to gasp. They stared in shock at the sight of their supposedly
sanskaari, heart whole and fancy-free daughter hugging a boy in a public place,
that too a temple, with wide, disbelieving eyes.
Their sense of having been hit
on the head with a heavy hammer after being given a drink of bhang increased
manifold when they saw the cold face of Arnav Singh Raizada relax and become
soft, his hard eyes melt into an expression of tenderness, his arms close
around their weeping daughter gently, his left hand rise to cup her head and
hold her close and his right hand pat her back lovingly.
“Khushi,”
he whispered in his husky, warm voice.
That was
all it took to reveal the entire story to an astute Sasi.
The Raizada
ladies took one look at the Guptas’ stunned faces and cringed.
“Hello Hi
Bye Bye!” mami murmured.
Payal
blinked. Who was this girl hugging Arnav Singh Raizada as though she were a
tree lover and he a big tree under threat of being bulldozed? Was it—was it
really Khushi? Why was she hugging a man she had met just once?
“Sasiji,”
nani began, her voice trembling.
“Maybe we
could go home, Devyaniji and talk about this,” Sasi suggested.
“Yes,” nani
agreed.
All looked
at the couple that was still hugging, lost to all considerations.
“Chotey,”
Anjali called out a warning. Testing Sasi uncle’s patience and goodness could
be detrimental to the cause of her brothers.
Arnav
blinked, becoming aware of his surroundings.
“My phone
fell, Arnavji, and broke. That’s why I couldn’t call you,” Khushi told him. “Were
you worried about me?”
“Yes,”
Arnav said.
“Chotey, Sasi
uncle has invited us to his home,” Anjali said, her eyes serious, pleading.
“Khushi,”
he called softly.
Khushi
moved a few inches away from him reluctantly, her fingers still clutching his coat. She looked
around, saw her parents and flushed. Her fingers let go of the coat.
“Aayiye,” Sasi
invited the Raizadas, making an effort not to look at Khushi’s face.
“Shall we travel
together, Sasiji? Mohan is here with the car,” nani suggested.
“That’s
kind of you, Devyaniji, but we borrowed a car from Happy Singh’s garage. We
will meet you at the house. Jiji is at home. Please ring the bell and wait
inside if we get there later than you,” Sasi said.
“Ji,” nani replied.
After one lingering
look at Khushi, Arnav joined his family and they left the temple.
The Guptas
followed.
***
On the way
home, Sasi asked Khushi, “How did you meet Arnav?”
“I went to
get the cheque from Arnavji after the pooja at Shantivan,” Khushi explained in a
low voice, too much in love with him to want to hide anything from anyone. “That’s when I met him for the first time.”
“Phir?”
Garima asked.
“I fought
with him and met him the next day to prove a point. He fainted,” Khushi
explained.
Garima
covered her mouth in horror. Sasi took his eyes off the road to stare at his
daughter.
“What did
you do to him?” Garima asked.
Payal’s
face was a study in confusion.
“I—I asked
him to starve. He did,” Khushi explained shamefacedly. “And fainted. I didn’t
know he was diabetic.”
“Then what
did you do?” Payal asked. “Apologise to him?”
“No, I
fought with him again,” Khushi said, her voice low, tears filling her eyes.
Sasi looked
at Garima. It was looking more like a hate story than a love story. Why was Arnav
bent on marrying a girl who was always fighting with him and was hazardous to
his health?
“I told him
I would never cook for the poojas in his house, never see him again. So he
drafted that contract and sent Amanji with it. We accepted it and he built a
new kitchen for us,” Khushi explained.
“He tricked
you?” Garima asked with a frown.
“No, amma.
I knew he was behind the contract. I went into it willingly,” Khushi admitted.
Payal
gulped. She hadn’t known what was going
on under her nose.
“Then?”
Sasi asked.
“I used to
pack lunch for him, babuji. Woh kya he, Arnavji can’t eat many of the things
others can because he is diabetic. I used to take his food to him before I
returned home,” Khushi confessed.
Payal felt
like kicking herself. So this was why Khushi always stayed back while she and
the boys returned home at noon.
‘What did
they get up to alone?’ Garima thought, the blood leaving her face. ‘Koi uunch
neech ho gaya to...’
“We talked
a lot, babuji. He told me all about his family and its past, about his parents
and their death, Anjaliji’s wedding being cancelled, his work...I told him,
babuji, that his family should approach you with a formal proposal when you
came to Delhi. I never thought—I had no idea, babuji, that you would dislike
his family so much. I thought you would like him. Amma, babuji, he is very
nice, very sweet. He is very hard working aur sab se acha, he thinks I am the
best chef in the world,” Khushi said seriously.
Sasi looked
at Garima, not knowing whether to laugh or cry.
“The
kitchen in AR Designs was built to our specifications, babuji,” Payal chipped
in. “And no expense spared. They looked after us well. Anything we wanted, we
just had to ask. It was a pleasure to cook in. There were cleaners and servers
assigned to us. We just had to cook.”
Sasi said
nothing. Garima buried her head in her hands.
There was
silence in the car till they reached Laxmi Nagar.
Rash's interpretation:
The truth will set you free, but first it has the tendency to put you off… Shashi Gupta was quick to realize this after going through the file compiled by Mohan Tiwari… After coming to know what really happened with the Raizadas’ he was not really averse to give them a thought… It was a step ahead from not wanting to even have a peek at them… But their dear daughter with her open heart, who was unabashed to confront her feelings and embrace it with open arms showed them which way the wind blows… Both Arnav and Shashi found out… In the book of life, the answers aren't in the back... they need to be worked out…
Shashi and Garima got a glimpse of Arnav’s integrity as they came to know of his disclosure of his past to Khushi. It told them that he is upfront in his intentions, realistic about the life ahead and truthful of his past… He showed his willingness to take the risk of being bonded or shattered by the truth of his past… Above all he showed he was not afraid to tell the truth in the fear of rejection but came out as a person having backbone who was ready to prove his mettle to reach his goal…
For Arnav, Khushi is like a sunbeam, who warms his heart… a moonbeam that charmed him… and the damsel who sought shelter in his arms making him forget the world around and build a cocoon around them.… He is like a cold, weary traveler who will hold on to whatever keeps him warm inside but with due consent from her parents without defiling her dignity... All these things would have been perceived by Raizadas’ and the Guptas’… The Raizadas’ would have seen the thawing of the ice and Shashi Gupta would have mentally noted all the positives found in favour of Arnav… The impulsive action of Khushi to hug Arnav with abandonment is bound to have left a deep imprint on each and every member present there...
Smita….A very interesting way of putting across of tilting the balance…
Part 18
The Guptas
reached Laxmi Nagar before the Raizadas.
Sasi
stopped the car and looked at the tear-ravaged face of his daughter.
He asked
softly, “Khussi, do you like Arnav?” even though he knew the answer.
Khushi’s
face lit up. “Yes, babuji, very much,” she said.
“Why?” Sasi
asked.
Khushi
smiled. “Because he is very funny,” she replied.
Sasi and
Garima looked at each other. Nothing in the report they had received had
indicated that Arnav Singh Raizada had anything remotely resembling a sense of
humour.
“And
because he is very kind, very sweet. He teases me,” Khushi said, smiling
beatifically.
‘Hot-tempered,
short-tempered, reserved, stand-offish, unsociable and hardworking,’ Sasi
repeated Mohan’s words in his mind. ‘Are we talking of the same man?’
“And because
he loves me more than anything in this world. Sach, babuji, Arnavji would do
anything for me. Aap ko pata he, he never thought of marriage before meeting
me. Pata nahi kya jadu ho gaya, babuji, but when we met he wanted to marry me. But
I didn’t know him. Isliye I fought with him. That is why he had to spend lakhs
to build a kitchen for me. And babuji, he worked for everything he owns. He has
never stolen anything,” khushi said with conviction.
“What?” Payal
asked, a frown of bewilderment on her face.
“When we
met, I thought he was out to steal our recipes and my secret ingredient, but
later I understood I was mistaken,” Khushi clarified.
“He Devi
Maiyya,” Garima whispered.
Sasi, being
a fond father of a sanki daughter, realised that this was just a glimpse into a
complicated and convoluted love story. Not having the heart, guts or time for a
detailed unravelling of Khushi’s crazy thoughts and actions, he summed it all
up with one last question.
“Do you
want to marry him, Khushi?” he asked.
“Yes,
babuji. Very much,” Khushi replied without hesitation, her face lit by love and
happiness.
Sasi
sighed. “Go in. I will park the car and come in. Let jiji know that the
Raizadas will be joining us,” he instructed.
“Babuji,
one more thing,” Khushi stopped him.
“Yes?” Sasi
asked.
“He knows
that I am an orphan, that you adopted me. He doesn’t mind at all,” Khushi
informed him.
“You told
him?” Garima asked, surprised. Khushi hated to talk of her past.
“Arnavji is
very honest, very straight forward, amma. I couldn’t be anything less to him.
So when he told me about his past, I told him about mine,” she replied.
Sasi
nodded.
“One more
thing, babuji,” Khushi stopped him from alighting. “Arnavji thinks I have magical
hands. He loves my cooking. So he gave me these bangles.” She lifted her hands,
sending the white stones on her bangles glinting.
Garima
clutched her heart. “He—he gave them to you and you took them?” she asked in a
hushed voice.
“Yes, Isme
kya he, amma? They are pretty, aren’t they? I wonder from which store he bought
them. We can get jiji a pair too, can’t we?” Khushi asked.
Sasi stared
at his bewakoof daughter in silence.
Garima did not share a similar
speechlessness. “You idiot! We won’t get it from any store, only from a
jeweller.”
“Kya?”
Khushi asked.
“These
white stones are diamonds, you fool,” Garima said, shaking her head in
exasperation.
“Diamonds?”
she whispered. “Real diamonds? Heere?” Khushi stared at the bangles as if they were
snakes on an impersonation spree.
“The
Raizadas have reached Laxmi Nagar,” Sasi said softly, looking in the rear-view
mirror. “Go in.”
Garima and
Payal dragged a shell-shocked Khushi with them into the house.
***
The
Raizadas walked into the house.
“Please be
seated,” Sasi invited. “Garima has gone to call jiji.”
Buaji came
limping out of her bedroom.
Arnav drew
in a sharp breath of recognition. Buaji came to a shaky halt.
“Shukriya,
Nandkisore,” she said softly.
Arnav stood
up, feeling unsettled. He had never dreamed that he would come across the lady
he had helped. And to know that she was Khushi’s aunt...it blew him away.
The Raizadas
looked at him and buaji, not knowing what was happening.
“If you
hadn’t helped me that day,” buaji began.
“It is
fine,” Arnav tried to downplay the incident.
Seeing the
anxious look on the faces of nani, mami and Anjali, buaji explained, “I would
have fallen in the temple had your pota not helped me. He put me in a rickshaw
and paid the driver to take me home, Nandkisore.”
Mami turned
to nani and whispered, “Saasumma, hamre Arnav bitwaa in a templewaa? No bays. Laagat
he Madhumatiji ijj mistaken, lekin don’t tell her. Let the marks come to hamre
Arnav bitwaa.”
Khushi
brought tea and snacks for the men and nani. She smiled into Arnav’s eyes as
she handed him a cup of unsweetened tea and then served the others.
“Devyaniji,
you proposed Khushi’s marriage with Arnav and Payal’s with Akash,” Sasi said.
“Yes, Sasiji,”
nani said, hope in her heart.
“I was
thinking—if you don’t mind—that we should take six months to decide on this,” Sasi
suggested.
All looked
at him.
“We don’t
know the boys. These six months will give us time to get to know them,” Sasi
said.
Nani
nodded.
“We had no
idea that Khussi knew Arnav,” Sasi said. “I would like to be sure that she
genuinely cares for him and that he too cares for her.”
“Ji,” Nani
agreed.
“Is it
alright with both of you?” Sasi asked Akash and Arnav.
“Yes,” they
replied.
“I don’t
want them to see or talk to each other in these six months. That will tell them
and us if their feelings are genuine or not,” Sasi said.
“Babuji,” Khushi
exclaimed in protest.
“I don’t
want either of you to regret this, Khussi. That’s why I am insisting on a
complete stopping of contact between you for six months. If at the end of this
period you still want to marry each other, I will conduct your marriage with
joy,” Sasi said, his face reflecting his sincerity.
“We agree,”
Arnav said. There was no use rushing this. Trust had to take birth and grow in
its own time.
Khushi
nodded, her eyes eagerly running over Arnavji to save the memory in her head
and heart.
Rash's interpretation:
With Khushi revealing her thoughts on Arnav and her revelation that Arnav is privy to the knowledge that she is their adopted child, a fact that she was always reluctant to speak about with anyone,…. the path that Shashi had to tread was clearly visible for him… You can’t stop the waves but you can learn to surf… His idea…. That his daughters deserve somebody who makes them happy… somebody who doesn’t complicate their lives…. somebody who doesn’t hurt them… given their past had led him not to consider the Raizada brothers for them… He has now accepted that Khushi is ready to become Arnav’s bride as she has expressed it as her wish… She has shown a different façade of Arnav Singh Raizada as Arnav very different from the ASR the world knows and Mohan Tiwari complied… but the Guptas’ are yet to be fully convinced about ASR being the best for their Khushi… His acceptance of ASR didn’t mean that Shashi is resigned to fate… It meant his understanding, of Arnav and Khushi and their budding feelings… He feels that there got to be a way through to test out its genuinity… whether their feelings and love would withstand the test of time or is it a case of out of sight is out of mind…. Hence his proposal of a six months space of separation with no contact … Arnav Singh Raizada with his eyes held in steady gaze on Shashi Gupta, giving it a careful thought, understanding that half measures will not bring him his treasure, being sure of self and the love of his love, with steadfast will and determination, agreed to the proposal… Just this acceptance was a proof of the quintessential quality of astuteness of Arnav Singh Raizada to Shashi Gupta… He understood that Arnav knew it was a test which he needed to take for the sake of the happiness of their life ahead… Shashi has thrown the challenge and Arnav has accepted…
It’s no wonder that Khushi is reluctant as she sees that even a call is not allowed… What Shashi doesn’t know is that his daughter’s and Arnav’s day begins and ends with listening to each other’s voice… But they do have their Rabbave connection and the meghdhoot…Don’t they Smita??? ;)
Good update Smita…
Part 19
“This is
applicable for Payal and Akash too,” Sasi reminded them.
Payal and
Akash nodded.
“I am sorry
for making you wait for six months, Devyaniji,” Sasi apologised.
“Don’t be,
Sasiji,” nani said. “I understand. Please get to know them. You won’t find
better boys than my grandsons for your daughters.”
Sasi
nodded, a small smile on his face.
“It is time
we left,” nani said regretfully. “We have to attend the evening pooja at the
temple and I want Anjali bitiya to rest for a while.”
All stood
up.
“Thank you,
Sasiji,” nani said from her heart. “You won’t regret this.”
Sasi
nodded.
“Babuji,
can I tell Arnavji one thing? Just one thing?” Khushi asked eagerly. “I won’t
be able to see or talk to him for six long months. One thing?”
Sasi
nodded.
As both
families watched, Khushi strode to Arrnav, caught hold of his arm and pulled
him to one side.
“You gave
me diamonds?” she asked, lifting her hand to show him the bangles he had gifted
her.
“Yes,” he
smiled.
“Real
heere?” she confirmed.
“Yes,” he
replied, a smile playing on his lips.
“Why?” she
asked.
“Because one heera deserves another heera,” he replied.
Her mouth
fell open. “Aap ko bata dena chahiye tha na that these are real diamonds? I
didn’t know.”
He looked
down to hide his amusement.
“What if I
had lost them? Thrown them away?” she asked, outraged at his hidden hilarity.
“I would
have bought you more,” he said simply.
After a
moment of shocked silence, she said, “Aap bhi na! There is no limit to the
money you waste on me. My kitchen, my bangles...”
He smiled
at her, his eyes tender.
She caught
hold of his hand in both of hers in an agony of grief.
“Arnavji,
six months...” her voice quavered. “I won’t be able to see you smile.”
He
swallowed hard.
“It will be
tough, Khushi. But this is the only way we can convince your family that we are
serious. You want your babuji to be smiling when he gives you to me, don’t
you?” he asked softly.
Khushi
nodded slowly.
“Six months
will fly by, Khushi. Just—just don’t forget me,” he said, trying to tease a
smile out of her.
“I may
forget myself, Arnavji, but not you,” she said, her voice low but firm.
He smiled.
“Arnavji,”
Khushi asked a question that had been troubling her. “What will you do about
the employees? Their lunch?”
“I have
asked Aman to arrange a restaurant to supply lunch for six months,” he replied.
He pulled out his wallet and extracted a key from it. “Your kitchen has a lock
on it. This is the key. Keep it. You can open it after our wedding and continue
with your catering. Nobody will use your kitchen other than you.”
Arnav
placed the key on her palm and held her hand.
Tears
filled her eyes and flowed down her cheeks.
“Khushi,
don’t cry,” he pleaded in his husky voice.
“I can’t
even call you?” she asked, already missing him.
“No,
Khushi,” he replied, feeling terrible.
“I can’t
see you, can’t talk to you, can’t hug you,” she wept. “Arnavji, how will we—six
months kaise?”
“We have
to,” he replied softly. There was no way he was going to risk the chance he had
been given to marry Khushi.
“Chalein,
Chotey?” nani asked.
“Yes,” he
replied with an inward sigh. He wanted to hug her, kiss her at least on her
forehead but her family was watching them from far. “Bye, Khushi,” he said
softly before leaving with his family.
***
It was one
week after the Raizadas had left.
Sasi and
Mohan sat in the detective’s office late in the evening, looking at that day’s
reports on Arnav and Akash Raizada.
“Arnav left
the house at eight today,” Mohan summed up the report. “Breakfast meeting at
the Taj. Then he went to the office and attended a series of meetings. Had unsweetened
tea at ten. Lunch was a sandwich. At four he had another unsweetened tea and a
pill for headache. Stayed at the office working till eight in the evening and
then drove home,” Mohan said.
“Then he
will have dinner with his family and work till eleven before going to bed,”
Sasi said, a frown on his face. “What is this, Mohan? He has been doing the
same things or something similar all week.”
“Sasi, we
have been watching him closely. We haven’t missed anything,” Mohan assured him.
“I know you
haven’t. That is why this list of activities irritates me. Doesn’t this boy do
anything other than work?” Sasi asked.
“He
doesn’t, I think,” Mohan rubbed the back of his neck. “The detectives are bored
of covering the routine.”
“I am bored
of reading this routine, Mohan. I can’t blame your detectives,” Sasi said.
Mohan
laughed.
“And I
suppose Akash got to the office a bit later in the morning every day and
accompanied his brother to all meetings?” Sasi asked. “Drove him home in the
evening?”
“Yes,”
Mohan said.
Sasi sighed,
angry and sad at the same time. “They are wasting their youth, Mohan. Remember
how much fun we used to have?”
“Kite
flying competitions,” Mohan smiled reminiscently.
“Organising
Ram Leela,” Sasi added.
“Fireworks,”
Mohan said. “Remember how we used to wake up the street at midnight with
rockets and loud bombs?”
“How can I
forget those days? Tumhe yaad he, the mango eating contests,” Sasi reminded him,
a naughty glint in his eyes.
“The trips
we took to Varanasi,” Mohan said, laughing.
Sasi said
with glee, “The cooking we did in your mother’s kitchen when she was on a visit
to relations. We almost burned down your house.”
Both men
fell silent.
“I will see
you tomorrow,” Sasi said finally.
“I hope the
boys change something in their daily routine,” Mohan said, flipping the pages of
the report.
“Arnav has
lost weight,” Sasi said, looking at the accompanying photo.
“And Akash
looks like someone snatched his kulfi from his mouth,” Mohan concluded. “How
are the girls?”
“Looking
lost. Absent-minded. I asked them to start the catering business once more. At
least it will keep them occupied for six months,” Sasi said.
“Acha
kiya,” Mohan supported him.
***
Two days
later, Sasi said, “So Arnav and Akash took their family to the temple today
morning.”
“Yes, a
change,” Mohan said happily. “The detective was so relieved.”
Sasi looked
at the photos of Arnav and Akash standing with their hands folded and eyes
shut. Arnav’s cheekbones were becoming prominent and he looked tired.
“He looks
sick and has lost weight. I hope he is taking his medicines on time,” Sasi
murmured.
“Not just
sick. He looks like he is starving,” Mohan commented.
“Mohan, I
am happy about one thing,” Sasi said.
“Kya?”
Mohan asked.
“Uuhh?”
Mohan asked.
“If she
does, he will starve and Khushi will never let anyone starve, especially not
her Arnavji. She will return to him,” Sasi smiled.
Mohan
chuckled. “Sasi, waise, ASR shut and locked the kitchen he built for Khushi,”
he said. “And gave the contract for supplying food to the employees to a
leading restaurant for six months.”
“I see,”
Sasi remarked. “So he is sure that Khushi will return to him after six months?”
“Looks like
it,” Mohan said with a smile.
***
“ASR has
finally broken the routine. He is in Mumbai for a three-day meeting,” Mohan
said, his hands folded in grateful prayer.
“Devi
Maiyya ki jai ho!” Sasi said.
“He has
taken Aman with him. Akash is holding the fort here,” Mohan reported.
“What has
he been doing in Mumbai?” Sasi asked.
“Ye lo,”
Mohan slipped pictures across to Sasi. “He is staying in the hotel where the
meeting is being held,” he said.
Sasi looked
at the photos.
Arnav
working on his laptop, Arnav going through a file, Arnav working out at the
hotel gym, Arnav and Aman leaving the conference hall, Arnav sitting before a
full plate, his attention on his phone....
“What do
you think Khushi saw in him?” Sasi asked Mohan.
Mohan looked
at him with eyes filled with laughter.
“Matlab,
girls fall for hero-like boys who flirt, who are flashily dressed, who sing and
dance—and here my daughter has fallen for the sadu of the century,” Sasi
remarked.
Mohan
chuckled.
“I was scared
he was like his father. Mohan, I did him a great disservice. He is as unlike
his father as he can get,” Sasi said.
“Yes, I can’t
believe he is Arvind Mallik’s son,” Mohan agreed.
***
“Khushi,
come with me to the market,” Payal invited her sister.
“No, jiji,”
Khushi replied, burying her head under the pillow to hide her tears.
“I will buy
you ber,” Payal tried to tempt her.
“No, jiji.
I don’t want ber,” Khushi replied.
“Golgappe?”
Payal tried again.
“No, jiji,
I don’t feel like eating anything. Let me lie down for a while. We have to
start work at noon for the evening party,” Khushi said.
Payal
nodded and left with one last look at her listless sister.
“Kahan jaa
rahi ho, Payaliya?” buaji asked.
“To the
market, buaji. We need to stock badam and kishmish,” Payal replied. “Buaji?”
“Haan,
Nandkisore?” she asked.
“I think
Khushi is not feeling well. I asked her to come with me. She refused. I tried
to bribe her with ber and golgappe. She refused,” Payal said.
“Hein?”
buaji asked. “She said no to golgappe?”
“Yes,” Payal
said.
“Hai Re Nandkisore!
Sanka Devi is sick, very sick. Hum kaada banake laavat he,” buaji said, moving
towards the kitchen.
Sasi folded
the newspaper and set it on the low table in the living room. No kaada could
help Khussi. She was pining for her own workaholic piya.
***
“So Arnav
is back in Delhi?” Sasi looked at the photos.
“Yes. This
is one taken in the temple near the banyan tree,” Mohan said.
Sasi looked
Arnav Singh Raizada, the billionaire businessman, standing in the temple
premises, looking all lost.
The next
photo was of Anjali and Arnav. They were walking down the steps of the temple
and Arnav was holding her hand.
Sasi
sighed. “Mohan, do you know of any boy aged between 33 and 40 who is unmarried?”
he asked.
“Why?” he
asked.
“For
Anjali,” Sasi said.
“What about
Kishore, Ram Lal Gupta’s son?” Mohan asked.
“He married
last year,” Sasi said. “Do you know anything about Vicky, Nathuram’s son?”
“Too much.
He won’t do,” Mohan looked away.
“Why not?”
Sasi asked.
“He is gay,”
Mohan said bluntly.
“He Devi
Maiyya!” Sasi exclaimed.
Two days
later Mohan said, “Sasi, your damad won an award.”
“What award?”
Sasi asked.
“Some
international award for young businessmen held at The Leela Palace,” Mohan
said, handing over a photo.
“Akash won
it?” Sasi asked.
“No, Arnav
did. But he sent his brother to receive it in his stead,” Mohan smiled.
“Why? Is he
ill?” Sasi asked.
“No, he was
busy striking a deal with an Italian company at a hotel nearby,” Mohan said,
showing him a photo of Arnav and a dozen formally-dressed men leaving a hotel.
Sasi shook
his head in despair.
"Aur haan, he attended a party," Mohan said with a smile.
"He did? Really? Were his friends with him?" Sasi asked.
Mohan frowned. "Kaun friends? He has no friends. It was a party given by him for his employees at Kempinski Ambience. He spoke a few words and left, Akash following him. They returned home while their employees had a good time."
"Mohan," Sasi clutched his head.
"Sasi," Mohan echoed his frustration.
"What are these boys made of?" Sasi asked.
"Some rare material," Mohan replied.
***
“This is terrible,
Mohan,” Sasi buried his head in his hands. “Arnav has lost about five kilos in
one month and is working all hours of the day. How can he be so careless of his
health?”
Mohan
nodded. “His last meeting began at nine at night yesterday. He got home about
eleven and was in his seat at seven today,” he said.
“And here I
have a daughter who won’t step out of the house, is either cooking or weeping,
won’t eat properly and is killing me with her sorrow. I am surrounded by male and female versions of Devdas,” Sasi sighed. “And there
Anjali is doing the rounds of temples, her brothers in tow. He Devi Maiyya, if only we could
get a good boy for her.”
Sasi’s phone
rang.
“Hello,” Sasi said.
“Uncle,
this is me, Anand. Don’t tell me you have forgotten me,” a voice filled with
laughter fell on Sasi’s ears.
“Babua,” Sasi
was too choked up to speak.
“Uncle, are
you in Lucknow now?” Anand asked.
“No, Delhi,”
Sasi said.
“That’s
great,” Anand said. “I will be flying to Delhi tomorrow. Can we meet?”
“Yes, yes,”
Sasi said. “I am with jiji.”
“At Laxmi
Nagar?” Anand asked. “Garima aunty? Payal, Khushi? Are they with you?”
“Yes,
babua,” Sasi said.
“I have to
meet someone in Delhi. I will get to Laxmi Nagar by night, uncle,” Anand said.
“Stay with
us, babua,” Sasi invited.
“Yeh bhi
kehne ki baat he?” Anand laughed. “I will be there with my boriya bistar.”
They talked
for a while before cutting the call.
“Was that Deendayal’s
son?” Mohan asked.
“Yes,” Sasi
said with a fond smile. “It has been years since we met.”
“Is he
married?” Mohan asked.
“I don’t
know,” Sasi replied. “He left Lucknow after his parents died. I will ask him
when we meet tomorrow.”
Mohan
nodded.
The next day he called Sasi at noon.
"I have some khush khabri for you," Mohan said, trying hard not to burst out laughing.
"Kya?" Sasi asked.
"Arnav Singh Raizada has joined a cooking class," Mohan declared.
"He Devi Maiyya!" Sasi exclaimed before falling into his chair with a thud.
Arshipriya has sent me a poem:
Arshipriya has sent me a poem:
Heere se jyada chamak hai tumhari,
heere se jyada kimat hai tumhari.
Lutadoo tum pe duniya ye saari,
kyonki tumhi to ho zindagi humari.
Rash's interpretation:
Their relationship is like a cup of tea… A very special blend of Arnav and Khushi…A unique blend… She is hell-bent on tackling him about giving her expensive presents and he with a resolute shrug all set to enjoy the sight she presents… yet they are dogged by the thought of separation of six months… Just the knowledge that they could be together later has been the strength that is pulling them through… When they had realized that they wanted to spend the rest of their life with each other, they wanted that rest of their life to start as soon as possible…
Arnav’s daily itinerary report, has Shashi and Mohan yawning, set to a pattern without any significant change or diversion… Arnav was committed to his work… His day revolved round his work and family… Whatever he did it was with dedication and would follow the same pattern tirelessly day in and out… Khushi was no less… She was brooding and pining for him unlike her usual self… even the simplest of things she had found enjoyment in were lusterless for her without her Arnavji…
And Akash was no less than his brother who was like his shadow… It looked like he was confirming the statement… You are the sun, and I’m the moon…. In your shadow I can shine….
Shashi got good vibes from Arnav and Akash, but he and Mohan thought that they were witnessing workaholics who had forgotten the outside world other than for their work and family… He also realized that Khushi would have a blissful life with Arnav once they are married. Arvind Mallik and Arnav were like chalk and cheese… Arnav Singh Raizada marches to the beat of a different drummer and he himself makes the beat…
Shashi Gupta is a determined man… He wanted the best for his daughters. Along with that he wanted to set things right for Anjali Bitiya…. His soft heart felt bad for the girl who had been wronged for no offence of hers and had tasted bitterness of the society… He knew there was no need for scores of suitors but need only one, the right one… So Shashi Gupta and Mohan Tiwari set out in search for the right boy… and now they have zeroed in on Anand…
Finally when Shashi found that Arnav had found a new interest, it was only to realize how deep his feelings were for Khushi… What stumped Shashi was the adaptation of Arnav… What a lovely way to seek solace… To feel Khushi and her presence by doing exactly what Khushi does… Rabbave…
Rabbave… ;)
Loved it Smita…
At last sigh that was my breath of relief. After taking such a strong dislike towards the Raizada family Shashi ji is ready for a change of mind.
ReplyDeletePraying works Mr ASR
Devi Maiya's divine intervention sure helps:-) lovely update Smita. Happy Dussehra. Can't wait to see what happens next
ReplyDeleteHope the report us a good one
ReplyDeleteHope the report us a good one
ReplyDeleteBeautiful update... DM ne sunn li dilwale ki phariyad...first Mulakat at DM's place ghaayal Buaji and Arnav's help ...simply wonderful.BTW I always love to read Arnav's prayer to Khushi's DM...
ReplyDeleteAreee hum Akash aur Payaliya ki mulaakaat bhool gaye...very sweet part of this update.
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DeleteWhen Akash apologized to Payal, his Bhai and he for being instrumental in driving them to the decision to leave Delhi, his words though heartfelt could have been construed as a lie by Payal but his action of making her reach her house safely conveyed the truth of his thoughts...
ReplyDeleteFaith is taking the first step even when you can't see the whole staircase... It's like Wi-Fi, invisible but has the power to connect you to what you need... Arnav's faith in Khushi and in turn her faith in her friend, Devi Maiyya, led him to the door of Her Abode... His prayers, may be awkward and a feeble attempt in the name of his belief in his Khushi, but....the power of prayer is in the One who hears it and not in the one who says it... Prayers do make a difference... Sometimes all it takes is just one prayer to change everything... It brings about positive energy, putting good out into the world, taking care of each other... This was what happened with Arnav Singh Raizada and Providence provided an opportunity [psst...read as Smita please ;) ] for him to help Buaji and that too without knowing whom he is caring for...
Words may show a man's wit but actions his meaning... Arnav's act of kindness to an unknown lady, Akash's act of helping out Payal did give Gupta family a point or two to ponder over...
At a certain point you'll know when you have reached a time for change... Its then you have to avoid looking down at all things that could go wrong but deal with them when and if they ever even happen... Its the time to spread the wings and ascertain that you are in the right path... That's what Shashi set out to do... and he contacted his friend Mohan Tiwari to do some sleuthing... on all known and unknown facts about Raizadas and their connections... He is taking his time to deliberate, so that when the time is for action he need not be jittery about the consequences....
Lovely update Smita... All actions are expressing their priorities...
lovely update... I'm glad that Devi Maiyya listened to his request...
ReplyDeleteAWWWWW! Such a touching update. Akash certainly spoke his heart out and gave Payal and her family a lot to think about. And ASR??? Wow, Smitaji ! What a departure from the man who kept spouting " I am the architect of my destiny". Loved his heartfelt prayer. The ways of the divine are indeed strange. So DM pushed buaji into ASR's path and gave the Guptas a lot to think about.
ReplyDeleteI couldn't help but do a little jig when Sashi approached Mohan Tiwari for more details. My husband and son kept giving me weird looks esp. when I started lamenting at your cliff hanger. Smitaji, did you have to leave it there? How will last till your next update? Hey Devi Maiyya, Raksha karna.
Tomorrow. Promise.
DeleteHey Smita, please update part 17 as soon as possible. This cliff hanger is killing your readers.
DeleteAgain u gave a wonderful update, i must say u have a magic in writing skills.
ReplyDeleteWow! Devi Maiyya to the rescue :) loved the updates.
ReplyDeleteOh such a lovely update. ..devi maiya has listened. .waiting for romance and marriage season...lovely update. .thanks for updating. ...Good luck
ReplyDeleteOh such a lovely update. ..devi maiya has listened. .waiting for romance and marriage season...lovely update. .thanks for updating. ...Good luck
ReplyDeletewow beautiful update loved it can't wait for next part thank you.......ameena671
ReplyDeleteAww lovely updates...finally devi maiyya ne sunli...cont sooooon di!!!
ReplyDeleteI hope he learns to read between the lines
ReplyDeletePhew!!! That's some relief from the tensions you gave us in the last update
ReplyDeleteHopefully they're towards the right path :)
Awww so nice! Devi Maya has a big hand in this!
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to the next.. Hope Khushi calls Arnav soon .. He must be wanting to talk to her.. And now is surely worried as he can't get through..
Finally things seems to be turning around for the better.
ReplyDeleteAt last something good is happening and shashi is seeing the light :-)
ReplyDeleteThings are finally falling in place... Asr in temple was amazing..
ReplyDeleteLoved the update so cute Asr praying that was so heartfelt him begging for mercy not to be judge because of his father past so sad love how both siblings understood each other and the aunt meeting the one she thinks is the devil loved it awesome .
ReplyDeleteSo I was going to say how I loved the twist you created ( No pun intended... maybe ) when Arnav helped Buaji... But that has been addressed at length in the notes after the chapter... I will just say... I did not see that coming, so enjoyed it all the more because now the path to destination is clear and visible. Sigh of relief!
ReplyDeleteMy fav part of the story and I quote:
“Girls in Delhi have been dying to marry them, but both of them have been very elusive. How come they approached you?” Mohan asked.
“My luck,” Sasi muttered.
Loved, loved loved this dry sense of humor... I am picking and storing this moments to enjoy at random times... "History and geography' from last chapter and now this! For some reason it completely cracked me up.
P.S. Does anyone else think that Payal extremely, very strongly, completely resembles BAMBI! Especially in the photos used in Ch 16
P.P.S. I am following the blog but for some reason I don't know when the updates are posted... I don't mind ( too much... LOL) because then it is alway a surprise. Plus you update pretty regularly! Regards,
Agree with you about Payal. Since you love humour, please try Smita's "The Other Woman" It always cracks me up - the convo between ASR and Khushi.
DeleteHey there... I have read "The Other Woman'... It is one of my favs... Arrogant Sing Raizada. Yes I love humorous stories, even if the underlying theme is tough. Actually I read all of Smita's stories... I was just a late joiner of the 'commenting community'. My bad! If you have any other recs... I would appreciate it. I have lately read some gems that my friends on IF have recommended... I have one... that is in conversation format ( the main characters and a random bystander... not a story more a review... sort of) that is ROFL funny. Let me know if you would like to read it. Regards,
DeleteP.S. Now I am off to read Ch. 17!
Hope that the Gupta family will change their mind and see how good arnav and akash are.
ReplyDeleteContinue soon
Finally things are coming in the right places... Loved Aakash for opening his mouth.... And loving this ASR more and more....
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome. Glad that Shashi Gupta is a sensible man. Looking forward to next part.
ReplyDeleteHey Smita that was wonderful update. Hope the Gupta family changes their opinion for Arnav and Akash and allow the ARHI and PAYASH marriage to happen.
ReplyDeleteAlso please show the romance between Anjali and a good man in this story where Payal, Khushi and Mami play Cupid for Anjali.
Waiting for next update
Wonderful update Smita. The hug that Khushi gave must have blown away the Gupta family's mind. I wish Buaji was present to witness it. Can't wait for the next update
ReplyDeleteKhushi being Khushi.. loved the update.. waiting to see what happens at home..
ReplyDeletesmita this is just awesome ............ iam in love with it ............ khushi is just khushi ............................ hugged him infront of all ................
ReplyDeleteSmita firstly I loved loved the update and secondly I was eagerly reading when I came to the hug part and almost dropped the iPad . This khushi is brave and am loving it.
ReplyDelete.... And he thinks I am the best chef in the world..." How much more cuter can u make her. Can't wait to read more..
ReplyDeleteFantastic! First of all my Fav part
ReplyDelete'their supposedly sanskaari, heart whole and fancy-free daughter hugging a boy'
Yaar, I love your turn of phrase... Also where that Mohan guy is describing Arnav... Hot tempered and Short Tempered... And I thought, that's THE most perfect and somehow whimsical way of describing him. That was Fav Part 2!
Fav part 3... And he thinks I am the best chef in the world! Loving it! The story is fabulous of course... But what I like the best about it is how it is coming alive in my mind with these small phrases. It is funny and poignant simultaneously. Just Wow!
nice update.but i have a doubt, arnav is elder than akash and payal is elder than khushi then why gupta's thinking ab0ut arnav-khushi pairing?why not arnav and payal???
ReplyDeleteThe Raizadas proposed marriage in that order. Payal for Akash & Khushi for Arnav.
DeleteWell actually according to astrologers the eldest children don't marry... It's because of the presumption that both are strong and dominating that would lead to matrimonial disharmony... Just presumption on their part and it need not hold good in every case... Since Raizadas' believe in astrology and so do Guptas.... You know what I mean... Quad Erat Demostradum ...
Deletenice update.but i have a doubt, arnav is elder than akash and payal is elder than khushi then why gupta's thinking ab0ut arnav-khushi pairing?why not arnav and payal???
ReplyDeleteStooooooooooop! Don't give her any more ideas to throw a wrench into the game. Plus THE HUG might have clinched it. LOL
DeleteAwesome update..eagerly waiting for buaji reaction on this
ReplyDeleteSimply amazing update.
ReplyDeleteWoooHoooo!!! I just shut the door so that I could do the jig in peace. KKG hugged ASR! Have to go and read it all over again before I can think of a semi coherent response to this update.
ReplyDeleteI will coordinate my jig with yours. I have given up on closing doors... my family knows I have gone gaga!
DeleteStill in a state of delirium and incoherent. Am so happy that things are looking up. will comment once I wipe this goofy smile off my face.
ReplyDeleteLovely update
ReplyDeleteNever expected from Khushi that she'll hug Arnav rather it was more of a possibility of being the other way around and that in public and in front of the whole family
What a twist of events. Finally the cat is out of the bag. Cant wait for the next part.
ReplyDeletefinally out in the open.
ReplyDeleteWonderful update...
ReplyDeleteThe hug was awesome....only khushi can do this....
Oh my... Khushi ran into Arnav's arms... and hugged him like she was going to lose something precious... Sandals ;) :D
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next update :)
Can't express how much am loving this story.
ReplyDeleteRashmi,
missed ur interpretations!!!!! Now double damaka for me....:).
Smita ,
don't end this story soon plss. Keep writing dear....
Hahhaha..khushi with her actions told the whole story. .she is really attached to arnav now. ..I wish her parents understand her feelings...shashiji is very understanding person. .he 'll definitively understand her daughters feelings. Lets see...its very cute and getting lovely and interesting. ..
ReplyDeletelovely updates
ReplyDeleteWas walking around all day with that goofy smile still on my face. I don't think it's going to disappear any time soon. Family has given up and waved the white flag. Smitaji, there are a couple of things that really stood out. Firstly, Shashi Gupta waking up from a nightmare. At first I thought he was worried for his daughters but he felt a father's pain for Anjali. Yes, she should have a future - marriage , career or both. The show had a lot of loose ends and I felt that this was the biggest. I hope that you can bring some sort of closure in this regard. THE HUG - that itself shows very clearly that both Arnav and Khushi have nothing to hide and there is nothing clandestine about their relationship and the families have nothing to be worried about. Now with the Raizadas descending down on Lakshmi Nagar with no prior warning, I hope Buaji doesn't keel over from a heart attack. When are you giving us part 18?
ReplyDeleteToday. Keep the smile, Kaaycee!
DeleteI like how khushi didn't stop herself to come and hug Arnav
ReplyDelete.....awesome updates...
I toh thought you re going to make Arhi some more sruggle and separation.
But no...
Thankyou for loving update
Smita why is Sasi Gupta putting a 6 month wait period when he fully knows how much involved Arnav and Khushi are. Me not happy with his decision but I hope the shatir dhimak will come up with a plan:-)
ReplyDeletewow awesome updates loved them both can't wait for next part thank you,,,,,,,,,ameena671
ReplyDeleteOk... A step in the right direction... Well there have been many lately but you know what I mean. Also what Arnav said...Truth had to take birth...
ReplyDeleteNow I wonder if this separation is going to be like in the show where Dadi say... ladka and ladki can not meet after haldi... and we all know what happened. Although I have a feeling that the biggest enforcer of this rule would be... Arnav himself... Aur kaun roke ga mujhe?... Answer... Mein khud!
I think Shashi will give in, probably, seeing the sad Khushi. Hey, I can dream, right?
Fab update!
P.S. Yes let's please get Jiji the bangles too. LOL.
I too vote for getting Jiji the bangles. And while we're at it let's get a gift for Shashi too for being so open minded.
DeleteNext update will answer all your kwestions. Yes, Sasi deserves a gifat too.
DeleteAwesome updates Smitha!! Hmm these are gig to be really long 6 months poor Arshi :-)
ReplyDeleteSIX MONTHS!!!! Hai Re Nandakishore! I don't know about ASR and KKG. Right now am worried that there are no more spanners, monkey wrenches, screwdrivers and other assorted tools that will muck up the works. Yes, Shashi is open minded and wants to makes sure that they are in this for the long haul. Can't fault a father for ensuring his daughters' happiness. Does this no seeing, no communicating rule apply only for Arnav and Khushi or are Payal and Akash included as well?
ReplyDeleteLoved Khushi's version of her ASR. Her doting father is having a hard time recociling Mohan's version with Khushi's. She didn't know they were diamond bangles. Cho Cheewt.
Am back to chanting All ijj well and decimating what's left of my nails. At the risk of sounding like a world class nag - when is your next update?
Your Mamiji ROCKS!! " Let the marks come to hamre Arnav bitwaa" . In fact I love all versions of your mamiji. Can we see more of her?
ReplyDeleteNext story will have lots of her. Promise.
DeleteIsn't she the most amazing character. No one is completely black or white, but I have hated her and loved her simultaneously. Such loyalty! In Smita's versions... you have just got to love her. I agree Kaaycee, Mamiji Rocks!
DeleteWe will give her a phree hand in the next story.
DeleteFab update Smitaji!!! Loved it. But no contact between ARHI for 6 months? How is that fair?
ReplyDeleteOne stupid question: Since Devimaiyaa caterers broke their contract what happened to the employees and their stomachs?
Shuklaji made his reappearance with his oily food? Only ASR knows!
DeleteHAHA!!! Poor AR employees !!!
DeleteAwesome twist...loved it
ReplyDeletethat was anticlimatic :( I guess it is going to be a nice seeing them pining for each other:)
ReplyDeleteWonderful update Smitaji.
ReplyDeleteChaar dino ka pyaar ...rabba badi lambi judai...
Shashi isgoing to test their love for each other let's see how they manage to meet in secret
ReplyDeleteOh ho this lambi judai of six month when will be ending...cont sooon
ReplyDeleteFinally caught up with parts 17 and 18. Love them. Understand Shashi's POV. How are ARHI ging to survive 6 months without any contact and what abut Payash??
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to next part. Please update it soon...
6 months is a very long time. Hope that khushi's father would have built his trust much sooner then that.
ReplyDeleteContinue soon
Awesome chapters...........
ReplyDeleteLoving this Smita!
ReplyDeleteShashi's strictness in this matter is really interesting to read. Of course, just like every protective father, he needs to get convinced fully...
But I wonder how Arnav-Khushi will spend these 6 months. They couldn't stop hugging each other in public view just after being 'separated' for a few hours! I really wonder how these 6 months will pass for them :P
Lovely chapters.Waiting to read more :)
Hahahhahaha...very funny ...I enjoyed sasiji and mohanji's talks..hahahahahha....They are so enjoying investigation. ..sasiji knows male and female versions of devdas.....hahahhahaha...but why did arnav ji joined cooking classes.?...cute and amusing update. ...thanks for update
ReplyDeleteI think he joined the cooking classes to feel closer to Khushi! But I am sappy, LOL!... there might be a more logical reason.
DeleteAwesome blossom!!! Damn amazing...it was so funny, Arnav & Khushi turned into another version of Devdas & Paro paining for each other. Hahahaha Sashi & Mohan got frustrated with Arnav's daily schedule...and any change was such a relief LOLZ! Well someone for Anjali also making entry....lets see if they knew each other from earlier. Update next chap soooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDelete“I am bored of reading this routine, Mohan." There is my favorite, dry sense of humor... Yep, male and female version of Devdas alright... with chances ( improving by the second ) of a happy ending!
ReplyDeleteLoved the way you portrayed them missing each other without overpowering us with their grief! Soulful humor at its best. Loved the update!
Awesome update...
ReplyDeleteKhushi apne babuji pe gayi hai...." He devi maiya."
Arnav chala banane cook....
Waiting for the next part.
Mind blowing update Smita. After Sasi Gupta gave his 6 month wait ultimatum I was bahut Pareshan but I really loved this update. Can't wait for the next one. ASR and cooking class. Hai re Nandakishore!!!!
ReplyDeletethis update was mind blowing. The conversation between Sashi and Mohan is just too good and funny. Arnav joined cooking class !!!!! that is a new one !!!
ReplyDeleteDont know how i missed soo many updates
ReplyDeleteHilarious
Do continue soon
Great update...luved it lotsssss...plzzzz cont sooooon di
ReplyDeleteMy god... We are really seeing a devdas.. Loved it
ReplyDeletePoor Arnav and Khushi and their suffering this Judaai.
ReplyDeleteI love shashi and his friend and their spying ,he has found a raj kumar for anjalie ,,so sweet ,and Arnav practicing to learn to make jalebis for his love ,it's hilarious and sweet at the same time
ReplyDeletewow amazing update loved it can't wait for next part tank you............ameena671
ReplyDelete"What are these boys made of?" - That's what we all want to know!! This is such a "Feel Good" update even though ASR and KKG put Devdas to shame. AWWWWW! He's lost weight and she's not interested in chudis, ber or (gasp) Golgappe!!! Bhat happeninjjjj? I hope Shashi will relent and relax the 6 month embargo / incarceration. I mean even he can see the toll it is taking on the 2 of them.
ReplyDeleteArnav is taking cooking classes so that he can find some comfort. That's so so so ... awwwww ! I can't think of a suitable word. ( Loved Rash's interpretation of this - Rabbave indeed)
You've done full justice to Shashi's character. Such a fatherly figure and an all round genuine person. This is what they should have shown in the serial. So now he's taken on the responsibility of finding a groom for Anjali. Go Shashi!!!
And as for Anand ( the pic. was just WOW) Looking forward to reading more. Hubba hubba!!
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DeletePlease forgive me for commenting only time to time but I am too selfish not to miss any of the updates.
ReplyDeleteI love the way how this thieving business it turning out. It is indeed delicious as well as beautiful and entertaining.
Hey HeavensFlower... just got notification that you commented... I have been reading your poetical comments in a different story... Love them... When can we expect more of that creativity?
DeleteAwesome.......poor boys they are getting sick missing Khushi and payal........here Khushi too has become a female devdas......the detectives are tired of Arnav and Akash's routine.......atleast sasi should understand now that he has doubted a heera...............simply superb updates..........
ReplyDeleteFabulous updates....
ReplyDeletelove,the commentary that Shashi and his friend are going,
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