Friday 23 January 2015

190. OS 9: The Diabetic and the Halwai (Part 10)



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Part 10







He kissed her thoroughly, his palms cradling her face, his nose nudging hers, his lips sucking at hers, his tongue duelling with hers.

Khushi, not to be outdone, put up a good fight, giving as good as she got. Her fingers clawed at his hair, clutched at his neck.

His teeth nipped her lower lip. It shocked her into stillness.

Arnav held her close, letting her shuddering body rest against his.

“You are a jadugar,” she whispered.

He shook with silent laughter.

“More kaatil than my jalebi,” she concluded.

“Really?” he choked.

“Really,” she conceded.

“More potent than your balushahi?” he asked.

“Yes,” she grimaced.

“Then leave your balushahi and come with me,” he invited.

“Where?” she asked, her eyes round.

“Delhi, as my wife,” he laid his heart and his life at her feet.

Her mouth fell open. “But my balushahi,” she protested weakly.

“Can your balushahi kiss you like I do?” he asked, tongue in cheek.

Khushi swallowed.

“Can it?” he asked again.

“No,” she admitted.

“Does your jalebi have a body like mine?” he rubbed it in.

“No,” she said, looking wistfully at his sinful body covered by his clothes. If her jalebi was as gorgeous as him, she would spend her entire life making and hugging jalebis to her heart. “But my jalebi is healthier than you. It does not have diabetes,” she claimed victoriously.

He bit back laughter with great effort.

“But your jalebi, balushahi, gulab jamun etc can’t marry you. I can,” he offered.

As she opened her mouth to protest against marriage, he added, “If we are married, you won’t have to steal into my bedroom. Both families will lock us in our bedroom.”

Khushi drew in a deep breath, tempted by the offer.

“We can kiss all the time. Nobody will intrude into our private moments,” he dangled the carrot before her.

She swallowed hard.

“You can touch my chest whenever you want,” he permitted her.

“Your bare chest?” Khushi clarified. After all she was a businesswoman and liked all the facts laid down in black and white. 

“My bare chest,” he managed to say between guffaws.

Khushi drew in a deep breath tinged with sorrow.

On one side was Arnavji with his Salman Khanji-type chest and kisses. On the other side were bins of sweets that had stayed by her through thick and thin, turned a callow Lucknow girl into a crafty and successful businesswoman.

A new man versus her khandaani pesha.

An irresistible man versus her friends, the sweets.

Arnavji versus Satwik Mishtaan Bhandar.

What was a girl to do?

Her eyes filled with tears.

“Khushi,” Arnav murmured comfortingly. “You love your shop, don’t you?”

Khushi nodded. Tears trailed down her cheeks.

“Why don’t you start a branch in Delhi?” he asked.

Khushi frowned. “Delhi? I don’t know anyone there.”

“You know me. Marry me, Khushi. I will help you set up shop. Let us become business partners,” he suggested.

Khushi frowned. “A diabetic wants to start a mithai shop?” she asked.

“Yes. If the diabetic wants to marry a halwai, he has to make changes in his life,” Arnav smiled.

“You are willing to make changes in your life to accommodate me?” she was astonished.

“Yes,” he smiled and gently smoothed a strand of hair behind her ear.

“Why?” she asked.

“Because it is not everyday that I come across a halwai with lips like a red rose, who makes a mean veg pijja and pepper tea and tries to scare me at midnight,” he chuckled.

Khushi glared at him. “Don’t think I have forgotten your lies and your underhand methods,” she warned him.

“Don’t forget, Khushi,” he said softly. “You can take revenge on me after our marriage,” he suggested.

“I will,” she said impulsively. Then she added, “if I marry you.”

Arnav inclined his head.

“I need time to think,” she said.

“I will be leaving tonight,” Arnav informed her softly. “I need to get back to work.”

“Tonight?” her face paled.

“Yes,” he said softly, dropping a kiss on her cheek.

“Now go to bed, Khushi. You will be lucky to get three hours in bed.”

Khushi nodded but stood staring at him.

He caught her by her shoulders and led her to the door.

Dropping a lingering kiss on her hair, he said, “You have all day to think, Khushi. Let me know before I leave?” he asked.

She nodded.

“If you choose me, you get your balushahi and me. If you choose your balushahi, you get only balushahi, not me,” he presented her choice before her.

She swallowed.

“Good night,” he whispered before pushing her out gently through the door.












44 comments:

  1. Wow. such a cute update. She is totally mesmerized by Arnav. very sweet.

    hydsri

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  2. This diabetic surely knows how to strike a sweet deal with his halwai:-) loved this sweet update

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  3. Fabulous update
    Loved it
    IF pmehra300

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  4. The business man in Arnav is amazing

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  5. Arnav and Khushi a coupe made in business land.

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  6. Loved it. Arnav has offered her tempting deal. I wish Khushi does not refuse him.

    Wow Di. Simply amazing.

    vs_2706 (IF ID)

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  7. Awesome update! This Delhiwala knows his business. what a sweet proposal for a diabetic. Thanks for the update

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  8. What a choice ,waiting to see how she decides ,very well written

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  9. Loved the update. Looking forward to see how Khushi decides. Thanks for the posting.

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  10. Nice update I loved the way Arnav was trying to convince Khushi

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  11. How can Khushi deny those points Arnav made

    ..Anita.. (IF)

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  12. Oho he is dangling the best treat in front of her....why think my halwai kushi jump and grab this diabetic. ..i would ;-)

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  13. Awesome update Smitha!!! Aww that was such a "sweet" proposal :-)

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  14. Wow what a different proposal. ASR has her measure. Tempting her with his body and kisses

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  15. Oh Smitaji...me here after long time...
    This OS has all the quality of each sweet ...
    Ras se bhari....you know ;)
    Loved all the updates...
    His nautanki and her Shaitaani to take revenge...
    Hihi then she got the sweetest reward....
    I would love to read her thoughts on This Sweet Proposal and her sanak as after effects .
    Love you n take care.

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  16. That was absolutely amazing. Loved it.

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  17. Seriously Khushi, what is there to think about Arnav's offer, accept it.

    Pinky :)

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  18. Nice negotiating skills Arnav has. Poor Khushi all confused and stuck between two things.

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  19. Loved it forget khuish I will take ASR's deal;)

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  20. oops.. too tempting an offer.. loved his proposal.. too good..

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  21. Beginner's guide to striking a deal.
    By The ASR

    Start with the early signs of interest. (eg. her shiver at the first touch. :P)

    While negotiating keep something in your back pocket. (lure her with 'privacy in our bedroom and uninterrupted balushahis...i mean kisses'.)

    Present your terms and conditions as cleverly as possible.(I go back to Delhi, you tag along, you get your balushahi kisses and my bare chest, AND have SMB-Delhi branch..... think about it. Definitely a win-win!!)

    It helps to be debonair. (Hello... this is me, ASR. I was born sauve and dashing. ;-) )

    Co-ordinate the restructuring in such a manner that the opposite party simply cannot refuse. (Let's seal the deal. I get to marry you and you get your revenge!! Absolutely worth it.)

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  22. What an amazing update
    Very romantic

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  23. What an amazing update
    Very romantic

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  24. Very nice and sweet update. I am sure khushi is going to agree. It is not that every day a deal like this comes your way :-). Pinkly (IF Id)

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  25. loved Arnav's proposal.. if khushi select him then she get balushahi and him otherwise only balusahi.. poor khushi.. lets see what is khushi's decision.. simply superb part.. loved it.. :)

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  26. well this is interesting proposal
    balushai and him
    but if she stay back only balushai
    what is a girl to do
    hmmm whom will she chose
    her sweet shop or the diabetic hubby
    who tastes sweeter than her sweets
    hmmm she is confused right
    is there a choice i wonder
    with his body like sallu bhai
    and lips sweet doing un mentionable things to her
    ahhh he does have to leave dear
    he cant live here forever
    look forward to her decision

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  27. Lovely update...
    Arnav and Khushi striking a deal as business personals...
    loved the update...

    IF id: varsha2KD

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  28. Awww.... Khushi's such an innocent sweetheart... Arnav's rocking....

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  29. beautiful update

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  30. Spoonai (IF)
    I loved the update... It was amazing and Arnav really put it clean n clear for khushi. And there is no way khushi can deny him now :)

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  31. Khushi is too naïve & sweet . ASR is proposing tempting marriage deal. No wonder khushi is in tears .
    MDTharun(IF)

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  32. OMG ! awesome update :D khushi he relly is a jadugar !! <3

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  33. Arnav has given her so many reasons to marry him..............awesome chapter...........

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  34. arnav the business man and his deals...lol

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  35. A businessman versus a businesswoman...
    A shatir dimaag versus a naive heart....
    Attraction ... Temptation ...
    Soon to be turned into LOVE :)
    Looking forward to my sweetest jalebi's reply..
    Smita..
    U r the Jadugar,actually :p

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  36. Wow..that was amazing....simply out of words:))) too good

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  37. Awwww,that was such a cute chapter!!!

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  38. I am running out of adjectives here

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